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A Bayverse Origin story by me.It's a different take on the movie universe.Here's the prologue.Tell me what you think!!

If you like it,I'll continue it.





Transformers: Origin

Prologue




12 million years ago….



The cube entered the galaxy. It was the 15 meters wide by 15 meters tall. It was silver,etched with hieroglyphics that were alien in nature on all of its sides. It spun through space, smashing into rock and debris.It entered the Theta System, decending toward the small city planet of Aldath. It hit the atmosphere hard,creating sonic booms,burning as it fell toward the surface.


Alarms rang through the air. People stopped what they were doing and looked to the sky.They saw a streak through the cloud cover,bright as the suns. The cube slammed into Aldath,sending a plume of ash and flame into the sky. A blue electrical current crossed the planet.Sparks flew,lightning flashed,and all the machines on the planet stopped working.
For 10 minutes,the world was quiet.The people,dazed,walked around,not sure what to do.

Then,they heard the sound. A low pitched sound,5 parts.It echoed repeatedly from different locations. “Awa-eh-eh-eh-err”. The people looked to each other.

“Look!” A man screamed,pointing to the train across the way. It shuddered twice,pieces of it moving and shifting shape,the sound of gears turning,parts shifting and metal scraped. The poeple noticed that all of the machinery and vehicles around them began to change shape.They transformed into giant robotic forms,some humanoid,on two legs,some resembled insects and animals not native to Aldath. The robots began to move toward the humans. A woman began to scream,and people ran. But they had no chance. Within 7 days,all human and animal life was gone,and the AGE of the TRANSFORMERS began…..

Great story!
rating: 8/10