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Name: Banzai-tron
Allegiance: Decepticon
Sub-group: Decepticon Intelligence
Function: Martial Arts Warrior/Intelligence Operative
Alt. mode: Gunboat
Weapons: Quad Missile Launchers/Energy Blasters, Short-Range Rockets
Special Abilities: None
Height: 28 ft. / 8.5 m
Quote: “To the victor go the profits.”


Strength: 8
Intelligence: 7
Dexterity: 9
Speed: 8
Endurance: 8
Courage: 10
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 10
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 6
Rank: 6

Profile: A master hand-to-hand combatant, Banzai-tron sought to use his skills to better his financial situation by joining the Decepticons. After he turns his Autobot opponents to spare parts, he typically gathers up the pieces to sell for scrap. Banzai-tron is an avowed materialist who doesn’t believe in the spiritual aspects of practicing martial arts, unlike Bludgeon (whom Banzai-tron respects but secretly hopes to defeat someday). Banzai-tron is cocky and arrogant, but he can be—he is among the greatest fighters in the galaxy.

Abilities: Subject is the reigning master of Crystalocution, a Cybertronian fighting style that focuses upon exploiting the minute flaws in an opponent’s structure. In gunboat mode, Banzai-tron can travel at speeds up to 260 knotts. His primary weapons are four missile launchers; the two launchers in his bow can double as energy blasters. He also carries four short-range rockets with adjustable power outputs, which can be set from stun to disintegrate.

Weaknesses: Though lacking any known physical weaknesses, sometimes he becomes too focused on profit and fails to see the larger scope of events around him.

ChaosWave360 wrote:Name: Banzai-tron
Allegiance: Decepticon
Sub-group: Decepticon Intelligence
Function: Martial Arts Warrior/Intelligence Operative
Alt. mode: Gunboat
Weapons: Quad Missile Launchers/Energy Blasters, Short-Range Rockets
Special Abilities: None
Height: 28 ft. / 8.5 m
Quote: “To the victor go the profits.”


Strength: 8
Intelligence: 7
Dexterity: 9
Speed: 8
Endurance: 8
Courage: 10
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 10
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 6
Rank: 6

Profile: A master hand-to-hand combatant, Banzai-tron sought to use his skills to better his financial situation by joining the Decepticons. After he turns his Autobot opponents to spare parts, he typically gathers up the pieces to sell for scrap. Banzai-tron is an avowed materialist who doesn’t believe in the spiritual aspects of practicing martial arts, unlike Bludgeon (whom Banzai-tron respects but secretly hopes to defeat someday). Banzai-tron is cocky and arrogant, but he can be—he is among the greatest fighters in the galaxy.

Abilities: Subject is the reigning master of Crystalocution, a Cybertronian fighting style that focuses upon exploiting the minute flaws in an opponent’s structure. In gunboat mode, Banzai-tron can travel at speeds up to 260 knotts. His primary weapons are four missile launchers; the two launchers in his bow can double as energy blasters. He also carries four short-range rockets with adjustable power outputs, which can be set from stun to disintegrate.

Weaknesses: Though lacking any known physical weaknesses, sometimes he becomes too focused on profit and fails to see the larger scope of events around him.

You don't have a sample post, which is required. I'd also recommend taking a more earth based character.

Name: Bomb-Burst
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Predator
Alt. mode: VTOL Hovercraft
Weapons: Dual Lasers, Energo-Battle Axe
Height: 28 ft / 8.53 m
Quote: “The greater the foe, the sweeter his fuel!”


Strength: 8
Intelligence: 8
Dexterity: 9
Speed: 7
Endurance: 4
Courage: 9
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 8
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 4
Rank: 7

Profile: Bomb-Burst is a loner who hunts from the shadows. Cybertronian myth suggests Bomb-Burst was designed to be the ultimate predator in darkness, and his horrific reputation lives up to this legend. Bomb-Burst enjoys silently stalking a group of Autobots, picking them off one by one by dragging his victims into the dark to suck them dry of energon. Sometimes he leaves his victim's grotesquely mangled husk for the others to find later, and other times he just lets the Autobots wonder what happened to their missing comrade. Both methods invariably unnerve his targets, which pleases Bomb-Burst greatly. He's excellent at his job, but unable to relate personally to most other Decepticons.

Abilities: Subject transforms into a nearly silent vehicle armed with dual lasers that he also uses in robot mode. He is extremely agile in both modes. Specially designed fangs allow Subject to pierce most metals, sucking any energy out. In robot mode, he has great strength. Subject also wields an energo-battle axe in combat.

Weaknesses: Subject's optics are sensitive to bright light; direct exposure to it can easily blind him. He must refuel or drain other Transformers' energy regularly or risk stasis lock.

Sample Post:

It is 6 pm at night as the autobots are doing recon around the area for any decepticon activity. The night is young and the sun just went down leaving it pitch black. A recon team of four autobots are looking around the forest area.

"No decepticon activity yet."

"This is boring when are we gonna get some action."

"Careful what you say, it might come and bite you in the butt."

"Ya ya, whatever you say ahahhhhhhhh"

They hear metal being crunched as the rest of the autobots turn around to see what was happening. They go over there to see that their fellow bot has been food as his energon is sucked away.

"What the hell?"

"Oh man, could it be........I'm getting the hell out of here!"

"No, wait!"

The bot transforms and leaves the area; however, the others hear metal grinding on one another. They check it out, but see the bot who tried to leave was also food.

"Autobots, we need reinforcements...we think we got con activity. Subject appears to be Bomb-Burst as the legends say."

"Oh man, we are so screwed. Screwed man......screwed!!!"

"Pull yourself together, we are gonna make it out alive. You hear me. Ahhhhhhh"
A cybertronian begins to drag the poor autobot as his comrade runs after him to try and save him. He pulls out his guns and begins to shoot as you heard a screech. The unknown bot drops the autobot before making a retreat.

"Are you alright?"

"Ya, barely. My energon levels are almost gone though....listen, you have to get out of here. I think I know whose attacking."
Suddenly the bot is struck with a battle-axe as he drops dead leaking energon.

"He talked to much....now your next my little prey."

The last autobot looks around and tries to find out where the voice is coming from. The bot hears nothing as he tries to shoot at anything he sees moving. Suddenly he gets tackled to the ground and gets bitten on his neck.
"Ahhhhhhh.....Optimus........save.....meee....."

As the bot slowly begins to deactivate, he sees a huge transformer over him.
"Optimus won't be saving you."
The last thing the bot sees is Bomb-Burst opening its mouth and begins to crunch over his remains.

ChaosWave360 wrote:Name: Bomb-Burst
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Predator
Alt. mode: VTOL Hovercraft
Weapons: Dual Lasers, Energo-Battle Axe
Height: 28 ft / 8.53 m
Quote: “The greater the foe, the sweeter his fuel!”


Strength: 8
Intelligence: 8
Dexterity: 9
Speed: 7
Endurance: 4
Courage: 9
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 8
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 4
Rank: 7

Profile: Bomb-Burst is a loner who hunts from the shadows. Cybertronian myth suggests Bomb-Burst was designed to be the ultimate predator in darkness, and his horrific reputation lives up to this legend. Bomb-Burst enjoys silently stalking a group of Autobots, picking them off one by one by dragging his victims into the dark to suck them dry of energon. Sometimes he leaves his victim's grotesquely mangled husk for the others to find later, and other times he just lets the Autobots wonder what happened to their missing comrade. Both methods invariably unnerve his targets, which pleases Bomb-Burst greatly. He's excellent at his job, but unable to relate personally to most other Decepticons.

Abilities: Subject transforms into a nearly silent vehicle armed with dual lasers that he also uses in robot mode. He is extremely agile in both modes. Specially designed fangs allow Subject to pierce most metals, sucking any energy out. In robot mode, he has great strength. Subject also wields an energo-battle axe in combat.

Weaknesses: Subject's optics are sensitive to bright light; direct exposure to it can easily blind him. He must refuel or drain other Transformers' energy regularly or risk stasis lock.

Sample Post:

It is 6 pm at night as the autobots are doing recon around the area for any decepticon activity. The night is young and the sun just went down leaving it pitch black. A recon team of four autobots are looking around the forest area.

"No decepticon activity yet."

"This is boring when are we gonna get some action."

"Careful what you say, it might come and bite you in the butt."

"Ya ya, whatever you say ahahhhhhhhh"

They hear metal being crunched as the rest of the autobots turn around to see what was happening. They go over there to see that their fellow bot has been food as his energon is sucked away.

"What the hell?"

"Oh man, could it be........I'm getting the hell out of here!"

"No, wait!"

The bot transforms and leaves the area; however, the others hear metal grinding on one another. They check it out, but see the bot who tried to leave was also food.

"Autobots, we need reinforcements...we think we got con activity. Subject appears to be Bomb-Burst as the legends say."

"Oh man, we are so screwed. Screwed man......screwed!!!"

"Pull yourself together, we are gonna make it out alive. You hear me. Ahhhhhhh"
A cybertronian begins to drag the poor autobot as his comrade runs after him to try and save him. He pulls out his guns and begins to shoot as you heard a screech. The unknown bot drops the autobot before making a retreat.

"Are you alright?"

"Ya, barely. My energon levels are almost gone though....listen, you have to get out of here. I think I know whose attacking."
Suddenly the bot is struck with a battle-axe as he drops dead leaking energon.

"He talked to much....now your next my little prey."

The last autobot looks around and tries to find out where the voice is coming from. The bot hears nothing as he tries to shoot at anything he sees moving. Suddenly he gets tackled to the ground and gets bitten on his neck.
"Ahhhhhhh.....Optimus........save.....meee....."

As the bot slowly begins to deactivate, he sees a huge transformer over him.
"Optimus won't be saving you."
The last thing the bot sees is Bomb-Burst opening its mouth and begins to crunch over his remains.

*Edit* I didn't know that the application was a copy of one already accepted. My apologies. I've edited my comments accordingly.

This character also would be difficult to work on Earth and was originally introduced on Nebulos. We generally wouldn't allow a brand new player onto the Nebulos side of things. Perhaps you could take one of the available Autobot cars or minibots? Maybe one of the available Decepticon seekers? This would allow you to get into the game and then maybe and the feel of things.

I don't like to play as autobots

P.S in Tired mode right now

Thrust

Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: (Cybertron) Tetra jet / (Earth) F-35 Lightning II
Weapons: Compressed air rifles/laser cannons, Heat-seeking missiles
Special Abilities: Temporary speed increase above normal limits.
Height: 31 ft / 9,46 m
Quote: "My engines' roar is my enemies' song of doom!"


Strength: 08
Intelligence: 06
Dexterity: 08
Speed: 09
Endurance: 06
Courage: 04
Firepower: 08
Accuracy: 07
Melee: 07
Tech Skill: 05
Charisma: 05
Rank: 05

Profile: Thrust sees no point in trying to be subtle or sneaky to accomplish a military goal, and he often mocks those Decepticons who specialize in such work. Much like Dirge, he projects a carefully prepared image, although Thrust's is much less sophisticated. He brags about his toughness incessantly and makes every attempt to make his presence known both before and after he gets to the battlefield. He feels that trying to "psych out" his opponents with a dramatic arrival is half the battle. He delights in causing noticeable collateral damage on his way to battle just to let his foes know he's coming. Thrust never hesitates to announce his predestined victory before a fight has even begun.

Abilities: Subject possesses above-average strength and intelligence, and he is a highly skilled warrior. Like his follow Decepticon jet fighters, Thrust can attain speeds of up to 3000 mph and more. But he can accelerate to more than twice of his normal maximum speed in a few seconds and maintain that for .25 breems. The vibrations from his rapid acceleration can destroy nearby constructions. He carries a variety of missiles and two compressed air rifles; each one can punch a hole through steel at a distance of 1000 meters.

Weaknesses: A strong counterattack can break his nerve and cause him to retreat. He is unable to follow through on plans involving extreme subtlety.

Sample Post:

An unknown energon source is located in sector 8 near Los vegas, the decepticons have begun to the attack and are attacking the city. Thrust hovers above the battle with a laughter as he looks at the destruction he made to locating the energon.

"Hahahaha, lord Megatron will be pleased, maybe he will boost my rank. Hahahahahahahahaha."

One of the seekers transforms besides Thrust as he gives his battle report.

"Sir, the autobots are heading over at sector 7, they will be on their way. If they come, we might risk losing the energon to them."

"Listen, do you want to have Megatron's blessing?"

"Of course I do, but....."

"Then listen to me and he shall bless us all with good fortune."

"Of course what should we do?"

"Attack the place call Hollywood, with both attacks, they will be forced to split their forces. With that, you will cause a landslide to make casualties among the insects and pesky autobots. Tell the remaining forces to aim at the buildings, we're gonna cause a massive roadblock here."

"Done."
The seeker transforms and flies away to give out the order.

"Poor autobots, they should realize that they lost to me by coming..hahahahahahahaha."

Thrust plans worked as the autobots soon split their forces to combat the small decepticon forces that are attacking hollywood. Meanwhile the roadblock caused by other decepticons delayed the autobots long enough for the cons to find the energon and retreat. Before the autobots got through, Thrust fires his lasers at them to hold them off, but notices that he's outnumbered.

"Thrust, you ain't getting away!"

"Ohhhhhh, but I am...hehehehehe after all you got a building to stop."
Thrust aims his cannons at a building full with people as he fired upon it sending it down.
"Now will you choose me or them?"

"Ugh.....lets go autobots, we gotta save those people."

"Thats what I thought...hahaha."
With that, Thrust transforms into his F-35 lightning II and heads out.

ChaosWave360 wrote:I don't like to play as autobots

P.S in Tired mode right now

Thrust

Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: (Cybertron) Tetra jet / (Earth) F-35 Lightning II
Weapons: Compressed air rifles/laser cannons, Heat-seeking missiles
Special Abilities: Temporary speed increase above normal limits.
Height: 31 ft / 9,46 m
Quote: "My engines' roar is my enemies' song of doom!"


Strength: 08
Intelligence: 06
Dexterity: 08
Speed: 09
Endurance: 06
Courage: 04
Firepower: 08
Accuracy: 07
Melee: 07
Tech Skill: 05
Charisma: 05
Rank: 05

Profile: Thrust sees no point in trying to be subtle or sneaky to accomplish a military goal, and he often mocks those Decepticons who specialize in such work. Much like Dirge, he projects a carefully prepared image, although Thrust's is much less sophisticated. He brags about his toughness incessantly and makes every attempt to make his presence known both before and after he gets to the battlefield. He feels that trying to "psych out" his opponents with a dramatic arrival is half the battle. He delights in causing noticeable collateral damage on his way to battle just to let his foes know he's coming. Thrust never hesitates to announce his predestined victory before a fight has even begun.

Abilities: Subject possesses above-average strength and intelligence, and he is a highly skilled warrior. Like his follow Decepticon jet fighters, Thrust can attain speeds of up to 3000 mph and more. But he can accelerate to more than twice of his normal maximum speed in a few seconds and maintain that for .25 breems. The vibrations from his rapid acceleration can destroy nearby constructions. He carries a variety of missiles and two compressed air rifles; each one can punch a hole through steel at a distance of 1000 meters.

Weaknesses: A strong counterattack can break his nerve and cause him to retreat. He is unable to follow through on plans involving extreme subtlety.

Sample Post:

An unknown energon source is located in sector 8 near Los vegas, the decepticons have begun to the attack and are attacking the city. Thrust hovers above the battle with a laughter as he looks at the destruction he made to locating the energon.

"Hahahaha, lord Megatron will be pleased, maybe he will boost my rank. Hahahahahahahahaha."

One of the seekers transforms besides Thrust as he gives his battle report.

"Sir, the autobots are heading over at sector 7, they will be on their way. If they come, we might risk losing the energon to them."

"Listen, do you want to have Megatron's blessing?"

"Of course I do, but....."

"Then listen to me and he shall bless us all with good fortune."

"Of course what should we do?"

"Attack the place call Hollywood, with both attacks, they will be forced to split their forces. With that, you will cause a landslide to make casualties among the insects and pesky autobots. Tell the remaining forces to aim at the buildings, we're gonna cause a massive roadblock here."

"Done."
The seeker transforms and flies away to give out the order.

"Poor autobots, they should realize that they lost to me by coming..hahahahahahahaha."

Thrust plans worked as the autobots soon split their forces to combat the small decepticon forces that are attacking hollywood. Meanwhile the roadblock caused by other decepticons delayed the autobots long enough for the cons to find the energon and retreat. Before the autobots got through, Thrust fires his lasers at them to hold them off, but notices that he's outnumbered.

"Thrust, you ain't getting away!"

"Ohhhhhh, but I am...hehehehehe after all you got a building to stop."
Thrust aims his cannons at a building full with people as he fired upon it sending it down.
"Now will you choose me or them?"

"Ugh.....lets go autobots, we gotta save those people."

"Thats what I thought...hahaha."
With that, Thrust transforms into his F-35 lightning II and heads out.

Approved, assuming you still have the 'motivation' to play. Make sure to run your posts through spelling and grammar checkers though to clear up a few minor problems. Also skimming the latest threads to get an idea of the current situation would be a good idea too. Thrust should be on board the Ultrax which is now in the Kurile Trench in the Earth forum.

b]BLITZWING[/b]

Allegiance:Decepticon
Sub-group:TripleChangers
Function:Ground/Air Commando
Alternate Modes:Cybertronian Jet And Tank
Weapons:Electron-Scimitar,Gyro-Blaster Rifle,Heat Seeking Concussion Missles,Track-Mounted-Cannon That Fires Compressed Air Sheills At 3.5 miles.
Special Abilities:Triple Chager
Height: 31ft/ 9,45m
Quote: Destroy First, Think Later


Strength:6
Intelligence:4
Dexterity:3
Speed:7
Endurance:7
Courage:9
Firepower:4
Accuracy:3
Melee:6
Tech Skill:0
Charisma:8
Rank: 6

Profile:[/b]Battle loving Blitzwing has a cruel sense of humor, he is loud-mouthed, belligerent, and brash. a fierce warrior known more for his strength and abilities than his intelligence. He finds pleasure in confusing his enemies by transforming in mid-attack. With the lightning quickness in which he can change his foes are rarely ever prepared to engage him. His favorite attack is to use his jet mode to strafe land-bound Autobots and smash down after transforming in mid air to land as a Tank to finish them off with his powerful energy mortar. . In robot mode, he prefers to use his electron scimitar to fight foes one on one. Especially since this hardly ever fails to defeat a foe or bemuse Blitzwing. His twisted sense of humor lends him to find humor in things that harm others, laughing at fellow’s miseries.

Weaknesses:Blitzwing sometimes gets his circuits scrambled, which results in him getting stuck in mid-transformation between forms. Also his cruel sense of humor sometimes distracts him from what is going on.

Abilities: His ability as Triple Changer to rapidly transform makes him one of the most dangerous Decepticons, As a jet fighter, Blitzwing can fly at mach 2.7 with a range of 1500 miles. He carries heat-seeking concussion missiles. As a tank, he can traverse most terrain, however rugged, and can achieve a speed of 28 mph. His track-mounted cannon fires an explosive shell 3.5 miles that can level a 5-story brick building. In robot mode he uses an electron scimitar which can short-circuit any electrical device with a touch of its blade, and a gyro-blaster rifle, which disrupts the sense of balance of anyone it hits for 30 minutes.

Sample Post: Blitzwing was in the Decepticon medic room with Soundwave unsccrambiling his circuts as he looked like a cross between a jet and a tank. A tank with wings and a Cannon coming out the back. "How long is this going to take?" Blitzwing asked. Soundwave did not answer. "Just like all the Nutjobs here" he grumbled. It took nearly a Nanoday to get it fixed. "Well, I think ill just go then..." Blitzwing said. Soundwave again did not answer. Blitzwing Mumbling to himself left without so much as a backwards glance.

Turbine wrote:Kickback

Allegiance:Decepticon
Sub-group:Insecticons
Function:Espionage
Alternate Modes:Locust
Weapons:Sub Machine Gun
Special Abilities:None
Height: 21ft/ 6.4m
Quote: “Freind Is Just Another Word For Fool”


Strength:3
Intelligence:9
Dexterity:7
Speed:4
Endurance:4
Courage:6
Firepower:5
Accuracy:6
Melee:7
Tech Skill:8
Charisma:8
Rank:

Profile:Kickback Is As Charming A Mechinoid Youll Ever Meet-But It's A Charm Rooted In A Uncommonly Cruel Cleverness. The Singular Purpose Of Friends To Him Is Finding Embarrising Facts About Them So His "Friend" Can Do His Bidding. Organics Are Especially Suceptible To His Actions, And Even Autobots Have Been Known To Succumb. The Only Thing Kickback Loves More Than These "Double-Agents" Is Destroying Them After They Are No Use To Him.

Abilities:In His Insect Form, Kickback's Powerful Legs Can Propel Him Almost A Tenth Of A Mile. Although Small In This Form, A Single Kick Can Make A Hole In A Quarter-Inch Armor Plating. In Robot Form, His Wing Can Take Him Up To 30Miles Each Running. He Carries A Sub Machine Gun That Fires 300 Rounds Per Minute, Of Armor Peircing Titanium Coated Bullets. His Top Speed Is 500mph. The Effect That His Weapon Does Is peirce Armor Although, Itll Take A While To Peirce Armor Such As, Optimus's And Bigger Bots.

Weaknesses:In Locust Form, His Lack Of Weaponry Makes Him Extremly Vulnerable. In Robot Form, His Lack Of Jumping Power Reduces Power Greatly.

[b] Sample Post: Kickback Had Just Finished Off His Last Follower, A Bot With A Secret That He Was Organic Although He Seemed To Not Be. "What Worthless Trash." Kickback Muttered Under His Breath, He Was Looking Forward To Get Bumblebee To Do His Bidding. "Now, Lets See...Oooh! A Stofty To Humans, Perfect. Weaknesses,Nice Uh...Short Tempered And A Brat...Good. Now...Ill Tell Him About These, Threaten To Give Them To Megatron, And Unless He Does Whatever I Say, Megatron Will Have A Nice Time DESTROYING Him!" Kickback Laughed Out Loud. " With These, Ill Be Unstoppable! HaHaHaHaHaHaHa! Now Lets See If Megatron Has Anything Embarassing..."

Give me another sample post. He's currently on Nebulos, I want to see something that pertains to that. Get into his personality a bit. He's a charismatic mech. I wanna see that in your writing. And there's no need to capitalize every single word in every sentence you write.

Once I see an acceptable sample then I take another look at him.

Ember wrote:

Turbine wrote:Kickback

Allegiance:Decepticon
Sub-group:Insecticons
Function:Espionage
Alternate Modes:Locust
Weapons:Sub Machine Gun
Special Abilities:None
Height: 21ft/ 6.4m
Quote: “Freind Is Just Another Word For Fool”


Strength:3
Intelligence:9
Dexterity:7
Speed:4
Endurance:4
Courage:6
Firepower:5
Accuracy:6
Melee:7
Tech Skill:8
Charisma:8
Rank:

Profile:Kickback Is As Charming A Mechinoid Youll Ever Meet-But It's A Charm Rooted In A Uncommonly Cruel Cleverness. The Singular Purpose Of Friends To Him Is Finding Embarrising Facts About Them So His "Friend" Can Do His Bidding. Organics Are Especially Suceptible To His Actions, And Even Autobots Have Been Known To Succumb. The Only Thing Kickback Loves More Than These "Double-Agents" Is Destroying Them After They Are No Use To Him.

Abilities:In His Insect Form, Kickback's Powerful Legs Can Propel Him Almost A Tenth Of A Mile. Although Small In This Form, A Single Kick Can Make A Hole In A Quarter-Inch Armor Plating. In Robot Form, His Wing Can Take Him Up To 30Miles Each Running. He Carries A Sub Machine Gun That Fires 300 Rounds Per Minute, Of Armor Peircing Titanium Coated Bullets. His Top Speed Is 500mph. The Effect That His Weapon Does Is peirce Armor Although, Itll Take A While To Peirce Armor Such As, Optimus's And Bigger Bots.

Weaknesses:In Locust Form, His Lack Of Weaponry Makes Him Extremly Vulnerable. In Robot Form, His Lack Of Jumping Power Reduces Power Greatly.

[b] Sample Post: Kickback was already on Nebulous and he was already down with all of its inhabitants. "I dont get why Megatron sent ME to this...This...WORTHLESS PLANET!" He was mad now. REALLY mad."I SHOULD BE ON CYBERTRON CRUSHING THOSE WORTHLESS AUTOBOTS TO DUST! I SHOULD-" his voice stopped short. "What am I saying! I'm acting like,like...Starscream." Kickback dissmissed the though the moment it popped into his mind. "Well. I should at least tell Megatron that im one here..."

Give me another sample post. He's currently on Nebulos, I want to see something that pertains to that. Get into his personality a bit. He's a charismatic mech. I wanna see that in your writing. And there's no need to capitalize every single word in every sentence you write.

Once I see an acceptable sample then I take another look at him.

Turbine wrote:

Ember wrote:

Turbine wrote:Kickback

Allegiance:Decepticon
Sub-group:Insecticons
Function:Espionage
Alternate Modes:Locust
Weapons:Sub Machine Gun
Special Abilities:None
Height: 21ft/ 6.4m
Quote: “Freind Is Just Another Word For Fool”


Strength:3
Intelligence:9
Dexterity:7
Speed:4
Endurance:4
Courage:6
Firepower:5
Accuracy:6
Melee:7
Tech Skill:8
Charisma:8
Rank:

Profile:Kickback Is As Charming A Mechinoid Youll Ever Meet-But It's A Charm Rooted In A Uncommonly Cruel Cleverness. The Singular Purpose Of Friends To Him Is Finding Embarrising Facts About Them So His "Friend" Can Do His Bidding. Organics Are Especially Suceptible To His Actions, And Even Autobots Have Been Known To Succumb. The Only Thing Kickback Loves More Than These "Double-Agents" Is Destroying Them After They Are No Use To Him.

Abilities:In His Insect Form, Kickback's Powerful Legs Can Propel Him Almost A Tenth Of A Mile. Although Small In This Form, A Single Kick Can Make A Hole In A Quarter-Inch Armor Plating. In Robot Form, His Wing Can Take Him Up To 30Miles Each Running. He Carries A Sub Machine Gun That Fires 300 Rounds Per Minute, Of Armor Peircing Titanium Coated Bullets. His Top Speed Is 500mph. The Effect That His Weapon Does Is peirce Armor Although, Itll Take A While To Peirce Armor Such As, Optimus's And Bigger Bots.

Weaknesses:In Locust Form, His Lack Of Weaponry Makes Him Extremly Vulnerable. In Robot Form, His Lack Of Jumping Power Reduces Power Greatly.

[b] Sample Post: Kickback was already on Nebulous and he was already down with all of its inhabitants. "I dont get why Megatron sent ME to this...This...WORTHLESS PLANET!" He was mad now. REALLY mad."I SHOULD BE ON CYBERTRON CRUSHING THOSE WORTHLESS AUTOBOTS TO DUST! I SHOULD-" his voice stopped short. "What am I saying! I'm acting like,like...Starscream." Kickback dissmissed the though the moment it popped into his mind. "Well. I should at least tell Megatron that im one here..."

Give me another sample post. He's currently on Nebulos, I want to see something that pertains to that. Get into his personality a bit. He's a charismatic mech. I wanna see that in your writing. And there's no need to capitalize every single word in every sentence you write.

Once I see an acceptable sample then I take another look at him.

Try again. Triple the sample length, show us some insight to Kickback's personality and drop the excessive use of capital letters in the profile. Also, from what you have shown so far is not enough for us to consider letting you play character as powerful as Blitzwing at this point.