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Starscream

Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Seeker Commander
Alt. mode: F-22 Raptor
Weapons: Arm-mounted Laser Guns, Cluster Bombs
Special Abilities: Radar, Null rays
Height: 31 ft / 9,46 m
Quote: "Conquest is made of the ashes of one's enemies."


Strength: 07
Intelligence: 09
Dexterity: 10
Speed: 10
Endurance: 07
Courage: 09
Firepower: 08
Accuracy: 09
Melee: 08
Tech Skill: 09
Charisma: 09
Rank: 08

Profile: Starscream makes no secret of his ambition to overthrow Megatron as Decepticon Leader. He is ruthless, cold-blooded and cruel. In that sense the two rivals are very much alike. But he has a vain side that clearly distinguishes him. He considers himself the most sophisticated and handsome of the Decepticons. He exudes a high-class, urbane air that provides a certain irony to his murderous tendencies. He looks down at Megatron for being antiquated in his military strategy. Starscream believes the Decepticons should rely more on guile and speed rather than brute, destructive force to defeat the Autobots.

Starscream displays a kaleidoscope of personality facets and emotional undercurrents of which he himself is not fully aware, but which are not entirely lost on his comrades. He can be arrogant, selfish, and single-mindedly ambitious, forever seeking to unseat Megatron and assume command himself - but his schemes always seem to backfire as though he were subconsciously sabotaging himself. He forges ahead with supreme confidence, and can display astonishing perseverance in the face of repeated setbacks, but then may trip over his own insecurities.

Acknowledged for his combat skills but otherwise often disdained by his comrades despite his constant scrabbling to gain respect, he isolates himself further in a bristling shield of psychological armor. He can waver in an instant from deathless courage in battle to desperate pleas for appeasement in response to an enraged Megatron, when he's stepped too far over the line. Megatron overlooks the potential threat Starscream represents for one very good reason: Starscream is very good at his job.

Abilities: Starscream is one of the fastest flyers of the Decepticons, Mach 5 being nothing more but a cruising speed for him. He can climb to sub-orbital altitudes of 52 miles and nose-dive down to near ground level in mere minutes. This makes him particularly effective in surprise attacks and hit-and-run actions. He can shoot cluster bombs a distance of 40 miles, each of which can level an area 10,000 feet square. His null-ray rifle can interrupt the flow of electricity in any circuitry it hits for periods of up to two minutes, effectively preventing the operation of many machines dependent on those circuits during that period.

Weaknesses: Starscream tends to overrates himself often, and finds himself in situations that are more than he can handle. His nose-dives often overload his gyro-circuitry leaving him disoriented briefly. But, overall, he is a very tough nut to crack.

Sample-Post:

Bridge

Starscream readied himself for the coming fight with Razorclaw. He would have to win leadership from this? Barbaric and uncalled for. Starscream thought Motormaster was on his side when the discussions started, but doubt was in his mind at this point on who Motormaster was fighting for really.

"May the best mech win." Razorclaw said, drawing his blade.

"Perhaps no weapons, to be fair?" Starscream asked, maybe this would work out after all.

The sword was then sheathed and Razorclaw sank into his hand-to-hand combat stance. It mimicked that of one of the older martial arts, but Starscream was certain that Razorclaw had no knowledge of these.

Suddenly, Razorclaw leaped forward and began to unleash a series of punches rapidly. Starscream blocked those he could, feeling the fists dig into his metal, he lashed out with a knee to the Predacon's chest. Razorclaw buckled just enough for Starscream to dig down his elbow into the back of Razorclaw, trying to drive him to the floor. Razorclaw dropped to the floor to all fours.

"Can we end this barbaric and pointless battle now? There is no point in-" Starscream began, but was cut off when Razorclaw transformed and lunged at him, claws breaking the jet cockpit and digging into Starscream, he cried out in pain as he was pushed to the side of the Bridge.

Razorclaw began to bite down on Starscream's shoulder with enormous jaws, Starscream punched the Lion in the throat, releasing Razorclaw's jaws from his shoulder and giving him enough room for a kick in the chest of the transformed Razorclaw.

Razorclaw backed off just enough for Starscream to whip around and kick Razorclaw in his Faceplate, knocking the Predacon Commander into a lying state, where Starscream placed his foot on Razorclaw's neck and torso, pinning him down.

"Do you yield?" Starscream asked, Energon dripping from the gashes and cuts Razorclaw caused.

"I yield." Razorclaw responded with a grim and defeated voice.

Starscream lifted his foot from Razorclaw and stepped into the center of the room, where he let Razorclaw get himself up from the ground.

Starscream said nothing, but only read the faces of those in the room. They all knew that he was their new leader. And for once, for once he did what Megatron could never do: He beat his opponent fairly.

First, my apologies for the late response.

The staff has discussed your application but we feel that Starscream might not be the right fit for you at this time. We are in agreement that you've improved quite well in the time you've been with us, but Starscream is a very complicated character, in and out of the game.

You're progressing so keep it up.

Received permission from Foxfire in using Dark for my profile. Would like to be on Thantos if approved.

DeathTyranno

Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Predator
Alternate Modes: T-Rex
Weapons: Dark Particle Cannon, Dual Buster Claws and two virus energon wrist blades
Special Abilities: None
Height: 30ft/15 m
Quote: “Your destruction will be satisfying.”

Strength: 8
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity: 6
Speed: 4
Endurance: 9
Courage: 7
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 5
Charisma: 3
Rank:

Profile:

A cybertronian named Terroax who was an scientist secretly helped both sides as he develop weapons during the war. Whether it be autobot or decepticon, as long as he got energon for payment. One day, Terrorax received a request to build a weapon for the decepticon cause to help give them an advantage. However, the autobots found out and planned to arrest him, but Terrorax didn’t give in quietly and started a chain reaction to blow up his lab. The autobots searched the ruins fo his lab to find the body. Thinking that he is dead, they retreated; however, Terrorax has simply transplanted part of his mind to his creation which was made for the decepticons. Being able to endure the explosion thanks to its armor and being encased in a special compartment, the transformer lived. Terrorax now called himself, DeathTyranno as his alt form was that of a T-rex. Darkfire was sent to assassinate Terrorax and take his weapon. However, she found that the scientist was dead and found Deathtyranno. She brought him to the decepticons.

Deathtyranno is a evil incarnate decepticon that only cares about destruction and suffering. When entering the battlefield, DeathTyranno will make sure that all enemies will be eliminated from sight. Having upon being built as a weapon to fight against the autobots, DeathTyranno knows what to bring for his creators. However, DeathTyranno will only listen to those who he knows that are superior. He will not tolerate weaker bots ordering him around as they will be a meal to him. However, he likes leading inferior bots to do the dirty work for him thus he finishes his prey off if the bots are unable to the job. DeathTyranno enjoys destroying autobots especially when they provide an excellent meal to him. Other than superior officers, the only decepticon that he finds to respect is Darkfire as she was the first decepticon to find him. Thus, Deathtyranno will hear her suggestions, plans and orders if neccessary.


Abilities:
DeathTyranno is a living weapon born to destroy autobots, he has two virus wrist blades. If he gets a lethal blow like a deep wound then the blades will inject a virus that can corrupt a transformer system. Slashing will do nothing to the opponent, but a stab can risk a transformer getting injected of the virus. The virus will require a medic to remove and it can not be countered which means if its the same opponent then he/she has a chance of getting injected again.

One of his most powerful arsenal is his Dark particle cannon that will cause tons of damage to any transformers if they aren’t prepared. DeathTyranno will open its mouth to begin the charging, it will take up to 5 seconds, after those 5 seconds a dark particle beam will be fired. The cannon is powerful enough to critically weaken shields, armor and a transformer. For robot form, Deathtyranno chest will open up to fire the canon. However the set back will be for DeathTyranno to anchor itself to combat the recoil.

His buster claws carry high pressure lasers thus able to pierce thick armor with numerous shots. They are also used for drilling into steel and rocks.

His alt form is a Tyrannosaurus Rex with medium size arms and a pair of buster claws on his back. The buster claws give his Rex form a chance of close combat & long distance. In his Rex form, his strength is unrivaled as his melee hits are able to faze most cybertronians. His jaws are able to crush a cybertronian with ease if there able to get a hold of you.

Thanks to the modifications, his Rex form has thrusters that allows him to hover flight. This allows him to move across the ground quicker to get away in the area. The thrusters can also allow Deathtyranno to fire the Dark particle beam in the air.

Both his Rex and robot form have tough durability as he was made to last long on the battlefield. He’s capable of taking hits and rapid fire until his armor falls apart.

Weaknesses:

DeathTyranno doesn’t tolerate the weak nor the fact if they boss him around. Only the strong that he finds worthy can command him. This can cause tension between him and his comrades if they decide to tell him what to do during situations.

When firing a full power dark particle cannon, he’ll be completely immobilized as he has to anchor himself to prevent recoil. That makes him a sitting duck until the cannon is finished firing. The same thing will happen when firing in the air.

Sample Post

The autobots are holding their own in a human city called France against the decepticon forces. During the battle, it appeared that the decepticons hadn’t been able to breach the city due to the autobots defenses. As the autobots continue to hold their ground, they heard a large thud sound approaching their location.

“Hold your ground, we have to make sure the decepticons don’t go any closer to the city.”

One of the drones looked at him with a worried look as the noise keeps getting louder.

“But sir, what about that noise, I have a bad feeling about this.”

“Just keep firing.”

As they continue firing, they notice the decepticons are making room for somebody. A large dark red transformer who looks like a tyrannosaurus walked into the battlefield. It anchors itself then opens its mouth as it begins charging. The beast was none other than Deathtyranno himself as he fires a massive dark particle beam in the area. The autobots were not prepared for this kind of an attack. The blast had weakened their front lines critically. Using this to their advantage, the decepticons used this chance to move forward as Deathtyranno followed with a roar.

Making sure that none of the autobots escaped death, his buster claws unfolded and began firing high pressure lasers at them. Each blast when making contact, pushed an autobot back a bit due to its strong kinetic force. With Deathtyranno, the autobots were not prepared for this as the decepticons were made their way into the city. With the autobots are cornered, Deathtyranno finds one escaping to get reinforcements. He follows him into a building and enters looking for the autobot as he walks around.

“Whatever you are decepticon, I’m going to stop you.”

Suddenly the autobot jumped down from the ceiling and body slammed onto Deathtyranno as he counterattacked by throwing him off of him with his body. Deathtyranno aimed his buster claw and fired, but missed due to the autobot speed. Deathtyranno grew a little irritated as every time he fired, he would miss the target. The autobot was going in circles as he kept firing his weapons at the beast, but to no avail due to the armor. Deathtyranno was annoyed so he decides to wait till he gets closer to him.

The autobot thinking that Deathtyranno is losing power, decides to end it once and for all. The autobot gets close to land the final blow thinking it’ll be over; however, Deathtyranno quickly swung his tail and sent the autobot flying to the wall. Deathtyranno then had his buster claw do more damage to him sending him in a critical state. He walked over to the defeated autobot who watched helplessly.

“You’ll make an excellent snack..........for me...after all looking at you feeling helpless makes the meal good”

Deathtyranno opened his jaws as he began feasting on the poor autobot as the bot screams for help.

ChaosWave360 wrote:Received permission from Foxfire in using Dark for my profile. Would like to be on Thantos if approved.

DeathTyranno

Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Predator
Alternate Modes: T-Rex
Weapons: Dark Particle Cannon, Dual Buster Claws and two virus energon wrist blades
Special Abilities: None
Height: 30ft/15 m
Quote: “Your destruction will be satisfying.”

Strength: 8
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity: 6
Speed: 4
Endurance: 9
Courage: 7
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 5
Charisma: 3
Rank:

Profile:

A cybertronian named Terroax who was an scientist secretly helped both sides as he develop weapons during the war. Whether it be autobot or decepticon, as long as he got energon for payment. One day, Terrorax received a request to build a weapon for the decepticon cause to help give them an advantage. However, the autobots found out and planned to arrest him, but Terrorax didn’t give in quietly and started a chain reaction to blow up his lab. The autobots searched the ruins fo his lab to find the body. Thinking that he is dead, they retreated; however, Terrorax has simply transplanted part of his mind to his creation which was made for the decepticons. Being able to endure the explosion thanks to its armor and being encased in a special compartment, the transformer lived. Terrorax now called himself, DeathTyranno as his alt form was that of a T-rex. Darkfire was sent to assassinate Terrorax and take his weapon. However, she found that the scientist was dead and found Deathtyranno. She brought him to the decepticons.

Deathtyranno is a evil incarnate decepticon that only cares about destruction and suffering. When entering the battlefield, DeathTyranno will make sure that all enemies will be eliminated from sight. Having upon being built as a weapon to fight against the autobots, DeathTyranno knows what to bring for his creators. However, DeathTyranno will only listen to those who he knows that are superior. He will not tolerate weaker bots ordering him around as they will be a meal to him. However, he likes leading inferior bots to do the dirty work for him thus he finishes his prey off if the bots are unable to the job. DeathTyranno enjoys destroying autobots especially when they provide an excellent meal to him. Other than superior officers, the only decepticon that he finds to respect is Darkfire as she was the first decepticon to find him. Thus, Deathtyranno will hear her suggestions, plans and orders if neccessary.


Abilities:
DeathTyranno is a living weapon born to destroy autobots, he has two virus wrist blades. If he gets a lethal blow like a deep wound then the blades will inject a virus that can corrupt a transformer system. Slashing will do nothing to the opponent, but a stab can risk a transformer getting injected of the virus. The virus will require a medic to remove and it can not be countered which means if its the same opponent then he/she has a chance of getting injected again.

One of his most powerful arsenal is his Dark particle cannon that will cause tons of damage to any transformers if they aren’t prepared. DeathTyranno will open its mouth to begin the charging, it will take up to 5 seconds, after those 5 seconds a dark particle beam will be fired. The cannon is powerful enough to critically weaken shields, armor and a transformer. For robot form, Deathtyranno chest will open up to fire the canon. However the set back will be for DeathTyranno to anchor itself to combat the recoil.

His buster claws carry high pressure lasers thus able to pierce thick armor with numerous shots. They are also used for drilling into steel and rocks.

His alt form is a Tyrannosaurus Rex with medium size arms and a pair of buster claws on his back. The buster claws give his Rex form a chance of close combat & long distance. In his Rex form, his strength is unrivaled as his melee hits are able to faze most cybertronians. His jaws are able to crush a cybertronian with ease if there able to get a hold of you.

Thanks to the modifications, his Rex form has thrusters that allows him to hover flight. This allows him to move across the ground quicker to get away in the area. The thrusters can also allow Deathtyranno to fire the Dark particle beam in the air.

Both his Rex and robot form have tough durability as he was made to last long on the battlefield. He’s capable of taking hits and rapid fire until his armor falls apart.

Weaknesses:

DeathTyranno doesn’t tolerate the weak nor the fact if they boss him around. Only the strong that he finds worthy can command him. This can cause tension between him and his comrades if they decide to tell him what to do during situations.

When firing a full power dark particle cannon, he’ll be completely immobilized as he has to anchor himself to prevent recoil. That makes him a sitting duck until the cannon is finished firing. The same thing will happen when firing in the air.

Sample Post

The autobots are holding their own in a human city called France against the decepticon forces. During the battle, it appeared that the decepticons hadn’t been able to breach the city due to the autobots defenses. As the autobots continue to hold their ground, they heard a large thud sound approaching their location.

“Hold your ground, we have to make sure the decepticons don’t go any closer to the city.”

One of the drones looked at him with a worried look as the noise keeps getting louder.

“But sir, what about that noise, I have a bad feeling about this.”

“Just keep firing.”

As they continue firing, they notice the decepticons are making room for somebody. A large dark red transformer who looks like a tyrannosaurus walked into the battlefield. It anchors itself then opens its mouth as it begins charging. The beast was none other than Deathtyranno himself as he fires a massive dark particle beam in the area. The autobots were not prepared for this kind of an attack. The blast had weakened their front lines critically. Using this to their advantage, the decepticons used this chance to move forward as Deathtyranno followed with a roar.

Making sure that none of the autobots escaped death, his buster claws unfolded and began firing high pressure lasers at them. Each blast when making contact, pushed an autobot back a bit due to its strong kinetic force. With Deathtyranno, the autobots were not prepared for this as the decepticons were made their way into the city. With the autobots are cornered, Deathtyranno finds one escaping to get reinforcements. He follows him into a building and enters looking for the autobot as he walks around.

“Whatever you are decepticon, I’m going to stop you.”

Suddenly the autobot jumped down from the ceiling and body slammed onto Deathtyranno as he counterattacked by throwing him off of him with his body. Deathtyranno aimed his buster claw and fired, but missed due to the autobot speed. Deathtyranno grew a little irritated as every time he fired, he would miss the target. The autobot was going in circles as he kept firing his weapons at the beast, but to no avail due to the armor. Deathtyranno was annoyed so he decides to wait till he gets closer to him.

The autobot thinking that Deathtyranno is losing power, decides to end it once and for all. The autobot gets close to land the final blow thinking it’ll be over; however, Deathtyranno quickly swung his tail and sent the autobot flying to the wall. Deathtyranno then had his buster claw do more damage to him sending him in a critical state. He walked over to the defeated autobot who watched helplessly.

“You’ll make an excellent snack..........for me...after all looking at you feeling helpless makes the meal good”

Deathtyranno opened his jaws as he began feasting on the poor autobot as the bot screams for help.

Afraid this guy isn't going to work. The alternate mode doesn't really make sense for someone on Cybertron. He wouldn't even know about Earth, let alone any creatures they have lived on it. For a scientist his intelligence and tech skill are extremely low. While playing both sides of a war is possible it is also extremely risky. The Decepticons would likely just abduct or terminate him rather then let him give weapons to the Autobots like that. I'm not really sure that transferring even part of a Transformers mind to another body is a very easy process and would likely require some major assistance from another trained Transformer. I'm not really liking his weapons either. The virus is kind of vague and power up weapons are hard to work in the game. I don't really know what 'buster claws' are and flying in his alternate mode would have to be nixed unless it is specifically an alternate mode that is made to fly, like a jet. If you want to try a fanmade I would go for something a bit less ambitious. This guy's history, weapons, alternate mode and abilities just don't really work in the game.

Fixed it up

DeathTyranno

Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Predator
Alternate Modes: Tyrannosaurus Rex
Weapons: Dark Particle Cannon, Dual Pulse laser rifles and Dual energon wrist blades
Special Abilities: None
Height: 30ft/15 m
Quote: “Your destruction will be satisfying.”

Strength: 8
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity: 6
Speed: 4
Endurance: 9
Courage: 7
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 5
Charisma: 3
Rank:

Profile:

Deathtyranno is shrouded in mystery as some say he was created as a project. Others would say that he was modified to match at least Grimlock. No body other than Deathtyranno himself knows his origins or his creators. When created Deathtyranno laid waste to his creators base because of thinking they were inferior. Deathtyranno held out in the wild life making terror and destruction wherever he went. When hearing about the cybertronian war, he sought after the decepticons as the autobots wouldn't want his destructive nature. Deathyranno is not doing it for their cause, but rather than to bring terror and destruction to the autobots who he thought was inferior thus have to be eliminated.

Deathtyranno is a evil incarnate decepticon that only cares about destruction and suffering. When entering the battlefield, DeathTyranno will make sure that all enemies will be eliminated from sight. Having upon being built as a weapon to fight against the autobots, DeathTyranno knows what to bring for his creators. However, DeathTyranno will only listen to those who he knows that are superior. He will not tolerate weaker bots ordering him around as they will be a meal to him. However, he likes leading inferior bots to do the dirty work for him thus he finishes his prey off if the bots are unable to the job. DeathTyranno enjoys destroying autobots especially when they provide an excellent meal to him.


Abilities:
DeathTyranno is a living weapon born to destroy autobots, he has two energon wrist blades for close combat. While his speed isn't good, his strength makes up for it as he is able to back up his wrist blades with power.

One of his most powerful arsenal is his Dark particle cannon that will cause tons of damage to any transformers if they aren’t prepared. DeathTyranno will open its mouth to begin the charging, it will take up to 5 seconds, after those 5 seconds a dark particle beam will be fired. The cannon is powerful enough to critically weaken shields, armor and a transformer. For robot form, Deathtyranno chest will open up to fire the canon. However the set back will be for DeathTyranno to anchor itself to combat the recoil.

In his robot mode, the pulse laser rifles splits as they end up on both of his wrist. The damage done by them are able to hurt transformers who aren't durable and with enough fire, it can even penetrate high tech armor.

His alt form is a Tyrannosaurus Rex with medium size arms and a dual pulse laser gun on his back. The pulse lasers give his Rex form long distance fire. In his Rex form, his strength is unrivaled as his melee hits should be able to faze most cybertronians unless they are very durable. His jaws are able to crush a cybertronian with ease if he's able to get a hold of you.

Deathtyranno has thrusters on his back as he's able to go in the air in 250 mph. The thrusters can allow Deathtyranno to fire the Dark particle beam in the air in robot form.

Both his Rex and robot form have tough durability as he was made to last long on the battlefield. He’s capable of taking hits and rapid fire until his armor falls apart.

Weaknesses:

DeathTyranno doesn’t tolerate the weak nor the fact if they boss him around. Only the strong that he finds worthy can command him. This can cause tension between him and his comrades if they decide to tell him what to do during situations.

When firing a full power dark particle cannon, he’ll be completely immobilized as he has to anchor himself to prevent recoil. That makes him a sitting duck until the cannon is finished firing. The same thing will happen when firing in the air for his robot mode.

Sample Post

The autobots are holding their own in a human city called France against the decepticon forces. During the battle, it appeared that the decepticons hadn’t been able to breach the city due to the autobots defenses. As the autobots continue to hold their ground, they heard a large thud sound approaching their location.

“Hold your ground, we have to make sure the decepticons don’t go any closer to the city.”

One of the drones looked at him with a worried look as the noise keeps getting louder.

“But sir, what about that noise, I have a bad feeling about this.”

“Just keep firing.”

As they continue firing, they notice the decepticons are making room for somebody. A large dark red transformer who looks like a tyrannosaurus walked into the battlefield. It anchors itself then opens its mouth as it begins charging. The beast was none other than Deathtyranno himself as he fires a massive dark particle beam in the area. The autobots were not prepared for this kind of an attack. The blast had weakened their front lines critically. Using this to their advantage, the decepticons used this chance to move forward as Deathtyranno followed with a roar.

Making sure that none of the autobots escaped death, his buster claws unfolded and began firing high pressure lasers at them. Each blast when making contact, pushed an autobot back a bit due to its strong kinetic force. With Deathtyranno, the autobots were not prepared for this as the decepticons were made their way into the city. With the autobots are cornered, Deathtyranno finds one escaping to get reinforcements. He follows him into a building and enters looking for the autobot as he walks around.

“Whatever you are decepticon, I’m going to stop you.”

Suddenly the autobot jumped down from the ceiling and body slammed onto Deathtyranno as he counterattacked by throwing him off of him with his body. Deathtyranno aimed his buster claw and fired, but missed due to the autobot speed. Deathtyranno grew a little irritated as every time he fired, he would miss the target. The autobot was going in circles as he kept firing his weapons at the beast, but to no avail due to the armor. Deathtyranno was annoyed so he decides to wait till he gets closer to him.

The autobot thinking that Deathtyranno is losing power, decides to end it once and for all. The autobot gets close to land the final blow thinking it’ll be over; however, Deathtyranno quickly swung his tail and sent the autobot flying to the wall. Deathtyranno then had his buster claw do more damage to him sending him in a critical state. He walked over to the defeated autobot who watched helplessly.

“You’ll make an excellent snack..........for me...after all looking at you feeling helpless makes the meal good”

Deathtyranno opened his jaws as he began feasting on the poor autobot as the bot screams for help.

Blitzwing

Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Commando
Alt. mode: M1A2 Abrams as a tank and F-15E Strike Eagle as a jet fighter
Weapons: Gyro-blaster rifle, electron scimitar, heat seeking missiles, explosive shells
Height: 33ft / 10.07m
Quote: "Destroy first, think later."


Strength: 08
Intelligence: 05
Dexterity: 08
Speed: 09
Endurance: 08
Courage: 07
Firepower: 08
Accuracy: 08
Melee: 08
Tech Skill: 05
Charisma: 05
Rank: 06

Profile: Even before he was retooled into a triplechanger, Blitzwing enjoyed a reputation as one of the most notorious killers in Megatron's burgeoning army. A veteran soldier of many campaigns, he was quickly assigned for commando duty, something he cherished in. Responsible of many atrocities towards Autobots and neutrals, like being part of the commando unit that destroyed Bluestreak's home city - Blitzwing quickly became one of the most hated and feared Decepticons. As a Triple Changer, Blitzwing's ability to rapidly transform from tank mode to jet fighter mode makes him one of the most lethally effective Decepticon warriors. Not only are foes confused by his talent, but rarely are they prepared to fight him in a second form after fighting him in the first one. And Blitzwing certainly relishes changing form. His favorite tactic is to dive at a target - living or otherwise - as a jet, change at the last moment to a tank, and then smash into the target just as he lands. This hardly ever fails to defeat a foe or amuse Blitzwing. He likes to think of himself as having a sense of humor, although the things that make him laugh are typically cruel and harmful to others. Loud-mouthed, belligerant and brash, Blitzwing has a cruel sense of humor especially toward his enemies, but generally gets along well with his fellow Decepticons, and even has his contemplative moments.

Abilities: As a jet fighter, Blitzwing can easily exceed the speed, maneuverability and range of an original human built F-15E Strike Eagle. He carries heat-seeking concussion missiles and machinegun. As a tank, he can traverse most terrain, however rugged, and can achieve a speed of 80 mph. His track-mounted cannon fires an explosive shell 10.5 miles that can level a 5-story brick building with ease. In addition he is also equipped with independently targetable machinegun. In robot mode he uses an electron scimitar which can short-circuit almost any electrical device with a touch of its blade, and a gyro-blaster rifle, which can be either used to disrupt the sense of balance of anyone it hits for 30 minutes or as regular heavy laser rifle. Blitzwing is incredibly strong and resistant to damage. He is also well trained in melee combat and is a capable shooter, especially in tank mode where he finds aiming more stable. Blitzwing is better shielded against electrical warfare than most transformers with addition of being equipped with camoflauge circuitry that allows him to blend into his surroundings as long as he moves extremely slowly.

Weaknesses: Blitzwing is one of the first triplechangers created by Shockwave. Unfortunately this means he suffers from some design glitches. The worst being that on a rare occasion Blitzwing can get his circuits scrambled, which results in him getting stuck in mid-transformation between forms. While undoubtedly powerful and durable, Blitzwing has made many enemies during his long career as a commando which is certain to give him trouble eventually. This has made Blitzwing somewhat paranoid, thus keeping his sensors on the edge all the time, particularly making his optical sensors vulnerable against light based attacks.


Sample Post:

Humour. Everybody had it. From the least mentally stable Decepticon to the most virtuous and boring Autobot, it was sheltered inside of every being, simply waiting for yet another chance to make a grand appearance. For somebody like Blitzwing, humour was important and constituted a large part of his personality.

Right after brazenness and belligerence, of course, but it was still up there shouldering the two most well known traits of his character.

Soaring over the battlefield was always a pleasurable experience for Blitzwing, one he sometimes wished would last for as long as the combat did. He peered down. As always, the view was agreeable. The intensity of the unfolding battle pillaged the area of its respect and appeal, and the Autobots scurried across the devastated land in desperation, bringing the fight to his comrades.

It was a lovely sight, filling Blitzwing with raw ecstasy. One by one, he enthusiastically counted the Autobots on the ground. He let out a wild cackle. He had so many targets to choose from. It was as though he were a war-crazed soldier in an armoury; the vast selection on offer was fantastic.

He quickly descended, his F-15E Strike Eagle form screaming down to the battered surface of the battlefield as if he had been a heat-seeking missile fired from above. The specks grew quickly and gained shapes. From the looks of it, more Autobots seemed to have popped up.

Had he been in robot mode, he would have shrugged. “More power to me.”

Who to crush, then? The yellow Autobot on his left? The few wimpy wrecks looking clueless on his right? Or how about the big, ugly, dumb looking fellow just standing there, practically inviting Blitzwing to squash him? Maybe if he did waste that one, he'd be doing the Autobots a favour?

Decisions, decisions, decisions...

Then it finally came to him. Why settle on one target when he could have them all? Sure it would take a little time, but he had it. Along with his overwhelming need to “prank” these fools, oh, he had it all right.

“I think I'll start with that oil stain who can't stop staring at me. Weird fragger starting to give me the creeps. Not to worry! I'll soon fix that!” he said to himself, chuckling away.

Of course, when Blitzwing wanted to “prank” the Autobots—well, it had nothing to do with playing any tricks on them. Not in the true sense of the word.

“Incoming!”

What it really involved was diving at a target as a jet, then transforming at the last moment to his tank mode where he would then smash into the poor victim just as he landed. Worked like a charm. His enemies never made complete recoveries after being slammed into at such speeds.

“Uh-oh. Looks like somebody is going to be too slow to get out of the way! Quick! Quick! Move!”

And a good deal never lived.

Blades wrote:Blitzwing

Allegiance: Decepticons
Function: Commando
Alt. mode: M1A2 Abrams as a tank and F-15E Strike Eagle as a jet fighter
Weapons: Gyro-blaster rifle, electron scimitar, heat seeking missiles, explosive shells
Height: 33ft / 10.07m
Quote: "Destroy first, think later."


Strength: 08
Intelligence: 05
Dexterity: 08
Speed: 09
Endurance: 08
Courage: 07
Firepower: 08
Accuracy: 08
Melee: 08
Tech Skill: 05
Charisma: 05
Rank: 06

Profile: Even before he was retooled into a triplechanger, Blitzwing enjoyed a reputation as one of the most notorious killers in Megatron's burgeoning army. A veteran soldier of many campaigns, he was quickly assigned for commando duty, something he cherished in. Responsible of many atrocities towards Autobots and neutrals, like being part of the commando unit that destroyed Bluestreak's home city - Blitzwing quickly became one of the most hated and feared Decepticons. As a Triple Changer, Blitzwing's ability to rapidly transform from tank mode to jet fighter mode makes him one of the most lethally effective Decepticon warriors. Not only are foes confused by his talent, but rarely are they prepared to fight him in a second form after fighting him in the first one. And Blitzwing certainly relishes changing form. His favorite tactic is to dive at a target - living or otherwise - as a jet, change at the last moment to a tank, and then smash into the target just as he lands. This hardly ever fails to defeat a foe or amuse Blitzwing. He likes to think of himself as having a sense of humor, although the things that make him laugh are typically cruel and harmful to others. Loud-mouthed, belligerant and brash, Blitzwing has a cruel sense of humor especially toward his enemies, but generally gets along well with his fellow Decepticons, and even has his contemplative moments.

Abilities: As a jet fighter, Blitzwing can easily exceed the speed, maneuverability and range of an original human built F-15E Strike Eagle. He carries heat-seeking concussion missiles and machinegun. As a tank, he can traverse most terrain, however rugged, and can achieve a speed of 80 mph. His track-mounted cannon fires an explosive shell 10.5 miles that can level a 5-story brick building with ease. In addition he is also equipped with independently targetable machinegun. In robot mode he uses an electron scimitar which can short-circuit almost any electrical device with a touch of its blade, and a gyro-blaster rifle, which can be either used to disrupt the sense of balance of anyone it hits for 30 minutes or as regular heavy laser rifle. Blitzwing is incredibly strong and resistant to damage. He is also well trained in melee combat and is a capable shooter, especially in tank mode where he finds aiming more stable. Blitzwing is better shielded against electrical warfare than most transformers with addition of being equipped with camoflauge circuitry that allows him to blend into his surroundings as long as he moves extremely slowly.

Weaknesses: Blitzwing is one of the first triplechangers created by Shockwave. Unfortunately this means he suffers from some design glitches. The worst being that on a rare occasion Blitzwing can get his circuits scrambled, which results in him getting stuck in mid-transformation between forms. While undoubtedly powerful and durable, Blitzwing has made many enemies during his long career as a commando which is certain to give him trouble eventually. This has made Blitzwing somewhat paranoid, thus keeping his sensors on the edge all the time, particularly making his optical sensors vulnerable against light based attacks.


Sample Post:

Humour. Everybody had it. From the least mentally stable Decepticon to the most virtuous and boring Autobot, it was sheltered inside of every being, simply waiting for yet another chance to make a grand appearance. For somebody like Blitzwing, humour was important and constituted a large part of his personality.

Right after brazenness and belligerence, of course, but it was still up there shouldering the two most well known traits of his character.

Soaring over the battlefield was always a pleasurable experience for Blitzwing, one he sometimes wished would last for as long as the combat did. He peered down. As always, the view was agreeable. The intensity of the unfolding battle pillaged the area of its respect and appeal, and the Autobots scurried across the devastated land in desperation, bringing the fight to his comrades.

It was a lovely sight, filling Blitzwing with raw ecstasy. One by one, he enthusiastically counted the Autobots on the ground. He let out a wild cackle. He had so many targets to choose from. It was as though he were a war-crazed soldier in an armoury; the vast selection on offer was fantastic.

He quickly descended, his F-15E Strike Eagle form screaming down to the battered surface of the battlefield as if he had been a heat-seeking missile fired from above. The specks grew quickly and gained shapes. From the looks of it, more Autobots seemed to have popped up.

Had he been in robot mode, he would have shrugged. “More power to me.”

Who to crush, then? The yellow Autobot on his left? The few wimpy wrecks looking clueless on his right? Or how about the big, ugly, dumb looking fellow just standing there, practically inviting Blitzwing to squash him? Maybe if he did waste that one, he'd be doing the Autobots a favour?

Decisions, decisions, decisions...

Then it finally came to him. Why settle on one target when he could have them all? Sure it would take a little time, but he had it. Along with his overwhelming need to “prank” these fools, oh, he had it all right.

“I think I'll start with that oil stain who can't stop staring at me. Weird fragger starting to give me the creeps. Not to worry! I'll soon fix that!” he said to himself, chuckling away.

Of course, when Blitzwing wanted to “prank” the Autobots—well, it had nothing to do with playing any tricks on them. Not in the true sense of the word.

“Incoming!”

What it really involved was diving at a target as a jet, then transforming at the last moment to his tank mode where he would then smash into the poor victim just as he landed. Worked like a charm. His enemies never made complete recoveries after being slammed into at such speeds.

“Uh-oh. Looks like somebody is going to be too slow to get out of the way! Quick! Quick! Move!”

And a good deal never lived.

The sample looks pretty solid. Approved. Welcome aboard. Blitzwing can be found in the Sea of Change thread in company of Astrotrain.

ChaosWave360 wrote:Fixed it up

DeathTyranno

Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Predator
Alternate Modes: Tyrannosaurus Rex
Weapons: Dark Particle Cannon, Dual Pulse laser rifles and Dual energon wrist blades
Special Abilities: None
Height: 30ft/15 m
Quote: “Your destruction will be satisfying.”

Strength: 8
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity: 6
Speed: 4
Endurance: 9
Courage: 7
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 5
Charisma: 3
Rank:

Profile:

Deathtyranno is shrouded in mystery as some say he was created as a project. Others would say that he was modified to match at least Grimlock. No body other than Deathtyranno himself knows his origins or his creators. When created Deathtyranno laid waste to his creators base because of thinking they were inferior. Deathtyranno held out in the wild life making terror and destruction wherever he went. When hearing about the cybertronian war, he sought after the decepticons as the autobots wouldn't want his destructive nature. Deathyranno is not doing it for their cause, but rather than to bring terror and destruction to the autobots who he thought was inferior thus have to be eliminated.

Deathtyranno is a evil incarnate decepticon that only cares about destruction and suffering. When entering the battlefield, DeathTyranno will make sure that all enemies will be eliminated from sight. Having upon being built as a weapon to fight against the autobots, DeathTyranno knows what to bring for his creators. However, DeathTyranno will only listen to those who he knows that are superior. He will not tolerate weaker bots ordering him around as they will be a meal to him. However, he likes leading inferior bots to do the dirty work for him thus he finishes his prey off if the bots are unable to the job. DeathTyranno enjoys destroying autobots especially when they provide an excellent meal to him.


Abilities:
DeathTyranno is a living weapon born to destroy autobots, he has two energon wrist blades for close combat. While his speed isn't good, his strength makes up for it as he is able to back up his wrist blades with power.

One of his most powerful arsenal is his Dark particle cannon that will cause tons of damage to any transformers if they aren’t prepared. DeathTyranno will open its mouth to begin the charging, it will take up to 5 seconds, after those 5 seconds a dark particle beam will be fired. The cannon is powerful enough to critically weaken shields, armor and a transformer. For robot form, Deathtyranno chest will open up to fire the canon. However the set back will be for DeathTyranno to anchor itself to combat the recoil.

In his robot mode, the pulse laser rifles splits as they end up on both of his wrist. The damage done by them are able to hurt transformers who aren't durable and with enough fire, it can even penetrate high tech armor.

His alt form is a Tyrannosaurus Rex with medium size arms and a dual pulse laser gun on his back. The pulse lasers give his Rex form long distance fire. In his Rex form, his strength is unrivaled as his melee hits should be able to faze most cybertronians unless they are very durable. His jaws are able to crush a cybertronian with ease if he's able to get a hold of you.

Deathtyranno has thrusters on his back as he's able to go in the air in 250 mph. The thrusters can allow Deathtyranno to fire the Dark particle beam in the air in robot form.

Both his Rex and robot form have tough durability as he was made to last long on the battlefield. He’s capable of taking hits and rapid fire until his armor falls apart.

Weaknesses:

DeathTyranno doesn’t tolerate the weak nor the fact if they boss him around. Only the strong that he finds worthy can command him. This can cause tension between him and his comrades if they decide to tell him what to do during situations.

When firing a full power dark particle cannon, he’ll be completely immobilized as he has to anchor himself to prevent recoil. That makes him a sitting duck until the cannon is finished firing. The same thing will happen when firing in the air for his robot mode.

Sample Post

The autobots are holding their own in a human city called France against the decepticon forces. During the battle, it appeared that the decepticons hadn’t been able to breach the city due to the autobots defenses. As the autobots continue to hold their ground, they heard a large thud sound approaching their location.

“Hold your ground, we have to make sure the decepticons don’t go any closer to the city.”

One of the drones looked at him with a worried look as the noise keeps getting louder.

“But sir, what about that noise, I have a bad feeling about this.”

“Just keep firing.”

As they continue firing, they notice the decepticons are making room for somebody. A large dark red transformer who looks like a tyrannosaurus walked into the battlefield. It anchors itself then opens its mouth as it begins charging. The beast was none other than Deathtyranno himself as he fires a massive dark particle beam in the area. The autobots were not prepared for this kind of an attack. The blast had weakened their front lines critically. Using this to their advantage, the decepticons used this chance to move forward as Deathtyranno followed with a roar.

Making sure that none of the autobots escaped death, his buster claws unfolded and began firing high pressure lasers at them. Each blast when making contact, pushed an autobot back a bit due to its strong kinetic force. With Deathtyranno, the autobots were not prepared for this as the decepticons were made their way into the city. With the autobots are cornered, Deathtyranno finds one escaping to get reinforcements. He follows him into a building and enters looking for the autobot as he walks around.

“Whatever you are decepticon, I’m going to stop you.”

Suddenly the autobot jumped down from the ceiling and body slammed onto Deathtyranno as he counterattacked by throwing him off of him with his body. Deathtyranno aimed his buster claw and fired, but missed due to the autobot speed. Deathtyranno grew a little irritated as every time he fired, he would miss the target. The autobot was going in circles as he kept firing his weapons at the beast, but to no avail due to the armor. Deathtyranno was annoyed so he decides to wait till he gets closer to him.

The autobot thinking that Deathtyranno is losing power, decides to end it once and for all. The autobot gets close to land the final blow thinking it’ll be over; however, Deathtyranno quickly swung his tail and sent the autobot flying to the wall. Deathtyranno then had his buster claw do more damage to him sending him in a critical state. He walked over to the defeated autobot who watched helplessly.

“You’ll make an excellent snack..........for me...after all looking at you feeling helpless makes the meal good”

Deathtyranno opened his jaws as he began feasting on the poor autobot as the bot screams for help.

Denied. You made a few of the changes I asked but not all of them. He doesn't get a dinosaur alternate mode. The character has minimal personality other then 'smash, kill, destroy' and that doesn't impress or interest me at all. Your sample post doesn't help matters but basically showing nothing but your character fighting, killing and saving the day for the Decepticons, which isn't going to happen in the game.

If you want to play a fanmade create a personality and history that work in the game. Focus more on that and less on various weapons and exotic alternate modes. A fanmade is not going to be an ultimate warrior or killing machine. Look over some of the accepted fanmades for ideas of what we are looking for. A sample post that focuses on your character and their thoughts instead of people talking about him and then fighting would be better as well.

This character isn't going to work in the game, if you want a fanmade create a new one following the suggestions I've made.

There, this should better.

DeathStinger

Allegiance: Decepticon 
Function: Predator Assassin
Alternate Modes: Scorpion
Weapons: Charged Particle Cannon, Dual Shock Cannons, Vulcan guns, Energon sword, Missile Rockets
Special Abilities: Radar/Sonar
Height: 32ft/16 m
Quote: “Taking you with me to the depths will be fun.”

Strength: 8
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity: 5
Speed: 4
Endurance: 9
Courage: 7
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 7
Tech Skill: 5
Charisma: 3
Rank:

Profile:

Hunting is a sport that drives my inner being. That is the sentence that describes Deathstinger as he enjoys hunting bots. When giving the order to hunt down autobots or traitorous decepticons, he’ll do it. Earth based vehicles are useless in the hunt for him so he chooses a scorpion. The reason for this is because of its underwater capabilities and allows him to dig through the ground. Its a perfect form for him to go underground and hunt land based units.

The reason for Deathstinger to join the decepticons is for the hunting reasons. As an autobot, they wouldn’t allow him to hunt down bots and kill them because of their moral code. Therefore choosing the decepticons and helping Megatron achieve his goals for allowing him to hunt is a more reasonable excuse.

When working with comrades, if they don’t get in his way during the hunt then there will be no problems. Decepticons that get in his way will have a taste of his wrath. Deathstinger has a sadistic personality as he plays around with his prey if he knows the outcome would come out in his favor.

Abilities:
Deathstinger is a hunter, an assassin assigned to hunt down autobots or traitorous decepticons. He has the ability to go underground to avoid missiles or any other explosion. Like scorpions, he has the ability to go underwater as it is his favorite hunting place.

One of his weapons is the charged particle cannon which is his favorite weapon. If he knows that his prey is far and out of his reach then he’ll resort to this weapon. The charging takes up to 6 seconds, but when fully charged, it unleashes a devastating blast that will hurt any transformer.

In robot mode, his charged particle cannon is in the middle of his chest. His left and right hand are claws that have an hidden energon blades for surprise attacks.

On his wrists are the vulcan guns are long range while the shock cannons are on his shoulders.

While Deathstinger has long range weapons, he personally likes to be in close combat fighting. His strength allows him to pick up bots and overpowered them. Weak, small and non-durable bots will be crushed by his grip if he gets his hands on them.

Sacrifcing speed for strength and endurance. Deathstinger armor allows him to last longer in battle due to his armor being thick.

His special ability is his radar to locate transformers far away. This allows him to know where his enemy is hiding so that he can fire his particle cannon. With the radar, no prey would hide from him.

Weaknesses:

His weakness is if he’s facing a aerial bot then Deathstinger won’t be able to reach them unless they are on the ground. The only way to hit them is with the vulcan guns and charged particle cannon, but against an aerial bot, it would likely miss.

His sadistic nature in playing with his prey may cost him the battle as the opponent would be given enough time to find a counter attack.

Sample Post

What a wonderful hunt today has been. Deathstinger had been ordered to hunt down a traitorous decepticon who has been giving leak information for the autobots. Hunting down this prey was going to be a challenge as the target was a gladiator from kaon. However, no prey was a match when it comes to the hunt. Transforming into his scorpion mode, Deathstinger digs deep underground and begins to pick up the decepticon’s signal. “There you are, now let the hunt begin.”

The target seems to be moving to autobot city, but it seems the cybertronian is slow which is good enough to catch up. Deathstinger continues through the ground as he was getting closer to his target. It seems his target thinks their not following him; however, he would sadly be mistaken.

“1..2..3, your mine.” Deathstinger rose from the ground and grabbed onto the decepticon. “I’m dragging you to the depths, we’re gonna have some fun.” Deathstinger began dragging him underground; however, the con transformed and fired a missile at Deathstinger face. The sudden impact made him let go, but Deathstinger also transformed.

They both land on solid ground as they get their weapons ready for battle. Deathstinger has his claws out ready to do battle as he charges in against the decepticon. Both of them tug it out as one tries to overpower the other. “So slug, how does it feel in being my prey?”

“Never, beast.....I’ll kill you...”

Slug began to overpower him with his strength until he felt an incredible amount of pain in his arms. It was like a sword pierced through his arms; however, it was exactly like that.

Thanks to Deathstingers hidden blades, the pain that slug felt allowed him to overpowered the traitor. His visor glowed bright red as he chopped off the traitor arms. Slug dropped to the ground in pain as he tried to escape, but was surprised that Deathstinger wasn’t chasing after him. To take advantage of this, he began to escape while sending a transmission to the autobots.

“That’s enough living for you now..hehehe.” Deathstinger chest opened up as he began to fire the charged particle beam...1....2....3....4....5...6. A huge blast fires from his chest directly at Slug. The blast makes impact as the attack critically injured him to the point where he can barely move. Deathstinger walks towards the injured cybertronian and looked upon him to see if he was still alive. He sees that his optics is flashing on & off as he was on the brink of death. “You was fun, but not a great hunt.” *Slice* With one quick strike, Slug’s head was chopped off. He picks up the head and turns away to return back to base to report about his mission.

So how exactly does this work. I see that Blaster is avalible and would like to audition.

-no sigs in rpg section-

Just fill in the application template here. The coded one is the easiest. There's likely already a pre-approved Blaster profile down in the canon Autobots section that you can use. The key part of any app for a canon character is the sample post. That's where you show the mods what you, specifically, can do with the character.

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Reading the rules and game notes is usually a good plan when you're first starting off too. Gives you an idea of how things work in general. If you have further questions, don't hesitate to ask them here:

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