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Late Night Prime Time with Jackie Wheeler

Episode 1























Thanks for viewing! Comments welcome

I love the Soundwave band!

What genre would they be playing?

Va'al wrote:I love the Soundwave band!

What genre would they be playing?

I always imagined them playing something like the songs from the '86 Movie soundtrack ..with maybe a little techno added in

That does sound appropriate.

I like your work, very nice setting and clean photos.
There's something that doesn't convince about the dialogues, but I can't figure out whether it's the font or the amount of text per speech-bubble.

But again, nice work!

Va'al wrote:That does sound appropriate.

I like your work, very nice setting and clean photos.
There's something that doesn't convince about the dialogues, but I can't figure out whether it's the font or the amount of text per speech-bubble.

But again, nice work!

Thanks! Glad you like it I think I scaled the text to the bubbles a lot better in the next epsiode, so hopefully that will help.

Va'al wrote:That does sound appropriate.

I like your work, very nice setting and clean photos.
There's something that doesn't convince about the dialogues, but I can't figure out whether it's the font or the amount of text per speech-bubble.

But again, nice work!

It's the amount of text.

Simple solution is to just have another panel or two to help fill the story out.

Great work!

Episode 2










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To Be Continued..

I liked it again, but it's definitely text heavy.

(The Tracks panel especially. Try using different speechbubbles per line/sentence.)

Also, for YouTube embedding, simply copy the video number, in this case T1N91LyATF0, and post it in the YouTube tags ([youtube][/youtube]).

Unfortunately, the pics get re-sized when I post them to the thread so please forgive the small txt on a couple of the pages in this episode. To view the full-sized images, plus more episodes of Jackie Wheeler, please check out Orbital Bacon: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Orbital-Bacon/285661064802194

Episode 3

I find that these are progressively getting funnier. I loved Warpath as Michael Bay, maybe you could have some of those characters return later. I would recommend that you maybe have the toys be more animated with more poses, and different camera angles

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To Be Continued..

keep em' coming! Im loving it!

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