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THE NEW Team profile/Character profile thread

Postby Galvatronus » Wed Oct 31, 2007 11:02 am

old info.
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Postby Archanubis » Wed Oct 31, 2007 11:11 am

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Well, considering the old one has apparently been buried on Forum Page 4...

The new, shorter Eisen Dragoon bio

Motto: Always mystify, mislead and surprise the enemy; and when you strike and overcome him, never let up in the pursuit."

Profile: The Eisen Dragoons are a small team of Decepticon raiders that operate out of the storm ridden ocean world of Hylion Prime, located in the heart of the treacherous Khyos Nebula. They were originally founded by a former bounty hunter named Archanubis, who created the team apparently on a simple whim and has since retired. The Dragoons have attacked the trade routes and outposts near Khyos for the better part of two stellar cycles and used a series of blitzkrieg style tactics to confound their enemies and accomplish their goals before their victims can even mount a defense. Although they’re officially listed in the Decepticon registries as privateers, allies and enemies alike consider them mercenaries at best, pirates at worst. The Dragoons themselves have done little to improve that perception, often ignoring and even insulting anyone one in the Decepticon hierarchy who attempts to pull rank; on rare occasion, they’ve even been known to attack ships belonging to their allies. Several attempts have been made to capture them, but all have failed; most ships sent after them either fall victim to the Dragoons themselves or to the plasma storms and electromagnetic maelstroms that saturate the Khyos Nebula. Now led by the powerful and intelligent Northclaw, it can only be assumed the Eisen Dragoons will continue to cause trouble for everyone in the Transformers’ war… for the time being.
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Postby Dr. Caelus » Wed Oct 31, 2007 11:20 am

How about some Guardian Bios for v2? :grin:

Smallfoot

Spyhunter

I've got 8/12 bios done for v2, as well as my team bio:

With the war dividing his children, pitting them against each other, Primus became acutely aware of just how vulnerable Cybertron was to outside incursions – the Quintessons at best and Unicron at worst.

Unable to stop the war and unite his progeny through the efforts of his disciples, who often as not became drawn back into the conflict themselves, Primus took drastic measures. Risking Unicron’s attention, he used the Sonic-Canyons to search for Gobos, one of his thirteen original Transformers who had left Cybertron to explore the cosmos.

Though he was unable to locate his child, his gamble paid off – Gobot had founded a colony on a far away planet, and given rise to a splinter race of transformers. Though the denizens of the planet now called Gobotron lived in peace and prosperity, they themselves had once been divided by violent conflict, a fact which suited Primus’s needs well – obviously these ‘Gobots’ were not entirely naïve to the ways of war.

Immediately, Primus dispatched Vector Prime to Gobotron with an urgent plea for help. Though most of Gobotron’s citizens were unwilling to entangle themselves in another war, many answered the call, some out of pure altruism, others out of devotion to an ancient, half-remembered deity, and most out of thirst for adventure.

Vector Prime returned to Cybertron with the small army of Gobots, which had reassumed the ancient title of “The Guardians”, and brought them before Primus himself, deep within the bowels of Cybertron. There Primus looked over his prodigal children and felt a stirring of hope. They were primitive in design, by many respects, physically awkward and underpowered, but his coding ran true in their sparks.

Scouring data collected by Vector Sigma, and tapping the power of the Plasma Energy Chamber, Primus reformatted them with bodies that bore the benefits of eons of Cybertronian military science.

Confident that the Gobots were now capable of surviving in the midst of the brutal conflict raging on the surface, Primus gave his Guardians their mission:

Protect Cybertron from Unicron, the Quintessons, and the Unknowns at all costs, and, if necessary, protect their wayward cousins from themselves.
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Postby Galvatronus » Wed Oct 31, 2007 11:28 am

Archanubis wrote:Well, considering the old one has apparently been buried on Forum Page 4...


Funny. I stopped looking on page 3 :lol:
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Postby Dragonslayer » Thu Nov 01, 2007 9:13 am

Motto: "Howdy, dammit!"
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This is what I'm going to be adding on to my team bio for V2:

Team Bio add-on wrote:The Autobot Spartans soon became experienced veterans of the Heavy Metal War on Earth, enjoying many victories and suffering many loses. But soon disturbing news reached them: the Decepticons were starting to abandon their operations on Earth and returning to Cybertron to finish the fight on the home front. To make matters worse, the Predacons had also begun to mobilize their military and were already causing trouble. The Maximals had scrounged up what fighting forces they could, but it wasn’t enough to qualm both the Decepticons and Predacons. So Optimus Prime ordered all Autobots to return to Cybertron and report to Iacon City. The Autobot Spartans were among the first to lift off from Earth.

It had been millions of years since any of the Spartans had looked upon their homeworld, and it had not changed at all since they left. But their return was not as pleasant as they had hoped. Upon entering Cybertronian airspace, their ship was attacked by AA guns, forcing the Spartans to use the escape pods to get to the surface in one piece. They all managed to land together in the same area, about 250 miles outside of Iacon. But a combined Decepticon/Predacon attack force ambushed them just as they got out of their pods. It wasn’t long before the Spartans were surrounded and pinned down. During the firefight, Maximus Prime, Boltbrain, and Meds, were all critically injured and needed medical attention before their sparks were extinguished. So Blazer Prime, in a desperate gamble, sent out a distress signal, which was picked up by none other than Team Teraelectronvolt, who was just entering the system after coming back online from an EMP blast that rendered them unconscious for a long time. So Higgs Boson, Cauterise, and Rebuild, went down to help with the wounded while Fort Worth led the rest of the team to punch a hole through the enemy ranks and clear a path to Iacon. Higgs Boson’s group did what they could to help the three warriors, but they couldn’t do anything else until they got back to Iacon. So while en route, Searcher sent a message to Iacon, which was received by Silver Wind of Team Plenary, who was acting as the Maximals’ temporary ambassador to Iacon. She immediately ordered Serene and Extricate to prepare to take on wounded upon their arrival.

As soon as the Spartans and Teraelectronvolt arrived at Iacon, Serene and Extricate began working immediately. After several mega-cycles Serene’s diagnosis was clear: many of their vital components had been critically damaged and beyond repair, but that wasn’t the worst of it: the energon that was still circulating through their systems had been contaminated by Predacon weaponry and was deteriorating their internal structures. She concluded there was only one way to save them: extract their sparks and their cerebral components and build completely new bodies for them. Blazer Prime trusted the advice of the medic and gave his approval. Higgs Boson also volunteered to help, along with Cauterise and Rebuild. So the combined team of Serene, Extricate, Higgs Boson, Rebuild, and Cauterise set about constructing the new bodies. They worked non-stop, taking on only just enough energon to keep them going for a couple more mega-cycles. Finally, after 3 days, the team, exhausted and running on fumes, were done. The three Spartans were back online and were stronger, faster, and more efficient than before. They had also been reformatted with all new vehicle modes, too. Maximus Prime then declared that the Autobot Spartans were forever in the debts of Team Teraelectronvolt and Team Plenary and that they would be allies to the bitter end.


Kinda long, I know :P Now all I'll need to do is tweak -Maximus Prime's-, Boltbrain's, and Meds' bios to compensate for their new bods.

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Postby Wingspan » Thu Nov 01, 2007 11:00 am

Motto: "Death is not the end."
Dragonslayer, I like the inclusion of the other teams. Cooperative is good.

Team bio for Recon and Demolitions follows. Give grace for the following reasons.
- It is long, but God willing its good.
- I know I have Cybertronian time / distance measurements way off; correct me in a PM and I'll update.
- I don't have a Bot with my name on my team, so if "Wingspan" is this groups commander, I had to find a reason why there's no "Wingspan" Bot I'm throwing in the battles. I think the below works.

The affects of the Transformer's War has wreaked tremendous havoc on their home, Cybertron. Focused, well-informed damage to Decepticon forces is a requirement of all operations if Autobots wish to preserve some of Cybertron's former glory. A group of seemingly outcasts has been formed for this purpose, appropriately and simply labeled "Recon and Demolitions."

Each team member was reassigned or requested from previous units because of a perceived ability for brutal, swift, and decisive destruction of enemy forces while controlling collateral damage. Team leadership has and will change, but the focus is always the same: <i>destroy all targets of significance with prejudice and take prisoners only after stasis lock</i>. Without this focus, information collection and forceful application of available resources would risk Autobot Sparks being lost in combat and risk further desolation to Cybertron.

The original commander was Wingspan; as a modified light high-speed space transport, he was capable of transporting half a dozen average bots in his alternate mode. In his Cybertronian form, his abilities focused on guerrilla tactics with specialties in infiltration, espionage, and high explosives. With permission from Iacon, he sought and established a squad including 5 others: 12-Axle, Speed Jumper, Descubierton, Buster-Traxx, and Buster-Cannon. The 6-Bot squad was officially commissioned as Unit 115786-AA, but was always referred to as Recon and Demolitions.

Permission from Iacon came for a collection of reasons. Wingspan had consistently proven himself as a tactical field commander in significant, but not yet critical missions. Additionally, infringing bases were being established safely within Polyhex's borders from which strikes were being launched on Autobot territory. Reclaiming Cybertron would prove impossible if Iacon couldn't maintain its own borders, so Wingspan proposed establishing the squad to eliminate the immediate threat and, if the squad survived, to point immediate infiltration of Polyhex from the North-East. The request was approved and the team hand selected except for 12-Axle. He volunteered.

The team began operations immediately as one of the fastest commissioned units in the Autobot ranks. The urgency of the border threat, combined with the relative obscurity of the members, allowed Iacon leadership the necessary excuses to push the change in command: these Bots were eager, willing to take the risk, and had no other significant responsibilities. Essentially, they were expendable if the experimental team failed.

After monitoring the border for 4 mega-cycles, Wingspan transported his team securely into Polyhex through a security scanner gap (facilitated by Buster-Cannon eliminating a strategic scanning node). Once inside success came quickly to the team as three weapons facilities quickly fell from their efforts. The surprise of an invasion kept the Decepticons off-balance long enough to let the team double-back from their 3rd strike to their 1st, and establish a temporary forward base in the remains of the facility. Further progress came much more slowly. Original orders were to eliminate four primary targets: a broad-spectrum communications array, two heavy munitions storage facilities, and a heavily guarded Decepticon forward command from which all recent attack orders seem to have originated. Accomplishing these orders though would take time; time they may not have given their forward location.

Scouts Descubierton and Speed-Jumper took to immediately scanning the area and plotting effective attack vectors on each facility. 12-Axle (Axle) coordinated the Busters, Traxx and Cannon, with continuous strategic strikes at lower grade facilities closest to the border. The distraction of a constant, targeted destruction (supported by Iacon's rolling-out of 3 large-scale, long-range plasma cannons) enabled the necessary reconnaissance to plan the attack. Wingspan coordinated everything from the forward base in the weapon's facility rubble; his holding back was to maintain base security and to salvage necessary materials to facilitate the eventual assault. Salvaging proved easy as their assault was designed to collapse the structures while minimizing internal damage. The materials though proved lacking and a near constant need to scrap the unfortunate Con which got too close and relocate the chassis slowed any form of progress.

20 mega cycles in, critical information was finally collected. Mapping the entire Decepticon sector was complete which revealed more than two dozen significant but previously hidden targets. Timing was near perfect as the ability of Axle and the Busters to safely target near the border had grown less and less. Decepticons had moved all of their available manpower to the border's edge, threating the plasma cannons security and the Iacon facilities as well. The threat to Iacon itself from Recon and Demolitions' activities necessitated an immediate strike to complete their original objectives, remove themselves from 'Con territory, and assist the withdrawal of the cannons to prevent them from falling back in 'Con hands.

The team had already agreed to their warpath. First the two heavy munitions facilities would be hit because of their location; being closest to the forward command but still further into Polyhex. The squad would split into two 3-Bot teams(Wingspan, Axle, Speed Jumper; Descubierton, Buster-Traxx, Buster-Cannon) which would simultaneously strike the heavy munitions stores. Moving from the munitions both teams would converge on the communication's array (Wingspan's from the North, Descubierton's from the East). It was critical to remove this before laying the prepared charges at the Decepticon command, otherwise communications for backup could be transmitted to a broader area preventing infiltration.

Blowing the munitions facilities proved simple for both teams. Stored incendiary devices respond very well to high explosives. Moving to the communications array proved challenging; Decepticons were planning a strike on Iacon itself in another 1/2 mega-cycle and Wingspan's team by chance intercepted a transport to the border heading to the border. The skirmish was over quickly, with 2 'Cons in stasis and an anti-grav container full of high-heat incendiaries confiscated, but the delay proved nearly fatal for Descubierton's team. They had arrived at the comm-array on time as originally planned to find it reinforced by an 8-Con squad, an unexpected change from the routine 2-Con pair. The planned border assault had changed the enemies deployment. The Busters combined to form Buster-Maxx as soon as visual confirmation of the 'Cons were acquired so some element of forceful surprise could be maintained. Not knowing the delay of Wingspan's team, they assumed the worst and attacked, thinking one more target then evacuate. Descubierton quickly cleared 2 of the 'Con fliers while Buster-Maxx hurled two 'Con tanks into the array itself, which ended up disabling its ability to receive signals. The remaining 4 'Cons of the squad though now had the upper hand, 3 of which alternated as space flight vehicles and were coming in fast.

Wingspan's team arrived milli-cycles late to find Descubierton grounded with a blown wing and Buster-Maxx at 50% of reserves already. The second team's arrival was unexpected to the 'Cons who had grounded themselves for a final kill in their Cybertronian forms, so again surprise facilitated a cleanup of the area. Axle and Speed Jumper each cleared one while Wingspan shot down two as they tried to launch back to the skies. The confiscated incendiaries in the anti-grav transport would easily decimate the comm-array, saving even more for the command center; a near perfect windfall from that perspective.

Their problem now was evacuation. With their largest assault force (the combined Busters) and their second air-assault (Descubierton) at below-optimal, taking the Decepticon command seemed hopeless. As Axle and Jumper set the charges, Wingspan changed the plans. The Busters separated and both helped Wingpsan re-wire the comm-array to transmit a one-directional secure Autbot communication. Taking out the command could only now occur by repositioning and firing rapid fire bursts from the plasma cannons. The gathering border threat may be just the necessary distraction to allow the re-deployment and firing without losing the cannons.

Within 2 micro-cycles from transmission the ground reverberated with a pummeling force; Iacon had received and agreed to the plan. Cannons were bombarding the command. Six shots total were planned, per Wingspan's communication, to ensure the plasma cannon's effective withdrawal. The first volley of three was over. When the second barrage had hit, the squad moved out <i>toward</i> the command. Despite injuries the team had agreed going home without ensuring a complete job was unacceptable. They each had something to prove.

As they approached the command, the overhead flight of an amassed Decepticon armada filled the area with echoing afterburners. The assault on Iacon had been moved forward; the 8-Con squad had to send a message before they were disabled. Time was short to finish the command and disable any remaining form of Decepticon coordination. The squad infiltrated the command, now half destroyed from the long-range volley. The Decepticons present were focused on re-establishing communications to coordinate the counter offensive in an attempt to re-take the plasma cannons and move their border forward (as they had lost them in battle the past Cybertronian year). The distraction of injuries and power failures was the dismemberment of the remaining 'Cons at the command; they didn't see the Vibro-Axes coming.

With Speed Jumper and Descubierton's previous intel, the charges originally planned for comm-array were set to blow in 10 micro-cycles in the portions of the structure that still stood. Then the charges originally planned for the command were placed in the surrounding area and in the already demolished portions with a timer of 10 mega-cycles, arrayed to ensure the entire area would be structurally unsound once detonated. Hidden safely in the debris, disguised as wreckage, the 'Cons were rudely awoken by another explosion when they were trying to re-build.

Because of the overhead armada, the original exit strategy of transport in Wingspan was nixed. The squad marched hard West, away from where primary combat would take place to ensure a safe border crossing and delivery of the injured to medics. After a parsec due West, they turned North. Given the growing conflict (who's laser fire could be seen and heard in the distance now) they risked Wingspan's transport. They had to help. He flew low, through the Decepticon structures to avoid the armada's detection, but the unknown and unmapped terrain proved treacherous. Defensive scanners triggered as they approached the boarder (like the one Buster-Cannon had eliminated when entering Polyhex) and Wingspan was shot down. The crash was hard, 2 parsecs inside Decepticon territory, and far closer to the now raging battle. Once disembarked and transformed, the team saw the conflict over the cannons erupting as anti-air defenses held back the Decepticon swarm.

"They have too much," said Wingspan, still bent over and sparking from half his joints. "If we loose those cannons we might loose this border soon. We've done too much to stop here." He paused, letting internal repairs finish some of their work. "Going forward is volunteer, not an order, but I'm walking in there." To a Bot, Recon and Demolitions locked and loaded.

Six ground-ridden Bots may not seem like much against an overhanging hell of Decepticon fliers, but their positioning West of the conflict was enough to make a difference. The 'Con assault was coming North-West, and Bot reinforcements with more anti-air munitions and delivery were arriving from the East. The team positioned themselves close, nearly beneath the swarming 'Cons save the Busters who held back to acquire a sniping position. As the Eastern anti-air munitions were fired Buster-Maxx was formed and targeted 'Con jets which were clearly leaders. The loss of leadership in the cloud of metal caused mid-air collisions and forced some into the anti-air support. Recon and Demolitions' four other members laid in with close suppressive fire to any 'Con that veered West away from the fight. Descubierton couldn't help himself in singing; "Decepticons keep falling on my head..." The falling ships weren't all in stasis-lock though; soon the battle was hand-to-hand.

Once engaged and close range, Buster-Maxx moved in with the team getting one more shot off at an airborne 'Con. That last sniper victim hit short of the cannons and was obliterated on impact, but they were getting closer. The Eastern barrage continued and the team was surrounded by 'Cons that now willingly grounded to continue the assault with 'Con tank and heavy artillery reinforcements from the South-East. The squad would have all been scrapped if the ground defense of the plasma cannons hadn't immediately moved forward while the Eastern reinforcements took over immediate protection of the cannons.

In the fray Speed Jumper and Axle were stasis locked. Buster-Maxx was able to draw them back to safety behind friendly lines in Iacon territory. Descubierton followed as far as front line of combat, not willing to give away any of the victory. In the withdrawal Wingspan was clipped and fell back, unaware to his team who were focused on the Bots in stasis. When Buster-Maxx rejoined (ironically neither they nor Descubierton where injured after the comm-array) they couldn't break through the 'Con lines to get back to Wingspan. They saw his chassis being taken back through 'Con ranks. He had been identified as the perpetrator of the recent attacks, otherwise he would have been overheated with laser fire and left for slag rather than captured.

The last fights of the battle were furious. In the short time the team had formed a great compassion for each other, and the functional Recon and Demolitions Bots were unwilling to easily let their new commander go. When the Decepticons disengaged the assault, orders were quickly passed down the line to not pursue. Buster-Maxx and Descubierton had to be restrained; Descubierton was put under with an energon overdose because he posed to great a threat as is. Buster-Maxx watched as 'Con forces retreated. His numb limbs hardly flinched as the cannons opened fire again. Bots had been held back because the cannons were opening another volley. Speed Jumper had been partially revived and immediately fed the field medic commander his mapping data tracks to coordinate a final assault; had Jumper known Wingspan was among the targets, he may not have willingly communicated this information.

Because of Recon and Demolitions efforts the four major targets were destroyed (the command twice, 10 mega-cycles later) plus an additional twelve more from the cannon barrage; the border was pushed back by 5 parsecs for 3 sectors, granting a greater cushion for Iacon command. Their information gathering combined with the re-positioned cannons opened a whole new array of Decepticon targets on which hellfire was rained.

The team's success was immediately lauded, although in the 560 mega-cycles since their cheers have died down. Their continued aggression and merciless destruction of confirmed enemy targets is less approved when the sectors are relatively quiet.

Now under 12-Axle's command, the team has grown with new recruits. Scales, Hijax, Bombadeer, and Aguila each have brought a unique talent set to the now critical team for maintaining the Iacon border. The original core though remembers the founder, remembers the loss, and remembers there may still be hope for a retrieval operation if Wingspan's location is discovered. Against high-command's directives Axle is personally compiling all reconnaissance information before transmitting back to central command to give the team the opportunity to examine the facilities, weaknesses, and opportunities in 'Con territory. This has lead to nearly a dozen more infiltration strikes without approval. Although effective in the war, this may lead to Axle's dismissal and the teams disbanding because of acting as near renegade Autobots. What's saved them thus far is their effectiveness and ingenuity. It seems as long as their missions continue being successful, no disagreement with authority will disband the team.

The original 5 remember Wingspan's motto, "Destruction second. Information first." The new recruits have accepted this method, and this is their creed when communicating to command or to any external Transformer, friend or foe. Internally though, be they old or new, another team motto has been established. "If Decepticons won't submit to peaceful co-existence willingly, their education must be swift and complete. Wrongful violence will no longer be unreturned... for the sake of Cybertron."
Omnis enim, qui mala agit, odit lucem et non venit ad lucem, ut non arguantur opera eius; qui autem facit veritatem, venit ad lucem, ut manifestentur eius opera, quia in Deo sunt facta. Translation

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Postby Knight Hawk » Thu Nov 01, 2007 9:23 pm

Here is what I have so far, it needs some tweaking but is almost there :)

Order of the Omega Knights wrote:Long before there were Autobots, Decepticons, Maximals or Predacons; long before there was life on Cybertron, and long before the universe even existed, there was Primus and Unicron. After defeating Unicron in a great battle between the gods, Primus banished Unicron to another universe. Primus knew that Unicron would return one day in force to spread his evil throughout the universe. Thus in that instant, Primus willed the not only the creation of Cybertron and all Cybertronian life but also the creation of the Order of the Omega Knights to protect himself and the life that would spring forth upon his planet form. It would take time for life to develop but once it did he would call forth his guardians, the Omega Knights, not only to protect himself and keep safe the Matrix but to battle the spreading evil of Unicron wherever they could find it.

Life in Primus’s image evolved on Cybertron and the day came where Primus had decided to enact his will. In a revelation to Emirate Xaaron, Primus revealed that under his rule, Cybertron would see a new group of defenders rise forth, with no loyalty to Autobots, Decepticons, Maximals, or Predacon. These Knights would be the armed will of Primus and would protect and serve his will alone. He also revealed that his chosen one would be a hot-headed Autobot Lieutenant named Diesel and that by his hand Diesel would be saved from death and reformatted to be the leader of his Order, Diesel Prime.

During the reformatting of Diesel, Primus revealed to him that his first mission and test as Diesel Prime would be to search out and find the rest of the First Six Knights. All he could use as a guide in his journey would be the seven Knightly Virtues of Courage, Justice, Mercy, Generosity, Faith, Nobility, and Hope; using these virtues the First Six would be obvious to Diesel Prime. Primus also foretold one other prophecy to Diesel Prime; that from the First Six the gestalt Omega Bastion would arise. It would be a gestalt so powerful that it would drive away the darkness of Unicron using the Sword of Valiance.

Currently with the fulfillment of Primus’ first revelation, the First Six Omega Knights are now ready to follow their main purpose, to protect Primus, Cybertron and the Matrix from an ever growing evil....


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Postby Wingspan » Fri Nov 02, 2007 8:55 pm

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Knight Hawk wrote:Here is what I have so far, it needs some tweaking but is almost there :)


Agreed, it is well on the way. What else do you think needs fleshed out?

Another question; why Diesel? Was Diesel chosen because of who he was or was he formatted with the intention of becoming a knight?

Last question; whom will the Knights interact with? Is there a known, specific threat they must defend from? (e.g. Quints? A scarier premise, internal corruption?)
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Postby Archanubis » Thu Nov 08, 2007 2:13 pm

Motto: "Don't take life too seriously or you'll never get out of it alive."
Weapon: Lightning Rifle
New Character that's replacing Wreckage tomorrow:

Name: Acoustrix
Allegiance: Decepticon
Team: Eisen Dragoons
Function: Covert Electronics Warfare
Alternate Modes: MP3 Player/Northern Cardinal
Partner: Taphic (Memory Card/Dragonfly)
“Confound and control.”

Profile: Acoustrix was once part of Soundwave’s horde of cassetticons until she was reformatted into an MP3 player. Her reasons for undergoing this upgrade are unknown, largely because no one can communicate with her; the only sounds she makes are her own variation of cardinal songs. She’s also rather aloof, preferring to sit away from other, usually someplace high, watching and listening to the events around her. She’s a bit of a narcissist; insult her appearance or voice and the offender will often discover that she’s corrupted an important file on their computer or fried the circuits in their favorite entertainment device. An accomplished hacker and infiltrator, she specializes in spreading disinformation among the enemy ranks, often leading entire regiments into ambushes and hiding the presence of entire army by tricking an outpost’s scanner crew into thinking their screens were clear. She’s often paired with another Decepticon on these missions, usually so she can be transported within range of the objective; she seems to have a particular preference for the stealth scout Novacula and can often be found perched atop his shoulder. Acoustrix has her own partner, a small, spark-less AI named Taphic that converts from a memory card to a dragonfly and is about as large as the insect itself. The AI shows little in the way of an individual personality; some believe that Taphic is merely an extension of Acoustrix’s own personality.

Abilities: Acoustrix has an operational range of 160 kilometers and can reach a speed of 480kph for short periods. The feather-like structures on her head are high gain microphones that can pick up sounds as soft as rustling leaves from several kilometers away. She can hack into just about any computer database, no matter how heavily encrypted; once in, she can download files or upload viruses into the system. She can transmit audio up to 100 meters away to others through her earpiece, enabling them to hear what she’s listening to. Her wings are equipped with holographic emitters that allow her to mimic any similar sized object or blend into her surroundings like a chameleon. She’s armed with a hypersonic mini-cannon on her back that emits high-frequency resonance waves, which are to disrupt the flow of electrical currents in circuitry and cause severe overload surges. The weapon is inaudible and produces no visible beam when discharged, making it almost impossible to evade or counter. Her partner Taphic has the same upload/download abilities as Acoustrix herself and its tiny size allows it to access areas even she can’t, as well as go largely unnoticed by a facility’s personnel. The AI has an effective range of less than 500 meters.

Weakness: Acoustrix’s is extremely dependent on others for transport to assignments that are outside her operational range. Her maximum range is also dependant on her speed; the faster she moves, the more her range is reduced. She can only serve as a listening device within a 100 meter radius, after which, the earpiece fails to work at all. The part also forms Acoustrix’s only weapon; if she leaves it behind and gets into trouble, she’s defenseless. Her holographic emitters are vulnerable to electromagnetic interference; even a low-gain pulse wave is enough to ruin an illusion. Taphic’s small size and downloading equipment means there’s no room for defensive armament; an errant swat is enough to significantly damage the AI.
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Postby DISCHARGE » Thu Nov 08, 2007 2:26 pm

Motto: "AnTagony IS the PitS. MoVe ALonG WoRMs. THis WarS NOT gOnNa WIN iTSelf!"
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Knight Hawk wrote:Here is what I have so far, it needs some tweaking but is almost there :)

Order of the Omega Knights wrote:Long before there were Autobots, Decepticons, Maximals or Predacons; long before there was life on Cybertron, and long before the universe even existed, there was Primus and Unicron. After defeating Unicron in a great battle between the gods, Primus banished Unicron to another universe. Primus knew that Unicron would return one day in force to spread his evil throughout the universe. Thus in that instant, Primus willed the not only the creation of Cybertron and all Cybertronian life but also the creation of the Order of the Omega Knights to protect himself and the life that would spring forth upon his planet form. It would take time for life to develop but once it did he would call forth his guardians, the Omega Knights, not only to protect himself and keep safe the Matrix but to battle the spreading evil of Unicron wherever they could find it.

Life in Primus’s image evolved on Cybertron and the day came where Primus had decided to enact his will. In a revelation to Emirate Xaaron, Primus revealed that under his rule, Cybertron would see a new group of defenders rise forth, with no loyalty to Autobots, Decepticons, Maximals, or Predacon. These Knights would be the armed will of Primus and would protect and serve his will alone. He also revealed that his chosen one would be a hot-headed Autobot Lieutenant named Diesel and that by his hand Diesel would be saved from death and reformatted to be the leader of his Order, Diesel Prime.

During the reformatting of Diesel, Primus revealed to him that his first mission and test as Diesel Prime would be to search out and find the rest of the First Six Knights. All he could use as a guide in his journey would be the seven Knightly Virtues of Courage, Justice, Mercy, Generosity, Faith, Nobility, and Hope; using these virtues the First Six would be obvious to Diesel Prime. Primus also foretold one other prophecy to Diesel Prime; that from the First Six the gestalt Omega Bastion would arise. It would be a gestalt so powerful that it would drive away the darkness of Unicron using the Sword of Valiance.

Currently with the fulfillment of Primus’ first revelation, the First Six Omega Knights are now ready to follow their main purpose, to protect Primus, Cybertron and the Matrix from an ever growing evil....


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Re: THE NEW Team profile/Character profile thread

Postby Uncrazzimatic » Fri Nov 09, 2007 5:01 pm

Galvatron Primal wrote:Sonar - Still looking for a motto


So it's YOU who owns the name sonar you fake fured fiend! I had to spell it with two 'a's for my new communications officer. :sad:


Well anyway, here is the short story and description that serves as my team bio for V2:

On board the armoured train Derailed a cadre of Decepticons had assembled in the carriage that served as an audience chamber. Before them a redish purple Warrior whose alt mode appeard to be a large aircraft sat upon the throne that served as the rooms focal point, the smug smile of an intellectual but egotistical leader uppon his face. A moment of silence passed, and then as one the assembled warriors saluted and praised the name of their commander. "Hail Stormspark!"
Stormspark rose from his throne. Each Decepticon in the chamber looked on with anticipation of this long awaited moment, the fruit of many years work.
"This world... is corrupt!" He Paused for a moment before continueing, makeing gestures with his hands as he spoke. "Our glorious homeworld is in peril of being destroyed from within. Greed, corruption, apathy and complacency rule every Cybertronian from the lowest worker to the highest ruler. Indeed, The Council cannot even save their own persons, let alone the masses as a body. Therefore we must let it be known that only we -the Decepticons- can lead Cybertron to its true destiny. We must enlighten citizens, because enlightened citizens will undoubtedly accept the rule of a righteous leader. Yes this globe in its entirety must be set aright, for that is the true goal of the Restoration. Our mission is a long and tortuous path that even the great Cybertronians of yesteryear were not able to accomplish; total conquest of Cybertron. In order to create the one, true, united Cybertron, one that lives up to the highest ideals, we must conquer the world! To that end we posess this headquarters befitting our "no compromise" attitude and discriminating taste."
He gestured at the statues, banners, and other typical throne room decour. "After many years of preparation and many, many nights of hunger as we scrimped and saved precious energon to pay for the means to restore this great vehicle the hour of our glorious revolution is finally at hand!" As he approached the speach's climax Stormspark's voice grew louder and his gestures more dramatic. "However there will be those misguided fools who stand in our way, but any opposition is to be met with brute force! Only by tearing down the old regime can a new one be given space to prosper! So go forth my warriors, go forth and usher in a glorious new age of Decepticon imperialism!"

Applause filled the chamber from his captivated audience, then after it finally died down one voice spoke up "But... how? Theres only 12 of us!


The Restoration - Basically, we want to bring Cybertron back to the good old days when most of it was under Decepticon rule, our pumps and processors are in the right place but... we kind of lack the manpower. And the resources. And to be honest, quight a few of our members are kind of out of it. So we just travel around on our armoured train Derailed (he's been refitted with tank treads to allow greater freedom of movement than Cybertrons limited transit system grants) inciting rebellion and blowing stuff up in the hope that the Decepticons can gain power in the chaos.
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Postby Deadpool. » Sat Nov 10, 2007 7:17 am

Team Bio.

With the advent of the Great Reset, 6 Cybertronians have been gathered together by Deadpool. to form this team. The original members consisted of the elderly Autobot Alpha Trion, Roller, Cerebros, an upgraded Sky Spy, a reformatted Deszarus and RobotMaster X-Gunner. Finding 6 protoforms, they modified, shaped, and hardwired them into duplicates of some of the HMW Commanders. As such, 6 new members were born: Mkall, GrimSqueaker, Knight Hawk, Bun-Bun, Supercollider and Tramp. These "Commanders" were created to fool the real teams into doing their bidding and cause confusion among enemy forces.

Now, with a full-team of 12 members, the Heralds of Seibercron prepare to face off with any Maxi/Pred/Decep forces upon the arrival of V2.


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Postby Archanubis » Tue Nov 20, 2007 7:04 pm

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I decided to make a little adjustment on Acoustrix's bio. Here's the updated profile:

Profile: To the uninitiated, Acoustrix comes off as something of a sycophant, complimenting any Decepticon willing to listen to her just to gain some favor with them. However, those with trained audio receptors will be able to detect the trace of sarcasm hidden just under the surface of her flowery praises. She’s actually rather contemptuous towards most of the other Decepticons; only a select few are considered worthy of her respect. The stealth scout Novacula seems to be a particular favorite of hers; she can often be found sitting on his shoulder. Otherwise, she keeps pretty much to herself, staying out of the way of her comrades, usually perched someplace where her view is the same as her opinion. As much contempt as she holds for her fellow Decepticons, it doesn’t hold a candle to her low opinion of their Autobot rivals, which she doesn’t even try to conceal. Acoustrix delights in uploading false information into their databanks or scrambling their scanners, laughing at their dumbfounded reactions; she considers them little more than dunces anyway. She’s partnered with a small spark-less AI unit named Taphic. Taphic bears very little in the way of an independent personality and is thought to be nothing more than an extension of Acoustrix herself.
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Postby Frostliger » Wed Nov 21, 2007 1:17 am

I finally got around to doing a new profile for my team for when V2 comes out, so I'll put it up for your viewing. Also please let me know if there's anything I can do to make it better. So I now present my new team profile. :D

To most Cybertronians transwarp travel is nothing more than a sensation of having your internals pulled away when your superstructure stays in place, those who have to navigate it know differently. Traversing transwarp space is no simple matter as you have to be precise in computing the coordinates of when and where you want to be. This is something Darksyde has always tried to explain to the other Ligers, unfortunately they don't give a slag as long as they get where they're going. Their understanding of this changed when what has been called the "Great Reset" occurred, as they were traveling in transwarp when it happened.

En route to Earth, by way of a not to short "shortcut", at the time of the forced reset they dropped out of transwarp early and ended up crashing head first into an unknown planet on the far side of the galaxy. The system they crashed in is in exactly the same place as the Sol system but on the opposite side of the galaxy. The planet is known as Zi and is home to both humans and a somewhat sentient race of piloted machines called Zoids.

After the crash, and coming out of stasis-lock, the Ligers had some problems to deal with the largest being they no longer had Altmodes meaning they're stuck on planet. The second being trying to find a way of contacting the Decepticon Empire for assitance. Until then they have taken new alts based on the local vehicles and even Zoids to blend in till they can call for help.

EDIT: found some info that said Zi is nowhere near Earth so I changed the profile to reflect this. Although I coulda sworn I read somewhere that Zi was in our solar system. Since I'm confused, can anyone with better zoid knowledge confirm which is correct? :???:
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Postby Archanubis » Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:12 am

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A team of Ligers??? Northclaw's gonna freak! :P
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Postby Frostliger » Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:21 am

Technically only Frostliger is a liger, Shadowliger is a panther and Stormliger is a dragon. But they're the founders of the Liger Commandos so.... :P
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Postby Archanubis » Wed Nov 21, 2007 8:15 am

Motto: "Don't take life too seriously or you'll never get out of it alive."
Weapon: Lightning Rifle
New, non-playing character I created who may or may not come into being come V2:

Name: Blackhertz
Allegiance: Decepticon
Team: Eisen Dragoons
Function: Electronic Warfare
Alternate Mode: Dark Spiner Zoid
“Darkness shall consume all…”

Profile: Calling Blackhertz a sadist would likely be an understatement and he’d probably take it as a compliment. He gets a thrill watching others suffer; the worse their anguish, the better he likes it. He’s been known to knock out a city’s electrical grid just to watch the chaos that ensues. His Decepticon comrades know better than to ask for his assistance if they’re wounded as he would just as soon watch them languish. If he comes across an injured Autobot, he’ll go out of his way to increase their agony just for the satisfaction. His attitude alienates him from his teammates in the tight-knit Eisen Dragoons, but there is a reason behind it: Blackhertz is a depressive coward. It’s not uncommon to see him running away from the battlefield whenever the situation goes bad even slightly, only to be found several kilometers from where he started afterwards. He lacks the confidence and fortitude of his teammates; no one knows this better than he does. His sadistic behavior is the only means he has to stave off his depression over this knowledge; otherwise he just sulks silently in the background. Northclaw is well aware of these and avoids placing Blackhertz in critical positions whenever possible; if that’s unavoidable the Dragoon commander makes sure he has a backup plan in the event his subordinate invariably disappears.

Abilities: Blackhertz is surprisingly fast and agile for his size; he can run at speeds of up to 240km/h in spinosaur mode, without the aide of the boosters his fellow saurian Northclaw requires to get to speed. In Dark Spiner mode, he’s equipped with razor sharp teeth and claws that can rip off just about any type of armor. He can also charge is teeth with electrons to deliver a nasty shock to anyone unfortunate enough to get bitten; he calls this attack his “Electron Fang.” He’s also armed with a 144mm machine gun over each shoulder and a pair of rear-facing dual-barreled pulse cannons on his back, over the tail; these combine to form a handheld weapon in robot mode. A swing of his tail can shatter a wall of concrete; his tail becomes a sword in robot mode. His most distinguishing feature is the rippling Jamming Blade Array on his back; with which he is able to detect and block any enemy signals, whether it’s communications, sensors, or targeting arrays. Blackhertz can use the array form a field of ion particles around him, forming a force field able to deflect just about any weapons fire. He can also generate an electromagnetic pulse wave strong enough to knock out the electrical grid of a metropolis.

Weaknesses: Blackhertz’s biggest weakness is his lack of fortitude; even the smallest setback is enough to send him running for the hills. He’s prone to panic attacks in certain situations, especially if he feels cornered. The anchors on the back of heels must always be engaged to ground him whenever he uses his ion field or EM pulse; if these are damage or he forgets to lower them, he can injure himself. He hasn’t quite learned how to aim his pulse weapon yet and often takes out as many of his allies as he does the enemy. The effects of the EM pulse can be countered with proper shielding of any critical electronics. Damage to his jamming array reduces the effectiveness of all the abilities and weapons that count on this device and will quite working completely if the blades sustain more than sixty percent damage.
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Postby Tammuz » Wed Nov 21, 2007 12:13 pm

sounds like he'd get on well with BLitzweld

[url]Profile: Blitzweld, thirty-second of the armageddicons, is a master surgeon, he wields a cutting torch like a paintbrush, leaving his allies impresssed with their repairs, and his enemies in agony, for Blitzweld is a sadist; nothing brings him pleasure like the defilement of beauty, the destruction of grace, the rending of power. Truely he does not wish death upon a single autobot, for that would put them beyond his ability inflict pain. Alone amongst the armageddicon medics Blitzweld is the only one whose assistance is not requested byby other teams, despite his proficiency as a cerebro-circuit technician.

Weapons/Abilities: Blitzweld isn't the fastest of the Blitzwing's sparkline, but he is incredibly skilled with a laser scalpel, and is the most proficient of swordsmen of the progeny, able to cut the wings off a mechano-fly in mid flight. He is well versed in transformer physiology, and such his repair skills are only over shadowed by his ability to torture, particularily he focuses on cerebro-circuit manipulation. In repair vehicle mode, he is not particularily fast, and possesses no weaponry, relying on his armoued bulk to see him through combat areas.

Weaknesses: Blitzweld's Reapir skills are moot if his patients don't trust him enough to let him operate. Additionally he would rather spend his time prolonging the suffereing of defeated opponents than deliver the coup de grace.[/url]
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Postby Archanubis » Wed Nov 21, 2007 2:40 pm

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Tammuz wrote:sounds like he'd get on well with Blitzweld

Maybe, if Blackhertz isn't too busy "running like a girly man" :P
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Postby Jeep? » Mon Nov 26, 2007 1:08 pm

Finally, after at least a year, gave The Legion a bio.

The Legion's bio wrote:Jesus Prime was not Unicron's first attempt to create a champion for himself. Millenia beforehand, while Cybertron was still an infant world, the Monster Planet created for himself a host of maniacal demons, incorporeal beings formed from the very fabric of the void. Twelve of these creatures were made, and each soon spawned eleven progeny in its own image. And so, the 144-strong Legion of Unicron was sent out into the universe, to sunder it into nothingness.
Across countless worlds the demonic host capered, bringing the bitter taste of nonexistence to each star and planet they encountered. But petty squabbling soon divided them, and the Legion turned upon each other. The first twelve qucikly slaughtered and devoured their children, gaining their strength as they did so, becoming beings of immense power. Amongst these twelve, the fighting was bitter and brutal, and entire star systems were wiped out in their epic struggles. However, after centuries of bitter war and frantic hunts, only one of the demon spawn remained. Although originally nameless, this last survivor decided to honour his victory by taking the name Legion, and descended once more upon the universe his master wished him to raze.
However, Legion's conquests were not ignored, and several fledgeling gods soon turned their attention to the demonic warriro. Fearing he may soon rise to rival their power, they joined their efforts to weave an intricate spell upon the void demon. Stars burst and novae collapsed with the sheer force of the incantation, which reduced Legion to a shadow of his former self, and cursed to to forever rely on possessing a mortal host in order to survive.
Their punishment of the mighty warrior did not end their, however, and they cast him into the body of in insignificant bacteria, residing upon a coment which hurtled through the Milky Way galaxy. As the weeks turned to months, and months to years, the comet gained momentum on its collision course with a primitive jungle planet - Earth. Upon its impact, most of the life on the planet was decimated, but what was left was Legion's to exploit. He soon took possession of a mighty sea lizard, and over the course of thousands of millenia followed the chain of evolution through the most deadly species he could find. Eventually, his wanderings lead to a beast smart enough to enable him to exact the destruction he had so long craved for - humans. Those men possessed by Legion have invariably gone down in history as great leaders, mighty warriors, and sadistic buthcers. Guan Yu, Genghis Khan, Julius Caesar, Adolf Hitler, Napolean Bonaparte, Nebuchadnezzar, Vlad Dracul - the list of Legion's exploits has become the basis of human legend.
However, as the end of the Cybertronian Great War apporached, the fighting spread to Legion's beloved earth. Watching giant warriors from beyond the stars battle across the planet he had dominated for thousands of years, he suddenly realised that his time had come ti fully relive the mission his master had sent him upon. With the aid of one of the great robots, a towering warrior named Jesus Prime, who worshipped the Monster Planet as a terrifying god, Legion's current incarnation was soon abandoned, and his fierce spirit entombed in the shell of one of the transformers. As his insectoid frame drew itself to full height, Prime recognised the source of the power in his empty eyes, and made him his lieutenant, and near equal. Since then, the pair have cut bloody swathes across the galaxy, eager to exact their master's wishes in full.
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Postby Jeep? » Wed Nov 28, 2007 4:18 pm

And, finally, one for Konzentrationslager. This one may be a little offensive.

Konzentrationslager's bio wrote:The process of completely annihilating a world is not a simple one. Nonexistence is a harsh mistress, and will not accept any compromise. Fire, conventional explosives, nuclear weaponry - all leave behind them the traces of existence. In the past, the monster planet Unicron would simply devour that which he encountered; his strength growing as he gradually obliterated the universe. However, with his physical body destroyed by the Autobot Matrix, it fell upon Jesus Prime, his appointed prophet, to continue destroying the entirety of reality. Lacking the god-like powers of his master, Prime and his Archaicons had to devise a new way in which to achieve this goal. After months of deliberation, it was Shadow Moses, the ballistics expert, who finally realised the answer to their problem - antimatter. In collaboration with Manhattan Project, a colossal particle accelerator was designed, which would convert a planet's crust, or a star's corona, into antimatter, which would then collide with and annihilate the rest of the planet. The sheer labour required to build one of these machines for every world to be destroyed, however, would prove too prohibitive, at least for the small group of Archaicons. This was when Prime remembered an old acquaintance, and decided to pay another visit to Konzentrationslager.
Prime had met Konzentrationslager a few months previously, on the planet of Vikernes, where the ruthless Decepticon was the sole ruler over a planet-wide prisoner-of-war camp. Prime was impressed with how the camp was run, and how Konzentrationslager had been able to strip the prisoners of their very soul and being, degrading them to little more than mindless servitors. If Prime could harness the potential labour force each planet’s population represented in this same manner, the required doomsday devices could easily be constructed in a realistic time frame.
Hailing from the grim slums of Vos, on Cybertron, Konzentrationslager had once been involved in the gladiatorial pit fights before the Great War had begun. However, his was a bloodless philosophy, and while he relished the prospect of wrestling a worthy foe, slaughter and death were abhorrent to him. As such, he refused to join Megatron’s rebel militia – which later evolved into the Decepticon army – and left Cybertron on a self-imposed exile, vowing not to return until the planet knew peace once more.
His travels took him across countless worlds, where his skill as a grappler in bloodless combat sports earned him a reputation as a ‘gentle giant’ across several star systems. He soon grew tired of the fights, however, wishing to put an end to violence of all sorts. Having seen new, brutal, and often fatal, combat sports spread in the wake of his bouts, he renounced his livelihood and settled down with his lover – a jovial, yet feisty, woman of the Kroot species – on the agricultural world of Fantoft. However, the natives of Fantoft did not take kindly to this metal giant, and the example that his mixed union set for their strict caste system. Coming home from a walk one evening, Konzentrationslager found his wife dead, murdered in her bed by someone from the village. Swearing revenge, the ‘gentle giant’ stormed into the village and massacred all he could find; man, woman and child; to be sure he caught the guilty party. As the orgy of slaughter calmed, he took stock of his bloodied frame, dripping wet with gore, and laughed. Millennia of repression melted away in a storm of violence, and new, wholly sadistic warrior was born.
Eager to sate his new-found vengeance, he travelled to the planet’s capital, and spent days destroying the governmental buildings in a brutal coup, displaying the dismembered corpse of the planetary ruler atop the city’s highest radio tower. Konzentrationslager now declared himself dictator over the planet; which he renamed Vikernes after a sadistic character from Cybertronian folklore; and set about turning the planet into a vast labour camp. Three years later, he had finished, and life for a citizen of Vikernes consisted of nothing more than endless labour, forced procreation, and when their usefulness was exhausted, mass slaughter. Admiring the beautiful cruelty of his new regime, Konzentrationslager was surprised to receive a visitor – a fellow Cybertronian named Jesus Prime, who highly commended the global death camp, praising Konzentrationslager for his organisational skills and his power to instil fear universally. Four months later, Prime returned, eager to speak with Konzentrationslager about a new project for his slave labourers. If it worked, he assured, Konzentrationslager’s future would be bright – and brutal.
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Postby SolCross » Wed Nov 28, 2007 8:40 pm

Here's my team's profile. It's a tad bit generic and a little full of itself, but whatever. :-P I've also made profiles for each member.
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Re: THE NEW Team profile/Character profile thread

Postby Archanubis » Thu Jan 31, 2008 2:11 pm

Motto: "Don't take life too seriously or you'll never get out of it alive."
Weapon: Lightning Rifle
Look what I dug up Maw! :P

Decided to redo Northclaw's bio a bit, not a total rewrite, but one I hope will serve him better. I'm going to try to "update" several of my characters' bios (if not rehaul them completely).

Name: Northclaw
Allegiance: Decepticon
Sub-Group: Eisen Dragoons
Function: Commander/Heavy Ground Assault Specialist
Transformation: Berserk Fury Zoid
"True power means knowing how to use what Primus gives you."

Profile: Stoic in expression, powerful in form, intensely cool under pressure, and highly respected by even his rivals, Northclaw is considered on of the most capable warriors to appear in the Decepticon ranks in some time. The lone survivor of a crash that left him stranded on in an uncharted system termed “Zi,” little is know of his history before he was rescued; Northclaw himself rarely, if ever, mentions it. While his origins may be in doubt, what is not is his dedication to the Decepticons and their cause, as he’s shown in countless battles. It’s not just Northclaw’s prowess on the battlefield that’s earned him respect among his peers, but he is also an eloquent speaker whose calm, measured manner of speech can ease even the most antagonistic of his brethren. Many of his fellow Decepticons believe he could easily fit into the role of a diplomat, theologian, philosopher, or statesman given his natural abilities and interest in these fields – if there wasn’t a war going on. A rare combination of brains and brawn, he possesses a keen sense of strategy; he is well aware of his own strength and weaknesses, knows how to use one to effectively offset the other, and can gage an opponent’s weakness and exploit it to his advantage. He has displayed a great degree of leadership ability in countless missions, which makes it no surprise that he has since taken command of the Eisen Dragoons after the retirement of its previous commander. Northclaw’s abilities, intelligence, growing popularity, and lack of loyalty to any particular Decepticon commander has made some of his superiors nervous that he many be gunning for their positions. Northclaw has shown little interest in usurping anyone and doesn’t particularly care for the backbiting that occurs in the higher ranks, but some believe this to be merely a ruse. But as his former commander Archanubis once stated, “Do you really think I’d still be here if Northclaw had even half of Starscream’s ambitions?”

Abilities: Northclaw is believed to be physically one of the strongest Decepticons, if not the strongest; he was once observed punching through a six inch, electrum-plated wall. His armor is composed of a unique alloy that is both lightweight and capable of withstanding a barrage from all but the heaviest artillery. Thrusters the back of his legs and on the large “backpack” unit can propel him to a top speed of 340kph over open terrain. The backpack is home to a pair of weapons called “Buster Claws:” two sets of elongated blades, three to each set, able to extend outward or compressed inward, each capable of being charged with plasma energy, each set on a hinge that allows them to extend out and up, mounted on a high-speed rotor that, when activated, turns them into high-speed drills capable of ripping apart armor into shrapnel. Each Claw assembly is armed with an armor piercing 185mm particle cannon and mounted on a durable, highly articulate arm, giving Northclaw the ability to attack or defend himself in nearly any direction. The rotors of his Buster Claws each house a shield generator, allowing Northclaw to generate a forcefield around himself; the shield has been found to be strong enough to withstand a point blank attack from three fusion cannons with virtually no reduction in field strength and he can generate this field even if he loses one of his Buster Claws, though not without a noticeable reduction in strength. Arguably, his most powerful weapon is the charged particle cannon, the barrel of which is located in the mouth of his Zoid mode and possessing the same destructive potential of a black hole tap equipped fusion cannon, without the strain on the circuitry. If that wasn’t enough, the particle cannons in his Buster Claws double as extra charged particle cannons, each bearing firepower equivalent to that of the main cannon; these can be fired independently or simultaneously. He’s also upgraded his arsenal recently; his tail now converts into an experimental rail gun that can tap interdimensionally into a neutron star, drawing on the dense material within to create an armor piercing projectile with virtually no equal. If these aren’t enough, Northclaw can always resort to using the razor sharp teeth and claws of his Zoid mode.

Weakness: Northclaw’s capability to travel at surprising speed for a Decepticon with his mass doesn’t translate into any considerable amount of agility; as fellow Eisen Dragoon member Novacula explains, “He can’t maneuver worth slag, so he usually just smashes through anything in his way.” He can only obtain his astonishing speed through his thrusters; without them, he’s reduced to a slow, plodding gait. When discharging even one of his three charged particle cannons, Northclaw has to engage a set of anchors on the back of his heals to prevent him from being knocked over by the force of the recoil; this also prevents him from moving and he can’t generate a shield during the process, leaving him wide open to an attack. Knocking out one of his Buster Claws reduces his shield strength and also takes out the particle cannon; destroying both Buster Claws completely disables his shield and cuts down his total firepower. Since his Zoid head becomes part of his chest in robot mode, he effectively loses the use of the charged particle cannon within. None of his weaponry is capable of rapid fire; his new rail gun is probably the slowest weapon in his arsenal. Because the rail gun is still considered to be in the experimental stage, it doesn’t always work as intended, even under ideal conditions; sometimes nothing happens at all and sometimes it suffers a catastrophic failure.
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Re: THE NEW Team profile/Character profile thread

Postby -Soundwave- » Thu Jan 31, 2008 10:32 pm

Motto: ""Cries and screams are music to my Audios.""
Weapon: Shoulder Mounted Rocket Launcher
I am sure that some might remember this ole Autobot player.
Its not long but she doesn't have much of a history with my team it will grow though.

Name: SolarCat
Current Faction: Decepticon
Quote: "What's wrong with being unpredictable? In this line of business, 'predictable' equals 'dead'."
Team: The Renegade Decepticon Dissidents
Commander: Thundertron
Sub Faction : The Renegade Decepticon Dissidents
Function: Free Thinker

Bio:
Coming straight from the higher end of the Autobot team SolarCat is a little eccentric, her free thinking and problem solving abilities astound those that are not capable of thinking outside the box.

Able to get along with most of her new team, SolarCat enjoys going out and whipping the crap out of her old Autobot mates.


History: SolarCat’s original bio.
SolarCat is a rather... shall we say "unique" individual. She loves chocolate, popcorn, and running around in the rain in short sleeves with no raincoat. (No wonder she gets sick a lot). She has a pet plant named Herman Melville and a pet brother who calls himself "Sparkles the Cat". You can't take her seriously, and yet sometimes you have to.
SolarCat hates playing videogames herself but she'll walk you through how to beat them with spur-of-the-moment strategy, and she doesn't mind watching others play. In fact, she'll watch your back on the radar thing, because goodness knows you'll be too busy killing things and blowing stuff up to actually pay attention to minor details like who's trying to kill you.
She's a stickler for proper grammar, and will edit her writings for the simple reason that she didn't like the way it was worded, or there was an extra comma. She won't tell you her real name unless she gets to know you really well. Sometimes she pretends to be a guy, just to save her identity.
Future plans include achieving a pilot's license, publishing a series of novels, and getting a Doctorate (not necessarily in that order). She also wants a 1976 TR7 Triumph, because those are cool-looking cars and they make nice conversions to electric.
Harass her at your peril. Or amusement, whichever you prefer.
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Re: THE NEW Team profile/Character profile thread

Postby Spiritimus Prime » Fri Feb 01, 2008 9:10 pm

Motto: ""Damn, I'm good.""
Weapon: Twin Sonic Cannons
Here's one of my non-playable characters that might make it to HMW in V2.

Name: Aigul
Faction: Maximal
Function: Underwater/Air Defence Combat
Alt Mode: Lugia
Quote: "Hear my song as I sing my battlecry to defend what I believe in."
Theme Song: My December - Linkin Park

Bio: Mysterious but gentle and kind, Aigul is a force to be reckoned with when he fights. He only appears to every time his fellow Autobots are in danger, singing a song that is mysterious but beautiful to all who hear it. Aigul believes that freedom is the right of all sentient beings and will stop at nothing to eliminate all who wish to take that freedom away from all creatures, great or small. He is the Guardian of the Sea and has the power to understand and speak like all creatures. Sometimes he will take on another form to conceal himself amongst others so that he can learn their ways and understand their environment and use it to his advantage in battle. He spends most of his time, quietly, underwater because his powers are too strong. He will not hesitate to save a life because of his duty, but other than that, he vows that he’ll protect Earth for as long as his spark functions. Never wanting to use any of his powers, Aigul is far too peaceful to use any powerful attack unless it’s a last resort or reason.

Weapons/Abilities: When forced to use any of his powers, Aigul will open his mouth to release a high energy beam known as Aeroblast that is extremely powerful. In order to protect others or himself, he’ll concentrate all his energies to create a Psychic Shield that can block high energy attacks. He can also use Hyper Beam that will take some time to recharge after using it once. He has the ability to create or calm storms but he wishes to calm them but when enraged, he will not hesitate to use it. His eye spikes form into daggers that he uses for surprise attacks. His tail, in robot form, becomes a sword or a whip, his back comes off to form a shield that has his back plates on them and are used to stab his enemies when he charges into battle.

Weakness: Because of his peaceful solutions, Aigul has a habit of being far too peaceful for his own good, always wanting to see the good in everyone that Decepticons easily use to their advantage. His main weakness is his powers being drained when he uses his powerful attacks. He mostly hates using any of his weapons an has no intention unless it’s a last resort.
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