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Transformers Mosaic: "Cliff Hanging"

PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 3:53 pm
by i_amtrunks
The Universe of the Transformers is vast, and populated by many characters. Their universe is a large tapestry, made up of the stories and points of view of countless experiences that serve the larger whole.

These are some of those stories. This is:


It should be noted that while this project has been recognized by IDW Publishing and Hasbro, none of the works presented have been commissioned or solicited by either company. The stories are not official canon, except where noted.
These stories are the result of Transformers enthusiasts taking the time out of their busy days to contribute to a universe they love.
No one has been paid for the production of these stories.

Today's piece is called "Cliff Hanging". Story by Martin (Tron Program) Fisher, Art by Mike (Optimus 8404) Ackerman, Letters by Bernie (Blee) Lee.



Please post all comments, critiques and questions in this thread.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 4:07 pm
by soundwave13c
this is by far my favorite one yet :D
great job :APPLAUSE: :APPLAUSE:

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 4:34 pm
by Liege Evilmus
I'd like to think that on the virge of oblivion I'd spit in the devil's eye too!

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 5:01 pm
by SavageCam
Awesome! Cliffjumper is one badass 'bot!

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 6:46 pm
by Lunarabbit
Nice! Cliffjumper's always been one of my favorite TF's, and this story demonstrates one of the main reasons why: the little guy's got ball bearings!

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 6:58 pm
by OptimusShr
Love the story here. Cliffjumper being snarky while staring death in the face is great. The stylized art is also very nice and goes great with the piece.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 9:14 pm
by Pierrimus
Just one note: Cliffhanger says "You're to busy..."
It should be "You're too busy"
Otherwise another great, teriffic, excellent piece. I love these, keep them coming.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 9:43 pm
by Powermaster Jazz
I like these stories. Very cool that the fans are getting together and making their own comics. I hope the pros are paying attention. I just got done working on one, so stay tuned. B-)

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 3:08 am
by WhiteRabbit
Powermaster Jazz wrote:I like these stories. Very cool that the fans are getting together and making their own comics. I hope the pros are paying attention.


Paying attention? They're contributing. :)

Some Mosaics are even being published by IDW.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 3:39 am
by Powermaster Jazz
WhiteRabbit wrote:
Powermaster Jazz wrote:I like these stories. Very cool that the fans are getting together and making their own comics. I hope the pros are paying attention.


Paying attention? They're contributing. :)

Some Mosaics are even being published by IDW.


That's pretty freakin' sweet. I haven't bought any TF comics lately. I'd better get crackin'.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 3:51 am
by WhiteRabbit
They're currently being printed in Devastation, starting in Dev #2. Dev #4 just came out today.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 5:28 am
by Stormrider
This might be my favorite one so far. The dialogue is great and fits the characters well.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 9:14 am
by imotron
:APPLAUSE: :APPLAUSE: :APPLAUSE: :APPLAUSE: :APPLAUSE:

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 12:27 pm
by Decepticon Spike
Very cool!

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 3:45 pm
by Lapse Of Reason
Pierrimus wrote:Just one note: Cliffhanger says "You're to busy..."
It should be "You're too busy"
Otherwise another great, teriffic, excellent piece. I love these, keep them coming.


"to" is correctly used. "too" would not be correct.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 6:08 pm
by 1337W422102
Lapse Of Reason wrote:
Pierrimus wrote:Just one note: Cliffhanger says "You're to busy..."
It should be "You're too busy"
Otherwise another great, teriffic, excellent piece. I love these, keep them coming.


"to" is correctly used. "too" would not be correct.

'Too' means 'overly,' Lapse. Pierrimus is right.

That little typo and the odd order of the speech bubbles in one of the last panels kinda bugs me, but this comic is great. Cliffjumper is the Chuck Norris of Cybertron.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 8:03 am
by Bombus distinguendus
that was awsome, great art and diolog was perfect