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Transformers Mosaic: "Relativity."

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 1:24 am
by Richter
The Universe of the Transformers is vast, and populated by many characters. Their universe is a large tapestry, made up of the stories and points of view of countless experiences that serve the larger whole.

These are some of those stories. This is:
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It should be noted that while this project has been recognized by IDW Publishing and Hasbro, none of the works presented have been commissioned or solicited by either company. The stories are not official canon, except where noted. These stories are the result of Transformers enthusiasts taking the time out of their busy days to contribute to a universe they love. No one has been paid for the production of these stories.

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RELATIVITY

Story by;
Kyle & Zack Hudson

Art by;
Kyle Hudson

Colors by;
Lisa Sky

Letters by;
Josh van Reyk

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Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Relativity."

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 3:09 am
by wolverinetodd
"They complain about how long the war has ragged on." I think that should have only one "g" to read raged. Otherwise, good.

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Relativity."

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 7:02 am
by alldarker
I really like the concept of the Mosaic. However, the art is a little simple, I'm not entirely sure what Blurr is doing with that spaceship and the text on the dark-blue background is really hard to read.

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Relativity."

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 7:59 am
by BeastProwl
Yeah, good story, mediocre art.
Not saying I could do better though.

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Relativity."

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 8:20 am
by Doubledealer93
not the best.

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Relativity."

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 11:43 am
by Asepticon
Loved it!

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Relativity."

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 12:05 pm
by RhA
Blurr; not a happy camper.

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Relativity."

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 12:10 pm
by Bumblevivisector
At the risk of redundancy, GREAT idea, apparently hasty execution (though if it was indeed rushed, perhaps that's actually appropriate). Could've used a few more panels of slow-mo speech to really give us a Blurr's-eye view.

But I do love what they're going for, since in vintage G1 media, Blurr was usually just the Autobot who talked too fast, his super-speed-hero aspect only surfacing all too briefly in his commercial, and U.S. issue #66, the latter seeing Thunderwing hand his aft to him after a mere 4 panels or so.

Watching season 3 at age 7, I always thought that if the other Autobots could just get him to calm down for 2 minutes, he could win the whole war single-handedly, so I like the idea that Blurr himself might actually share my frustration.

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Relativity."

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 3:59 pm
by Megatron Wolf
good mosaic, nothing spectacular but its a cool bit of insight on blurr.

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Relativity."

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 4:06 pm
by Gundamu
Wow. Never looked at it like that. Interesting!

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Relativity."

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 4:45 pm
by Valandar
wolverinetodd wrote:"They complain about how long the war has ragged on." I think that should have only one "g" to read raged. Otherwise, good.



Not really - local vernacular, at least in my area, includes "ragged on" to refer to things that have lasted long enough to just feel like they're dragging. Basically just like "dragged on", but without the "D".

If it SHOULD be changed, "dragged" on would fit the mood and feel of the sentence better than "raged on"

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Relativity."

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 5:39 pm
by First-Aid
Very interesting concept, using Einstein's hypothesis that time slows down as the velocity of an object speeds up. I believe there was an episode of Justice League Unlimited in which the FLash sped up so much that everything else appeared to stop completely.