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As I said I would, Iv'e posted Chapter 2. In this chapter, we get to see more of the Con's werabouts, as well as Carly's new autobot guardian, And sam meets his uncle for the first time (In memeory at least) and we see the decepticon's latest (although un-coordinated) Plans unfurl, along with the werabouts of the decepticon bodies.


We open in a cold, Blizzard ridden landscape, and as we lean in for closer inspection, we see a large empty old arctic plane hanger centered at a now abandoned military base.

The Decepticons were shot. There was no Possibility of any form of victory to come their way. So far, All that was left was what were considered Drones. There were a few Scrap Drones left, LongHaul, and 3 sky drones, In the form of f-15 fighter planes, wich the autobots could easely destroy in so few numbers. The more Promanent Drone dubbed himself Ramjet. He considered himself the leader of the three, but could not really control the other two so well. The considerably more fidgety one had chosen the name Dirge. The other Decepticons considered him useless. He was as Dylan Gould once said, to turn a human phrase, "Afraid of his own shadow." The final drone, who was just as high sprung as the other two, Called himself thrust. He was so sure he was the fastest thing in the sky, even though he had only flown on earth once. Dylan and Soundwave had found these vehicle modes for them to utilize, and they reluctantly agreed to scan them for the decepticon cause. There were few others, along with a few ragtag humans and their asigned partners.
Icepick was perched on top of a massive war plane, observing it with an intense curiosity.
"Look, All I'm saying is this, Just imagine if he WERE online! He'd destroy the Autobots for us so fast!" Icepick said.
"And just how do you suppose we bring an ancient bot like HIM back online, after being in stasis for so many years!" LongHaul shuddered at the thought of this particular Decepticon's Use. "He came here with our lord megatron, and froze, as or leader did as well, but he was not above saving his own spark!" LongHaul looked into Icepick's optics with an intense flare. He knew what IcePick was Planning, and it wasn't going to happen, not as long as he was in charge."He's filth! He's Unreliable! This Con'saved his own hide at the cost of our masters!"
"He tried to save our master!" Icepick interjected. He didn't know that he too would freeze, even if he DID Scan an earth mode!
"So few of us are left! How do you suppose we Bring him OUT of stasis without the Autobot's Energon reactors?" Ramjet Inquired
"you just let me and Seargent Chaos deal with that, I promise, LongHaul, you won't be dissapointed.
"I Still don't think that's his real name" Ramjet yelled from across the hanger.
"Doesn't need to be! Let's go for a ride!" he said.
IcePick couldn't help but to smile. "This is going to be fun"

Meanwhile, far out in space, Another subgroup of Autobots Is working on a more important assignment. Thunderhead and Commetor, accompanied by Major Tungsten, are in charge of destroying the decepticon bodies once and for all. The mission was very last minute, and Commetor had to leave work on Optimus Prime's arm to leadfoot. He was rather worried about what leadfoot might do with it. Images of prime's Knuckle Dusters came to mind. knowing Leadfoot, Prime would now have a pair.
Commetor has a sharp Russian accent. He has this accent for reasons we will get into in another story.

"Are you sure you know what your doing with that thing?" Commetor asked.
"It's not exactly rocket science!" Thunderhead replied.
"Umm.....well, actually.." Major Tungsten started
"Oh shut up! I don't remember asking you!" Thunderhead yelled.
They were on board a tipical Autobot cargo vessel. It had the bodies of the nastiest Decepticons none to anyone.
"Not so tough now, are ya starscream? Got that big old mouth of yours ripped WIDE open huh? HAH!" Thunderhead amused himself endlessly talking to these bot's bodies, to the point of concern to both Commetor AND his human partner.
"We are nearing The dropoff location! Good thing the fallen was destroyed, or else the sun would be gone!" Commetor exclaimed.
"Well, the Thrusters on the body Capsoles are tuned to perfection! No way these bots will miss the sun with THIS Propulsion system!"
"Alright! Secure the human, Open the Hatches, and dump the bodies!"
"Can do!" Thunderhead said. "Say tungsten, wanna help out?"
"Exactly how would I do that?"
"Well..." Thunderhead proceeded to transform into exosuit mode: "You get the Idea?"
"well, I don't see the harm in it, Commetor?"
"Just be careful, the heat of the sun can make energon react to humans in strange ways, esecially THIS Close. You may be in an exo-suit, but your not fully protected, and those cloths we designed for you can only take so much!"
"Oh, would you relax Comie? The Hatches wont be open THAT Long." Thunderhead said
"What did you just call me!?" Commetor raged.
"OH! I didn't mean it like that!"
Commetor pushed him and tungsten to the back of the ship with a rather forceful push.
"Easy!" Thunderhead Exclaimed. "I could have dropped the human! He would be burnt to a crisp by now!"
"Sorry, I over reacted. at least he's latched inside, umm, as the humans say, uh, my bad? This is Commetor to Optimus prime, do you read?
"This is Ratchet, Prime is still in the CR, any news?"
"Yes, We are about to Launch the bodies, Thunderhead, if you will?"
"Launching in 3...2...1..."
The sound of the thrusters overtook the Comlink for a moment, then the pods flew out of the ship, and then Tungsten and Thundehead closed all the hatches.
"It is done. Thunderhead said. "The decepticons are no more!"

Everyone cheared as Sam was awarded his newest medal, along with Carly
"Now your not the ONLY one with a medal to brag about, are you?" Carly beamed.
Bumblebee was standing, and for the first time, felt like he was standing TALL. He was a hero, known by many, Idolized by millions. The thought tickled his processors. He was what the humans called, a celebrity.
Towards the back of the crowd, two small, round, black vehicles with no drivers fallowed closely by a big soldier on a pink motorcylce was quite a site to behold. The twins could'nt take it any longer.
Skids was first to lose it, He transformed, right in the middle of the street, followed by Mudflap, who stumbled alittle.
The crowd started to panick, but bumblebee was at their side in no time. He rustled skid's ears like an adult would russle his son's hair. And at that moment, Sideswipe and Mirage had also shown up from the other end, their sleek bladed forms ripe for the audience at hand. Sparkplug clambered off of arcee and made his way to the stage.
arcee then followed suit to the autobots and showed her true form, not even she could resist the look on these human's faces when she did it.
"Long time no see kiddo" Sparkplug said.
"And, you are?" Sam asked
"It's me, your uncle Sparky"
"Who?"
"Ya' know, Sparkplug? Iv'e been allied with the autobots almost since day one! I'm the one who told prime what eBay was, Did'nt he tell you any of this?"
Sam couldn't help but stare. He had an uncle?
"No, no he never told me."
"Well, we got some catching up to do apparently...I'm surprised Ron and Judy never told you."
"Well, now that that's out of the way" Mirage said; I've been sent here by the autobots to be Carly's guardian! That is, If you don't mind m'lady? I was givin proper instructions to taxi you back to base. Bumblebee can take sam, and Arcee and the twins already have Sparkplug, we can finish this discussion there, no?
"It's kind of hard to refuse" Carly said, not at all trying to shake her smile. The last car she had had was also a sexy streamlined beauty, But it tried to kill her! At least mirage wouldn't try to do that...


End Of chapter two

Currently looking for artists to illistrate certain scenes? Anyone is welcome to try, and if your interested, shoot a PM my way, and I'll tell you what scenes need illistration. I'm not good enough an artist to do it, but there are some of you out there that are simply put, amazing, so, like I said, If your interested, leave me a message. you will be credited!

Well, what do you guys who have read it think? Do you want a chapter 3? I need to know that people are actually reading this, and liking what they read, or can suggest imrovement, or just flat out hate it. Chapters 1 and 2 have been alittle dull, I know, but that's only because its setting up. Action and emotion are set for coming chapters, I just need cannon in the form of feedback to do so!

BeastProwl wrote:Well, what do you guys who have read it think? Do you want a chapter 3? I need to know that people are actually reading this, and liking what they read, or can suggest imrovement, or just flat out hate it. Chapters 1 and 2 have been alittle dull, I know, but that's only because its setting up. Action and emotion are set for coming chapters, I just need cannon in the form of feedback to do so!

I think it's good.
you capture what the transformers think well, and in the style of the movies, as opposed to some others who might just write something like "and then he said it hurt a bit but he would be fine i guess. ratchet carried on with the operation."