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Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 8:49 pm
by #Sideways#
Ugh, getting to writing a second chapter is so annoying when writing two books at the same time... :-(

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 9:38 pm
by Godzillabot Primal
You’re a writer? What works have you done?

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 7:13 am
by #Sideways#
godzillabot wrote:You’re a writer? What works have you done?

Well I am working on my first novel now, I won't be giving out any spoilers (yet) on the plot, so I will only grant you the name:

TIME

It is not Transformers related. :)

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 7:58 am
by Godzillabot Primal
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:You’re a writer? What works have you done?

Well I am working on my first novel now, I won't be giving out any spoilers (yet) on the plot, so I will only grant you the name:

TIME

It is not Transformers related. :)


Cool! :D I’ll be looking for it on Amazon! ;)

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 8:38 am
by #Sideways#
godzillabot wrote:Cool! :D I’ll be looking for it on Amazon! ;)


Well thank you! It's coming along well, I hope it won't be bashed by critics.

"GAH! Never buy the Author's first book! GAH!"

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 7:09 pm
by Godzillabot Primal
Well I wish you the best of luck


One question: Fiction or Non-fiction

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 7:37 pm
by #Sideways#
godzillabot wrote:Well I wish you the best of luck


One question: Fiction or Non-fiction

Thank you!

Neither.

Science Fiction.

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Fri Apr 22, 2011 8:18 am
by Godzillabot Primal
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:Well I wish you the best of luck


One question: Fiction or Non-fiction

Thank you!

Neither.

Science Fiction.



My favorite!

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Fri Apr 22, 2011 9:27 pm
by #Sideways#
//The long awaited Chapter two!

Chapter II


The Autobots were putting up a mild fight, in Tombtreader's opinion, at least.

He was watching the battle from a view screen on the bridge of the Obsidian, one of many Decepticon battleships attacking the Autobot starbase.

With a wave of his hand, the holographic screen faded away instantly, so he may do other things.

He walked with his hands behind him in a formal manner to the weapons station and leaned over the dark-grey mech that was sitting there.

"Fire on their maneuvering engines, ensign." Tombtreader ordered, a failed comforting smile coming across like a snarl worn on his face.

"Y-Yes, sir." The small mech replied, obviously nervous.

The mech pressed several buttons on the controls in front of him, and seconds later three purple flashes lit up the bridge, and launched three large purple lasers at the lower bulb of the starbase, causing a huge explosion, sending shrapnel into space, and destroying the starbase's maneuvering thrusters, incapacitating it immediately.

He gave the ensign a hearty slap on the shoulder for reward, and walked back to the captain's chair, and the mech waiting for him.

The captain of the Obsidian was a silver, rather blocky Seeker named Clench. Instead of giving orders, Clench was lying back in his chair lazily peeling at an organic infection the tip of his finger.

"How's the battle going?" Clench asked him through a murmur as he peeled a flake off of the tip of his finger.

"Very well, victory is imminent." Tombtreader said as he sat in the 1st mate chair next to Clench.

"Excellent. Have you told the troops what 'Cargo' that they are after?" Clench asked, looking over to him, red optics focused on his.

"Negative, I figured it would be better for them to take everything, not knowing what to take specifically. More loot." Tombtreader said with a smirk.

Clench nodded, and sat up in his seat. Rubbing his chin, Clench looked back at Tombtreader and said simply, "Oversee the operation, I want my best mechs in there; Megatron won't take no for an answer."

Tombtreader nodded in reply, and stood up.

He began to walk to the doorway to exit the bridge, when he heard the ensign speak lowly to Clench asking, "Is he your best mech?"

Tombtreader paused for the answer, and found it not surprising.

"Nah, I told him that to give him a motivation." Clench replied.

Tombtreader continued out of the room, smug look on his face, he was angry with Clench for just openly saying that he wasn't his best mech. He will find out who this "Best Mech" is, and when he finds him, he will enjoy yanking the Spark out of him, and squeezing the life out of it; with his bare hands.

He felt a hand on his shoulder, a look of rage appeared over Tombtreader's faceplate as he spun around, drawing his sidearm on the faceplate of the mech behind him and fired.

The ensign was standing there, a horrid look of pain and fear plastered on his faceplate, and a single hole of a plasma shot in his forehead.

"Tombtreader! What have you done!?" Clench yelled out as he sprung up from his chair, glaring at him.

"Reflexes. I guess we will have to put another one of those rookies in there." Tombtreader said as he spun his smoking sidearm back into his holster on the right side of his leg.

"Indeed." Clench said with a sigh as he sat down.

Tombtreader continued on down the hallway, which was mainly empty, for most of the Decepticon compliment was on the starbase.

Walking though the hallways, Tombtreader made his way to the airlock, and put his hand on the handle to open it, and he smiled, this was going to be bloody.


//Ah, finally have it out the door. Hope it is liked!

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Sat Apr 23, 2011 7:42 am
by Godzillabot Primal
#Sideways# wrote://The long awaited Chapter two!

Chapter II


The Autobots were putting up a mild fight, in Tombtreader's opinion, at least.

He was watching the battle from a view screen on the bridge of the Obsidian, one of many Decepticon battleships attacking the Autobot starbase.

With a wave of his hand, the holographic screen faded away instantly, so he may do other things.

He walked with his hands behind him in a formal manner to the weapons station and leaned over the dark-grey mech that was sitting there.

"Fire on their maneuvering engines, ensign." Tombtreader ordered, a failed comforting smile coming across like a snarl worn on his face.

"Y-Yes, sir." The small mech replied, obviously nervous.

The mech pressed several buttons on the controls in front of him, and seconds later three purple flashes lit up the bridge, and launched three large purple lasers at the lower bulb of the starbase, causing a huge explosion, sending shrapnel into space, and destroying the starbase's maneuvering thrusters, incapacitating it immediately.

He gave the ensign a hearty slap on the shoulder for reward, and walked back to the captain's chair, and the mech waiting for him.

The captain of the Obsidian was a silver, rather blocky Seeker named Clench. Instead of giving orders, Clench was lying back in his chair lazily peeling at an organic infection the tip of his finger.

"How's the battle going?" Clench asked him through a murmur as he peeled a flake off of the tip of his finger.

"Very well, victory is imminent." Tombtreader said as he sat in the 1st mate chair next to Clench.

"Excellent. Have you told the troops what 'Cargo' that they are after?" Clench asked, looking over to him, red optics focused on his.

"Negative, I figured it would be better for them to take everything, not knowing what to take specifically. More loot." Tombtreader said with a smirk.

Clench nodded, and sat up in his seat. Rubbing his chin, Clench looked back at Tombtreader and said simply, "Oversee the operation, I want my best mechs in there; Megatron won't take no for an answer."

Tombtreader nodded in reply, and stood up.

He began to walk to the doorway to exit the bridge, when he heard the ensign speak lowly to Clench asking, "Is he your best mech?"

Tombtreader paused for the answer, and found it not surprising.

"Nah, I told him that to give him a motivation." Clench replied.

Tombtreader continued out of the room, smug look on his face, he was angry with Clench for just openly saying that he wasn't his best mech. He will find out who this "Best Mech" is, and when he finds him, he will enjoy yanking the Spark out of him, and squeezing the life out of it; with his bare hands.

He felt a hand on his shoulder, a look of rage appeared over Tombtreader's faceplate as he spun around, drawing his sidearm on the faceplate of the mech behind him and fired.

The ensign was standing there, a horrid look of pain and fear plastered on his faceplate, and a single hole of a plasma shot in his forehead.

"Tombtreader! What have you done!?" Clench yelled out as he sprung up from his chair, glaring at him.

"Reflexes. I guess we will have to put another one of those rookies in there." Tombtreader said as he spun his smoking sidearm back into his holster on the right side of his leg.

"Indeed." Clench said with a sigh as he sat down.

Tombtreader continued on down the hallway, which was mainly empty, for most of the Decepticon compliment was on the starbase.

Walking though the hallways, Tombtreader made his way to the airlock, and put his hand on the handle to open it, and he smiled, this was going to be bloody.


//Ah, finally have it out the door. Hope it is liked!




Very cool! You should be seeing my stuff up in the fiction board soon

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 10:28 am
by #Sideways#
Be expecting the next chapter today, or some other time this week!

Ugh! Life has been hectic!

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 3:21 pm
by Godzillabot Primal
Great! Life has been hectic for me to: Braces :grin:

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 4:29 pm
by #Sideways#
godzillabot wrote:Great! Life has been hectic for me too: Braces :grin:


Trust me: They Hurt.

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 7:28 pm
by Godzillabot Primal
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:Great! Life has been hectic for me too: Braces :grin:


Trust me: They Hurt.


I'm not sure when you got your's on, but they hurt only a little bit :grin:

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Fri Jun 10, 2011 8:32 pm
by #Sideways#
//Long awaited Chapter 3! Where everything begins to come together...

Chapter III


Sprokit lurched forward as the station rocked back and forth after a blast hit the Starbase. This made the Energon in both of the Mechs rush faster. Sprokit punched button next to the door to the elevator, causing the door to creak open slowly. Both of them stepped into the elevator quickly and rested against the back wall.

"Remind me again why we're heading down to the Cargo Hold?" Fireup said as he pressed the lowest level button.

"We're going because Airbrake, someone who is a much higher rank than us, told us to go to the Cargo Hold." Sprokit said with a sigh.

"Oh, so your 'Girlfriend' told you to do it!" Fireup said sarcastically.

"She's not my 'Girlfriend'," Sprokit said irritably, "She's an acquaintance."

Fireup chuckled and nodded to the door as it creaked open to reveal a large room filled with many crates, and other cargo. Sprokit walked to one of the crates and opened it in hopes of weapons, no such luck, it was simply piping and other supplies.

"Hey Fireup, open some of those crates and get us some weapons, will ya?" Sprokit shouted to Fireup.

"Whatever." Fireup mumbled back as he began to rip open boxes and crates and toss off lids.

Sprokit opened a crate to reveal two Battle Rifles, along with four clips each. Sprokit smiled as he grabbed one and slapped a clip inside and cocked it, and did the same with the other one. The ripping of crates stopped oddly, and a sharp gasp of fear filled the air.

"Sprokit...!" Fireup said with fear in his voice.

"What?" Sprokit asked as he grabbed the two guns and the six clips and jogged over to the frightened Fireup.

Fireup stuck out his arm to block Sprokit from getting any closer, and for good reason too. Sprokit's optics widened at the frightening sight of the one thing that gave the Decepticons the upper edge: Dark Energon.

"We gotta warn everyone!" Fireup said as he began to run to the elevator.

Sprokit caught him by his arm and pulled him back away from the elevator and said, "We can't tell anyone what we have just seen!"

"Why? What do you mean?" Fireup said questioning Sprokit's reasoning.

"If Autobot High Command found out that we looked at something Top Secret," Sprokit said direly as he motioned at the lid which plainly stated "Top Secret, do not open" in red ink, "If they found out, they would send assassins to kill us for the security risk, understand?"

Sprokit slammed the lid back onto the corresponding crate, and shoved the Rifle into Fireup's hands and said, "There are only three more clips that aren't already loaded, use them well."

Fireup nodded as he clutched it tighter as he glanced at the crate which held the Dark Energon. Suddenly, The elevator began to open, slowly, as usual. The Mechs enclosed in the elevator yelled out, "Hey you! Identify yourselves!"

"We don't-" Fireup whispered to Sprokit, but was cut off.

"Uh, this is Overenergizer, and, uh, I'm Fraxured..." Sprokit lied to them with an odd tone.

"Huh, well thats funny, 'cause I'm Fraxured!" One of them revealed himself as Fraxured, "Attack!!"

Lasers filled the air and Sprokit and Fireup narrowly dodged them, and dove for cover. Sprokit leaned out to the side of his crate and fired the Battle Rifle at the two Decepticons, who spun for cover behind the door of the elevator. Sprokit glanced to his right where Fireup was firing his Rifle over the top of the crate he was resting on, and they both ducked under their cover as the Decepticons spun out and fired their own weapons; with different weapons, and results. One fired a large Mortar Launcher which narrowly missed Sprokit's head, destroying a crate behind him. The other one came out with a large Gatling-gun like weapon and began to spray small cones into the air, and began to obliterate crates and other supplies.

Sprokit opened the crate on its side to reveal three grenades, among other supplies that didn't apply to the situation, so he only grabbed the grenades, pulled the pin of one with his teeth, and tossed it in the elevator.

"Eh?" One of them said clueless of the significance of the grenade at their feet.

An explosion from the grenade instantly killed the mechs standing in the elevator, sending shrapnel everywhere. Once things settled down, Sprokit stood up and walked to the elevator to examine the bodies, they were dead, both of them.

"Uh... Sprokit...?" Fireup said rather worriedly.

"What? Are you hurt?" Sprokit said as he jogged over, concerned for his friend.

"Worse," Fireup said looking up from his crate, "The Dark Energon, one of the blasts must have hit the crate, and the Energon Line looks ruptured too, my guess, it fell in."

Sure enough, Sprokit looked in the line, and he could make out spires of purple beginning to peak out from the purpling Energon.

"This is so not good," Sprokit said as he jogged to the elevator, but was cut short, the grenade he tossed damaged it, rendering it useless, "Nor is this! This slaggin' thing is broken!"

Fireup looked at him with worried optics, and Sprokit could tell what he was saying with the look on his face-plate: If they didn't get out of there soon, the spires of Dark Energon would overtake the whole room, including them.

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 9:35 am
by Godzillabot Primal
Cool! I am wondering (and you don't have to go into great detail) what Transformers design are you using?

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 6:23 pm
by #Sideways#
godzillabot wrote:Cool! I am wondering (and you don't have to go into great detail) what Transformers design are you using?


War For Cybertron looking 'Cons and 'Bots, I always loved the look of 'em!

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 8:32 pm
by Godzillabot Primal
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:Cool! I am wondering (and you don't have to go into great detail) what Transformers design are you using?


War For Cybertron looking 'Cons and 'Bots, I always loved the look of 'em!


Me too :D

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Sun Jun 12, 2011 7:25 pm
by #Sideways#
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:Cool! I am wondering (and you don't have to go into great detail) what Transformers design are you using?


War For Cybertron looking 'Cons and 'Bots, I always loved the look of 'em!


Me too :D

Yeah, when do you think you'll go to the RPG? Eh?

I'll be able to start pumping the chapters out in the Summer, when I get done with everything...

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2011 7:59 am
by Godzillabot Primal
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:Cool! I am wondering (and you don't have to go into great detail) what Transformers design are you using?


War For Cybertron looking 'Cons and 'Bots, I always loved the look of 'em!


Me too :D

Yeah, when do you think you'll go to the RPG? Eh?

I'll be able to start pumping the chapters out in the Summer, when I get done with everything...


Thanks for reminding me! And great, by the way...I'm working on a little something that'll blow fan fiction to hasbro's brain :-$

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2011 11:21 am
by #Sideways#
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:Cool! I am wondering (and you don't have to go into great detail) what Transformers design are you using?


War For Cybertron looking 'Cons and 'Bots, I always loved the look of 'em!


Me too :D

Yeah, when do you think you'll go to the RPG? Eh?

I'll be able to start pumping the chapters out in the Summer, when I get done with everything...


Thanks for reminding me! And great, by the way...I'm working on a little something that'll blow fan fiction to hasbro's brain :-$

Epictoast.

I look forward to it!!

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2011 7:56 pm
by Godzillabot Primal
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:Cool! I am wondering (and you don't have to go into great detail) what Transformers design are you using?


War For Cybertron looking 'Cons and 'Bots, I always loved the look of 'em!


Me too :D

Yeah, when do you think you'll go to the RPG? Eh?

I'll be able to start pumping the chapters out in the Summer, when I get done with everything...


Thanks for reminding me! And great, by the way...I'm working on a little something that'll blow fan fiction to hasbro's brain :-$

Epictoast.

I look forward to it!!


Oh you will…you will! You will! Mwuhhahahahahh! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

I has de evil :twisted:

No really you should look forward to it!

Pssst, want to know the main guys?

The Autobots :BOT:
Optimus Prime
Bumblebee
Ratchet
Ironhide
Hot Shot
Prowl
Wheeljack
Steeljaw

The Decepticons :CON:
Megatron
Lugnut
Soundwave
Starscream
Brawl
Astrotrain
Breakdown
Oil Slick

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 10:34 am
by #Sideways#
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:Cool! I am wondering (and you don't have to go into great detail) what Transformers design are you using?


War For Cybertron looking 'Cons and 'Bots, I always loved the look of 'em!


Me too :D

Yeah, when do you think you'll go to the RPG? Eh?

I'll be able to start pumping the chapters out in the Summer, when I get done with everything...


Thanks for reminding me! And great, by the way...I'm working on a little something that'll blow fan fiction to hasbro's brain :-$

Epictoast.

I look forward to it!!


Oh you will…you will! You will! Mwuhhahahahahh! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

I has de evil :twisted:

No really you should look forward to it!

Pssst, want to know the main guys?

The Autobots :BOT:
Optimus Prime
Bumblebee
Ratchet
Ironhide
Hot Shot
Prowl
Wheeljack
Steeljaw

The Decepticons :CON:
Megatron
Lugnut
Soundwave
Starscream
Brawl
Astrotrain
Breakdown
Oil Slick


Awesome! I should be able to pump another chapter soon.

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 11:41 am
by Godzillabot Primal
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:Cool! I am wondering (and you don't have to go into great detail) what Transformers design are you using?


War For Cybertron looking 'Cons and 'Bots, I always loved the look of 'em!


Me too :D

Yeah, when do you think you'll go to the RPG? Eh?

I'll be able to start pumping the chapters out in the Summer, when I get done with everything...


Thanks for reminding me! And great, by the way...I'm working on a little something that'll blow fan fiction to hasbro's brain :-$

Epictoast.

I look forward to it!!


Oh you will…you will! You will! Mwuhhahahahahh! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

I has de evil :twisted:

No really you should look forward to it!

Pssst, want to know the main guys?

The Autobots :BOT:
Optimus Prime
Bumblebee
Ratchet
Ironhide
Hot Shot
Prowl
Wheeljack
Steeljaw

The Decepticons :CON:
Megatron
Lugnut
Soundwave
Starscream
Brawl
Astrotrain
Breakdown
Oil Slick


Awesome! I should be able to pump another chapter soon.


The name of the three series are: Transformers: Earth, Transformers: Power of Cybertron, Transformers: The Revenge

And great!

Re: Transformers: Rise of The Reanimated

PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 12:22 pm
by #Sideways#
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:
#Sideways# wrote:
godzillabot wrote:Cool! I am wondering (and you don't have to go into great detail) what Transformers design are you using?


War For Cybertron looking 'Cons and 'Bots, I always loved the look of 'em!


Me too :D

Yeah, when do you think you'll go to the RPG? Eh?

I'll be able to start pumping the chapters out in the Summer, when I get done with everything...


Thanks for reminding me! And great, by the way...I'm working on a little something that'll blow fan fiction to hasbro's brain :-$

Epictoast.

I look forward to it!!


Oh you will…you will! You will! Mwuhhahahahahh! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

I has de evil :twisted:

No really you should look forward to it!

Pssst, want to know the main guys?

The Autobots :BOT:
Optimus Prime
Bumblebee
Ratchet
Ironhide
Hot Shot
Prowl
Wheeljack
Steeljaw

The Decepticons :CON:
Megatron
Lugnut
Soundwave
Starscream
Brawl
Astrotrain
Breakdown
Oil Slick


Awesome! I should be able to pump another chapter soon.


The name of the three series are: Transformers: Earth, Transformers: Power of Cybertron, Transformers: The Revenge

And great!


Will they be related in storyline?