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transformers with more burning justice?

Postby Blitz krieg » Sun Feb 05, 2012 11:31 pm

heres something to really get you thinking

imagine for a moment what a transformer series might be like if a autobot character were introduced at some point in the series towards the beginning.

one that happens to be a amnesiac regarding thier personel origins

he always goes rambling on about extremely advanced science theory though most of it comes out sounding like straight up science fiction due to his being a extreme anime fan when it comes to how he words his thoughts and also due to his comparing this or that to something out of anime asa possible fictional enhancement of said science theory


he also happens to be totally scary freaky skilled with anything involving technology but more times then not it all comes down to being pure random chance or plain luck that what he built or modified works exactly like he intended it to du to him being the only one who knows how to make it work right like that in the first place

you just cant quite shake that feeling that maybe just maybe the guy might actaully know exactly what hes talking about or that he may even very well be a time traveler from the distant future and or intidimensional traveler for that matter

the guy at his core happens to be a extreme fan boy type when it comes to anything having to do with hot blooded anime such as gunbuster or even gurren laggen or any other hot blooded anime but most especially if it has anything to do with the yuusha braves various mytho's

to quote tvtropes on the matter.



Some fans are a cut above the regular otaku. For most, it's as simple as being hired to work in the industry that deals with the media you love, but in fiction, it can take a whole new meaning. The Ascended Fanboy is that lucky one-in-a-million with a hobby based on something imaginary which doesn't stay imaginary—it turns into reality, and he becomes a part of it himself.

as for the fanboy bit

imagine this guy as being the ultimate obsessed yuusha braves fan to the point that he does not just eat sleep breath and dream about the stuff he somehow manages to live it literally

call it mind over matter ,call it reality warping power call it god like power for want of a better word for it

the guy somehow managed to figure out in his head exactly what he has to do asa yuusha braves fan to make anything from those shows work in reality to make the impossible possible in that truly epic hot blooded burning justice manner using nothing more then will power, fighting spirit ,positive emotion and hot blooded guts to make it happen

think about all that for a moment

im thinking cyberttron pumped up past 10 or 11 thousand times beyond the impossible and then some
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Re: transformers with more burning justice?

Postby RhA » Mon Feb 06, 2012 2:56 pm

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I've read this twice. I can't make up what you're saying.

This is what I got from it:

You want a character that lost his memory, but has retained motorskills and lives with a secret something which he unleashes at some point. And then something about anime.
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Re: transformers with more burning justice?

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Re: transformers with more burning justice?

Postby Baneblade » Mon Feb 06, 2012 8:15 pm

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RhA wrote:I've read this twice. I can't make up what you're saying.

This is what I got from it:

You want a character that lost his memory, but has retained motorskills and lives with a secret something which he unleashes at some point. And then something about anime.


brain circuits frazzled... that and its been about a case of rum (6x70cl bottles - hey my birthday ok?) and its after 2am my time
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Re: transformers with more burning justice?

Postby RhA » Tue Feb 07, 2012 12:44 am

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Baneblade wrote:
RhA wrote:I've read this twice. I can't make up what you're saying.

This is what I got from it:

You want a character that lost his memory, but has retained motorskills and lives with a secret something which he unleashes at some point. And then something about anime.


brain circuits frazzled... that and its been about a case of rum (6x70cl bottles - hey my birthday ok?) and its after 2am my time


The most badass thing I had all day was coffee and I didn't get it either.
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Re: transformers with more burning justice?

Postby Blitz krieg » Tue Feb 07, 2012 1:47 am

hopefully this little scene wil lbe a better idea of what i am trying to explain when it comes to the whole idea of transformers having more burning justice

"I would have waited an eternity for this," "It's over, Prime."

Optimus heard Megatron's voice, but it seemed so far away, so distant. "Crawl slave! on your knees! he gloated as he kept the gun trained on the Autobot leader despite being heavily damaged himself. Optimus struggled to his knees, balling his hands together for a final act of defiance as he gathers his remaining strength.He heard his own voice speaking to him. You’ve lost.

Everything you’ve worked so very hard for has been destroyed. everyone you knew and loved in life has been killed. Its all over. all over.

Through the morning fog which covered the battlefield He caught a glimpse of Alita, staring at him. her optics closed in vain as she tried to hold back the tears which streamed down her face her head bowed in sorrow. he saw in the distance his friends and his comrades.they who had given their lives for the code and their beliefs. their faces and optics which had once burned bright in life with hope and determination, were now haunted with greif and sorrow.

Alita... I failed them, ive failed you...I've been trying so hard to bring back my past. old friends, old ways. maybe this is what it brings in the heart of a dead city. no past but megatron's rule, no future but Megatron's fist. Event hrough all the pain i can still hear them screaming Avenge me, a million dead scream to me AVENGE ME. no. No. NO! Its not over! I MUST NOT GIVE UP. I CAN NOT GIVE UP! "I WILL NEVER GIVE UP!" my past is dead but I'm alive and i OWE the dead for that.

if i cannot deal with trouble like this i am no longer worthy of looking magnus and springer in the optics No, this can not break me, I am beyond this pain. i won't give into this. ultra magnus, hot rod, ,arcee i love you all too much. i will not let him hurt you. i WILL NOT LET HIM HURT YOU.
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Re: transformers with more burning justice?

Postby Blitz krieg » Tue Feb 07, 2012 1:50 am

 
from somewhere deep in his mind, from somewhere in that faraway place of chrystalline concentration and groggy perceptions, in that far away place of dreams and courage he found a final last well. he had descended into the very darkness within himself, the deepest level. it was partly in his mind, partly in his chest, mostly in his soul. a black pit of hate, anger, rage, wrath, greif and despair. incredibly compressed by his desire and longing for peace, compacted under incredible pressure by his very morale beliefs, held in stasis by the very rigid discipline he had trained himself to posess as a warrior .

the pit exploded with all the pent up emotion's he had held in check throughout the greater majority of his entire lifetime up to this moment. A sudden surge of raw distructive energy exploded within primes damaged body as power rerouted from one subsystem to another, his faltering lifesighns peaked dramatically. Optimus had the strength and the determination to do what was necessary now all he needed was the will. Optimus looked up at his age-old nemesis, gasping for breath as his injuries robbed his system of the oxygen it needed to combust energon.

Silence spread like a stifling blanket over the battlefield, Prime's horrible gurgling wheeze the only sound echoing across the tarmac. Optimus Prime looked into the eyes of the enemy. He knew that he was the only one who could stop this carnage. He called on the last of his strength for one final blow. he knew he could do it, he could take the monster down optimus was an autobot for whom the word surrender truly had no meaning. The power was there gaining strength like a raging wild fire. the fire like will of determination was burning deep inside of him begging to be released like the throttle handle to a power generator bent on overload but after that he would be spent and it would be over for him .

for the sake of peace throughout the universe,for the comrades that i have lost ,my beloved, friends,and family all. for they who have died, and for those who still live that believe in me, right here and right now i will defeat you. for elita, for primus, for the autobot code let there be peace. he thought to himself .

Optimus’s mind screamed at him to do something, anything to stop the destruction of his friends ,his family, his people. Frustration, fear and pain drove him forward, giving him a kind of tunnel vision where the only thing he could see was the smirk on Megatrons's face. Then the heroic Autobot gathered all his strength for one word as he threw back his head and screamed from somewhere deep within his soul a primal scream so terrifying and sharp it cut through the tyrant like a stunning blow to the temple.
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Re: transformers with more burning justice?

Postby Blitz krieg » Tue Feb 07, 2012 2:03 am

 
 
"N... never!" he yelled, gasping painfully, Linking his fists together, Prime swung his joined hands at the Decepticon's throat and made contact as he opens up on megatron from point blank range slamming both fists into Megatron's throat with a full circle round house punch as he bashes in the armor surrounding megatron's throat cutting of his ability to breath.

the decepticon stumbled back 2 full steps as he brought his right hand up to his throat as he struggled to breath. the unintelligable sounds made by his airway as he attempted to draw air into his systems to combust enrgon sounded like a death rattle. the momentary distraction was all the hesitation prime needed as he struggled to his feet.

Turning his attention inward, he accessed the power of the Matrix. alita’s last stand had provided the inspiration. All it took was the slightest thought – a line of coding, fed from his processor down a length of fibre-optic cabling and into his systems. A slight re-direction of power flow here, a minute telescoping of a ventilation funnel there, and Matrix energy flowed into his body.he cuold actually feel the energy as it traveled from his chest to his shoulders through his arms and into his hands.

Turning a sacred life force of creation into a weapon of distruction was the easiest thing in the world for Optimus Prime. Suddenly, he felt his own Spark twitch and begin to move, inward, toward the sacred artefact. Through their mental link, somewhere in his mind he heard Magnus cry out. He knew… they both knew… what it meant.

If a prime were to employ the Matrix in this fashion, to have it consume and destroy the enemy it would likely consume the spark of its gaurdian as well. Violence, he remembered, always had a consequence. Magnus’ voice whispered in his mind.

This is the purpose , for which Transformers like you and I were created. we must never let our courage die,we shall fight to our last breath my brother, for with these hands we shall create victory.

utilising the age old teachings of circuit-su he called forth energy from his very spark. matrix energy began to glow at his finger tips soft and white at first then with the color changing to a light bluish white as the power built up in intensity. lightning like pathways of energy began to arc back and forth as the energy increased. crackling and humming in near spider web patterns between his hands and fingers as the power built up in intesity and strength.The power doubled, then tripled, then swelled beyond measure. prime willed the energy to flow from his hands into a fiery blueish white spere hovering in the air between his hands as it materialised in the air.

gasping for breath struggling to clear his constricted airway megatron attempts to reposition his back cannon along his right side waist and with a supreme mental effort powered it to a full charged blast then fires it at the primes head in what is certain to be a kill shot through the autobots central processor.

but optimus has seen through the decpeticons feigned moment of weakness and raises a left arm out into the air in front of his head. his his glowing hand and fingers outstretched wide as the bolt of distructive energy harmlessly collides with his glowing left hand and arcs over his body around his body as it passes between the fingers. the blast harmlessly dissipates in the air in a blinding display of colored light and shadow
NO!, ...Impossible.. the decepticon leader croaks as he attempts to speak.


his voice rumbling with deep rage the prime spoke. NOTHING .... IS ... IMPOSSIBLE ... FOR THOSE.. WHO HAVE COURAGE the autobot leader screams at his opponent as he levels his optics at his opponent "DECEPTICONS, LEAVE THIS PLACE OR DIE" he screamed. the wind carries his words to every corner of the city. those of megatron's troops who were still alive looked on in shock, disbelief annd silence. the very sight of prime has chilled them to their very sparks.

concentrating mightily he willed the energy to coalensce into a speroid like form of pure matrix energy as it hovered in midair between his hands. i have tried reasoning with you, he thought silently to himself and i have tried making peace with you megatron. but the only language you will ever understand is violence. "you wanted power so badly megatron here" he spoke to his enemy as Optimus stopped hesitating and unleashed the full fury of the matrix.

The energy was blistering, and the temperature soared as the energy ball went soaring through the air at incredible speed. megatron had but a single moment to glimpse the ball of incredibly distructive energy as it sped towards him like a bolt of lightning before it exploded against his chest with a sound like thunder as it bashed the central portion of his chest inward completely ruining the purple decepticon insignia as it is peeled half away.

The Decepticon leader went flying over the edge of the building, striking other ledges The impacts against more outcroppings of rock add to Megatron's damage, each resounding crunching noise, robbing him of energy and racking his being with pain as armor is sheared off by hard rocks Fracturing the sides which split , spilling wires, fuses, lights, circuitry Sparks fly from the many wounds and his battered armor leaks energon freely, then suddenly... the ground is gone and he finds himself falling and too weak to fly. before he finally crashed to the city street below. his body convulses and shakes like a puppet whos strings have become entangled trying to move, but his systems seem to be rebelling against him .

on the cliff Optimus stands tall, armor damaged and bearing heavy wounds, Prime stands, silent vigil over the torn wasteland, His thoughts are almost those of someone in shock, 'is he really gone this time' he asks himself while making sure that Megatron had fallen.suddenly a tightening pain fills primes chest as he clutches his left hand to his fuel pump, his knees gave way as vertigo overcame him. and he collapsed on the cliff's edge.
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Re: transformers with more burning justice?

Postby Blitz krieg » Tue Feb 07, 2012 2:11 am

thewhole scne with optimus chaneig life energy directly from his very living spark and matrix energy with it tochannelito a disurtive egy blast


basicly in ovrall appearance and exectution of the scene it is meant to be one in which optimus pretty much hits megatron with a kamahamaha attack

in dbz while goku and the z fighters use their own ki/life energy to power their energy based attacks like a kamahama or any other form of similerly executed ki energy attack like it.

since ki is literally ones own life energy and cybertronians have living sparks for their souls i thought it would be a reasonable way to explore the idea of a transformer character using their own lifespark energy to fuel the energy attack

as owne burnett once said so well on the matter in gargoyels towards the end of the gathering storyline energy is energy wether it be generated by living being and mystical means science, technology ,or magic
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Re: transformers with more burning justice?

Postby Blitz krieg » Tue Feb 07, 2012 2:23 am

i also borrowed a few lines from brave king gaogaigar/final for optimus primes lines and the words magnus tells him through their shared mental/spark link as brothers.

also i borrowed a scene from gurren laggan episode 8 for that scene where megatron attempts to shoot primes head off with the back cannon

its the scnee where the gorrilla general thymilph attemps to blow gurren laggan up with his staff weapon and the gurren laggans hand aint even the slightest bit damaged from deflecting it
that was just way too good a scene to resist using and i ccan only imagine the shocked look on megatrons ugly face with optimus pulling it off at the time


im sure we have all seen that epic episode when it comes to the very great late kamina's final stand as he died came back from the dead temporarily and died again after avenging his death
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Re: transformers with more burning justice?

Postby Erailea » Tue Feb 07, 2012 9:24 am

A fanfic?

And, um... word processors are your friend.
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Re: transformers with more burning justice?

Postby Blitz krieg » Tue Feb 07, 2012 2:17 pm

not a fanfic

more a attempt on my part to eplore a transformers scene but with it being amped up with some burning justice to improve and enhnace the scene

a little bit of dbz here a little bit of brave king gaogaigar and gurren laggan there
i simply used this modiefied version of the scene from the 80's animated movie asa possible example of what it is i am trying to explore in the transformers mythos when it comes to said scee asa example being a attempt on myp art to inject a bit more hot blooded burning justice into tyhe transformers mythos

like i said i only wanted to use that storyline scene asa possioble example of what transformes might have been like way back in the day from day one if it was done more in the spirit of the epic gutsy hot blooded epic hero type of storyline sereis
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Re: transformers with more burning justice?

Postby RhA » Tue Feb 07, 2012 3:21 pm

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You know? I love the Alita manga. It's one of the very few I read, but it's not making sense in this context. Could you make your point in, say, one sentence?
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Re: transformers with more burning justice?

Postby Baneblade » Tue Feb 07, 2012 5:22 pm

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RhA wrote:You know? I love the Alita manga. It's one of the very few I read, but it's not making sense in this context. Could you make your point in, say, one sentence?



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