before i post the final piece up in Transtopia, i would really love some feedback and/or just general thoughts on my NemPrime fan character. She has been a work in progress for almost 2 decades <_<
Invidia Prima [Nemesis Prime]
Name: Invidia Prima [Nemesis Prime]
Faction: Renegade Decepticon Dissidents [RDD]
Subfaction: Dark Transformers
Function: Digital Alchemist [Zombie'con]
- STR: 09 -
- INT: 10 -
- SPD: 08 -
- END: 08 -
- RNK: 09 -
- CRG: 08 -
- FRP: 09 -
- SKL: 10 -
[History] A subfaction of Renegade Decepticon Dissidents sought to create a race of the next generation of Cybertronian not reliant on the Allspark to grant life but rather life restored - recycled from that of past deactivated or sparkless warriors into new ones, ready for the battle front. To be used and reused for as long as required.
Forming a Neo Shadow Alliance, these <i><b>Dark Transformers</b></i> combined forbidden arcane science, stolen temporal technologies with extraterrestrial bio-organic DNA to create what was to be the Primes' greatest 'Nemesis'.
[Profile] The first of ITs kind, a Dark Matrix was constructed to be a 'womb' from which bio-organic matter would be broken down into it's basic life elements. Nanocons would then replicate until self sustaining. The nanocons could then be transferred into a cyber-organic Laser Core that would be place with in a Cybertronian shell and begin the regeneration and reanimation process.
Utilizing subspace temporal fusion, the process was long and antagonizing for the newly formed and barley sentient proto-mass as each organic part was forced aged accelerated to its terminal point as a fuel source for the nanocons regeneration.
When IT arose, the bio-synth had only memories of pain and agony. Lashing out at any thing in sight as birth hunger began overriding rational and judgment, consuming all that lay in ITs path. Consuming all that IT could find at preternatural rate, the last auditable sounds registered were "kill the abomination" as remains of the fallen were ingested.
Leaving a trail of cybernetic corpses in ITs wake in what later would be referred to as Dark Tidings, the Autobot War Council fearing the Allspark would be contaminated & corroded by that which shall not be named cast it off planet and into the void of space. With the Allspark gone, Cybertron became a dead world; all life seemed wiped out. With nothing left to feed ITs hunger stasis lock was initiated., and dreams ? ...
** When freedom is the right of all sentient beings grows old and stale from action and deed seen twisted and shamed; only Nemesis remains. **
When the Autobot Matrix of Leadership was destroyed, the corrupted essence of Primus sought IT out. After what seemed like a millennia, IT was awake once again. Bonded by shared pain & rejection, reborn with all the memories and skills of past Matrix bearers. Choosing the 'SHE' persona, this /Nemesis Prime/ now finds herself self-sustaining and in search of something.. someone. A name whispered in shadows, scattered through time ... Bad Wolf.
[Powers | Abilities] Knowledge from those consumed allows Invidia Prima to sense the thoughts of most other Cybertronian's logic processors through an ever growing sub-spatial 'dead mind'. This can forge a mental bridge between her and her victim. Allowing her to take control of their mass/weight counter routines. Pushing them to there physical and psychological breaking points.
Nanocon technology allows the ability to developed legions of Zombie'con warriors from the remains of deceased or discarded Transformers. The Zombie'con nanites within are capable of almost unlimited regeneration by converting raw materials into a Dark Energon.
Access to the temporal technology used in her creation through the corrupted essence of Primus now residing within her matrix core allows Invidia Prima the ability to breach the dimensional space/time barrier.
++ Primary Weapon: Battle Blades concealed with in the side paneling of her alternate mode are capable of Heavy to Devastating Damage upon impact
++ Secondary Weapon: Ionic Displacer Rifle destabilizes molecular bonds between subjects substructure, melting and tearing apart from the inside out.
++ Defensive Measure: Enhanced armored plating; access to multiple tactics.
++ Skills: Cybertronian System Hacking (Cyber-path); Regeneration & replication.
[Alternate Mode] Viral infection of pre-programmed schematics resulted in a 'Drag Truck' vehicle type with assault capabilities. Can obtain speeds up to 250 mph. Exterior armor plating has been re-enforced to withstand temporal travel and thus can withstand even a direct blast from a Dark Matter Cannon.
[Weaknesses] Exo-struction is in a constant state of corrosion while ever present nanocon upgrades continue to destroy & repair the bio-organic components merging cyber-synaptic relays within making subject's own self repair system the source of constant pain. Strain on internal bio-organic circuitry and amount of energy require, subject cannot make more than one Zombie'con Laser Core every seven vorns.
~ nem
Then again, I've always been a fan of creepy things. 
Thanks 
"Invidia" is supposed to be a walking twisted horror show 
and yea, i need to fix the links, for some reason my FB links were not working 
... should be fixed now
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