Henry921 wrote:I'm actually quite in favor of the washed out look. It's very visually distinct.
But I also share Va'al's concern about the dialogue being hard to read, especially when the text is smaller. Did you script the panels beforehand or create them on the fly? Your text bubble design and usage is quite elegant, but the text is almost illegible when the letters get small enough.
Madeus Prime wrote:Wow, nice work!
Susha wrote:Madeus Prime wrote:Wow, nice work!
cheers
more soon I hope.
Madeus Prime wrote:Susha wrote:Madeus Prime wrote:Wow, nice work!
cheers
more soon I hope.
Good, if you need any help with the story or jokes you can come to me, since I technically started the trend of photcomics on Seibertron here
Again, fantastic work!
Va'al wrote:I don't think you need to change the type of dialogue, but rather make it shorter!
As I've said before, there's some really good exchanges, but too much text at times.
And don't listen to Madeus, he still doesn't proofread his own stuff.
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