The Energon Pub

Hey gang! Over the summer I wrote up a sci-fi short story and I'd like to share it all with you guys. Here are the first two parts:

Introduction
The Battle

Any comments/constructive criticism would be welcome. I'll be posting the succeeding chapters over the next three Sundays.

Ooookay, just in case anybody's interested, here's part 2, "Marooned"