A random drabble I've written
Posted:
Mon Nov 08, 2010 11:13 amby Universal Prime
Those hands, I can't forget those silly, delicate hands. Always spinning and dancing and cutting away, spinning and dancing and crushing away, twirling and whirling and warping around and away. I cannot fathom how to get away. Every time I close my eyes they come back. Any peace of mind I gain is lost within their image. No escape, I can’t escape, nothing can get me away from those dancing, enthusiastic, delicate mechanical hands and their diamond encrusted fingers.......
I've gotten the luck to have a literature Professor to review it, and this version is modified based on his critiques.
Re: A random drabble I've written
Posted:
Mon Nov 08, 2010 3:31 pmby Universal Prime
Counterpunch wrote:Context?
Someone going mad. This was written on impulse.
Re: A random drabble I've written
Posted:
Mon Nov 08, 2010 7:23 pmby JetOptimus23
Universal Prime wrote:Those hands, I can't forget those silly, delicate hands. Always spinning and dancing and cutting away, spinning and dancing and crushing away, twirling and whirling and warping around and away. I cannot fathom how to get away. Every time I close my eyes they come back. Any peace of mind I gain is lost within their image. No escape, I can’t escape, nothing can get me away from those dancing, enthusiastic, delicate mechanical hands and their diamond encrusted fingers.......
I've gotten the luck to have a literature Professor to review it, and this version is modified based on his critiques.
This is awesome, but also slightly creepy. Is this from personal experience?
