The Energon Pub

This was an experiment really, to try drawing animated style. Different from my usual. Not perfect, but I like the proportions. Broad in the shoulders, narrow at the waist. Like a swimmer or lightweight fighter, Since Screamer here is a flier, he should not be weighted down with a lot of mass.
Just my thought on it.

Looks awesome, but the right arm could use some work. The elbow perspective is totally wrong, and the hand looks like the palm is facing the viewer and the fingers are just bent all the way back.

Also, the right thigh should be ad big as the other, and the knee should overlap it,

Nice I see you trying more coloring. I like the face,looks like the cartoon version

Dispensor wrote:Looks awesome, but the right arm could use some work. The elbow perspective is totally wrong, and the hand looks like the palm is facing the viewer and the fingers are just bent all the way back.

Also, the right thigh should be ad big as the other, and the knee should overlap it,

Thanks for the tips. Very true, all of it. Its not perfect.

osiricon wrote:Nice I see you trying more coloring. I like the face,looks like the cartoon version

Yeah, trying is the key word . good, I was trying to get that animated look. Also like Namor, the submariner. Both are arrogant.

Dispensor wrote:Looks awesome, but the right arm could use some work. The elbow perspective is totally wrong, and the hand looks like the palm is facing the viewer and the fingers are just bent all the way back.

Also, the right thigh should be ad big as the other, and the knee should overlap it,

I probably should get someone to "proof read" my pencils

We learn from criticis,but I say this "those who can..do those who can't..criticize". I take the advice of those that can, and can do better than I.

Love the colouring, it reminds me of the old G1 Marvel comics covers, but with more variation in the colours used!

You've really captured Starscream in the face too, even if you had only shown the pencils, and not given a name, it would not have been hard to pick who it was.

Charger426 wrote:

Dispensor wrote:Looks awesome, but the right arm could use some work. The elbow perspective is totally wrong, and the hand looks like the palm is facing the viewer and the fingers are just bent all the way back.

Also, the right thigh should be ad big as the other, and the knee should overlap it,

Thanks for the tips. Very true, all of it. Its not perfect.

Yeah, but it's still damn good.

I want to say it's great, but I can't bring myself to like this animated style.

And that's not a insult to your work Charger, i've always liked your work, it's just this whole animated thing I just can't like.

looks awesome!

This is so cool.

good job. Looks better than the Jay-Lenoscream.