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Miedeval comic preview (updated!)

PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 8:40 pm
by ultimate jazz
Here's the cover and first page of the comic I'm working on, TransFormers: Days Forgotten. Trust me, It gets funny. And better.

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UPDATE! pages 2 and 3

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 11:22 pm
by Blitz Magnus
Wow, looking forward to this! Good start.

A suggestion would be to draw all this on blank white paper, so there would be no lines. Other than that, more color and this will be awesome!

PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 2:57 am
by GrimSqueaker
cute

PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 7:13 am
by ultimate jazz
well, can't do solid white because:
a) lines are more my style
b) I suck at drawing long straight lines for pannels

but, thx! and I will color when I'm done

PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 8:41 pm
by ultimate jazz
jazz aint a sword no more :grin:

MAKE MORE!!!

PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 7:20 am
by Ash
I love It!! make more!! .. .. wheelie is a wheelbarrow!!

PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 3:45 pm
by ultimate jazz
don't forget the full of crap part! :grin:
plus:
starscream = flying rock
soundwave = miedeval guitar
frenzy = guitar pick

More coming soon!

PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 3:53 pm
by Skullgrin140
lol, that looks pretty good. Keep it up man :D

PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 4:45 pm
by GrimSqueaker
Love that dialog