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Transformers WWII Comic: Updated Panzer Tank
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Mon Sep 24, 2007 5:24 pmby Charger426
A while ago inigirl was putting together a fanfic about Transformers during WWII
http://seibertron.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=15748&sid=Well I drew a couple ideas back then and I liked the idea so much it stayed in my head (like when you go swimming and water gets in your ear. No matter how much you shake your head you can feel it sloshing around the ol' auditory canal)
Anyway here a couple possible pages sketched out for the beginning.
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Page 5
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Mon Sep 24, 2007 5:30 pmby spiritofcat
Haha, great!
It's good to see the cocky leader get what's coming to him.
Puts me in mind of Starscream a bit...
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Mon Sep 24, 2007 7:18 pmby Cycrolus
Did you ever read my prequel story I wrote for her? This has stuck in my head too.
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Mon Sep 24, 2007 7:59 pmby Charger426
Cycrolus wrote:Did you ever read my prequel story I wrote for her? This has stuck in my head too.
Not yet. I'm going to check it out now. I'll get back to you in a bit.
I have at least 6 more pages of this outlined but no characters fleshed out. So I need to review that thread.
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Tue Sep 25, 2007 11:18 amby Cycrolus
She had actually made like 3 threads with differant topics. I asked her why she didn't combine them since there was varying interest in it but I don't know if she ever responded.
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 10:05 amby Charger426
Cycrolus wrote:She had actually made like 3 threads with differant topics. I asked her why she didn't combine them since there was varying interest in it but I don't know if she ever responded.
These forums are really getting popular. Had to dig way back to find the thread with the early sketches and character bios.
http://seibertron.com/forums/viewtopic. ... 8a58bc824fYou're right about the separate threads. Could you send me a link to your story?
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 11:44 amby Charger426
Page 3 added.
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 2:13 pmby Kanyon
Not sure if it's just my montor or what, but cant make out the lettering well on the 3rd page. >.<
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 2:21 pmby Charger426
It's a little light. I'll fix it up. Sorry.
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 3:00 pmby Sherade
I'm surprised I never clicked this. Great stuff.
As Dead Metal would say, THAT IS THE SEX!
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 7:13 pmby Charger426
Thanks. I updated with page 4. Not sure I'll continue due to the fact that this is mostly sketched. Does anybody think it matters. Should I take my time and refine and ink? Progress would be slower. Just my thoughts.
This page is now my least fav. Not laid out well. Probably because it was mostly exposition that needed to be addressed.
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 11:51 pmby Charger426
Page 5...Enter the Autobots.
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Thu Sep 27, 2007 11:31 amby Charger426
Possible cover art...
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Thu Sep 27, 2007 11:41 amby Venomous Prime
Is there a list of the characters and their alt modes yet?
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Thu Sep 27, 2007 11:53 amby Charger426
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Thu Sep 27, 2007 12:21 pmby Knight Hawk
how did i miss this. I love WW2 and transformers... there can be no better combination!
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Fri Sep 28, 2007 4:01 pmby Durgey
The character desighns make it difficult to tell who's who
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Fri Sep 28, 2007 9:28 pmby Charger426
Durge344 wrote:The character desighns make it difficult to tell who's who
Yep! this is very true. I'm just roughing out a possible beginning (I'd rather do it like this than write it out.)
Heck, none these guys have names or personalities at this point
(except for the little 'con.) All blank slates.
Feel free to contribute.
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Fri Oct 05, 2007 10:08 pmby Sherade
Hey, sorry if you feel invaded for me taking this liberty, but I tested coloring on your comic. I think my style fits good with yours.
But, I've got a big ego, so yeah. I thought you'd wanna see.
I can clean it up and stuff, but here's a rough.
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Sun Oct 07, 2007 11:40 pmby Night Raid
This shows promise for all kinds of awesomeness. *squeal of joy* I can't wait to see Sergeant Brown and/or StarFreedom!
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Mon Oct 08, 2007 10:56 amby Charger426
Thanks for the feedback. It's cool to get it!
Sherade wrote:Hey, sorry if you feel invaded for me taking this liberty, but I tested coloring on your comic. I think my style fits good with yours.
But, I've got a big ego, so yeah. I thought you'd wanna see.
I can clean it up and stuff, but here's a rough.
Thanks for the colors!! I get a kick outta seeing my stuff in color.
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Thu Oct 25, 2007 10:42 pmby Charger426
Here are some more colors with much thanks to evilratbat. He made my crummy pencils look good. I just fine tuned the lettering and borders with my mediocre photoshop skills (Does anybody know of a balloon and lettering tutorial?)
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Mon Oct 29, 2007 5:04 pmby Charger426
This started out as a quick sketch, not really the best, but I got carried away with the details. I find it relaxing
German Panzer Tank circa WWII (ignore the bot in the back, kinda fugly, I know
)
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Mon Oct 29, 2007 9:30 pmby 8 bit
This is looking awesome! The next "Evolutions" series!