The Energon Pub

Alright! Here's pg.1 of a little crossover idea I've been working on slowly but surely. Enjoy!

It looks like a neat idea. The page seems like it has two or three panels worth of comic action jammed into one panel though. It's difficult to tell what's going on just by looking at the picture. KITT seems to be floating there, though I imagine he's jumping out of the way. If that's the case, I'd imagine he'd be looking towards at least one of the Stunticons.

Devastator wrote:It looks like a neat idea. The page seems like it has two or three panels worth of comic action jammed into one panel though. It's difficult to tell what's going on just by looking at the picture. KITT seems to be floating there, though I imagine he's jumping out of the way. If that's the case, I'd imagine he'd be looking towards at least one of the Stunticons.

I see what you mean. It is a little congested. Future pages should be more dispersed, I just didn't do a whole lot of planning. It started as just a drawing, then it kinda became a comic.

I likey.

Except for the "Big M" comment, but thats just me.

You've used the wrong "course".

Panel looks great, but (as others have said), it's a bit cluttered, filled to the brim, packed with inoformation! Oh, and the minor spelling error...

The art looks great! I can't wait to see what you come up with later on... If you decide to continue the comic, of course!