"The Rise and Fall..." (Story Related)
Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 5:30 amThis is basicly the first part of the story.
I don't really want to get too far into it untill I have full permission from Shin and TGP but this is the beginning, basicly simplified in story form of how thigs start in the first issue/chapter.
This is maybe only 1 or 2 pages in a comic standpoint so it's only a tease but I hope that it shows that I have a good feel and care for these guys that's I'm writing about.
Hope it pans well.
Now...To the Beginning!
"The Rise and Fall..."
TFmaster's
MYTH WARS
Chapter 1
[You see a shadowy figure sitting in a Autobot holding cell like looks alot like G1 Megatron with a Collar on]
Random Security Bot : How are you doing in there today Decepti-creep?
[ Megatron sits Quietly in the dark with nothing but the Hate burnning from his Optics]
RSB: Yea, they're ganna be putting your Casis in Perminent Stasis lock tomarrow aren't they after they hold you accountable for your
Crimes you peice of Slag.
[Megatron doesn't respond but his head does a twitch]
RSB: Good thing they got you in that inhibater collar now to hold back the Galvatron Virus Unicron instilled in ya huh? Don't need you acting all Loco-bot on us now do we...?
[Megatron only shifts his head a little as to listen for the sound of a familure stomp comming from the distance and shifts his optics in content at the RSB]
[[A Door slides open...Optimus prime walks in with Hotrod in tow]]
Optimus: You can go now. I'd like a word with Megatron alone before we transfer him.
RSB: Yes Sir!! See you later Megatron! Woops...NOT! Hahahaha... [RSB exits]
[Optimus shakes head as Hotrod gives a smirk]
Op: Now Megatron I want to make sure that we're not ganna have any problems transfering you to your hearing. Your not ganna give us any problems are you?
Megs: no....I won't give you any problems...I'm looking forward to getting this over with.
Hot Rod: Don't even know why we're waisting our time asking...
O: Hot Rod..please...no need to instigate... Megatron, please stand up and place your hands through these bars.
[Megatron stands up and turns around and places his hands back through the bars]
Op: Hot Rod, you may now put the cluffs on him...
HR: With pleasure.[HR with bot hands on the cuffs goes to cuff Megatron] I've been waiting a long time for this....
[As HR goes to put the cuffs on Megatron he grabs HR's wrists and pulls him in tward the energy bars that encages him.HR's face is just barely at the burnning bars when Optimus pulls out his gun and points it at Megatron's head through the bars]
Op: That's enouph Megatron!
[Megatron lets go of Hotrod's wrists and hotrod falls back in a panic.]
[Op still pointing the gun at Megs head]
Op : Now DO NOT MOVE or ATTEMPT one thing or your head will be nothing bet particals when I'm done pulling this trigger.
[Megatron puts his hands back through the bars]
Megs: Well? What are you waiting for Welp? [Megatron says as he looks back at Hotrod with his own smirk while hotrod looking back at him angerly drops his hand away from a small scorch mark on his cheek.HR Put's the cuffs on him quickly this time.]
Optimus: Now keep your hands back Megatron. I'm dropping the energy grid. Hotrod keep your gun on him...
[HotRod Nervousely holds his gun up as Op drops the grid to transfer Megatron from his cell to his hearing]
[Megatron turns around and slowely walks up into the face of Optimus]
Megs: Don't get your wires in a Twist Prime...
[Megs turns and gets into the face of HR]
...I'm just playing with the Lad.
[[END]]
Well, let me know what you think so far and if you can really picture the story as it goes.
Do not mind minor details in diolog.That can be fixed...this is just to start off in the right track and build foundation. I can colaberate and fix or glitz up the diolog more later.
Also, keep in mind later on you will find out in a side story on earth, in one of Hotrod's Flashbacks he reveils that Megatron while under the maddening influence of the Galvatron virus that Unicron marked him with that he actually killed Kup in the heat of battle right before they capture him. (Actually stands on Hotrod's head grinding it into the ground to force him to look up as He takes his cannon and blasts off Kups head while holding him up by his neck with his other hand.)
TFM
I don't really want to get too far into it untill I have full permission from Shin and TGP but this is the beginning, basicly simplified in story form of how thigs start in the first issue/chapter.
This is maybe only 1 or 2 pages in a comic standpoint so it's only a tease but I hope that it shows that I have a good feel and care for these guys that's I'm writing about.
Hope it pans well.
Now...To the Beginning!
"The Rise and Fall..."
TFmaster's
MYTH WARS
Chapter 1
[You see a shadowy figure sitting in a Autobot holding cell like looks alot like G1 Megatron with a Collar on]
Random Security Bot : How are you doing in there today Decepti-creep?
[ Megatron sits Quietly in the dark with nothing but the Hate burnning from his Optics]
RSB: Yea, they're ganna be putting your Casis in Perminent Stasis lock tomarrow aren't they after they hold you accountable for your
Crimes you peice of Slag.
[Megatron doesn't respond but his head does a twitch]
RSB: Good thing they got you in that inhibater collar now to hold back the Galvatron Virus Unicron instilled in ya huh? Don't need you acting all Loco-bot on us now do we...?
[Megatron only shifts his head a little as to listen for the sound of a familure stomp comming from the distance and shifts his optics in content at the RSB]
[[A Door slides open...Optimus prime walks in with Hotrod in tow]]
Optimus: You can go now. I'd like a word with Megatron alone before we transfer him.
RSB: Yes Sir!! See you later Megatron! Woops...NOT! Hahahaha... [RSB exits]
[Optimus shakes head as Hotrod gives a smirk]
Op: Now Megatron I want to make sure that we're not ganna have any problems transfering you to your hearing. Your not ganna give us any problems are you?
Megs: no....I won't give you any problems...I'm looking forward to getting this over with.
Hot Rod: Don't even know why we're waisting our time asking...
O: Hot Rod..please...no need to instigate... Megatron, please stand up and place your hands through these bars.
[Megatron stands up and turns around and places his hands back through the bars]
Op: Hot Rod, you may now put the cluffs on him...
HR: With pleasure.[HR with bot hands on the cuffs goes to cuff Megatron] I've been waiting a long time for this....
[As HR goes to put the cuffs on Megatron he grabs HR's wrists and pulls him in tward the energy bars that encages him.HR's face is just barely at the burnning bars when Optimus pulls out his gun and points it at Megatron's head through the bars]
Op: That's enouph Megatron!
[Megatron lets go of Hotrod's wrists and hotrod falls back in a panic.]
[Op still pointing the gun at Megs head]
Op : Now DO NOT MOVE or ATTEMPT one thing or your head will be nothing bet particals when I'm done pulling this trigger.
[Megatron puts his hands back through the bars]
Megs: Well? What are you waiting for Welp? [Megatron says as he looks back at Hotrod with his own smirk while hotrod looking back at him angerly drops his hand away from a small scorch mark on his cheek.HR Put's the cuffs on him quickly this time.]
Optimus: Now keep your hands back Megatron. I'm dropping the energy grid. Hotrod keep your gun on him...
[HotRod Nervousely holds his gun up as Op drops the grid to transfer Megatron from his cell to his hearing]
[Megatron turns around and slowely walks up into the face of Optimus]
Megs: Don't get your wires in a Twist Prime...
[Megs turns and gets into the face of HR]
...I'm just playing with the Lad.
[[END]]
Well, let me know what you think so far and if you can really picture the story as it goes.
Do not mind minor details in diolog.That can be fixed...this is just to start off in the right track and build foundation. I can colaberate and fix or glitz up the diolog more later.
Also, keep in mind later on you will find out in a side story on earth, in one of Hotrod's Flashbacks he reveils that Megatron while under the maddening influence of the Galvatron virus that Unicron marked him with that he actually killed Kup in the heat of battle right before they capture him. (Actually stands on Hotrod's head grinding it into the ground to force him to look up as He takes his cannon and blasts off Kups head while holding him up by his neck with his other hand.)
TFM
I like the beginning. I can see the comic pages unfolding already. You could always end it with Megs and Ops becoming Gods like Unicron and Primus. 