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Sideswipe Comic: Update Page 1 Colored 10/01/07

PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2007 2:15 am
by Charger426
Haven't done any comic work in a while so I started practicing. This was done on normal printer paper so it was hard doing small details. Regular comic book board wont fit my scanner :sad: I have a bad habit of never following through on my comics when I try 'em. Nothing spectacular, but I plan on finishing this action sequence. Forgive the bad grammar in the first sentence, not my strong point.
UPDATE: PAGE 1 Colored 10/1/07
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PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2007 9:27 am
by Sonray
Well done, maybe you and i will have to collaborate one day?

PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:11 pm
by Charger426
Updated with page 2. :D

PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:17 pm
by Sonray
Charger426 wrote:Updated with page 2. :D


kickarse

PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:26 pm
by Charger426
Thanks, although I would have liked to draw the Lambo's side view better.

PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:28 pm
by Sonray
Charger426 wrote:Thanks, although I would have liked to draw the Lambo's side view better.


They are a hard shape to draw from memory or in general anyway. I could have helped ya with that though. :P

PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:34 pm
by Charger426
Sure. Good idea for your next pic :-? .
Some alt forms!

PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 4:51 pm
by Charger426
Page Three has now been added above. Might do two more only to finish out the action sequence and move on to a story with more plot. :-?

PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 4:57 pm
by Sonray
Charger426 wrote:Page Three has now been added above. Might do two more only to finish out the action sequence and move on to a story with more plot. :-?


Awesome as usuall, but thats not Screamer is it? Ah dont bother with boring plot sequences, just give us action! lol

PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 4:57 pm
by Venomous Prime
Well that was pretty awesome.

I liked page 3 with the cops

PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 5:18 pm
by Charger426
Venomous Prime wrote:Well that was pretty awesome.

I liked page 3 with the cops


Thanks. I wanted something in there that accents that they're among the humans, and it freaks them out when they see Transformers, even in alt mode. How often do you get to see jets chasing Lamborginis through the streets?

PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 5:26 pm
by Sonray
Charger426 wrote:
Venomous Prime wrote:Well that was pretty awesome.

I liked page 3 with the cops


Thanks. I wanted something in there that accents that they're among the humans, and it freaks them out when they see Transformers, even in alt mode. How often do you get to see jets chasing Lamborginis through the streets?


Every night in my wet dreams....



Did i type that out loud?

PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 5:42 pm
by Charger426
Sonray wrote:
Charger426 wrote:Page Three has now been added above. Might do two more only to finish out the action sequence and move on to a story with more plot. :-?


Awesome as usuall, but thats not Screamer is it?


Nah, thats the conehead Ramjet. Classics version.

PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 5:44 pm
by Sonray
Charger426 wrote:
Sonray wrote:
Charger426 wrote:Page Three has now been added above. Might do two more only to finish out the action sequence and move on to a story with more plot. :-?


Awesome as usuall, but thats not Screamer is it?


Nah, thats the conehead Ramjet. Classics version.


Ahh, my bad. Im not familiar with the toy cos i dont own one :( :sad: :sad: :sad: :sad: :sad: :sad:

PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 5:50 pm
by Charger426
Thats ok. Seibertron.com here has a hge bunch of toy pics with multiple angles. I use it a lot for the TF's I dont own. You could lose hours browsing through them.

PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 5:52 pm
by Sonray
Charger426 wrote:Thats ok. Seibertron.com here has a hge bunch of toy pics with multiple angles. I use it a lot for the TF's I dont own. You could lose hours browsing through them.


I try not to cos then i end up wanting them which means more financial problems. :P

PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 6:03 pm
by Sunstar
Looks good.

PostPosted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 10:12 pm
by Charger426
Thanks! This is actually going to lead to something more of a story. But I need help. I need a Transformers History consultant. My own knowledge is lacking in the areas of past on Cybertron. :oops:
I'd appreciate the help.

PostPosted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 12:00 am
by Wheeljack-S70
welp, I can't help you much about the history of cybertron. I don't even know much about the history of my planet. and according to some people in this country, they think it's only 6000 years old. that's it. 6,718,131,949 people on the planet all come from two people 6000 years ago. huh? also I'm strictly a Gee-One-r and I think most of the history was made up episode to episode.

I will say this though. I like those cops. I hope they stay as part of the story. people always get looked over when we draw robots. but you came up with some characters that are funny and believable. nice work. :)

PostPosted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 1:27 am
by Charger426
Thanks alot. Means a lot to me to hear that. Had a couple others mention the cops too. Didn't see that reaction to them coming.
I just need to write in an O.C. who fought along side of Kup, and I want to develope a back story that fits into Transformers continuity (thats a mouthful :D )

PostPosted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 7:49 am
by Sonray
I cant really help with the history lessons, since my knowledge of TF history sucks. If you ever need someone to help out with the art though im willing to help and you know im awesome. :P


BACK IN YOUR HOLE EGO!

PostPosted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 6:38 pm
by Charger426
Decided to see what page one would look like in color.
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