June darby in KP marissa's outfit

obvious critiques would be "bad coloring" and "inaccurate shirt" but does the idea look solid?
http://combatkaiser.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d416cri
http://combatkaiser.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d416cri
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