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twin bio

PostPosted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 5:11 pm
by Nightwarp
dose anyone know how to write a bio for spark twins?
since i love to write one for them

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 5:14 pm
by Redimus
Same way you write any other bio I would have thought.

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 6:13 pm
by Psychout
Redimus the ever helpful. :roll: :P

Id guess something along Reflector's lines would work best, or a Borg-esque hivemind?

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 6:25 pm
by Archanubis
Or something like Magmatron

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 6:39 pm
by Redimus
Psychout wrote:Redimus the ever helpful. :roll: :P


Hey, not everything I post can be a pure brown nugget of stinking genious!

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 6:49 pm
by Absolute Zero
Do they have seperate personalities and their own sparks that split some how, like identical twins, or is one essentially a drone to the other without a spark of it's own?

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 8:12 pm
by Loki God Of Mischief
Without knowing what you meant by twin it's hard to help you out OP. If you meant twins like Sideswipe and Sunstreaker write them as brothers with the twin connection. If you meant like what AZ wrote above me approach it liek that.

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:20 am
by Me, Grimlock!
Fearless Echoes wrote:
Psychout wrote:Redimus the ever helpful. :roll: :P


Hey, not everything I post can be a pure brown nugget of stinking genious!


I thought it was pretty spot on, what with the info we're given.

But, as Merc sed, without knowing any details, it's a little tough to figure out. You haven't given us any details on their connection or how they feel about each other.

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 5:56 pm
by Nightwarp
sorry i was typing fast and didnt think at the time and i didnt think that their personalities were need since they dont have must of one.

anyway they are spark twins like sideswipe and sunstreaker excepted on the cons side.
well their personalities at the moment are that the white one is the prankster one and the dark one is well more or less like a con.

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 5:58 pm
by Loki God Of Mischief
Nightwarp wrote:sorry i was typing fast and didnt think at the time and i didnt think that their personalities were need since they dont have must of one.

anyway they are spark twins like sideswipe and sunstreaker excepted on the cons side.
well their personalities at the moment are that the white one is the prankster one and the dark one is well more or less like a con.


The Prankster is an attention whore and the Violent one is quiet and subdued, very much a professional soldier. They constantly bicker back and forth because their personalities are so far apart. However if either one of them takes any form of damage during battle the other one will fly off into a murderous rage abandoning their normal personality traits. Family is family after all. That's how I'd probably write them, but that's just me.

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 6:07 pm
by Absolute Zero
Write them as you'd write fleshie siblings. Merc's idea is good. I'd go with them having a intense rivalry too, where one has to one up the other. The prankster one would probably initiate most of the arguements.

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 6:08 pm
by Tammuz
basically rip off legolas (killer) and gimli (prankster)

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 6:12 pm
by Nightwarp
you know personally i thought the prankster would be the quiet one and the dark one just Violent but not to his twin.

and who and who tammuz?

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 6:14 pm
by Loki God Of Mischief
Nightwarp wrote:you know personally i thought the prankster would be the quiet one and the dark one just Violent but not to his twin.

and who and who tammuz?


That works too, and they're your characters so write them however you want. We're just giving suggestions. ;)

Tammuz is talking about two of the main characters from Lord of the Rings. Legolas is the elf and Gimli is the dwarf. What she said makes more since if you know that.

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 6:22 pm
by Nightwarp
Merc With A Mouth wrote:
Nightwarp wrote:you know personally i thought the prankster would be the quiet one and the dark one just Violent but not to his twin.

and who and who tammuz?


That works too, and they're your characters so write them however you want. We're just giving suggestions. ;)

Tammuz is talking about two of the main characters from Lord of the Rings. Legolas is the elf and Gimli is the dwarf. What she said makes more since if you know that.

oh right never seen or read lord of the rings. and that is why made this for, for some suggestions on how to write bios for twins. course i dont have must of a personality for both of them yet.

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 6:26 pm
by Absolute Zero
Nightwarp wrote:
Merc With A Mouth wrote:
Nightwarp wrote:you know personally i thought the prankster would be the quiet one and the dark one just Violent but not to his twin.

and who and who tammuz?


That works too, and they're your characters so write them however you want. We're just giving suggestions. ;)

Tammuz is talking about two of the main characters from Lord of the Rings. Legolas is the elf and Gimli is the dwarf. What she said makes more since if you know that.

oh right never seen or read lord of the rings. and that is why made this for, for some suggestions on how to write bios for twins. course i dont have must of a personality for both of them yet.


Are they brothers, sisters, or a brother and sister?

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 6:28 pm
by Tammuz
NONE of my characters started out with much personality, it was only through interactions with other peoples characters that they started being three dimensional, and thus giving my team a bit of a history, which gives a little more depth to my team it's ethos and the new characters brought in to replace others deaths.

so yeah, it's only through interaction with other characters that you build character.

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 6:35 pm
by Nightwarp
Absolute Zero wrote:Are they brothers, sisters, or a brother and sister?

they are brothers. and the violent one likes to brag about stuff. and is it all right to put them as teen jets?

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 9:46 pm
by Absolute Zero
Nightwarp wrote:
Absolute Zero wrote:Are they brothers, sisters, or a brother and sister?

they are brothers. and the violent one likes to brag about stuff. and is it all right to put them as teen jets?


Yeah. They're your characters. You can do what you want to/with them.

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 1:51 am
by Me, Grimlock!
Maybe they hate each other and would rather see each other dead except that their sparks are connected in such a way that if one dies the other one feels constant physical pain.

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:06 am
by Redimus
Tammuz wrote:basically rip off legolas (killer) and gimli (prankster)


That'd be a great idea, if it werent for the fact you'd have to have read the LotR Trilogy, which I can tell you as someone who has read it, is a horrible stodgey aweful read that never ends.

The films arnt much easier to to enjoy...

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:18 am
by Loki God Of Mischief
Fearless Echoes wrote:
Tammuz wrote:basically rip off legolas (killer) and gimli (prankster)


That'd be a great idea, if it werent for the fact you'd have to have read the LotR Trilogy, which I can tell you as someone who has read it, is a horrible stodgey aweful read that never ends.

The films arnt much easier to to enjoy...


I read your post and this broke though my window and hit me in the head. It's draining my blood out and replacing it with pure RRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:24 am
by Redimus
I dotn have no truck with that lantern rubbish.

And Tolkin's writings are painful to read. FACT.

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:27 am
by Loki God Of Mischief
7/10
Would rage again.

Re: twin bio

PostPosted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:29 am
by Redimus
Merc With A Mouth wrote:7/10
Would rage again.


Yey, that's the best review one of my posts has gained in months!