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TRANSFORMERS MOSAIC: DECEPTION

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 2:01 am
by Richter
The Universe of the Transformers is vast, and populated by many characters. Their universe is a large tapestry, made up of the stories and points of view of countless experiences that serve the larger whole.
These are some of those stories. This is:
It should be noted that this project is not in any way officially affiliated with either IDW Publishing or Hasbro. They're just some short stories crafted by your fellow Transformers enthusiasts.
That being said, everyone is welcome to leave comments and whatnot regarding the posted stories. Just bear in mind that no one has been paid for this work. These stories are the result of people taking the time out of their busy days to contribute to a universe they love. This piece is called
"Deception", by
DJC

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 2:46 am
by Dead Metal
Awesome!
In witch universe does this play?

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 4:25 am
by Deadpool.
note that It's not in continuity.
I think it's set in the Jap manga continuity, coz Guiltor only existed in the Japanse manga.

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 4:57 am
by Dead Metal
OH OK.

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 6:29 am
by Duke of Luns
I did not see that coming. I knew Guiltor was coming soon, but not today....
I wanna know what happens next!!!! Can Mosaic do sequals?
One last thing, I do wish Guiltor wasnt' so shadowy, and it looks like he has a mouth like the original sketch suggested, but it's hard to tell. I hope not, cause I didn't really like the original face, but this is one of the coolest Mosaic's yet!

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 5:52 pm
by Dclone Soundwave
Guiltor was the fusion of Convoy & Megatron, right? Awesome. Love it. Just love it.

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 5:55 pm
by Liege Evilmus
That seemed alot longer than it was.
That very much isn't a bad thing though!

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 6:18 pm
by i_amtrunks
Nice to have some Earth time units instead of Nanoclicks, cycles and the rest.
Poor Brawn.

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 6:25 pm
by Sentinel Pax
Ruh-Roh.

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 6:31 pm
by 1337W422102
I'm not a big fan of the whole 'evil Optimus' thing. This strip was kind of hard to follow due to the positioning of the text/panels, and the 'The End?!' with the question mark was overly clichéd.
Not my favourite Mosaic, but I still want more. Moar!!

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 6:49 pm
by xxaMaxx
Duke of Luns wrote:I did not see that coming. I knew Guiltor was coming soon, but not today....
I wanna know what happens next!!!! Can Mosaic do sequals?
One last thing, I do wish Guiltor wasnt' so shadowy, and it looks like he has a mouth like the original sketch suggested, but it's hard to tell. I hope not, cause I didn't really like the original face, but this is one of the coolest Mosaic's yet!
I would say this strip was a little too dark altogether. It's hard to make out some of the fantastic artwork underneath.
I loved the premise, and am amazed that so much was packed in. Bravo!

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 6:51 pm
by Tigertrack
What are you talking about poor Brawn. Brawn pwns Guiltor!

That was fun and different.

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 6:58 pm
by Richter
Thanks guys.
I'm pretty sure that this piece is part of a larger story that DJC is working on.
It's good to see that even though some of you didn't like this piece, you still want more

So more you shall have, perhaps more than you're asking for


Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 6:58 pm
by craggy
Guiltor? I am ignorant. Seems like Bizarro Prime.
Not nearly as funny as if he were Quiltor.
Still, Brawn will be fine as long as he protects his Achilles Shoulder.

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 7:20 pm
by Goribus
craggy wrote:Guiltor? I am ignorant. Seems like Bizarro Prime.
Not nearly as funny as if he were Quiltor.
Still, Brawn will be fine as long as he protects his Achilles Shoulder.
Guiltor was made as a fusion between the original Convoy and Megatron. He was just an empty shell created by the Quintessans to assassinate Galvatron and Rodimus as well as destroy the Autobot and Decepticon factions. He was given life by Starscream's ghost who animated Guiltor. It remains to be seen if this Guiltor is the same as the manga Guiltor. But overall it was an awesome story. I hope Guiltor gets more time spent on him in the future.

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 7:32 pm
by Autobot Jazz
Woah

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 7:34 pm
by Great Atlas
Very Nice!!

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 8:05 pm
by Brakethrough
Brawn'll just pick him up and toss him into orbit. That's how Brawn rolls.

Posted:
Mon Sep 10, 2007 9:18 pm
by rodimus primal118
wow!optimus prime and megatron combined!what a great a idea!

Posted:
Tue Sep 11, 2007 3:25 am
by hinomars19
Where can I get more info on this manga with Guiltor you're all talking about? I never knew such a thing existed!!
any help would be appriciated^^

Posted:
Tue Sep 11, 2007 7:25 am
by Prime Evil
Info here

Posted:
Tue Sep 11, 2007 7:25 am
by Duke of Luns
hinomars19 wrote:Where can I get more info on this manga with Guiltor you're all talking about? I never knew such a thing existed!!
any help would be appriciated^^
I have a link under my sig. Exactly the reason why I have yet to change my sig, because Guiltor must be spread throughout the entire interweb until Hasbro or Takara makes a figure of him. He could be bigger than Scourge(Rid), cause he ain't just a dumb black repaint.
LONG LIVE GUITOR!!!!!!What are you talking about poor Brawn. Brawn pwns Guiltor!
Brawn'll just pick him up and toss him into orbit. That's how Brawn rolls.
No way, Brawn may be tough, and he may be able to go toe-to-toe with Megatron, but he would never be able to beat Megatron. And Guiltor has the best bits from both Prime and Megs, so there's no contest.
Thanks guys.
I'm pretty sure that this piece is part of a larger story that DJC is working on.
It's good to see that even though some of you didn't like this piece, you still want more
So more you shall have, perhaps more than you're asking for
We do need more Guiltor. This is only his second(I don't care if it is unofficial) appearance since the original manga.
And I am playing up the "fanboy" approach, but since I am seibertron.com's self proclaimed Guiltor fan, it's only natural

.

Posted:
Tue Sep 11, 2007 9:42 am
by Novacron
Very liberal use of shading. I can't really tell what's going on in some panels. I'd like to see an uncolored version too...
My criticism is meant to be constructive, I still love all the Mosaics and kudos to all the contributors.

Posted:
Tue Sep 11, 2007 10:27 am
by Ramrider
Excellent stuff, and I'd love to see where DJC takes this in future. I agree with some of the others, though, regarding the shading. I think it's well done, but could do with being a little lighter, so it's not obscuring most of the artwork, which (from what we can see) is great.

Posted:
Tue Sep 11, 2007 11:38 am
by darth reven
cool