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Transformers: Mosaic: Symmetry

PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 10:27 pm
by i_amtrunks
The Universe of the Transformers is vast, and populated by many characters. Their universe is a large tapestry, made up of the stories and points of view of countless experiences that serve the larger whole.

These are some of those stories. This is:


It should be noted that while this project has been recognized by IDW Publishing and Hasbro, none of the works presented have been commissioned or solicited by either company. The stories are not official canon, except where noted.
These stories are the result of Transformers enthusiasts taking the time out of their busy days to contribute to a universe they love.
No one has been paid for the production of these stories.

This piece is titled ”Symmetry”. Story by Ezekiel (Jazzeke) Navarro, Art by Matthew (Cyber-kun) Ingraham, Letters by Bernie (Blee) Lee.


Please post your comments in this thread.

Re: Transformers: Mosaic: Symmetry

PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 10:43 pm
by Wheelimus Prime
*cryes* b eutaful *sniffs*

ok enough with the mushy stuff from me
bring on more

Re: Transformers: Mosaic: Symmetry

PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 10:52 pm
by Autobot Jazz
Nice, I always wondered what Primal was thinking about meeting Prime & waht he would say

Re: Transformers: Mosaic: Symmetry

PostPosted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 11:12 pm
by DISCHARGE
I love the pencils.
Excellent!

Re: Transformers: Mosaic: Symmetry

PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 12:15 am
by SavageCam
Great. Just great. :APPLAUSE: :APPLAUSE: :APPLAUSE:

Re: Transformers: Mosaic: Symmetry

PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 2:07 am
by mechajol
Autobot Jazz wrote:Nice, I always wondered what Primal was thinking about meeting Prime & waht he would say


"mUnKy n0t tRuKk!!!"

Re: Transformers: Mosaic: Symmetry

PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 6:04 am
by Lord T
I like how you made it WWI Prime. This is a poignant and ironic mosaic because Primal eventually becomes the biggest cybertronian hero.

Re: Transformers: Mosaic: Symmetry

PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 6:53 am
by Relic Dinobot
Awesome. Plain, simple awesome. :APPLAUSE:

Re: Transformers: Mosaic: Symmetry

PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 6:56 am
by bluecatcinema
I like how it described the G1 and Dreamwave origins as "conflicting source material". :grin:

Re: Transformers: Mosaic: Symmetry

PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 7:36 am
by Menbailee
Nicely done! I also appreciated War Within Prime, since it's what he'd logically appear as, even if it conflicts with what we saw in BW. The pencil art also works in favor of the comic when it depicts a moment like this.

Y'know what I'd enjoy seeing? Optimus Prime's thoughts at that moment! With a title like "Symmetry," you can even get away with re-using some of the artwork. Prime, after all, hasn't won the war yet. I wonder what he would see in the eyes of this different Optimus seen at the brink of consciousness.

Re: Transformers: Mosaic: Symmetry

PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 9:35 am
by Liege Evilmus
That was realy realy good!

I love the art work(the detailing under the foot was a nice extra mile).

I love that you included both his origins too, just simply admitting that facts have been muddled makes the conflicting story that much easier to swallow.

I realy like how deep you dove into Primal, the guy was always one to ponder, as well as prone to bouts of guilt, and you did a great job of capturing that.

I like it!

Re: Transformers: Mosaic: Symmetry

PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 12:39 pm
by Autobot Snake Eyes
nice. i dont think that episode of bw really showed how amazed primal would be to see op.
Bring on more.

Re: Transformers: Mosaic: Symmetry

PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 10:55 pm
by Head Shot
This is the ONLY mosaic I have liked so far. Not kidding. I've thought of every single other mosaic to be fan wank or a random side story that isn't even long enough to describe anything. This on the other hand has enough dialogue and the background for this "piece of story" is already pretty established.