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Transformers Mosaic: "The Recruit"

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 12:23 am
by i_amtrunks
The Universe of the Transformers is vast, and populated by many characters. Their universe is a large tapestry, made up of the stories and points of view of countless experiences that serve the larger whole.

These are some of those stories. This is:


It should be noted that while this project has been recognized by IDW Publishing and Hasbro, none of the works presented have been commissioned or solicited by either company. The stories are not official canon, except where noted.
These stories are the result of Transformers enthusiasts taking the time out of their busy days to contribute to a universe they love.
No one has been paid for the production of these stories.

”The Recruit,” Story and art by Andrew “Polystyleneman” Griffith



And a reminder to post all your comments, questions and critiques in this thread, or the Mosaic Staff may not respond.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 12:26 am
by First-Aid
Dude..

Is there more? Seems like there should be...

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 12:42 am
by Dclone Soundwave
It's supposed to end like that. It leads up to Bluestreak joining the Autobot cause because his home city had been destroyed by the Decepticons. What was the name now.....?

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 3:53 am
by darkqueen01
The ending does seem abrupt, but a nice little piece. Artwork is GORGEOUS! Why is every word capitalized, tho? Other than that... awesome!

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 6:44 am
by olokin
Great art here. The coloring is superb.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 8:03 am
by woosh
Cool, but confusing. I still don't know who is who on each pic.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 8:16 am
by Jazzz
I always liked the origin of Bluestreak. its good to see such a great mosaic about it.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 9:00 am
by E.P.Y.A.R.M.S.
The art for this one was great, but I felt the writing was a bit flat and bland.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 9:08 am
by Senor Hugo
I dunno, the art is great on this one. But the dialog seems really rigid and cliche. It really just seemed tacked on as an afterthought to the art.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 10:06 am
by Orion_Prime48
WOW all I can say is wow great work

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 10:21 am
by First Gen
Art and Colors: A+ Story: C-

Didn't sound like Prowl to me and isn't Bluestreak blue?

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 11:28 am
by Tigertrack
Looks very nice. Is Bluestreak 'mowing the lawn'?

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 2:50 pm
by Dclone Soundwave
woosh wrote:Cool, but confusing. I still don't know who is who on each pic.


Really? Well, to make it easy, Prowl has missiles in his missilae launchers, Bluestreak doesn't. Plus, Bluestreak has a red torso.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 3:07 pm
by First-Aid
darkqueen01 wrote:The ending does seem abrupt, but a nice little piece. Artwork is GORGEOUS! Why is every word capitalized, tho? Other than that... awesome!



Dude...

Agreed.

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 5:27 pm
by i_like_starscream
Why are Bluestreak's missle launchers smoking? Is he passing gas? :D

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 5:57 pm
by soundwave13c
very nice! blustreak has been one of my favorite characters :D

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 6:49 pm
by Sideshow Sideswipe
wow - really impressive!

Re: Transformers Mosaic:

PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 7:14 pm
by 1337W422102
Sweet. I'm glad they made a Bluestreak one, he's one of my favourite characters. I hope he gets his own Universe figure repaint of the Prowl mould!