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Transformers Mosaic: "Unknown Soldier."

PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 3:06 am
by Richter
The Universe of the Transformers is vast, and populated by many characters. Their universe is a large tapestry, made up of the stories and points of view of countless experiences that serve the larger whole.

These are some of those stories. This is:
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It should be noted that while this project has been recognized by IDW Publishing and Hasbro, none of the works presented have been commissioned or solicited by either company. The stories are not official canon, except where noted. These stories are the result of Transformers enthusiasts taking the time out of their busy days to contribute to a universe they love. No one has been paid for the production of these stories.

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UNKNOWN SOLDIER

Story and Art by;
Felipe Suanes http://bodoking.deviantart.com/

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Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Unknown Soldier."

PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 5:31 am
by Predaprince
Coming from a TF fan that is not a fan of the live-action films, this is a pretty good mosaic. The only thing that appears to be wrong is that the first sentence in the last panel should not start with the words "By now". "For now" or "But now" make more sense for the context and intent of that sentence.

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Unknown Soldier."

PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 2:28 pm
by T-Macksimus
Have to agree with you on the context of that sentence. The only other part that was unclear to me was Jazz's ability to remain unseen from his comrades. The panel with the weapon barrel almost lends to the idea that he may have re-formatted to a light artillery vehicle but that just doesn't seem like Jazz's style. It wouldn't be a stretch at all to see this story arc squeezed into the Movieverse. I know the Autobots wouldn't have let Jazz's remains be dumped into the Laurentian Abyss along with the 'Cons. This seems like as plausible a story as any for re-introducing him back into the ranks.
I say good job on this Mosaic. Nice art and nice story. :APPLAUSE:

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Unknown Soldier."

PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 2:42 pm
by Astronopolis
wow, the art looks good enough to be featured in official has/tak media! i really dont care much for the movie series, and the way jazz was killed and abandoned like that really set the tone for the way bay was interpreting the franchise for me. this definitely gives him some well deserved redemption.

although, the dialogue really needs some editing, and kind of ruins the peice. easy fix however! i see alot of these mosaics with awful spelling/grammar and it feels discouraging that such great storytelling gets marred by simple mistakes. GET SOMEONE TO PROOFREAD BEFORE YOU SUBMIT IT AS FINISHED!

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Unknown Soldier."

PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 2:44 pm
by Bumblevivisector
Not that there haven't been mosaics with superior art, but if I didn't know any better, I'd swear this was from some official movie tie-in manga. Very well done. Easily the best B&W mosaic I've seen.

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Unknown Soldier."

PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 2:50 pm
by Megatron Wolf
Great mosaic to bad its not cannon id love to see Jazz back. Only question i have after reading this is why didnt Prime or any of the other Autobots think about using their allspark shard on Jazz? Even if they thought he was dead why not just try? Id love to see the autobots reaction when Jazz tells them that the humans are smarter then they are.

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Unknown Soldier."

PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 3:32 pm
by BATTLEMASTER IIC
Jazz should have been brought back online instead of the twins.

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Unknown Soldier."

PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 4:57 pm
by Praxus Prime
I really like this one! Good job!

Re: Transformers Mosaic: "Unknown Soldier."

PostPosted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 5:37 pm
by zenosaurus_x
Oddly enough, my first thought was this was about the random guy who used a tank to shoot Megatron in ROTF.

But this is...yeah much cooler, jazz was pretty awesome, too bad he can't be...not...dead.