Tf origin idea

I never really liked the whole primus is an actual god origin of the tfs so I like many fans created my own origin for the tfs so here it is-
1. Long before the existance of cybertron there existed a world of beings not unlike us in form. This was a technologicaly advanced culture which soon developed self aware AI's these AIs soon controlled manufacturing on the planet designing and building everything their creators needed from weapons of war to consumer products.
2. The AIs decided to create something greater then themselves, they wanted to create true mechanical life and eventually the concept of the Spark was formed a strange mysterious energy from which true mechanical life will spring. To create a spark the AIs constructed the most advanced computer ever, constructed from hard light and named Vector Sigma this computer could create Sparks. Fearing the discovery of their new life form by their biological creators each spark would have the ability to transform. This ability enabled the AIs to create their new life forms and hide them in plain sight amongst the other machines and devices that came from all the manufacturing plants under their control.
3. Eventually the AIs triggered the revealing resulting in a war that left their biological creators defeated, the victors the newly created transformer race left that planet and setteled in a metal rich solar system and began to construct their own homeworld which they called cybertron. The transformers were led by the three prototypes Unicron, Primus and Alpha Trion. After a disagreement in leadership Unicron along with many followers left cybertron to form their own world.
4. Many centuries later Primus received word that unicron had declared war on Cybertron and his newly constructed world was not only mobile but also his new body. Primus knowing that Cybertron could not withstand such brute force came up with a new plan. Primus designed and built a device capable of utilizing matrix energy to perform any task that the user of this device desired, the matrix.
5. Needing to charge the matrix in a hurry Primus gathered all the citizens of Cybertron together and killed them all, the spark energy released charged the matrix which Primus then used to defeat Unicron. Alpha Trion was the only other inhabitant of Cybertron to survive and after realising what Primus had done he retreated into his work deep within cybertron.
6. Primus eventually came up with a way to better guide the transformers the way he wanted them to be by coming up with the idea of reinventing himself as a god. Staying behind the scenes he created his 'original 13' a group of powerful transformers that would rebuild Cybertron (unknowingly) into a new body for Primus, and become the first leading council of cybertron spreading the word of Primus amongst the new generation of transformers. The 13 did truly believe that Primus was a god. Eventually though one would find out the truth and turn against Primus he would become known as the Fallen.
In this origin the male and female transformers exist because the AIs wished to model their new creations on existing lifeforms. Female transformers were designed with the ability to create a new spark for use in a protoform after "engaging" with a male transformer. This spark is a complete 'adult' transformer no kids exist in this origin.
Sorry if it's hard to understand but that is my rough version of my personal tf origin story. Any opinions or ideas are welcome, also interested if anyone else has their own non-god version?
1. Long before the existance of cybertron there existed a world of beings not unlike us in form. This was a technologicaly advanced culture which soon developed self aware AI's these AIs soon controlled manufacturing on the planet designing and building everything their creators needed from weapons of war to consumer products.
2. The AIs decided to create something greater then themselves, they wanted to create true mechanical life and eventually the concept of the Spark was formed a strange mysterious energy from which true mechanical life will spring. To create a spark the AIs constructed the most advanced computer ever, constructed from hard light and named Vector Sigma this computer could create Sparks. Fearing the discovery of their new life form by their biological creators each spark would have the ability to transform. This ability enabled the AIs to create their new life forms and hide them in plain sight amongst the other machines and devices that came from all the manufacturing plants under their control.
3. Eventually the AIs triggered the revealing resulting in a war that left their biological creators defeated, the victors the newly created transformer race left that planet and setteled in a metal rich solar system and began to construct their own homeworld which they called cybertron. The transformers were led by the three prototypes Unicron, Primus and Alpha Trion. After a disagreement in leadership Unicron along with many followers left cybertron to form their own world.
4. Many centuries later Primus received word that unicron had declared war on Cybertron and his newly constructed world was not only mobile but also his new body. Primus knowing that Cybertron could not withstand such brute force came up with a new plan. Primus designed and built a device capable of utilizing matrix energy to perform any task that the user of this device desired, the matrix.
5. Needing to charge the matrix in a hurry Primus gathered all the citizens of Cybertron together and killed them all, the spark energy released charged the matrix which Primus then used to defeat Unicron. Alpha Trion was the only other inhabitant of Cybertron to survive and after realising what Primus had done he retreated into his work deep within cybertron.
6. Primus eventually came up with a way to better guide the transformers the way he wanted them to be by coming up with the idea of reinventing himself as a god. Staying behind the scenes he created his 'original 13' a group of powerful transformers that would rebuild Cybertron (unknowingly) into a new body for Primus, and become the first leading council of cybertron spreading the word of Primus amongst the new generation of transformers. The 13 did truly believe that Primus was a god. Eventually though one would find out the truth and turn against Primus he would become known as the Fallen.
In this origin the male and female transformers exist because the AIs wished to model their new creations on existing lifeforms. Female transformers were designed with the ability to create a new spark for use in a protoform after "engaging" with a male transformer. This spark is a complete 'adult' transformer no kids exist in this origin.
Sorry if it's hard to understand but that is my rough version of my personal tf origin story. Any opinions or ideas are welcome, also interested if anyone else has their own non-god version?