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The Original Treament for the first TF Movie

PostPosted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 5:09 am
by lodelco
http://www.tfw2005.com/boards/showpost. ... ostcount=1

Download's a little slow on my side so I'll comment later.

PostPosted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 7:12 am
by bumblebee77
Wow, that sucked.

PostPosted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 10:29 am
by Bumblebee-otch
that was like, ET mixed with the iron giant in the worst way possible. thank god they didn't go with kids- what would the movie been without meagan fox :D ??

so to everyone who thought the final version was bad, be glad it wasn't THAT.

PostPosted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 11:18 am
by lodelco
XDDD

Gawd, that treatment would have left me crying or sleeping at the theater.

PostPosted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 11:42 am
by CJH
Evidence to everyone that though the final film wasn't perfect... it could have been a lot worse!

This treatment turns the film into moral filled kids-flick with messages of global warming and nuclear weapons. Reads like a fanfic.

PostPosted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 7:10 pm
by ultra tron
Wow It's like a kid's movie from the mid 90's, Home Alone, the Little Giants, and Transormers. Yikes.
When was this script made?

PostPosted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 7:14 pm
by Sherade
I couldn't even read all of it.
It is that bad.

PostPosted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 7:46 pm
by PRiMESDESTiNY
:shock: :?

PostPosted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 7:50 pm
by AbsumZer0
As far as treatments go it doesn't sound much worse than what eventually came of it. Just remove the "Cybertron was once a lush organic planet"/Beast Machines backstory, replace all the little kid bits with American Pie adolescent comedy, replace the nukes with an all-powerful magic cube, and insert bits of Independence Day, Hackers, and Small Soldiers.

ultra tron wrote:Wow It's like a kid's movie from the mid 90's, Home Alone, the Little Giants, and Transormers. Yikes.
When was this script made?


It's not even a script, it's a treatment written by DeSanto to pitch to execs and try to get them interested in funding the idea. We've still yet to see Rogers "pure G1" script (and I wouldn't hold my breath).

PostPosted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 9:47 pm
by Sky Glory of Iacon
AbsumZer0 wrote:As far as treatments go it doesn't sound much worse than what eventually came of it. Just remove the "Cybertron was once a lush organic planet"/Beast Machines backstory, replace all the little kid bits with American Pie adolescent comedy, replace the nukes with an all-powerful magic cube, and insert bits of Independence Day, Hackers, and Small Soldiers.

ultra tron wrote:Wow It's like a kid's movie from the mid 90's, Home Alone, the Little Giants, and Transormers. Yikes.
When was this script made?


It's not even a script, it's a treatment written by DeSanto to pitch to execs and try to get them interested in funding the idea. We've still yet to see Rogers "pure G1" script (and I wouldn't hold my breath).


What this tells me is that thease guys didn't even try to even be g1 accurate to the story line. It read like a bad fanfiction yes but it was missing the same thing I was missing in the first movie...Joy.

PostPosted: Sat Oct 13, 2007 1:21 am
by Autobot032
That was terrible! No wonder the studios turned it down, and Michael Bay thought this all this was was a giant joke.

Pathetic. That wasn't even G1-esque.

That...was terrible. Disgusting.