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In the heat of battle Megatron notices nobody near Optimus Prime he transforms into jet mode and flys toward optimus Ironhide turns around an yells " Optimus look out." Flinging out his blade he turns around to catch Megatron square in the chest . Megatron breaks it off and stagers back while Optimus Readys his gun. Preparing to shoot Megatron swings out his ball and chain hitting Optimus in the head Knocking him into the next buliding. Destroying half his battle mask, Ironhide and Ratchet give Optimus cover fire to recover. Megatron gives Ratchet and Ironhide a dealing blow as he plows through them. "I'll rip out your optix" Megatron yells as he grabs optimus by his arm slinging him into the next buildng pinning him. "Surrender and maybe I'll spare these pathetic lifeforms," yells Megatron "Never" yells Prime pushing the remainder of the blade through Megatron's chest. He falls back as his eyes blink out. Blackout grabs the allspark unaware of its power he shoves it into his spark, as he thinks he has gained new power his chest glows fire red and starts leaking magma moments before his chest explodes. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Starscream yells as he Flys into space. "Optimus, he is escaping" "Let him go he will never make it to cybertron as badl damaged as he is." Little did the Autobots know Astrotrain was awaiting Starscream. "Astrotrain back to cybertron we will come back with more Decepticons and claim this world and destroy those who destroyied the cube you rule this day Autobrats but you will pay.

sounds good to me but i dont like the blackout being stupid part

Just trying to make it sound like more than one con died but i realy had this thing for brawl so i chose blackout I could of chose barricade but I thought he was cool to I choose my least favorite which happens to be Blackout its not that I don't like him but think of it like this Barricade couldn't have stole the cube from sam becuase he was the size of bumbblebee and they already fought and Barricade lost so improbable Blackout bassicly as big as Megatron Ka blam bumbblebee down cube took from Sam while he noticed Megs was down and out he decied he should become leader (CAUSE HE'S BIG) and shoved it in his chest. ALSO i was trying to make it sound like if this was the real ending it would have sequel or two satisfied with my explanation or not

First of all, Cybertron was destroyed.

Second of all, Sam killing Megatron was awesome because he was the main character and therefore he has to be the one to save the day. It's also irony because he's so small. Also, the timing was perfect.


I'm sorry but what you've just described is just more robots pushing each other around, which there was too much of already. More story and less Michael Bay.



And third of all, it's not "should of ended". It's "should have ended." Trust me on this one. I'm a writer.

Not being grammar nazi, just helping you out.

Dark Zarak wrote:
And third of all, it's not "should of ended". It's "should have ended." Trust me on this one. I'm a writer.

Not being grammar nazi, just helping you out.

No need to be a writer to get that one right. Just need to have passed the third grade.

I seem to be hated on this website every time i make a forum it gets shot down and also cybertron was over run by cons and only some made it to earth the planets surface was Destroied also wasn't the first tf movie just bots and cons shooting and pushing each other you tell me

Dark Zarak wrote:And third of all, it's not "should of ended". It's "should have ended." Trust me on this one. I'm a writer.

Not being grammar nazi, just helping you out.

Oh, and punctuation really helps too.

You guys are ticing me off just trying to have an alternate ending but, NOOOOOOOOOOOO all you just want perfection and it just so happens that it was close too ten when I wrote this, and I didn't think puncuation was needed because all I was trying to do was give a good picture ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh by blood is boiling right know.

hey I liked ur story. It was interesting. Also to whoever said. Ceibertron was destroyed its not its more like its dead.or in a stAtus lock.

Saberspark model H. wrote:You guys are ticing me off just trying to have an alternate ending but, NOOOOOOOOOOOO all you just want perfection and it just so happens that it was close too ten when I wrote this, and I didn't think puncuation was needed because all I was trying to do was give a good picture ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh by blood is boiling right know.

Ah, don't let them get to you. I liked your ending, Astrotrain makes everything more awesome.

C'mon people if you want to correct someone's grammar, then send them a private message. No need to call them out in public and embarrass them

i can more see screamer doing that

Thank you I'm glad you liked it makes me feel better

Saberspark model H. wrote:Thank you I'm glad you liked it makes me feel better

Being nice to people makes them type better.

I love your ending, I know something that would make it more bad ass, Scorponok drills out of the ground and shoots and stuff and when starscream leaves he tries to grab on but falls to his death

Glory to

P.S
Try pressing the preview button and trying to make it a bit more readable, im not having ago at you but you won't get flamed for your typing if you do this!!!

Sorry but I thought your new ending sounded pretty terrible. Would we really have needed even more lines from the animated movie? Come on dude.

Saberspark model H. wrote:Thank you I'm glad you liked it makes me feel better

Eh I think of it this way.

The fighting part should have happened but not be the ending. The ending was just fine. I think the XBox 360 should have put the cube in his chest :p

lodelco wrote:

Saberspark model H. wrote:Thank you I'm glad you liked it makes me feel better

Being nice to people makes them type better.

i was using my ipod touch lmao...ya its hard to type on it....

crazy

Saberspark model H. wrote:I seem to be hated on this website every time i make a forum it gets shot down

You're not hated. Don't take other poeple's opinions as being "shot down". You have to take that if you are putting your ideas out into the world.

Saberspark model H. wrote:and also cybertron was over run by cons and only some made it to earth the planets surface was Destroied

Maybe I was wrong about that. I was under the impression that it was completely destroyed.

Saberspark model H. wrote:also wasn't the first tf movie just bots and cons shooting and pushing each other you tell me

Yes it was, but that doesn't mean this movie has to be. The final act of this movie was very confusing because of the sloppy editing. I was actually bored by the action. I liked having Sam do the killing because it was something new and different. Your idea is just more of the same.

Saberspark model H. wrote:You guys are ticing me off just trying to have an alternate ending but, NOOOOOOOOOOOO all you just want perfection and it just so happens that it was close too ten when I wrote this, and I didn't think puncuation was needed because all I was trying to do was give a good picture ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh by blood is boiling right know.

Punctuation is always needed. This is not a chat room and nobody likes having to decipher your posts. It's no big deal to use periods and captitolization between sentences. Just because they make you do it at school doesn't mean you can ignore any other time. This forum is populated with mostly teenagers and adults. We like to see easily readable posts.

Saberspark model H. wrote:I don't understand what your saying but if your saying i typed this for the animated movie obviously you never watched the second one.

No, he's saying that the 2007 movie had too many lines from the old animated movie, and that it doesn't need any more. I disagree with that by the way. The animated movie was a classic and having lines from it is funny.

Dark Zarak wrote:

Saberspark model H. wrote:I seem to be hated on this website every time i make a forum it gets shot down

You're not hated. Don't take other poeple's opinions as being "shot down". You have to take that if you are putting your ideas out into the world.

Saberspark model H. wrote:and also cybertron was over run by cons and only some made it to earth the planets surface was Destroied

Maybe I was wrong about that. I was under the impression that it was completely destroyed.

Saberspark model H. wrote:also wasn't the first tf movie just bots and cons shooting and pushing each other you tell me

Yes it was, but that doesn't mean this movie has to be. The final act of this movie was very confusing because of the sloppy editing. I was actually bored by the action. I liked having Sam do the killing because it was something new and different. Your idea is just more of the same.

Saberspark model H. wrote:You guys are ticing me off just trying to have an alternate ending but, NOOOOOOOOOOOO all you just want perfection and it just so happens that it was close too ten when I wrote this, and I didn't think puncuation was needed because all I was trying to do was give a good picture ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh by blood is boiling right know.

Punctuation is always needed. This is not a chat room and nobody likes having to decipher your posts. It's no big deal to use periods and captitolization between sentences. Just because they make you do it at school doesn't mean you can ignore any other time. This forum is populated with mostly teenagers and adults. We like to see easily readable posts.

Saberspark model H. wrote:I don't understand what your saying but if your saying i typed this for the animated movie obviously you never watched the second one.

No, he's saying that the 2007 movie had too many lines from the old animated movie, and that it doesn't need any more. I disagree with that by the way. The animated movie was a classic and having lines from it is funny.

As long as it doesn't have any of Wheelie's lines, i'm fine with that.

Dark Zarak you know the voice of reason can be very annoying sometimes not this time but to some other people it could be. I am sorry my ending sounded like a chat room typist writing. Like previosly stated I was writing this at a late hour after I had recently got home from and outing involving food which makes me tired when I add some computer usage. So I consider and accept my mistake and tip my hat to you my good sir. *snicker*

Saberspark model H. wrote:Dark Zarak you know the voice of reason can be very annoying sometimes not this time but to some other people it could be. I am sorry my ending sounded like a chat room typist writing. Like previosly stated I was writing this at a late hour after I had recently got home from and outing involving food which makes me tired when I add some computer usage. So I consider and accept my mistake and tip my hat to you my good sir. *snicker*

Theres no crying in Transformers.

Saberspark model H. wrote:Dark Zarak you know the voice of reason can be very annoying sometimes not this time but to some other people it could be. I am sorry my ending sounded like a chat room typist writing. Like previosly stated I was writing this at a late hour after I had recently got home from and outing involving food which makes me tired when I add some computer usage. So I consider and accept my mistake and tip my hat to you my good sir. *snicker*

You don't need to snicker at me. Yes I know I can be a bit of a dick sometimes, and my sig doesn't help that. But you are being a pain yourself sometimes with your angry faces and snickering. There's no need to get angry at the boards.

I got more positve reviews than negative so Ha ha not listening to you, and yes this is very imature but that is how i act when i get nagged at