how would u write a movie scene introducing the wreckers

here is how i would write a movie scene introducing the wreckers.
4 protoforms land near a zoo, a 5th one lands near a digsite.
1 of the protoforms scans a cheetah, another scans a gorrila, another scans a rhino,and another scans a lion . the 5th protoform scans a Trex fossil, an archeololigist hears a thumping noise, the archeololigist goes outside of his tent only to be greted by a techno organic T-rex, the t-rex than runs of.
a chetah, a rhino, a gorilla, and a lion are walking down the street, the traffic stops at a redlight, a driver looks over to the sidewalk seeing a group of animals, the image of the animals starts to fade a little like a hologram, the hologram dissapeirs revieling techno organic animals, the driver than drives off as fast as he can causing all sorts of chaos.goldbug and the other autobots drive sam and company to the meeting place from the first movie,meeting several techno oraganic animals and a techno organic t-rex they all transform. goldbug greats the cheetah "cheetor, long time no see". rachet greats the rhino one "rhinox? is that you?" and rhinox replies "rachet? i thout u got blown up at tigerpax?". optimus greats the gorilla one " pleasure to have you on earth apelinq." sam says to apelinq "who are you" apelinq says "i am apelinq, leader of the wreckers and these are my comrades, cheetor, rhinox, snarl, and grimlock. "we picked up optimises message that they were waiting." snarl says..... the movie continues from that.
4 protoforms land near a zoo, a 5th one lands near a digsite.
1 of the protoforms scans a cheetah, another scans a gorrila, another scans a rhino,and another scans a lion . the 5th protoform scans a Trex fossil, an archeololigist hears a thumping noise, the archeololigist goes outside of his tent only to be greted by a techno organic T-rex, the t-rex than runs of.
a chetah, a rhino, a gorilla, and a lion are walking down the street, the traffic stops at a redlight, a driver looks over to the sidewalk seeing a group of animals, the image of the animals starts to fade a little like a hologram, the hologram dissapeirs revieling techno organic animals, the driver than drives off as fast as he can causing all sorts of chaos.goldbug and the other autobots drive sam and company to the meeting place from the first movie,meeting several techno oraganic animals and a techno organic t-rex they all transform. goldbug greats the cheetah "cheetor, long time no see". rachet greats the rhino one "rhinox? is that you?" and rhinox replies "rachet? i thout u got blown up at tigerpax?". optimus greats the gorilla one " pleasure to have you on earth apelinq." sam says to apelinq "who are you" apelinq says "i am apelinq, leader of the wreckers and these are my comrades, cheetor, rhinox, snarl, and grimlock. "we picked up optimises message that they were waiting." snarl says..... the movie continues from that.