Transformers 3 Story suggestion

I'll suggest a story. *Please send me comments if the story is good or bad or just comments. Thank you.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A darker secret unfolds on why the fallen wants the sun harvester. The sun harvester can power the Allspark, which can give rise to many living forms, or give power to a great entity. At the dawn of the universe, a great entity known as Unicron was created. With his brother Primus. Unicron tried to conquer the universe, destroying all who defies him. He wants to be a god. But Primus stopped him. He defeated Unicron by snatching away his life source, the Allspark. So Primus formed to be Cybertron. He used the Allspark to create the First Cybertronians. So while venturing the universe for a lifeless Solar System, The Fallen met the weakening Unicron. The Fallen saw His floating remains. Unicron, Using the energy residue of the Allspark to live, mind- controlled the Fallen. So when The Fallen returned, he was different. He began destroying Solar System with or without life.
So the Fallen is gone, Only Megatron. While returning to their homebase, Unicron created a wormhole so he could talk to Megatron. Unicron wants the Allspark fragments to be taken by Megatron to revive him. In return, he will create an army for Megatron to lead and he will repair Megatron. But Megatron refused. So Unicron forced him and rebuilt him into Galvatron. Unicron created Megatron's new army,
including Blitzwing, The Combaticons, Cyclonus, Scourge, and the Sweeps.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A darker secret unfolds on why the fallen wants the sun harvester. The sun harvester can power the Allspark, which can give rise to many living forms, or give power to a great entity. At the dawn of the universe, a great entity known as Unicron was created. With his brother Primus. Unicron tried to conquer the universe, destroying all who defies him. He wants to be a god. But Primus stopped him. He defeated Unicron by snatching away his life source, the Allspark. So Primus formed to be Cybertron. He used the Allspark to create the First Cybertronians. So while venturing the universe for a lifeless Solar System, The Fallen met the weakening Unicron. The Fallen saw His floating remains. Unicron, Using the energy residue of the Allspark to live, mind- controlled the Fallen. So when The Fallen returned, he was different. He began destroying Solar System with or without life.
So the Fallen is gone, Only Megatron. While returning to their homebase, Unicron created a wormhole so he could talk to Megatron. Unicron wants the Allspark fragments to be taken by Megatron to revive him. In return, he will create an army for Megatron to lead and he will repair Megatron. But Megatron refused. So Unicron forced him and rebuilt him into Galvatron. Unicron created Megatron's new army,
including Blitzwing, The Combaticons, Cyclonus, Scourge, and the Sweeps.
