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Before The Apocalypse UPDATE: FINISHED

PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 5:31 pm
by Wheelimus Prime
Cybertron. Cybertron was a peaceful planet. There were busiling cities, famous monuments. Cybertron was the top empire in the galaxy. Then, a small faction, known as Decepticons rose, My brother, Megatron, chose to lead this army to conquer Cybertron. We held them off for thousands of years. No one could have predicted it, but the Decepticons resorted to bio-warfare.

" Megatron," said Soundwave," Name_Violation has something to show you." Megatron, Starscream, and Soundwave head down the corridors of Kaon.

" Soundwave tells me you have something i want to see," said Megatron.

" Yes, it is a new virus that should stop the Autobots once and for all," said Name_Violationm, holding a jar with a small computer chip in it.

" What does it do?" asked Starscream.

" Quiet you," said Megatron, hitting starscream.

" I don't even know why i bother," said Starscream, to himself

" I heard that," said Soundwave, adding it to his mental blackmail list.

' Well, it has to be implaneted into the Autobots main transmission line, Computron," said Name_Violation," then, it will automatically transmit the virus, causing the Autobots to shut down completely."

" Excelent, when can Starscream go and plant the chip?" said Megatron.

"What! Me, why do I have to do all the work?" moaned Starscream.

Iacon, Cybertron's capital

" So Prime tells me the Decepticons have slowed down their assualt plans," said Repair-Bay.

" Yep, infact they are retreating," replied General Wheelimus Prime.

" I wonder why, they usually never retreat," replied Repair-bay, slipping into bed.

" Well, i don't know, can't be good," Said Wheelimus Prime," Good night."
Iacon Command center, the next day

" Last night, we caught Ravage sneaking into the Computron Mainframe," said Rodimus Prime," We are unsure what he was doing, but we did see starscream flying off."

" This can't be good," said Wheelimus Prime.

Tristar's lair

" Huh, why are the decepticon's tresspassing on my terratory," said Tristar, walking out to Swindle," Why are you here?"

" I just want to make you an offer, see these new laser guided missles--" started Swindle.

" No, I--" interrupted Tristar.

" No? well how about these-" said Swindle, before Tristar blew his head off.

" What is that?" asked Tristar, watching a decaying transformer run down the road.

Iacon War room

" Who's the new guy?" asked Tracks, looking over at a shady Autobot.

" I don't know, but i don't like him," said Disruptor," You, what are you doing here?"

" Who, me?" asked the transformer.

" Yeah, you," said Disruptor," I don't like you."

" That's your problem," said the transformer. Disruptor runs into him, and the transformer pins him to the ground," The name is Doubledealer, and i suggest you stay out of my way."

Re: Before The Apocalypse

PostPosted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 9:34 pm
by Wheelimus Prime
Iacon research labs

" Wingz, have you gone over every part of the Computron mainframe?" asked Carriemus Prime.

" Yes, nothing seems wrong he--wait, what is that?" said Wingz, to herself, pulling out a chip from inside the computer," I think we have a problem, let me radio Optimus. Optimus? You read me---ahh!" said Carriemus, falling to the ground.

" Carriemus! Carriemus!" exclaimed Wingz, landing next to her," Medic! can anyone hear me?" Wingz falls to the ground, landing next to Carriemus Prime.

" Anyone here? we heard some screams!" yelled Prowl," Holy Primus, what happened here? We got two dead scientist, can--"

Autobot Council Halls

" We found three dead Autobots in the Computron Mainframe, two were scientists and the other was a secruity guard," said Rodimus Prime.

" The Decepticons must be behind, behind, this," said Nova Prime, stuttering.

" Yes, they must have put something in there that killed them," said Optimus," that must have been why we caught Ravage."

" But what is causing it?" asked Wheelimus Prime," it---"

" Optimus! we have two more dead!" yelled Ironhide.

Autopsy room

" What killed you two," said Repair-bay, two herself.

" Your talking to yourself again," said Red Alert, walking over to Wingz's body.

" I am not talking to myself," said Repair-bay," I'm talking to the body." Carriemus' arm starts to move slightly.

" Did you see that?"exclaimed Red Alert, looking over at Carriemus' body.

" Yes, I did," said Repair-bay, walking away slowly," Go get my gun and and a litter."

" Uh..." droned Red Alert.

" Now!" yelled Repair-bay, a rattling can be heard coming from one of the body cabinets, Carriemus starts to get up off the table.

" argh," droned Carriemus, in monotone.

" Duck!" yelled Red Alert, shooting at Carriemus.

"Grahh!" yelled Wingz, the two other bodies start breaking out of tthe cabinets.

" We are screwed!" said Red Alert, throwing the gun to Repair-bay.

Computron Mainframe

The large server platform starts change from a blue to a deep purple glow. The two transformers try to radio for help, but fall to the ground.

" You no longer control me," boomed computron," I am sentient."

Re: Before The Apocalypse

PostPosted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:29 am
by Wheelimus Prime
View over Cybertron

We soon tracked down the virus, but it was too late. It had grown sentience from learning our language. Cybertron would never be the same again. Enter: Before the Apocalypse.

The Smelting pool, Kaon

" Grahh," moaned a sombie.

" What was that?" asked Triggerhappy.

" I don't know, but we had better have this place in top shape before megatron gets here," said Counterpunch.

" How about Starcream," started Triggerhappy, walking to the other side of the pool," I love how he always trys to over throw Megatron, but it never works." Triggerhappy begins trying to unhook one of the doors to go back inside.

" I know, it's so--" started Counterpunch as a zombie tore his head off.

" Counterpunch?" said Triggerhappy, looking at the zombie.

" Arghh-grahh," moaned the zombie.

" I won't be taking this," said Triggerhappy. The top of the smelting pool can be seen, gunshots are heard as Triggerhappy screams in pain.

Iacon Council Hall

" What can we do?" asked Leo Prime," the planet has become infested with the virus, even some of the decepticons are dropping like flies." Footsteps can be heard, a shady transformer walks into the room.

" You want help," said the robot," then your going to need me."

" Who are you?" asked Optimus Prime.

" The name is Name_Violation," said Name_Violation," and I know how to kill these things."

" Well, how then?" asked Optimus Prime.

Re: Before The Apocalypse

PostPosted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 10:44 pm
by Wheelimus Prime
" You need to get to the core of the virus," said Name_Violation, sitting down in Wheelimus Prime's chair. Wheelimus leans on the wall, looking slightly annoyed at Name_Violation.

" And how...we to find the core, core of the virus?" asked Nova Prime.

" Yes, we don't even know how it started," said Wheelimus Prime, the lights of the complex flicker on and off for several seconds.

" what ever it is, it must have gain control of Cybertron's power grid" said Name_Violation. Repair-bay comes running into the room.

" They escaped!" said Repair-bay.

" They?" asked the group.

" Wingz and Carriemus," started Repair-bay," they got up, killed Red Alert and limped out. Then the two security guards broke out of the holding bins and ran out of the room as well."

" You mean, their dead bodies got up and walked out?" asked Optimus Prime.

" Are you okay?" asked Wheelimus Prime.

" Just a little banged up, I will be fine," said Repair-bay. shrieks of terror can be heard outside.

"The communications tower," said Name_Violation," we need to shut it down."

" How do you know?" asked Optimus Prime.

" Because, what esle could ravage have been doing there?" asked Name_Violation.

" I got this one," said Ironhide, shooting rockets at the building.

Computron Mainframe

" You think you can kill me?" moaned The Virus," it is too late."

Re: Before The Apocalypse UPDATE: FINISHED

PostPosted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 11:50 am
by Wingz
It's not very descriptive of area, but I love how fast paced it is =) Clever dialog, too :P I can't wait to read more =)

Zombie attack! :twisted: **tag teams Carrie**

Re: Before The Apocalypse UPDATE: FINISHED

PostPosted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 10:02 pm
by Wheelimus Prime
Wingz wrote:It's not very descriptive of area, but I love how fast paced it is =) Clever dialog, too :P I can't wait to read more =)

Zombie attack! :twisted: **tag teams Carrie**


i may put a halt on my novel and write 1 more, if i can find a way to make it work.

i could even explain how you two come back.