Diem Does A FanFic Thing

Hi all,
I don't normally share my scribblings with a crowd but I decided to go out on a limb here. Constructive criticism is appreciated! Non-constructive criticism isn't! Deconstructive criticism is meta!
http://foreignerdy.tumblr.com/post/79535679279/stories-about-heroes-part-1
I don't normally share my scribblings with a crowd but I decided to go out on a limb here. Constructive criticism is appreciated! Non-constructive criticism isn't! Deconstructive criticism is meta!
http://foreignerdy.tumblr.com/post/79535679279/stories-about-heroes-part-1