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News Credits: 156 · by **WhiteRabbit** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 1:06 am

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THE SECRET SHAME OF OPTIMUS PRIME

Story by:
Shaun “Jedi Flaherty” Flaherty http://jedi-flaherty.deviantart.com

Art by:
Ken Lecates

Colors by:
DarkA117

Letters by:
Lindsay “Neko” Smith http://transformergirl.deviantart.com

by **Predaprince** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:58 am

Horrible! That would never happen! Besides the secret shame of Optimus Prime is that he has prostate cancer!

:-x

by **Windsweeper** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 3:53 pm

Is that Actionmaster Optimus? Is it me or does the ending seem uncertain?

by **harvester** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 3:55 pm

Id hope that would never happen either but I thought it was funny. Made me laugh out loud =P

Who's the guy going back out? It almost looks like it could have been Dinobot [beast wars]

News Credits: 21 · by **dragons** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 4:33 pm

looks like bumblebee without his horns cybertron bumblebee, or it could be dinobot its toss up

News Credits: 8 · by **Megatron Wolf** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 4:51 pm

I dont know what to make of this. Id like to say that this would never happen but then again prime might not have always have acted the same. This could be when he just became leader. And i think thats Bumblebee. Dinobot wouldnt be around yet.

News Credits: 5 · by **--B--** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 5:30 pm

I'm assuming it's meant to be a random Autobot that bites it after going back to help the others, as opposed to BB or Dinobot.

Perhaps a decendant of Dinobot :-?

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by **Dreadwinglord** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 5:50 pm

Terrible

News Credits: 1 · by **Bumblebeast** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 5:59 pm

My respect for Prime is collasping.

News Credits: 3 · by **Samsonator** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:04 pm

so THAT'S where Magnus got it!

News Credits: 2 · by **Ultra Magnus** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:14 pm

Hey! That's my line!

:roll:

by **StarThunderWarp** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:00 pm

Bumper? Is that you? I thought Elita was Prime's secret shame

News Credits: 125 · by **Counterpunch** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 7:04 pm

Terrible.

News Credits: 5 · by **emeraldbeacon** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 9:21 pm

It seems terribly out of character for Optimus... I think the concept is definitely there, it just doesn't seem to be executed well enough to make it believable. Optimus simply *wouldn't* cut and run unless there were no other option... and we're not truly shown that's the case. Maybe if Prime were directing the evacuation of the cave, saving other Autobots, it would be acceptable. Maybe if the place truly seemed to be a war zone, seconds away from complete cave-in, it would be believable.

For the moment, though, it just seems... out of character.

by **Swiftpaw** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 11:30 pm

Comic is kinda eh over all.
But the look Ultra Magnus gives Prime for using his line is priceless.

by **Anubiz** » Tue Mar 03, 2009 1:54 am

Very Terrible.

by **Iron Prime** » Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:49 am

I'm not impressed. It's just too far out of character and the art isn't the best. I think CP might have said it best...

News Credits: 6 · by **Metroplex79** » Tue Mar 03, 2009 9:03 am

Meh.

I'm sure he has a more realistic shame than this.

The art reminds of those Big Looker books...Insecticon Attack
Anyone remember the art in the above book?

News Credits: 97 · by **Savage** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 2:19 am

Normally, I have nothing but praise for Mosaic, but I'm afraid this one falls a bit short. I like the idea, but the situation needs a bit of work before Prime can utter those lines without coming off as grossly out of character. As said, maybe if the place looked more like a warzone, and there were Decepticons everywhere and some dead Autobots on the ground. In short, good idea, execution needed work.

The art is iffy as well, could just be that the style isn't to my personal tastes though.

In the end, the typo is what really ruins this piece for me. The word is "collapsed" not "collasped". How'd that sneak past the edit?

by **harvester** » Wed Mar 04, 2009 11:01 am

They could have been inspired by what they saw in Transformers Animated, Optimus Prime does almost the same thing with Elita One and Sentinel Prime. That situation was a little more dire than here though.