Chaoslock wrote:Who is telling the story? My bet would be Springer or Blaster, but it isn't too clear.
Professor Smooth wrote:Awesome mosaic. Great story. Amazing art. Fits into an established continuity. But then you've got that last panel. "My friends gave their life..." It's one page long. Is that really too much to proofread before sending it out to however many thousands of people are going to read it?
JelZe GoldRabbit wrote:Professor Smooth wrote:Awesome mosaic. Great story. Amazing art. Fits into an established continuity. But then you've got that last panel. "My friends gave their life..." It's one page long. Is that really too much to proofread before sending it out to however many thousands of people are going to read it?
Hey, long time no see
And grammatically that sentence is correct by the way. Each friend only has one life, and the plural is already established with "friends" and "their". Plus, "their life" counts as one part of a sentence, and is plural in number because of "their".
Bah, I need to explain things in a less complicated manner...
JelZe GoldRabbit wrote:And grammatically that sentence is correct by the way. Each friend only has one life, and the plural is already established with "friends" and "their". Plus, "their life" counts as one part of a sentence, and is plural in number because of "their".
JelZe GoldRabbit wrote:Professor Smooth wrote:Awesome mosaic. Great story. Amazing art. Fits into an established continuity. But then you've got that last panel. "My friends gave their life..." It's one page long. Is that really too much to proofread before sending it out to however many thousands of people are going to read it?
Hey, long time no see
And grammatically that sentence is correct by the way. Each friend only has one life, and the plural is already established with "friends" and "their". Plus, "their life" counts as one part of a sentence, and is plural in number because of "their".
Bah, I need to explain things in a less complicated manner...
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