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Name: Dustspark
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Medical Engineer
Alt. mode: Armored Transport (something along the lines of a Rheinmetall Yak, for example)
Weapons: Tri-barreled heavy machine gun; Vibro-sword
Height: 28 ft. (8.54 m)
Quote: “Right! What’s yer problem?”

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 4
SPEED: 3
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 8
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 5
TECH SKILL: 9
CHARISMA: 5
RANK:

Profile:

An Autobot to the core, Dustspark has been serving honorably with his brethren since the very beginning of the conflict. Before the war, Dustspark was a respected engineer, known for dabbling in medical work and enjoying life’s simple pleasures. Not much has changed. He’s still an amiable, if grizzled, old ‘Bot, who enjoys his work and is the consummate “make do”-er. You’ll never find him complaining, even when he’s pinned down behind enemy lines with a queue of a half-dozen injured allies waiting to be repaired. He’ll be working away, patching them up as quickly as he can, grinning and joking the whole time. This can sometimes be disconcerting or annoying, but “Duster” doesn’t mean anything by it. He’s just happy to be doing his part, and whether that means tech work, medical work, or crushing some cranials, he puts a hundred-and-ten percent into it every time.

However, there is a darker side to the generally cheerful and easygoing ‘Bot. He rarely shows it, and its appearance is only extremely seldom triggered. However, those few Autobots who have seen it tend not to feel quite the same way about Dustspark afterwards; those Decepticons who do are often too dead to feel much of anything.

Abilities:

Subject is relatively slow in all forms. Maximum speed in alternate form is 50 mph, with a range of approximately 350 miles. Said alternate form is of an armored transport vehicle, containing enough room to house up to 4 creatures of human size, or one ton of cargo.

Subject has high strength and armor ratings. Armor is resistant to most average attack capabilities, though not impenetrable.

Subject’s main weapon is a heavy machine gun. The weapon has three barrels, which rotate as the weapon is fired. Energy is supplied through cut-resistant wires attached to subject’s back; ammunition is carried in a compartment attached to the weapon. Fires armor-piercing slugs at 300 rounds per minute, with a range of 1.5 miles (2.4 km). Subject is unable to move quickly while firing weapon, which attaches to his back when not in use.

Subject also proficient in the use of hand-weaponry, which he rarely employs, and long-range rifles, which he occasionally carries for longer field missions.

Subject also carries a vibro-tomahawk. The weapon is 9 feet long and the head vibrates very quickly when activated; this, combined with the durable material of the weapon, makes it very effective in close combat. Subject employs very basic, almost debased, forms of Metallikato in combat, though nowhere near to the ability of a true practitioner.

Subject’s avatar is that of a middle-aged male of Scandinavian descent, with short, reddish blonde hair and a medium-length, grizzly beard; it appears wearing combat boots, cargo pants, a black combat vest, a flak jacket, Kevlar gloves, and a brown baseball-style cap. Subject is said to carry a human weapon for the avatar’s use—unconfirmed.

Weaknesses:

Subject is rather slow and is not agile, especially in alternate form. Armor, while strong, is not impenetrable. Subject is also large, making it an easy target. While the subject carries a powerful weapon and is a skilled marksman, it is not truly a warrior, and is not as well-suited to close combat as many Transformers. It also has no weapons capabilities in its alternate form.

Sample Post:

The Autobot commander paced back and forth as the dropship, one of the few the force had left, sped toward the insertion point. Dustspark admired his grace and ability to do this—it was severely crowded in the cabin as almost two dozen Autobots prepared for landing. The Commander was also going over the situation and tactics being used.

“A large group of Cybertronians has landed on this planet and is decimating native life in the region. We believe they’re Decepticons, though the possibility of Neutrals is always there. Our job is to go in and negate the threat—that means attempts at negotiation, and if that fails, we capture them. Shoot to drop and incapacitate, not kill. Understand?”

Dustspark nodded along with the others. He was the largest Bot in the group, taller even than the commander, and when they stood to prepare for insertion, he towered over some of the smaller members of the team. He retrieved his gun from his back with one arm, then stood, ready, by the door.

The missile hit just as the doors began to open.

Instantly, three ‘Bots were killed as the explosion drove shrapnel into their chests and cranials. Dustspark saw four more take heavy hits to their upper bodies, and one had his leg sheared off by fragments of metal. Without a thought, he opened fire out the doors, his machinegun blasting projectiles out onto the planet surface. He wasn’t really aiming for anyone, though he noticed the ‘Con who had apparently fired the missile, judging from the smoking weapon balanced on his shoulder, take a glancing hit to the cranial and drop over sideways; Dustspark was just trying to lay down some suppressing fire, so the rest of the team could hit the dirt and find cover.

Soon enough, Dustspark and the commander were the only ones left on the shuttle, the injured having been carried down in firemech’s lifts. “Duster! I need you to get those soldiers stabilized, we’ll hold fire!”

“Right!” Dustspark held off on his fire just long enough for he and the commander to jump from the shuttle to the planet’s ground. It was dusty, and hard-packed, and Dustspark instinctively rolled forward as he hit, hearing an energy bolt fly past him. He stood, fired a few shots toward what he thought was its source, then dove to the side to land behind a rock. “If you lot can keep ‘em from comin’, I’ve got our guys!”

Without waiting for a reply, Dustspark sprinted from cover to cover, firing only occasionally and in short bursts, both to conserve ammunition and because it slowed him down. He wasn’t particularly fast to begin with, but he was faster this way than in his alternate form, and besides, his transport didn’t have weapons. It would be too dangerous to try and transform in this environment.

Just as Dustspark reached the wounded, he saw a small silver mech take a hit from a ‘Con’s scattergun. Veering precariously, Dustspark lost his balance as he tried to reach the small Autobot. He hit the ground heavily; his machinegun dropped; and the ‘Con stepped forward and placed its foot on the Autobot’s throat.

Dustspark scrambled to his feet and launched himself forward. The ‘Con turned to see him and its eyes went wide, just before Dustspark slammed into its midsection, taking it to the earth. He drew his vibro-sword and attempted to drive it through one of the ‘Con’s arms, but he wasn’t quick or skilled enough, and the ‘Con knocked it from his hand and headbutted him.

Stunned, Dustspark reeled back and sensed the ‘Con pick up the weapon. Without thinking, Dustspark grabbed the welding torch from his field kit, activated it, and waved it at the approaching ‘Con. The Decepticon screamed, ultra-hot gases blasting into its face, then fell silent just as quickly when the smaller, silver Autobot delivered a punch to the back of its neck. The ‘Con dropped the sword and crumpled to the earth.

Dustspark deactivated the torch and replaced it on his belt. He grabbed his sword and sheathed that as well. Then he grabbed the silver mech to look at his injury. “Right!” He said after a moment, raising his optics to meet the other ‘Bot’s. “What’s yer name, son?”

“Sprints,” the other Bot said, and then it turned and lived up to its namesake as it darted off back into the fray.

Dustspark shook his head. “Durn youngins, gonna get ‘emselfs killed afore they know it.” Then he jogged off toward the queue of wounded that he knew would be waiting behind some cover.

Brinakron wrote:Roger that! Yeah, that was the one thing I was really worried about... Here's another name.

Name: Dustspark
Allegiance: Autobots
Function: Medical Engineer
Alt. mode: Armored Transport (something along the lines of a Rheinmetall Yak, for example)
Weapons: Tri-barreled heavy machine gun; Vibro-sword
Height: 28 ft. (8.54 m)
Quote: “Right! What’s yer problem?”

STRENGTH: 7
INTELLIGENCE: 8
DEXTERITY: 4
SPEED: 3
ENDURANCE: 7
COURAGE: 6
FIREPOWER: 8
ACCURACY: 8
MELEE: 5
TECH SKILL: 9
CHARISMA: 5
RANK:

Profile:

An Autobot to the core, Dustspark has been serving honorably with his brethren since the very beginning of the conflict. Before the war, Dustspark was a respected engineer, known for dabbling in medical work and enjoying life’s simple pleasures. Not much has changed. He’s still an amiable, if grizzled, old ‘Bot, who enjoys his work and is the consummate “make do”-er. You’ll never find him complaining, even when he’s pinned down behind enemy lines with a queue of a half-dozen injured allies waiting to be repaired. He’ll be working away, patching them up as quickly as he can, grinning and joking the whole time. This can sometimes be disconcerting or annoying, but “Duster” doesn’t mean anything by it. He’s just happy to be doing his part, and whether that means tech work, medical work, or crushing some cranials, he puts a hundred-and-ten percent into it every time.

However, there is a darker side to the generally cheerful and easygoing ‘Bot. He rarely shows it, and its appearance is only extremely seldom triggered. However, those few Autobots who have seen it tend not to feel quite the same way about Dustspark afterwards; those Decepticons who do are often too dead to feel much of anything.

Abilities:

Subject is relatively slow in all forms. Maximum speed in alternate form is 50 mph, with a range of approximately 350 miles. Said alternate form is of an armored transport vehicle, containing enough room to house up to 4 creatures of human size, or one ton of cargo.

Subject has high strength and armor ratings. Armor is resistant to most average attack capabilities, though not impenetrable.

Subject’s main weapon is a heavy machine gun. The weapon has three barrels, which rotate as the weapon is fired. Energy is supplied through cut-resistant wires attached to subject’s back; ammunition is carried in a compartment attached to the weapon. Fires armor-piercing slugs at 300 rounds per minute, with a range of 1.5 miles (2.4 km). Subject is unable to move quickly while firing weapon, which attaches to his back when not in use.

Subject also proficient in the use of hand-weaponry, which he rarely employs, and long-range rifles, which he occasionally carries for longer field missions.

Subject also carries a vibro-tomahawk. The weapon is 9 feet long and the head vibrates very quickly when activated; this, combined with the durable material of the weapon, makes it very effective in close combat. Subject employs very basic, almost debased, forms of Metallikato in combat, though nowhere near to the ability of a true practitioner.

Subject’s avatar is that of a middle-aged male of Scandinavian descent, with short, reddish blonde hair and a medium-length, grizzly beard; it appears wearing combat boots, cargo pants, a black combat vest, a flak jacket, Kevlar gloves, and a brown baseball-style cap. Subject is said to carry a human weapon for the avatar’s use—unconfirmed.

Weaknesses:

Subject is rather slow and is not agile, especially in alternate form. Armor, while strong, is not impenetrable. Subject is also large, making it an easy target. While the subject carries a powerful weapon and is a skilled marksman, it is not truly a warrior, and is not as well-suited to close combat as many Transformers. It also has no weapons capabilities in its alternate form.

Sample Post:

The Autobot commander paced back and forth as the dropship, one of the few the force had left, sped toward the insertion point. Dustspark admired his grace and ability to do this—it was severely crowded in the cabin as almost two dozen Autobots prepared for landing. The Commander was also going over the situation and tactics being used.

“A large group of Cybertronians has landed on this planet and is decimating native life in the region. We believe they’re Decepticons, though the possibility of Neutrals is always there. Our job is to go in and negate the threat—that means attempts at negotiation, and if that fails, we capture them. Shoot to drop and incapacitate, not kill. Understand?”

Dustspark nodded along with the others. He was the largest Bot in the group, taller even than the commander, and when they stood to prepare for insertion, he towered over some of the smaller members of the team. He retrieved his gun from his back with one arm, then stood, ready, by the door.

The missile hit just as the doors began to open.

Instantly, three ‘Bots were killed as the explosion drove shrapnel into their chests and cranials. Dustspark saw four more take heavy hits to their upper bodies, and one had his leg sheared off by fragments of metal. Without a thought, he opened fire out the doors, his machinegun blasting projectiles out onto the planet surface. He wasn’t really aiming for anyone, though he noticed the ‘Con who had apparently fired the missile, judging from the smoking weapon balanced on his shoulder, take a glancing hit to the cranial and drop over sideways; Dustspark was just trying to lay down some suppressing fire, so the rest of the team could hit the dirt and find cover.

Soon enough, Dustspark and the commander were the only ones left on the shuttle, the injured having been carried down in firemech’s lifts. “Duster! I need you to get those soldiers stabilized, we’ll hold fire!”

“Right!” Dustspark held off on his fire just long enough for he and the commander to jump from the shuttle to the planet’s ground. It was dusty, and hard-packed, and Dustspark instinctively rolled forward as he hit, hearing an energy bolt fly past him. He stood, fired a few shots toward what he thought was its source, then dove to the side to land behind a rock. “If you lot can keep ‘em from comin’, I’ve got our guys!”

Without waiting for a reply, Dustspark sprinted from cover to cover, firing only occasionally and in short bursts, both to conserve ammunition and because it slowed him down. He wasn’t particularly fast to begin with, but he was faster this way than in his alternate form, and besides, his transport didn’t have weapons. It would be too dangerous to try and transform in this environment.

Just as Dustspark reached the wounded, he saw a small silver mech take a hit from a ‘Con’s scattergun. Veering precariously, Dustspark lost his balance as he tried to reach the small Autobot. He hit the ground heavily; his machinegun dropped; and the ‘Con stepped forward and placed its foot on the Autobot’s throat.

Dustspark scrambled to his feet and launched himself forward. The ‘Con turned to see him and its eyes went wide, just before Dustspark slammed into its midsection, taking it to the earth. He drew his vibro-sword and attempted to drive it through one of the ‘Con’s arms, but he wasn’t quick or skilled enough, and the ‘Con knocked it from his hand and headbutted him.

Stunned, Dustspark reeled back and sensed the ‘Con pick up the weapon. Without thinking, Dustspark grabbed the welding torch from his field kit, activated it, and waved it at the approaching ‘Con. The Decepticon screamed, ultra-hot gases blasting into its face, then fell silent just as quickly when the smaller, silver Autobot delivered a punch to the back of its neck. The ‘Con dropped the sword and crumpled to the earth.

Dustspark deactivated the torch and replaced it on his belt. He grabbed his sword and sheathed that as well. Then he grabbed the silver mech to look at his injury. “Right!” He said after a moment, raising his optics to meet the other ‘Bot’s. “What’s yer name, son?”

“Sprints,” the other Bot said, and then it turned and lived up to its namesake as it darted off back into the fray.

Dustspark shook his head. “Durn youngins, gonna get ‘emselfs killed afore they know it.” Then he jogged off toward the queue of wounded that he knew would be waiting behind some cover.

Ah, much better. Consider him yours. Approved. Rank 6 Oh! And everyone can call him Dusty! lol

Umbra

Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Reconnaissance
Alternate Modes: Motorcycle (With an Obsidian and Azure swirling pattern.)
Weapons:Compact Wrist Blades, Tranquilizer Laser Gun
Height: 21ft (6.405m)
Quote: "Seeing without being seen, knowing without being known. The art of a shadow is this."


Strength: 5
Intelligence: 7
Dexterity: 8
Speed: 6
Endurance: 6
Courage: 7
Firepower: 4
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 9
Tech Skill: 5
Charisma: 7
Rank: (Moderator's Decision, however, I would be interested on rising through the ranks slowly. As an earn your stripes sort of thing, but I understand if this wouldn’t exactly make sense.)

Profile:

In the early stages of the war, Umbra was forced to choose her side in the war. She was always deeply sympathetic toward the Autobot cause. However, her dearest friend chose to side with the nefarious Decepticons. It is for this reason that she delayed in enlisting with the Autobots. Umbra desperately sought to maintain her neutrality, but as the fall of Cybertron became imminent, she joined the Autobot cause. Umbra was dispatched on a solo assignment and, as fate would have it, she encountered her dear friend. By this time, the Decepticon set of morals had sown the seeds of corruption within him. Umbra pleaded with her former friend, but, in the end, he moved swiftly to extinguish Umbra's spark. In self-defense, Umbra combated her former friend. Umbra had the upper hand in close combat, skilled in diffusion at the time, and brought her friend down without any lethal harm to his systems. However, the terrain they had fought upon was unstable and a section gave way. Umbra immediately sprang to aid her former friend, but with a snarl, he batted her away, obviously thinking that this movement was another attack. As Umbra sprawled backwards, she flew clear of the unstable section and watched with horror as her friend fell to his doom.

The war carried on, however, and Umbra was faced with anguish and guilt with each new day of the war. She blamed herself deeply for what had happened. Several vorns later, Umbra found herself on another reconnaissance mission. It took her to one of the most Primus forsaken, bitterly cold planets that she had ever come across. She completed her task with the utmost efficiency, identifying if any Decepticon activity was present and waited for transport at the specified rendezvous point. The transport never came. Umbra could never be sure of the cause because, in the eons to come, she would be in stasis. As a last desperate resort to prevent total system failure, Umbra put herself into stasis. She was found a few stellar cycles later by an Autobot salvage ship. The Autobots aboard sought to deliver Umbra to a medic that could tend to her, seeing as a salvage ship crew would have little to do with critical cases such as Umbra. It was not to be. The salvage ship was sighted by a Decepticon destroyer. The Autobots on board placed Umbra inside an escape pod and jettisoned her away. The Autobots proceeded to evacuate shortly before their ship was boarded and the Decepticons seized all cargo. Umbra floated aimlessly through the vast expanse of space for eons more until her pod was gripped by the gravity of a particular blue and green planet...

Umbra's personality contrasts sharply with her experiences. She tends to be light-hearted and friendly, accented occasionally by her sarcastic comments. Umbra has a good sense of humor and is easy to get along with. Underneath it all, the pain of her past does cause her to be forlorn at times but never in front of her comrades. Umbra has perfected her technique of diffusion over the years, becoming a true practitioner of the art. She warmly embraces Optimus Prime’s ideals in particular and tends to be as pacifistic as one can be in a war, but this won’t stop her from accomplishing her mission.

Abilities:

As a reconnaissance agent, Umbra is well practiced in the art of seeing without being seen. She can blend into her surroundings as easily as she can melt away within a crowd. She's outfitted with a small cloaking device both breaks up her image, making her seem to melt into the shadows, and masks any signs of heat or life. (I will make allowances in stats for any stat point penalties for this, just tell me how much.)

In her alternate form, Umbra can reach speeds from 150 mph to 199 mph. She is capable of carrying one or possibly two human passengers if needed.

Umbra's armor is slightly above standard issue, able to take a decent amount of attacks before ultimately failing. Her armor cannot withstand armor piercing rounds however.

Two compact blades are easily hidden slightly beneath Umbra's armor. They fold out from her forearms and can be detached or worn like guards. The blades are curved slightly with a wicked edge and are as long as Umbra's forearm if not as wide. These serve as Umbra's main weapons in close combat, mixing in the practice of diffusion with the blades. Umbra's ability in diffusion is close to that of a master after the long hours spent honing her skills day in and day out.

Umbra's secondary weapon is comprised of a small laser gun. The laser's frequency is adjusted so that, if aimed directly at an opponent at full power, it will stun or incapacitate them depending on their armor's durability and damage. Umbra may also fire it at the ground, which will also provide enough of a blast to upset an opponent's balance or momentarily daze or stun them. Umbra primarily uses this early or late into combat.

Umbra's human avatar is a fair woman in her mid-twenties. The woman has long, flowing black hair and piercing yellow-green eyes. The woman most often wears a full body suit and helmet, so that her face is concealed most of the time.

Weaknesses:

While a formidable opponent in close combat, Umbra is weak at long range battle. Her only ranged weapon is her laser gun, and it was never meant to deal damage effectively over a long distance. In such cases, Umbra will often employ her speed or stealth to disengage. Her reaction to pitched combat involving heavy weaponry is similar, though she would never desert her post if ordered to maintain it.

Sample Post:

Under the harsh white light of the dwarf star circling the icy blue planet that Umbra found herself on, Umbra felt herself almost overcome by the dazzling glare of the light, which was intensified a thousand-fold by the ice that coated the planet. Umbra grumbled inaudibly to herself, mentally cursing this infernal icy planet. Her dark coloring would make her obvious to anyone looking in her general direction. However, that didn’t pose much of a threat to her mission. Umbra was equipped with a cloaking device that changed her color scheme and broke up her image. This let her melt away into the background easily. No, the real issue was actually the subzero temperatures. These were potentially lethal to any Cybertronian exposed for too long. Umbra would need to finish her assignment swiftly, but she couldn’t afford not to be thorough.

Activating her cloaking device, Umbra set off through the wilderness switching to thermal optics. Any heat signatures from living Cybertronians would appear as a bright blaze like the stars in the night sky. After several cycles of searching, Umbra was nearly ready to call this planet free of Decepticon influence. She’d been assigned a certain sector of the planet to comb through. Umbra had been employing the classic search patterns taught to her while she was in training but to no avail. She still had time for one more sweep before she would have to head for the rendezvous point for pick up.

Umbra marked her current position. She swiftly transformed into her alternate mode and moved outward at a ninety degree angle, scanning the area around her for any signs of Decepticon activity. She saw nothing. After approximately five miles, Umbra stopped, marked her location once more, and set off at another ninety degree angle. She continued this pattern until she arrived at her initial starting point, having seen nothing. Umbra repeated this square search pattern several times. A sweep usually consisted of five or six of these.

Umbra sighted something odd on her fifth repetition of the search pattern. She immediately froze while she identified the object. She knew that movement would attract attention, and the main rule with silent movement was to freeze. Dashing for cover was the beginner’s mistake. Even if her quarry seemed to be looking right at her, Umbra could stay motionless and go unnoticed. This has its limitations, but Umbra could adjust for them.

Further analysis of the object revealed that it was a type of metallic alloy, non-living. Umbra relaxed and moved over to the object curiously. It looked like a piece of armor, though it was twisted and torn. It was black, and there was something oddly familiar about it…Suddenly, it hit Umbra. She broke out into a wide smile and laughed at herself. On one of her earlier sweeps, she had fallen into a deep crevice within the ice. A long ice stalagmite had almost impaled her shoulder, tearing through the armor there. Umbra had climbed out of the crevice and had discarded the mutilated piece of armor. This is where it must’ve landed.

Umbra glances around once more, taking in the rest of her surroundings, and decided that it was high time she get off this frostbitten planet. Transforming stiffly into her vehicular form, Umbra tore off at top speed for the rendezvous point. She arrived within just a few kliks. A sheer cliff with an overhang stood just a few meters off. Umbra walked toward it and sat down, reclining easily against the ice. It was cold but no colder than it had been trudging around in the open.

A few breems passed, and Umbra found herself growing impatient. The set time had come and gone. She wanted to get off this Primus forsaken planet as soon as possible. There was nothing she could do but wait though. Umbra decided to occupy herself by practicing her diffusion technique. The movements cleared her mind and soothed her growing impatience. Soon enough, a cycle had passed and Umbra had gone through the fundamentals of diffusion twice. Growling anxiously with frustration, she sat down again and detached one of her wrist blades. She dug a piece of ice out of the ground and set to work carving it idly. She made the Autobot emblem out of it, which took her a few breems to do.

Umbra set the icy emblem down and looked up anxiously toward the stars. Impatience was growing into anxiety. In a few more cycles, she would be faced with the unspeakable thought of going offline. Her spark extinguished in a matter of mere cycles. Umbra forced herself to remain calm however. It wouldn’t do to lose her cool. She smiled weakly at her own joke. Humor always brought a little light to a dire situation.

More cycles passed. Umbra’s condition began to deteriorate quickly. To conserve energon, Umbra sat still. Memories of the past floated up from the dim recesses of Umbra’s central processors. Memories of when she first joined the Autobots and the pride had she felt at being among their number. Jokes shared between comrades. The bitter battles against the Decepticons. The burning spires of Iacon when Cybertron fell. The look on his face…as he fell to his doom. Her friend. Her closest friend. Why? Why had he joined the Decepticons? Umbra shook herself out of her reverie. It did no good to dwell on the past.

Umbra realized with a start that she had no idea how much time had passed while lost in her memories. She immediately checked her energon levels. They were at critical levels. She couldn’t wait any longer, or her systems would begin to fail. As she set into motion the protocol that would activate a deep stasis, Umbra reflected with sorrow that she may never awaken to see her friends and comrades again. She initiated the stasis sequence and reclined against the icy cliff. She could feel it as the individual systems within her shut down one by one. Umbra let out a resigned sigh. She only wished…that she could fight alongside…the Autobots…once…more.

SYSTEM ENTERING STASIS.

…

OK, this might seem a bit weird, a male fan playing as a female transformer, but oh well.

Chromia

Allegiance: Autobots
Sub-group: None
Function: Weapons Specialist
Alternate Modes: Mazda 8
Weapons: Gauss shotgun, combat knife.
Special Abilities: Regenerating health (slow)
Height: 25ft/ 0m
Quote: “Either get in gear or get out of the way.”


Strength: 5
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity: 6
Speed: 5
Endurance: 5
Courage: 5
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 4
Melee: 5
Tech Skill: 4
Charisma: 6
Rank: 4

Profile: A pretty, but tough-as-nails bot, Chromia is what most people would call trigger-happy. She's far too comfortable with her enormous gauss shotgun in hand, and seems to enjoy nothing more than blowing Decepticons to pieces of scrap metal. No small wonder, then, that she finds a kindred spirit in Ironhide.

Abilities: Chromia possesses little in the way of abilities, preferring to rely on brute force and courage. However, she does have a Nanocon conduit, which repairs her armour and systems during combat. Her main skills, however, lie in her resilience and enormous weapon.

Weaknesses: Chromia is not the most accurate of bots, preferring to blast away in the general direction of the enemy. She also doesn’t care much for sophisticated technology, and as such has low tech skill. Indeed, her own weapon is positively ancient, and dates back before the Great War. However, her biggest vice is undoubtedly her sheer aggression. She does not take prisoners, and if given half a chance, will dash in the direction of the enemy, shotgun blazing.


Need time to think of bit of fiction.

Foxfire13795 wrote:Umbra

Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Reconnaissance
Alternate Modes: Motorcycle (With an Obsidian and Azure swirling pattern.)
Weapons:Compact Wrist Blades, Tranquilizer Laser Gun
Height: 21ft (6.405m)
Quote: "Seeing without being seen, knowing without being known. The art of a shadow is this."


Strength: 5
Intelligence: 7
Dexterity: 8
Speed: 6
Endurance: 6
Courage: 7
Firepower: 4
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 9
Tech Skill: 5
Charisma: 7
Rank: (Moderator's Decision, however, I would be interested on rising through the ranks slowly. As an earn your stripes sort of thing, but I understand if this wouldn’t exactly make sense.)

Profile:

In the early stages of the war, Umbra was forced to choose her side in the war. She was always deeply sympathetic toward the Autobot cause. However, her dearest friend chose to side with the nefarious Decepticons. It is for this reason that she delayed in enlisting with the Autobots. Umbra desperately sought to maintain her neutrality, but as the fall of Cybertron became imminent, she joined the Autobot cause. Umbra was dispatched on a solo assignment and, as fate would have it, she encountered her dear friend. By this time, the Decepticon set of morals had sown the seeds of corruption within him. Umbra pleaded with her former friend, but, in the end, he moved swiftly to extinguish Umbra's spark. In self-defense, Umbra combated her former friend. Umbra had the upper hand in close combat, skilled in diffusion at the time, and brought her friend down without any lethal harm to his systems. However, the terrain they had fought upon was unstable and a section gave way. Umbra immediately sprang to aid her former friend, but with a snarl, he batted her away, obviously thinking that this movement was another attack. As Umbra sprawled backwards, she flew clear of the unstable section and watched with horror as her friend fell to his doom.

The war carried on, however, and Umbra was faced with anguish and guilt with each new day of the war. She blamed herself deeply for what had happened. Several vorns later, Umbra found herself on another reconnaissance mission. It took her to one of the most Primus forsaken, bitterly cold planets that she had ever come across. She completed her task with the utmost efficiency, identifying if any Decepticon activity was present and waited for transport at the specified rendezvous point. The transport never came. Umbra could never be sure of the cause because, in the eons to come, she would be in stasis. As a last desperate resort to prevent total system failure, Umbra put herself into stasis. She was found a few stellar cycles later by an Autobot salvage ship. The Autobots aboard sought to deliver Umbra to a medic that could tend to her, seeing as a salvage ship crew would have little to do with critical cases such as Umbra. It was not to be. The salvage ship was sighted by a Decepticon destroyer. The Autobots on board placed Umbra inside an escape pod and jettisoned her away. The Autobots proceeded to evacuate shortly before their ship was boarded and the Decepticons seized all cargo. Umbra floated aimlessly through the vast expanse of space for eons more until her pod was gripped by the gravity of a particular blue and green planet...

Umbra's personality contrasts sharply with her experiences. She tends to be light-hearted and friendly, accented occasionally by her sarcastic comments. Umbra has a good sense of humor and is easy to get along with. Underneath it all, the pain of her past does cause her to be forlorn at times but never in front of her comrades. Umbra has perfected her technique of diffusion over the years, becoming a true practitioner of the art. She warmly embraces Optimus Prime’s ideals in particular and tends to be as pacifistic as one can be in a war, but this won’t stop her from accomplishing her mission.

Abilities:

As a reconnaissance agent, Umbra is well practiced in the art of seeing without being seen. She can blend into her surroundings as easily as she can melt away within a crowd. She's outfitted with a small cloaking device both breaks up her image, making her seem to melt into the shadows, and masks any signs of heat or life. (I will make allowances in stats for any stat point penalties for this, just tell me how much.)

In her alternate form, Umbra can reach speeds from 150 mph to 199 mph. She is capable of carrying one or possibly two human passengers if needed.

Umbra's armor is slightly above standard issue, able to take a decent amount of attacks before ultimately failing. Her armor cannot withstand armor piercing rounds however.

Two compact blades are easily hidden slightly beneath Umbra's armor. They fold out from her forearms and can be detached or worn like guards. The blades are curved slightly with a wicked edge and are as long as Umbra's forearm if not as wide. These serve as Umbra's main weapons in close combat, mixing in the practice of diffusion with the blades. Umbra's ability in diffusion is close to that of a master after the long hours spent honing her skills day in and day out.

Umbra's secondary weapon is comprised of a small laser gun. The laser's frequency is adjusted so that, if aimed directly at an opponent at full power, it will stun or incapacitate them depending on their armor's durability and damage. Umbra may also fire it at the ground, which will also provide enough of a blast to upset an opponent's balance or momentarily daze or stun them. Umbra primarily uses this early or late into combat.

Umbra's human avatar is a fair woman in her mid-twenties. The woman has long, flowing black hair and piercing yellow-green eyes. The woman most often wears a full body suit and helmet, so that her face is concealed most of the time.

Weaknesses:

While a formidable opponent in close combat, Umbra is weak at long range battle. Her only ranged weapon is her laser gun, and it was never meant to deal damage effectively over a long distance. In such cases, Umbra will often employ her speed or stealth to disengage. Her reaction to pitched combat involving heavy weaponry is similar, though she would never desert her post if ordered to maintain it.

Sample Post:

Under the harsh white light of the dwarf star circling the icy blue planet that Umbra found herself on, Umbra felt herself almost overcome by the dazzling glare of the light, which was intensified a thousand-fold by the ice that coated the planet. Umbra grumbled inaudibly to herself, mentally cursing this infernal icy planet. Her dark coloring would make her obvious to anyone looking in her general direction. However, that didn’t pose much of a threat to her mission. Umbra was equipped with a cloaking device that changed her color scheme and broke up her image. This let her melt away into the background easily. No, the real issue was actually the subzero temperatures. These were potentially lethal to any Cybertronian exposed for too long. Umbra would need to finish her assignment swiftly, but she couldn’t afford not to be thorough.

Activating her cloaking device, Umbra set off through the wilderness switching to thermal optics. Any heat signatures from living Cybertronians would appear as a bright blaze like the stars in the night sky. After several cycles of searching, Umbra was nearly ready to call this planet free of Decepticon influence. She’d been assigned a certain sector of the planet to comb through. Umbra had been employing the classic search patterns taught to her while she was in training but to no avail. She still had time for one more sweep before she would have to head for the rendezvous point for pick up.

Umbra marked her current position. She swiftly transformed into her alternate mode and moved outward at a ninety degree angle, scanning the area around her for any signs of Decepticon activity. She saw nothing. After approximately five miles, Umbra stopped, marked her location once more, and set off at another ninety degree angle. She continued this pattern until she arrived at her initial starting point, having seen nothing. Umbra repeated this square search pattern several times. A sweep usually consisted of five or six of these.

Umbra sighted something odd on her fifth repetition of the search pattern. She immediately froze while she identified the object. She knew that movement would attract attention, and the main rule with silent movement was to freeze. Dashing for cover was the beginner’s mistake. Even if her quarry seemed to be looking right at her, Umbra could stay motionless and go unnoticed. This has its limitations, but Umbra could adjust for them.

Further analysis of the object revealed that it was a type of metallic alloy, non-living. Umbra relaxed and moved over to the object curiously. It looked like a piece of armor, though it was twisted and torn. It was black, and there was something oddly familiar about it…Suddenly, it hit Umbra. She broke out into a wide smile and laughed at herself. On one of her earlier sweeps, she had fallen into a deep crevice within the ice. A long ice stalagmite had almost impaled her shoulder, tearing through the armor there. Umbra had climbed out of the crevice and had discarded the mutilated piece of armor. This is where it must’ve landed.

Umbra glances around once more, taking in the rest of her surroundings, and decided that it was high time she get off this frostbitten planet. Transforming stiffly into her vehicular form, Umbra tore off at top speed for the rendezvous point. She arrived within just a few kliks. A sheer cliff with an overhang stood just a few meters off. Umbra walked toward it and sat down, reclining easily against the ice. It was cold but no colder than it had been trudging around in the open.

A few breems passed, and Umbra found herself growing impatient. The set time had come and gone. She wanted to get off this Primus forsaken planet as soon as possible. There was nothing she could do but wait though. Umbra decided to occupy herself by practicing her diffusion technique. The movements cleared her mind and soothed her growing impatience. Soon enough, a cycle had passed and Umbra had gone through the fundamentals of diffusion twice. Growling anxiously with frustration, she sat down again and detached one of her wrist blades. She dug a piece of ice out of the ground and set to work carving it idly. She made the Autobot emblem out of it, which took her a few breems to do.

Umbra set the icy emblem down and looked up anxiously toward the stars. Impatience was growing into anxiety. In a few more cycles, she would be faced with the unspeakable thought of going offline. Her spark extinguished in a matter of mere cycles. Umbra forced herself to remain calm however. It wouldn’t do to lose her cool. She smiled weakly at her own joke. Humor always brought a little light to a dire situation.

More cycles passed. Umbra’s condition began to deteriorate quickly. To conserve energon, Umbra sat still. Memories of the past floated up from the dim recesses of Umbra’s central processors. Memories of when she first joined the Autobots and the pride had she felt at being among their number. Jokes shared between comrades. The bitter battles against the Decepticons. The burning spires of Iacon when Cybertron fell. The look on his face…as he fell to his doom. Her friend. Her closest friend. Why? Why had he joined the Decepticons? Umbra shook herself out of her reverie. It did no good to dwell on the past.

Umbra realized with a start that she had no idea how much time had passed while lost in her memories. She immediately checked her energon levels. They were at critical levels. She couldn’t wait any longer, or her systems would begin to fail. As she set into motion the protocol that would activate a deep stasis, Umbra reflected with sorrow that she may never awaken to see her friends and comrades again. She initiated the stasis sequence and reclined against the icy cliff. She could feel it as the individual systems within her shut down one by one. Umbra let out a resigned sigh. She only wished…that she could fight alongside…the Autobots…once…more.

SYSTEM ENTERING STASIS.

…

A good start, but the stat penalty for the cloak will be 7 points. From the looks of their current distribution, and her profile, it'll be difficult to shave those points and still keep her true to what you've established. You should take some time to figure out how you'd like to distribute the stat points and still keep the cloak.

Of course you can drop the cloak altogether. In that case you would have to drop her melee to 8 and raise her tech skill to 6.

Give it some thought and then repost her.

There. I believe that should do.

Umbra

Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Reconnaissance
Alternate Modes: Motorcycle (With an Obsidian and Azure swirling pattern.)
Weapons: Compact Wrist Blades, Tranquilizer Laser Gun
Height: 21ft (6.405m)
Quote: "Seeing without being seen, knowing without being known. The art of a shadow is this."


Strength: 5
Intelligence: 6
Dexterity: 7
Speed: 5
Endurance: 5
Courage: 7
Firepower: 3
Accuracy: 5
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 6
Rank: (Moderator's Decision, however, I would be interested on rising through the ranks slowly. As an earn-your-stripes sort of thing, but I understand if this wouldn’t exactly make sense.)

Profile:

In the early stages of the war, Umbra was forced to choose her side in the war. She was always deeply sympathetic toward the Autobot cause. However, her dearest friend chose to side with the nefarious Decepticons. It is for this reason that she delayed in enlisting with the Autobots. Umbra desperately sought to maintain her neutrality, but as the fall of Cybertron became imminent, she joined the Autobot cause. Umbra was dispatched on a solo assignment and, as fate would have it, she encountered her dear friend. By this time, the Decepticon set of morals had sown the seeds of corruption within him. Umbra pleaded with her former friend, but, in the end, he moved swiftly to extinguish Umbra's spark. In self-defense, Umbra combated her former friend. Umbra had the upper hand in close combat, skilled in diffusion at the time, and brought her friend down without any lethal harm to his systems. However, the terrain they had fought upon was unstable and a section gave way. Umbra immediately sprang to aid her former friend, but with a snarl, he batted her away, obviously thinking that this movement was another attack. As Umbra sprawled backwards, she flew clear of the unstable section and watched with horror as her friend fell to his doom.

The war carried on, however, and Umbra was faced with anguish and guilt with each new day of the war. She blamed herself deeply for what had happened. Several vorns later, Umbra found herself on another reconnaissance mission. It took her to one of the most Primus forsaken, bitterly cold planets that she had ever come across. She completed her task with the utmost efficiency, identifying if any Decepticon activity was present and waited for transport at the specified rendezvous point. The transport never came. Umbra could never be sure of the cause because, in the eons to come, she would be in stasis. As a last desperate resort to prevent total system failure, Umbra put herself into stasis. She was found a few stellar cycles later by an Autobot salvage ship. The Autobots aboard sought to deliver Umbra to a medic that could tend to her, seeing as a salvage ship crew would have little to do with critical cases such as Umbra. It was not to be. The salvage ship was sighted by a Decepticon destroyer. The Autobots on board placed Umbra inside an escape pod and jettisoned her away. The Autobots proceeded to evacuate shortly before their ship was boarded and the Decepticons seized all cargo. Umbra floated aimlessly through the vast expanse of space for eons more until her pod was gripped by the gravity of a particular blue and green planet...

Umbra's personality contrasts sharply with her experiences. She tends to be light-hearted and friendly, accented occasionally by her sarcastic comments. Umbra has a good sense of humor and is easy to get along with. Underneath it all, the pain of her past does cause her to be forlorn at times but never in front of her comrades. Umbra has perfected her technique of diffusion over the years, becoming a true practitioner of the art. She warmly embraces Optimus Prime’s ideals in particular and tends to be as pacifistic as one can be in a war, but this won’t stop her from accomplishing her mission.

Abilities:

As a reconnaissance agent, Umbra is well practiced in the art of seeing without being seen. She can blend into her surroundings as easily as she can melt away within a crowd. She's outfitted with a small cloaking device both breaks up her image, making her seem to melt into the shadows, and masks any signs of heat or life.

In her alternate form, Umbra can reach speeds from 150 mph to 199 mph. She is capable of carrying one or possibly two human passengers if needed.

Umbra's armor is slightly above standard issue, able to take a decent amount of attacks before ultimately failing. Her armor cannot withstand armor piercing rounds however.

Two compact blades are easily hidden slightly beneath Umbra's armor. They fold out from her forearms and can be detached or worn like guards. The blades are curved slightly with a wicked edge and are as long as Umbra's forearm if not as wide. These serve as Umbra's main weapons in close combat, mixing in the practice of diffusion with the blades. Umbra's ability in diffusion is close to that of a master after the long hours spent honing her skills day in and day out.

Umbra's secondary weapon is comprised of a small laser gun. The laser's frequency is adjusted so that, if aimed directly at an opponent at full power, it will stun or incapacitate them depending on their armor's durability and damage. Umbra may also fire it at the ground, which will also provide enough of a blast to upset an opponent's balance or momentarily daze or stun them. Umbra primarily uses this early or late into combat.

Umbra's human avatar is a fair woman in her mid-twenties. The woman has long, flowing black hair and piercing yellow-green eyes. The woman most often wears a full body suit and helmet, so that her face is concealed most of the time.

Weaknesses:

While a formidable opponent in close combat, Umbra is weak at long range battle. Her only ranged weapon is her laser gun, and it was never meant to deal damage effectively over a long distance. In such cases, Umbra will often employ her speed or stealth to disengage. Her reaction to pitched combat involving heavy weaponry is similar, though she would never desert her post if ordered to maintain it.

Sample Post:

Under the harsh white light of the dwarf star circling the icy blue planet that Umbra found herself on, Umbra felt herself almost overcome by the dazzling glare of the light, which was intensified a thousand-fold by the ice that coated the planet. Umbra grumbled inaudibly to herself, mentally cursing this infernal icy planet. Her dark coloring would make her obvious to anyone looking in her general direction. However, that didn’t pose much of a threat to her mission. Umbra was equipped with a cloaking device that changed her color scheme and broke up her image. This let her melt away into the background easily. No, the real issue was actually the subzero temperatures. These were potentially lethal to any Cybertronian exposed for too long. Umbra would need to finish her assignment swiftly, but she couldn’t afford not to be thorough.

Activating her cloaking device, Umbra set off through the wilderness switching to thermal optics. Any heat signatures from living Cybertronians would appear as a bright blaze like the stars in the night sky. After several cycles of searching, Umbra was nearly ready to call this planet free of Decepticon influence. She’d been assigned a certain sector of the planet to comb through. Umbra had been employing the classic search patterns taught to her while she was in training but to no avail. She still had time for one more sweep before she would have to head for the rendezvous point for pick up.

Umbra marked her current position. She swiftly transformed into her alternate mode and moved outward at a ninety degree angle, scanning the area around her for any signs of Decepticon activity. She saw nothing. After approximately five miles, Umbra stopped, marked her location once more, and set off at another ninety degree angle. She continued this pattern until she arrived at her initial starting point, having seen nothing. Umbra repeated this square search pattern several times. A sweep usually consisted of five or six of these.

Umbra sighted something odd on her fifth repetition of the search pattern. She immediately froze while she identified the object. She knew that movement would attract attention, and the main rule with silent movement was to freeze. Dashing for cover was the beginner’s mistake. Even if her quarry seemed to be looking right at her, Umbra could stay motionless and go unnoticed. This has its limitations, but Umbra could adjust for them.

Further analysis of the object revealed that it was a type of metallic alloy, non-living. Umbra relaxed and moved over to the object curiously. It looked like a piece of armor, though it was twisted and torn. It was black, and there was something oddly familiar about it…Suddenly, it hit Umbra. She broke out into a wide smile and laughed at herself. On one of her earlier sweeps, she had fallen into a deep crevice within the ice. A long ice stalagmite had almost impaled her shoulder, tearing through the armor there. Umbra had climbed out of the crevice and had discarded the mutilated piece of armor. This is where it must’ve landed.

Umbra glances around once more, taking in the rest of her surroundings, and decided that it was high time she get off this frostbitten planet. Transforming stiffly into her vehicular form, Umbra tore off at top speed for the rendezvous point. She arrived within just a few kliks. A sheer cliff with an overhang stood just a few meters off. Umbra walked toward it and sat down, reclining easily against the ice. It was cold but no colder than it had been trudging around in the open.

A few breems passed, and Umbra found herself growing impatient. The set time had come and gone. She wanted to get off this Primus forsaken planet as soon as possible. There was nothing she could do but wait though. Umbra decided to occupy herself by practicing her diffusion technique. The movements cleared her mind and soothed her growing impatience. Soon enough, a cycle had passed and Umbra had gone through the fundamentals of diffusion twice. Growling anxiously with frustration, she sat down again and detached one of her wrist blades. She dug a piece of ice out of the ground and set to work carving it idly. She made the Autobot emblem out of it, which took her a few breems to do.

Umbra set the icy emblem down and looked up anxiously toward the stars. Impatience was growing into anxiety. In a few more cycles, she would be faced with the unspeakable thought of going offline. Her spark extinguished in a matter of mere cycles. Umbra forced herself to remain calm however. It wouldn’t do to lose her cool. She smiled weakly at her own joke. Humor always brought a little light to a dire situation.

More cycles passed. Umbra’s condition began to deteriorate quickly. To conserve energon, Umbra sat still. Memories of the past floated up from the dim recesses of Umbra’s central processors. Memories of when she first joined the Autobots and the pride had she felt at being among their number. Jokes shared between comrades. The bitter battles against the Decepticons. The burning spires of Iacon when Cybertron fell. The look on his face…as he fell to his doom. Her friend. Her closest friend. Why? Why had he joined the Decepticons? Umbra shook herself out of her reverie. It did no good to dwell on the past.

Umbra realized with a start that she had no idea how much time had passed while lost in her memories. She immediately checked her energon levels. They were at critical levels. She couldn’t wait any longer, or her systems would begin to fail. As she set into motion the protocol that would activate a deep stasis, Umbra reflected with sorrow that she may never awaken to see her friends and comrades again. She initiated the stasis sequence and reclined against the icy cliff. She could feel it as the individual systems within her shut down one by one. Umbra let out a resigned sigh. She only wished…that she could fight alongside…the Autobots…once…more.

SYSTEM ENTERING STASIS.

…

Foxfire13795 wrote:There. I believe that should do.

Umbra

Allegiance: Autobot
Function: Reconnaissance
Alternate Modes: Motorcycle (With an Obsidian and Azure swirling pattern.)
Weapons: Compact Wrist Blades, Tranquilizer Laser Gun
Special Abilities: Cloaking Device
Height: 21ft (6.405m)
Quote: "Seeing without being seen, knowing without being known. The art of a shadow is this."


Strength: 5
Intelligence: 6
Dexterity: 7
Speed: 5
Endurance: 5
Courage: 7
Firepower: 3
Accuracy: 5
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 6
Rank: (Moderator's Decision, however, I would be interested on rising through the ranks slowly. As an earn-your-stripes sort of thing, but I understand if this wouldn’t exactly make sense.)

Profile:

In the early stages of the war, Umbra was forced to choose her side in the war. She was always deeply sympathetic toward the Autobot cause. However, her dearest friend chose to side with the nefarious Decepticons. It is for this reason that she delayed in enlisting with the Autobots. Umbra desperately sought to maintain her neutrality, but as the fall of Cybertron became imminent, she joined the Autobot cause. Umbra was dispatched on a solo assignment and, as fate would have it, she encountered her dear friend. By this time, the Decepticon set of morals had sown the seeds of corruption within him. Umbra pleaded with her former friend, but, in the end, he moved swiftly to extinguish Umbra's spark. In self-defense, Umbra combated her former friend. Umbra had the upper hand in close combat, skilled in diffusion at the time, and brought her friend down without any lethal harm to his systems. However, the terrain they had fought upon was unstable and a section gave way. Umbra immediately sprang to aid her former friend, but with a snarl, he batted her away, obviously thinking that this movement was another attack. As Umbra sprawled backwards, she flew clear of the unstable section and watched with horror as her friend fell to his doom.

The war carried on, however, and Umbra was faced with anguish and guilt with each new day of the war. She blamed herself deeply for what had happened. Several vorns later, Umbra found herself on another reconnaissance mission. It took her to one of the most Primus forsaken, bitterly cold planets that she had ever come across. She completed her task with the utmost efficiency, identifying if any Decepticon activity was present and waited for transport at the specified rendezvous point. The transport never came. Umbra could never be sure of the cause because, in the eons to come, she would be in stasis. As a last desperate resort to prevent total system failure, Umbra put herself into stasis. She was found a few stellar cycles later by an Autobot salvage ship. The Autobots aboard sought to deliver Umbra to a medic that could tend to her, seeing as a salvage ship crew would have little to do with critical cases such as Umbra. It was not to be. The salvage ship was sighted by a Decepticon destroyer. The Autobots on board placed Umbra inside an escape pod and jettisoned her away. The Autobots proceeded to evacuate shortly before their ship was boarded and the Decepticons seized all cargo. Umbra floated aimlessly through the vast expanse of space for eons more until her pod was gripped by the gravity of a particular blue and green planet...

Umbra's personality contrasts sharply with her experiences. She tends to be light-hearted and friendly, accented occasionally by her sarcastic comments. Umbra has a good sense of humor and is easy to get along with. Underneath it all, the pain of her past does cause her to be forlorn at times but never in front of her comrades. Umbra has perfected her technique of diffusion over the years, becoming a true practitioner of the art. She warmly embraces Optimus Prime’s ideals in particular and tends to be as pacifistic as one can be in a war, but this won’t stop her from accomplishing her mission.

Abilities:

As a reconnaissance agent, Umbra is well practiced in the art of seeing without being seen. She can blend into her surroundings as easily as she can melt away within a crowd. She's outfitted with a small cloaking device both breaks up her image, making her seem to melt into the shadows, and masks any signs of heat or life.

In her alternate form, Umbra can reach speeds from 150 mph to 199 mph. She is capable of carrying one or possibly two human passengers if needed.

Umbra's armor is slightly above standard issue, able to take a decent amount of attacks before ultimately failing. Her armor cannot withstand armor piercing rounds however.

Two compact blades are easily hidden slightly beneath Umbra's armor. They fold out from her forearms and can be detached or worn like guards. The blades are curved slightly with a wicked edge and are as long as Umbra's forearm if not as wide. These serve as Umbra's main weapons in close combat, mixing in the practice of diffusion with the blades. Umbra's ability in diffusion is close to that of a master after the long hours spent honing her skills day in and day out.

Umbra's secondary weapon is comprised of a small laser gun. The laser's frequency is adjusted so that, if aimed directly at an opponent at full power, it will stun or incapacitate them depending on their armor's durability and damage. Umbra may also fire it at the ground, which will also provide enough of a blast to upset an opponent's balance or momentarily daze or stun them. Umbra primarily uses this early or late into combat.

Umbra's human avatar is a fair woman in her mid-twenties. The woman has long, flowing black hair and piercing yellow-green eyes. The woman most often wears a full body suit and helmet, so that her face is concealed most of the time.

Weaknesses:

While a formidable opponent in close combat, Umbra is weak at long range battle. Her only ranged weapon is her laser gun, and it was never meant to deal damage effectively over a long distance. In such cases, Umbra will often employ her speed or stealth to disengage. Her reaction to pitched combat involving heavy weaponry is similar, though she would never desert her post if ordered to maintain it.

Sample Post:

Under the harsh white light of the dwarf star circling the icy blue planet that Umbra found herself on, Umbra felt herself almost overcome by the dazzling glare of the light, which was intensified a thousand-fold by the ice that coated the planet. Umbra grumbled inaudibly to herself, mentally cursing this infernal icy planet. Her dark coloring would make her obvious to anyone looking in her general direction. However, that didn’t pose much of a threat to her mission. Umbra was equipped with a cloaking device that changed her color scheme and broke up her image. This let her melt away into the background easily. No, the real issue was actually the subzero temperatures. These were potentially lethal to any Cybertronian exposed for too long. Umbra would need to finish her assignment swiftly, but she couldn’t afford not to be thorough.

Activating her cloaking device, Umbra set off through the wilderness switching to thermal optics. Any heat signatures from living Cybertronians would appear as a bright blaze like the stars in the night sky. After several cycles of searching, Umbra was nearly ready to call this planet free of Decepticon influence. She’d been assigned a certain sector of the planet to comb through. Umbra had been employing the classic search patterns taught to her while she was in training but to no avail. She still had time for one more sweep before she would have to head for the rendezvous point for pick up.

Umbra marked her current position. She swiftly transformed into her alternate mode and moved outward at a ninety degree angle, scanning the area around her for any signs of Decepticon activity. She saw nothing. After approximately five miles, Umbra stopped, marked her location once more, and set off at another ninety degree angle. She continued this pattern until she arrived at her initial starting point, having seen nothing. Umbra repeated this square search pattern several times. A sweep usually consisted of five or six of these.

Umbra sighted something odd on her fifth repetition of the search pattern. She immediately froze while she identified the object. She knew that movement would attract attention, and the main rule with silent movement was to freeze. Dashing for cover was the beginner’s mistake. Even if her quarry seemed to be looking right at her, Umbra could stay motionless and go unnoticed. This has its limitations, but Umbra could adjust for them.

Further analysis of the object revealed that it was a type of metallic alloy, non-living. Umbra relaxed and moved over to the object curiously. It looked like a piece of armor, though it was twisted and torn. It was black, and there was something oddly familiar about it…Suddenly, it hit Umbra. She broke out into a wide smile and laughed at herself. On one of her earlier sweeps, she had fallen into a deep crevice within the ice. A long ice stalagmite had almost impaled her shoulder, tearing through the armor there. Umbra had climbed out of the crevice and had discarded the mutilated piece of armor. This is where it must’ve landed.

Umbra glances around once more, taking in the rest of her surroundings, and decided that it was high time she get off this frostbitten planet. Transforming stiffly into her vehicular form, Umbra tore off at top speed for the rendezvous point. She arrived within just a few kliks. A sheer cliff with an overhang stood just a few meters off. Umbra walked toward it and sat down, reclining easily against the ice. It was cold but no colder than it had been trudging around in the open.

A few breems passed, and Umbra found herself growing impatient. The set time had come and gone. She wanted to get off this Primus forsaken planet as soon as possible. There was nothing she could do but wait though. Umbra decided to occupy herself by practicing her diffusion technique. The movements cleared her mind and soothed her growing impatience. Soon enough, a cycle had passed and Umbra had gone through the fundamentals of diffusion twice. Growling anxiously with frustration, she sat down again and detached one of her wrist blades. She dug a piece of ice out of the ground and set to work carving it idly. She made the Autobot emblem out of it, which took her a few breems to do.

Umbra set the icy emblem down and looked up anxiously toward the stars. Impatience was growing into anxiety. In a few more cycles, she would be faced with the unspeakable thought of going offline. Her spark extinguished in a matter of mere cycles. Umbra forced herself to remain calm however. It wouldn’t do to lose her cool. She smiled weakly at her own joke. Humor always brought a little light to a dire situation.

More cycles passed. Umbra’s condition began to deteriorate quickly. To conserve energon, Umbra sat still. Memories of the past floated up from the dim recesses of Umbra’s central processors. Memories of when she first joined the Autobots and the pride had she felt at being among their number. Jokes shared between comrades. The bitter battles against the Decepticons. The burning spires of Iacon when Cybertron fell. The look on his face…as he fell to his doom. Her friend. Her closest friend. Why? Why had he joined the Decepticons? Umbra shook herself out of her reverie. It did no good to dwell on the past.

Umbra realized with a start that she had no idea how much time had passed while lost in her memories. She immediately checked her energon levels. They were at critical levels. She couldn’t wait any longer, or her systems would begin to fail. As she set into motion the protocol that would activate a deep stasis, Umbra reflected with sorrow that she may never awaken to see her friends and comrades again. She initiated the stasis sequence and reclined against the icy cliff. She could feel it as the individual systems within her shut down one by one. Umbra let out a resigned sigh. She only wished…that she could fight alongside…the Autobots…once…more.

SYSTEM ENTERING STASIS.

…

With the edit I made she's good to go. Approved. Rank 5

Deathwave

Allegiance: Decepticon
Subgroup: Predacons
Function: Assassin
Alternate Modes: Dragon like Gryphon
Weapons: Super Particle Cannon and two dark energon wrist blades
Special Abilities: Drain
Height: 36ft/10 m
Quote: “True Fear is leaving behind destruction countless of times, that is the beauty of striking fear into opponents as they are helpless to stop it.”


Strength: 7
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity: 5
Speed: 7
Endurance: 7
Courage: 6
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 7
Charisma: 3
Rank:

Profile:

Before the war, Nugget was a bot who would gladly give his knowledge to science so that their race can evolve to the next level. When the war happened, Nugget distance himself from the war as he discovered Dark Energon. Unknown to what it was, he began studying it to see what can the substance do. Soon both sides began to learn of this and wanted it to themselves for their own reasons. When the decepticons attacked, they accidentally blew a reactor to his base thus setting off a chain reaction. The base exploded as the Dark Energon mutated his structure to that of a beast. The sudden change rapidly changed him forever as he managed to survive, but was in stasis. The deceptions found him and began to help him recover; however, unknown to them Nugget was forever gone thanks to the Dark Energon. During recovery, he broke free and destroyed the decepticon lab as he left behind a trail of destruction until he was put in check by Shockwave. As Megatron came he saw the destruction that Nugget left behind, with that he dubbed him the name Deathwave.

Abilities:
Deathwave is a monstrous decepticon, he has two corrupted dark energon wrist blades. If he gets a lethal blow, it will leave a transformer critically injured to the point that their systems will be corrupted. One of his most powerful arsenal is his super charged particle cannon that will from critical injured to annihilating anything that gets in its way. The cannon however will need recharging for a good 2-5 minutes depending on how long it fires.

His alt form is a Dragon like Gryphon which is basically his juggernaut form. His only arsenal is his super charged particle cannon that losses 25% of its power; however, it won’t recharge. It is still a powerful weapon as Deathwave can fire rapid amounts of it; however it will only have 50% of its power.

His dangerous ability is that he can drain energon to replenish his own. Once Deathwave gets a hold of you, energon slowly begins to get drained. It is the reasons that make him dangerous for even Shockwave and caught the interest of Megatron. This goes for robot/Alt form.

Weaknesses:

Once the particle cannon is fired, Deathwave is mostly a close combat fighter until its recharged. Making him at a disadvantage for long range fighters.

His dragon form is basically a berserker form as he will attack anything he sees as an enemy or if something threatens his existence.

Sample Post:

Inside a decepticon research base, an alarm goes off alerting the decepticon guards that there is break through. As the guards go check out what is causing it, they see a bot scientist being thrown against the wall as a devilish looking bot comes through. It picks up the bot from the neck and stares at him with a glare. “You will provide me nourishment.” Says the bot as energon slowly began to leave the helpless bot body.

“Don’t move!” The guards all point their weapons at the monstrous bot as they began to call for Shockwave.

“Grrrrrrrrrrr...........RAWRRRR!!!!” The bot roared as its chest opened up and began charging at the guards. The guards opened fire, but the bot used the lifeless body as a shield as he threw the bot at the guards. Now that its fully charged, a huge energy blast is unleashed as it destroys the bots point blank and most of the base. The blast left a huge hole as most of the interior were now old scraps. The bot walks through the pile of destruction it left behind as he sees Shockwave. “Out of my way!” The bot charges towards the one eye transformers as two wrist blades came out; however, the match was over already as he drops down to the ground. Shockwave already fired without him noticing as Shockwave then dragged him to his base.

After the events

“You have done well.” The devilish bot drops the lifeless bot before Megatron’s eyes as he claps in joy. “You have passed the test, you have passed my expectations.” Megatron gets up from his chair and walks over to the devilish bot. “You will become a great assassin that will strike fear in into many.”

“Being a great assassin isn’t true fear. True Fear is leaving behind destruction countless of times, that is the beauty of striking fear into opponents as they are helpless to stop it.”

Megatron pats him on the shoulder. “Understandable. For now on, you will be known as Deathwave. You bring death to your enemies and strike fear into the hearts of the autobots.”

Deathwave kneels down before Megatron to show him respects. “Thank you, Lord Megatron. Through your training, I will not fail you. The autobots will know of the terror that is about to come forth to them. Grrrrrrrrrrrrr hehehahahahahaha.”

ChaosWave360 wrote:Deathwave

Allegiance: Decepticon
Subgroup: Predacons
Function: Assassin
Alternate Modes: Dragon like Gryphon
Weapons: Super Particle Cannon and two dark energon wrist blades
Special Abilities: Drain
Height: 36ft/10 m
Quote: “True Fear is leaving behind destruction countless of times, that is the beauty of striking fear into opponents as they are helpless to stop it.”


Strength: 7
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity: 5
Speed: 7
Endurance: 7
Courage: 6
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 7
Charisma: 3
Rank:

Profile:

Before the war, Nugget was a bot who would gladly give his knowledge to science so that their race can evolve to the next level. When the war happened, Nugget distance himself from the war as he discovered Dark Energon. Unknown to what it was, he began studying it to see what can the substance do. Soon both sides began to learn of this and wanted it to themselves for their own reasons. When the decepticons attacked, they accidentally blew a reactor to his base thus setting off a chain reaction. The base exploded as the Dark Energon mutated his structure to that of a beast. The sudden change rapidly changed him forever as he managed to survive, but was in stasis. The deceptions found him and began to help him recover; however, unknown to them Nugget was forever gone thanks to the Dark Energon. During recovery, he broke free and destroyed the decepticon lab as he left behind a trail of destruction until he was put in check by Shockwave. As Megatron came he saw the destruction that Nugget left behind, with that he dubbed him the name Deathwave.

Abilities:
Deathwave is a monstrous decepticon, he has two corrupted dark energon wrist blades. If he gets a lethal blow, it will leave a transformer critically injured to the point that their systems will be corrupted. One of his most powerful arsenal is his super charged particle cannon that will from critical injured to annihilating anything that gets in its way. The cannon however will need recharging for a good 2-5 minutes depending on how long it fires.

His alt form is a Dragon like Gryphon which is basically his juggernaut form. His only arsenal is his super charged particle cannon that losses 25% of its power; however, it won’t recharge. It is still a powerful weapon as Deathwave can fire rapid amounts of it; however it will only have 50% of its power.

His dangerous ability is that he can drain energon to replenish his own. Once Deathwave gets a hold of you, energon slowly begins to get drained. It is the reasons that make him dangerous for even Shockwave and caught the interest of Megatron. This goes for robot/Alt form.

Weaknesses:

Once the particle cannon is fired, Deathwave is mostly a close combat fighter until its recharged. Making him at a disadvantage for long range fighters.

His dragon form is basically a berserker form as he will attack anything he sees as an enemy or if something threatens his existence.

Sample Post:

Inside a decepticon research base, an alarm goes off alerting the decepticon guards that there is break through. As the guards go check out what is causing it, they see a bot scientist being thrown against the wall as a devilish looking bot comes through. It picks up the bot from the neck and stares at him with a glare. “You will provide me nourishment.” Says the bot as energon slowly began to leave the helpless bot body.

“Don’t move!” The guards all point their weapons at the monstrous bot as they began to call for Shockwave.

“Grrrrrrrrrrr...........RAWRRRR!!!!” The bot roared as its chest opened up and began charging at the guards. The guards opened fire, but the bot used the lifeless body as a shield as he threw the bot at the guards. Now that its fully charged, a huge energy blast is unleashed as it destroys the bots point blank and most of the base. The blast left a huge hole as most of the interior were now old scraps. The bot walks through the pile of destruction it left behind as he sees Shockwave. “Out of my way!” The bot charges towards the one eye transformers as two wrist blades came out; however, the match was over already as he drops down to the ground. Shockwave already fired without him noticing as Shockwave then dragged him to his base.

After the events

“You have done well.” The devilish bot drops the lifeless bot before Megatron’s eyes as he claps in joy. “You have passed the test, you have passed my expectations.” Megatron gets up from his chair and walks over to the devilish bot. “You will become a great assassin that will strike fear in into many.”

“Being a great assassin isn’t true fear. True Fear is leaving behind destruction countless of times, that is the beauty of striking fear into opponents as they are helpless to stop it.”

Megatron pats him on the shoulder. “Understandable. For now on, you will be known as Deathwave. You bring death to your enemies and strike fear into the hearts of the autobots.”

Deathwave kneels down before Megatron to show him respects. “Thank you, Lord Megatron. Through your training, I will not fail you. The autobots will know of the terror that is about to come forth to them. Grrrrrrrrrrrrr hehehahahahahaha.”

There's a lot to deal with here.

The Predacon angle will have to be discussed with Razorclaw's player and the other mods, so you'll have to wait on a decision concerning that angle.

Not sure why his alt mode is a mythical creature. They don't exist, so it might be a better idea to choose another alt mode.

Lower his height to 30ft or below.

He has a special ability to drain, but you failed to explain the ability in detail in abilities section. How does it work? Has he always had it? Why does he have it? You've already taken 7 pints, but draining anything is pretty powerful so we'll have to take more penalty points.

A weapon that annihilates anything in its path is pretty powerful and will cost quite a few stat points even though it does take time to charge.

Get rid of the comment about Shockwave. You don't have permission fro his player to mention that your character is of any dangerous to him.


If he's also considered a berserker in any mode, that'll be another stat penalty.

So, lots of work to be done on this one.

Deathwave

Allegiance: Decepticon
Subgroup: Predacons
Function: Assassin
Alternate Modes: T-Rex
Weapons: Dark Particle Cannon and two dark energon wrist blades
Special Abilities: Drain (Able to slowly drain energon)
Height: 30ft/10 m
Quote: “True Fear is leaving behind destruction countless of times, that is the beauty of striking fear into opponents as they are helpless to stop it.”

Strength: 7
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity: 5
Speed: 7
Endurance: 7
Courage: 6
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 3
Rank:

Profile:

Before the war, Nugget distance himself from other cybertronians as he was trying to figure out a way to get rid of his beast mode which he couldn't control. During the war, Nugget discovered Dark Energon in a abandon station far from the cities on cybertron. Unknown to what it was, he began studying it to see what can the substance do and hope that he can find a cure. Soon both sides began to learn of this and wanted it to themselves for their own reasons. When the decepticons attacked, they accidentally blew a reactor to his base thus setting off a chain reaction. The base exploded as the Dark Energon mutated his structure to that of a beast. The sudden change rapidly changed him forever as he managed to survive, but was in stasis. The deceptions found him and began to help him recover; however, unknown to them Nugget was forever gone thanks to the Dark Energon. During recovery, he broke free and destroyed the decepticon lab as he left behind a trail of destruction until he was put in check by the guards. As Megatron came he saw the destruction that Nugget left behind, with that he dubbed him the name Deathwave.

Abilities:
Deathwave is a monstrous decepticon, he has two corrupted dark energon wrist blades. If he gets a lethal blow, it will leave a transformer critically injured to the point that their systems will be corrupted. One of his most powerful arsenal is his Dark particle cannon that will cause tons of damage to any transformers if they aren’t prepared. The cannon however will need recharging for a good 2-5 minutes depending on how long it fires.

His alt form is a T-Rex with medium size arms. His only arsenal is his super charged particle cannon that losses 25% of its power; however, it won’t recharge. It is still a powerful weapon as Deathwave can fire rapid amounts of it; however it will only have 50% of its power. Thanks to the mutation from the Dark Energon, his alt form was able to envelop wings for flight.

His dangerous ability is his Drain Ability. With it he can absorb energon to replenish his own. Once Deathwave gets a hold of you, energon slowly begins to get drained. It is the reasons that make him dangerous and caught the interest of Megatron. This goes for robot/Alt form.

Weaknesses:

Once the particle cannon is fired, Deathwave is mostly a close combat fighter until its recharged. Putting him at a disadvantage against long range fighters.

Sample Post:

Inside a decepticon research base, an alarm goes off alerting the decepticon guards that there is break through. As the guards go check out what is causing it, they see a bot scientist being thrown against the wall as a devilish looking bot comes through. It picks up the bot from the neck and stares at him with a glare. “You will provide me nourishment.” Says the bot as energon slowly began to leave the helpless bot body.

“Don’t move!” The guards all point their weapons at the monstrous bot as they began to call for Shockwave.

“Grrrrrrrrrrr...........RAWRRRR!!!!” The bot roared as its chest opened up and began charging at the guards. The guards opened fire, but the bot used the lifeless body as a shield as he threw the bot at the guards. Now that its fully charged, a huge energy blast is unleashed as it destroys the bots point blank and most of the base. The blast left a huge hole as most of the interior were now old scraps. The bot walks through the pile of destruction it left behind as he sees more guards coming. “Out of my way!” The bot charges towards the one eye transformers as two wrist blades came out; however, the match was over already as he drops down to the ground. The guards already fired without him noticing as they drag him to deliver him to Megatron.

After the events

“You have done well.” The devilish bot drops the lifeless bot before Megatron’s eyes as he claps in joy. “You have passed the test, you have passed my expectations.” Megatron gets up from his chair and walks over to the devilish bot. “You will become a great assassin that will strike fear in into many.”

“Being a great assassin isn’t true fear. True Fear is leaving behind destruction countless of times, that is the beauty of striking fear into opponents as they are helpless to stop it.”

Megatron pats him on the shoulder. “Understandable. For now on, you will be known as Deathwave. You bring death to your enemies and strike fear into the hearts of the autobots.”

Deathwave kneels down before Megatron to show him respects. “Thank you, Lord Megatron. Through your training, I will not fail you. The autobots will know of the terror that is about to come forth to them. Grrrrrrrrrrrrr hehehahahahahaha.”

ChaosWave360 wrote:Deathwave

Allegiance: Decepticon
Subgroup: Predacons
Function: Assassin
Alternate Modes: T-Rex
Weapons: Dark Particle Cannon and two dark energon wrist blades
Special Abilities: Drain (Able to slowly drain energon)
Height: 30ft/10 m
Quote: “True Fear is leaving behind destruction countless of times, that is the beauty of striking fear into opponents as they are helpless to stop it.”

Strength: 7
Intelligence: 5
Dexterity: 5
Speed: 7
Endurance: 7
Courage: 6
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 7
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 3
Rank:

Profile:

Before the war, Nugget distance himself from other cybertronians as he was trying to figure out a way to get rid of his beast mode which he couldn't control. During the war, Nugget discovered Dark Energon in a abandon station far from the cities on cybertron. Unknown to what it was, he began studying it to see what can the substance do and hope that he can find a cure. Soon both sides began to learn of this and wanted it to themselves for their own reasons. When the decepticons attacked, they accidentally blew a reactor to his base thus setting off a chain reaction. The base exploded as the Dark Energon mutated his structure to that of a beast. The sudden change rapidly changed him forever as he managed to survive, but was in stasis. The deceptions found him and began to help him recover; however, unknown to them Nugget was forever gone thanks to the Dark Energon. During recovery, he broke free and destroyed the decepticon lab as he left behind a trail of destruction until he was put in check by the guards. As Megatron came he saw the destruction that Nugget left behind, with that he dubbed him the name Deathwave.

Abilities:
Deathwave is a monstrous decepticon, he has two corrupted dark energon wrist blades. If he gets a lethal blow, it will leave a transformer critically injured to the point that their systems will be corrupted. One of his most powerful arsenal is his Dark particle cannon that will cause tons of damage to any transformers if they aren’t prepared. The cannon however will need recharging for a good 2-5 minutes depending on how long it fires.

His alt form is a T-Rex with medium size arms. His only arsenal is his super charged particle cannon that losses 25% of its power; however, it won’t recharge. It is still a powerful weapon as Deathwave can fire rapid amounts of it; however it will only have 50% of its power. Thanks to the mutation from the Dark Energon, his alt form was able to envelop wings for flight.

His dangerous ability is his Drain Ability. With it he can absorb energon to replenish his own. Once Deathwave gets a hold of you, energon slowly begins to get drained. It is the reasons that make him dangerous and caught the interest of Megatron. This goes for robot/Alt form.

Weaknesses:

Once the particle cannon is fired, Deathwave is mostly a close combat fighter until its recharged. Putting him at a disadvantage against long range fighters.

Sample Post:

Inside a decepticon research base, an alarm goes off alerting the decepticon guards that there is break through. As the guards go check out what is causing it, they see a bot scientist being thrown against the wall as a devilish looking bot comes through. It picks up the bot from the neck and stares at him with a glare. “You will provide me nourishment.” Says the bot as energon slowly began to leave the helpless bot body.

“Don’t move!” The guards all point their weapons at the monstrous bot as they began to call for Shockwave.

“Grrrrrrrrrrr...........RAWRRRR!!!!” The bot roared as its chest opened up and began charging at the guards. The guards opened fire, but the bot used the lifeless body as a shield as he threw the bot at the guards. Now that its fully charged, a huge energy blast is unleashed as it destroys the bots point blank and most of the base. The blast left a huge hole as most of the interior were now old scraps. The bot walks through the pile of destruction it left behind as he sees more guards coming. “Out of my way!” The bot charges towards the one eye transformers as two wrist blades came out; however, the match was over already as he drops down to the ground. The guards already fired without him noticing as they drag him to deliver him to Megatron.

After the events

“You have done well.” The devilish bot drops the lifeless bot before Megatron’s eyes as he claps in joy. “You have passed the test, you have passed my expectations.” Megatron gets up from his chair and walks over to the devilish bot. “You will become a great assassin that will strike fear in into many.”

“Being a great assassin isn’t true fear. True Fear is leaving behind destruction countless of times, that is the beauty of striking fear into opponents as they are helpless to stop it.”

Megatron pats him on the shoulder. “Understandable. For now on, you will be known as Deathwave. You bring death to your enemies and strike fear into the hearts of the autobots.”

Deathwave kneels down before Megatron to show him respects. “Thank you, Lord Megatron. Through your training, I will not fail you. The autobots will know of the terror that is about to come forth to them. Grrrrrrrrrrrrr hehehahahahahaha.”

Dark Energon does not exist in the game.

With the drain ability we're talking about at least a 10 point stat deduction, at minimum. You're stats add up to 69, so if we go with the minimum of a 10 point deduction that leaves you with only 59 points to work with. Not very many.

Is this good now?

Deathwave

Allegiance: Decepticon
Subgroup: Predacons
Function: Assassin
Alternate Modes: T-Rex
Weapons: Dark Particle Cannon and two corrupted energon wrist blades
Special Abilities: Drain (Able to slowly drain energon)
Height: 30ft/10 m
Quote: “True Fear is leaving behind destruction countless of times, that is the beauty of striking fear into opponents as they are helpless to stop it.”

Strength: 7
Intelligence: 3
Dexterity: 4
Speed: 5
Endurance: 6
Courage: 5
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 2
Rank:

Profile:

Deathwave is a project that Megatron wanted in creating a powerful transformer. Using the generic structure of the T-Rex, the decepticon scientists began modifying Deathwave body that will please Megatron. Deathwave was given unstable energon substance to see what the body will do with it. Good results came in as Deathwave was able to embrace it thus making the project a success. However, an surprising attack from the autobots unleashed Deathwave as he begins to attack anyone. It is not until being trained by Megatron that he is able to learn the arts of combat and the joy of destroying a bot. Deathwave has no respect to anyone, but Megatron as he sees him as a father. Despite being trained as an assassin, Deathwave loves to cause destruction as an aftermath to show the autobots that they are helpless and will always be to late to stop him. He's a sarcastic transformers that shows no mercy.

Abilities:
Deathwave is a monstrous decepticon, he has two corrupted energon wrist blades. If he gets a lethal blow, it will leave a transformer critically injured to the point that their systems will be corrupted. One of his most powerful arsenal is his Dark particle cannon that will cause tons of damage to any transformers if they aren’t prepared. The cannon however will need recharging for a good 2-5 minutes depending on how long it fires.

His alt form is a T-Rex with medium size arms. His only arsenal is his super charged particle cannon that losses 25% of its power; however, it won’t recharge. It is still a powerful weapon as Deathwave can fire rapid amounts of it; however it will only have 50% of its power. Thanks to the mutation from the unstable Energon, his alt form was able to envelop wings for flight.

His dangerous ability is his Drain Ability. With it he can absorb energon to replenish his own. Once Deathwave gets a hold of you, energon slowly begins to get drained. It is the reasons that make him dangerous and caught the interest of Megatron. This goes for robot/Alt form.

Weaknesses:

Once the particle cannon is fired, Deathwave is mostly a close combat fighter until its recharged. Putting him at a disadvantage against long range fighters.

Sample Post:

Inside a decepticon research base, an alarm goes off alerting the decepticon guards that there is break through. As the guards go check out what is causing it, they see a bot scientist being thrown against the wall as a devilish looking bot comes through. It picks up the bot from the neck and stares at him with a glare. “You will provide me nourishment.” Says the bot as energon slowly began to leave the helpless bot body.

“Don’t move!” The guards all point their weapons at the monstrous bot as they began to call for Shockwave.

“Grrrrrrrrrrr...........RAWRRRR!!!!” The bot roared as its chest opened up and began charging at the guards. The guards opened fire, but the bot used the lifeless body as a shield as he threw the bot at the guards. Now that its fully charged, a huge energy blast is unleashed as it destroys the bots point blank and most of the base. The blast left a huge hole as most of the interior were now old scraps. The bot walks through the pile of destruction it left behind as he sees more guards coming. “Out of my way!” The bot charges towards the one eye transformers as two wrist blades came out; however, the match was over already as he drops down to the ground. The guards already fired without him noticing as they drag him to deliver him to Megatron.

After the events

“You have done well.” The devilish bot drops the lifeless bot before Megatron’s eyes as he claps in joy. “You have passed the test, you have passed my expectations.” Megatron gets up from his chair and walks over to the devilish bot. “You will become a great assassin that will strike fear in into many.”

“Being a great assassin isn’t true fear. True Fear is leaving behind destruction countless of times, that is the beauty of striking fear into opponents as they are helpless to stop it.”

Megatron pats him on the shoulder. “Understandable. For now on, you will be known as Deathwave. You bring death to your enemies and strike fear into the hearts of the autobots.”

Deathwave kneels down before Megatron to show him respects. “Thank you, Lord Megatron. Through your training, I will not fail you. The autobots will know of the terror that is about to come forth to them. Grrrrrrrrrrrrr hehehahahahahaha.”

ChaosWave360 wrote:Is this good now?

Deathwave

Allegiance: Decepticon
Subgroup: Predacons
Function: Assassin
Alternate Modes: T-Rex
Weapons: Dark Particle Cannon and two corrupted energon wrist blades
Special Abilities: Drain (Able to slowly drain energon)
Height: 30ft/10 m
Quote: “True Fear is leaving behind destruction countless of times, that is the beauty of striking fear into opponents as they are helpless to stop it.”

Strength: 7
Intelligence: 3
Dexterity: 4
Speed: 5
Endurance: 6
Courage: 5
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 2
Rank:

Profile:

Deathwave is a project that Megatron wanted in creating a powerful transformer. Using the generic structure of the T-Rex, the decepticon scientists began modifying Deathwave body that will please Megatron. Deathwave was given unstable energon substance to see what the body will do with it. Good results came in as Deathwave was able to embrace it thus making the project a success. However, an surprising attack from the autobots unleashed Deathwave as he begins to attack anyone. It is not until being trained by Megatron that he is able to learn the arts of combat and the joy of destroying a bot. Deathwave has no respect to anyone, but Megatron as he sees him as a father. Despite being trained as an assassin, Deathwave loves to cause destruction as an aftermath to show the autobots that they are helpless and will always be to late to stop him. He's a sarcastic transformers that shows no mercy.

Abilities:
Deathwave is a monstrous decepticon, he has two corrupted energon wrist blades. If he gets a lethal blow, it will leave a transformer critically injured to the point that their systems will be corrupted. One of his most powerful arsenal is his Dark particle cannon that will cause tons of damage to any transformers if they aren’t prepared. The cannon however will need recharging for a good 2-5 minutes depending on how long it fires.

His alt form is a T-Rex with medium size arms. His only arsenal is his super charged particle cannon that losses 25% of its power; however, it won’t recharge. It is still a powerful weapon as Deathwave can fire rapid amounts of it; however it will only have 50% of its power. Thanks to the mutation from the unstable Energon, his alt form was able to envelop wings for flight.

His dangerous ability is his Drain Ability. With it he can absorb energon to replenish his own. Once Deathwave gets a hold of you, energon slowly begins to get drained. It is the reasons that make him dangerous and caught the interest of Megatron. This goes for robot/Alt form.

Weaknesses:

Once the particle cannon is fired, Deathwave is mostly a close combat fighter until its recharged. Putting him at a disadvantage against long range fighters.

Sample Post:

Inside a decepticon research base, an alarm goes off alerting the decepticon guards that there is break through. As the guards go check out what is causing it, they see a bot scientist being thrown against the wall as a devilish looking bot comes through. It picks up the bot from the neck and stares at him with a glare. “You will provide me nourishment.” Says the bot as energon slowly began to leave the helpless bot body.

“Don’t move!” The guards all point their weapons at the monstrous bot as they began to call for Shockwave.

“Grrrrrrrrrrr...........RAWRRRR!!!!” The bot roared as its chest opened up and began charging at the guards. The guards opened fire, but the bot used the lifeless body as a shield as he threw the bot at the guards. Now that its fully charged, a huge energy blast is unleashed as it destroys the bots point blank and most of the base. The blast left a huge hole as most of the interior were now old scraps. The bot walks through the pile of destruction it left behind as he sees more guards coming. “Out of my way!” The bot charges towards the one eye transformers as two wrist blades came out; however, the match was over already as he drops down to the ground. The guards already fired without him noticing as they drag him to deliver him to Megatron.

After the events

“You have done well.” The devilish bot drops the lifeless bot before Megatron’s eyes as he claps in joy. “You have passed the test, you have passed my expectations.” Megatron gets up from his chair and walks over to the devilish bot. “You will become a great assassin that will strike fear in into many.”

“Being a great assassin isn’t true fear. True Fear is leaving behind destruction countless of times, that is the beauty of striking fear into opponents as they are helpless to stop it.”

Megatron pats him on the shoulder. “Understandable. For now on, you will be known as Deathwave. You bring death to your enemies and strike fear into the hearts of the autobots.”

Deathwave kneels down before Megatron to show him respects. “Thank you, Lord Megatron. Through your training, I will not fail you. The autobots will know of the terror that is about to come forth to them. Grrrrrrrrrrrrr hehehahahahahaha.”

If you insist on using the profile as is you're going to have to get permission from Devastron to mention Megatron in it. As it stands the profile section is unacceptable.

Also he cannot be a Predacon, but he can be a former Predacon. You will have to mention that in the profile as the Predacons are a five member group which has been established canonically.

Deathwave

Allegiance: Decepticon
Subgroup: Former Predacon
Function: Killing machine
Alternate Modes: T-Rex
Weapons: Dark Particle Cannon and two virus energon wrist blades
Special Abilities: Drain (Able to slowly drain energon)
Height: 30ft/10 m
Quote: “True Fear is leaving behind destruction countless of times, that is the beauty of striking fear into opponents as they are helpless to stop it.”

Strength: 7
Intelligence: 3
Dexterity: 3
Speed: 6
Endurance: 6
Courage: 5
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 2
Rank:

Profile:

Deathwave was a project funded by the decepticons in creating a powerful transformer to help crush the autobots. Using scraps of a former Predacon and the generic structure of the T-Rex, the decepticon scientists began modifying Deathwave’s body. Deathwave was given unstable energon substance to see what the body will do with it. Good results came in as Deathwave was able to embrace it thus making the project a success. However, an surprising attack from the autobots unleashed Deathwave as he begins to attack anyone. Using battle data from previous battles with the autobots, Deathwave has made its own form of combat. As any other deceptiocn, Deathwave loves to cause destruction as an aftermath to show the autobots that they are helpless and will always be to late to stop him. He's a sarcastic transformers that shows no mercy.


Abilities:
Deathwave is a monstrous decepticon, he has two corrupted energon wrist blades. If he gets a lethal blow, it will leave a transformer critically injured to the point that their systems will be corrupted. One of his most powerful arsenal is his Dark particle cannon that will cause tons of damage to any transformers if they aren’t prepared. The cannon however will need recharging for a good 2-5 minutes depending on how long it fires.

His alt form is a T-Rex with medium size arms which is basically his juggernaut form. His only arsenal is his super charged particle cannon that losses 25% of its power; however, it won’t recharge. It is still a powerful weapon as Deathwave can fire rapid amounts of it; however it will only have 50% of its power.

His dangerous ability is his Drain Ability. With it he can absorb energon to replenish his own. Once Deathwave gets a hold of you, energon slowly begins to get drained. It is the reasons that make him dangerous for even Shockwave and caught the interest of Megatron. This goes for robot/Alt form.

Weaknesses:

Once the particle cannon is fired, Deathwave is mostly a close combat fighter until its recharged. Putting him at a disadvantage against long range fighters.

Sample Post:

Inside a decepticon research base, an alarm goes off alerting the decepticon guards that there is break through. As the guards go check out what is causing it, they see a bot scientist being thrown against the wall as a devilish looking bot comes through. It picks up the bot from the neck and stares at him with a glare. “You will provide me nourishment.” Says the bot as energon slowly began to leave the helpless bot body.

“Deathwave, don’t move!” The guards all point their weapons at the monstrous bot as they began to call for backup.

“Grrrrrrrrrrr...........RAWRRRR!!!!” The bot roared as its chest opened up and began charging at the guards. The guards opened fire, but the bot used the lifeless body as a shield as he threw the bot at the guards. Now that its fully charged, a huge energy blast is unleashed as it destroys the bots point blank and most of the base. The blast left a huge hole as most of the interior were now old scraps. The bot walks through the pile of destruction as he left the ruined lab behind. “So my name is Deathwave.........hehehe I like it.” Deathwave transformed into his monstrous T-rex form as he left the scene before the reinforcements can arrive.

ChaosWave360 wrote:Deathwave

Allegiance: Decepticon
Subgroup: Former Predacon
Function: Killing machine
Alternate Modes: T-Rex
Weapons: Dark Particle Cannon and two virus energon wrist blades
Special Abilities: Drain (Able to slowly drain energon)
Height: 30ft/10 m
Quote: “True Fear is leaving behind destruction countless of times, that is the beauty of striking fear into opponents as they are helpless to stop it.”

Strength: 7
Intelligence: 3
Dexterity: 3
Speed: 6
Endurance: 6
Courage: 5
Firepower: 8
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 2
Rank:

Profile:

Deathwave was a project funded by the decepticons in creating a powerful transformer to help crush the autobots. Using scraps of a former Predacon and the generic structure of the T-Rex, the decepticon scientists began modifying Deathwave’s body. Deathwave was given unstable energon substance to see what the body will do with it. Good results came in as Deathwave was able to embrace it thus making the project a success. However, an surprising attack from the autobots unleashed Deathwave as he begins to attack anyone. Using battle data from previous battles with the autobots, Deathwave has made its own form of combat. As any other deceptiocn, Deathwave loves to cause destruction as an aftermath to show the autobots that they are helpless and will always be to late to stop him. He's a sarcastic transformers that shows no mercy.


Abilities:
Deathwave is a monstrous decepticon, he has two corrupted energon wrist blades. If he gets a lethal blow, it will leave a transformer critically injured to the point that their systems will be corrupted. One of his most powerful arsenal is his Dark particle cannon that will cause tons of damage to any transformers if they aren’t prepared. The cannon however will need recharging for a good 2-5 minutes depending on how long it fires.

His alt form is a T-Rex with medium size arms which is basically his juggernaut form. His only arsenal is his super charged particle cannon that losses 25% of its power; however, it won’t recharge. It is still a powerful weapon as Deathwave can fire rapid amounts of it; however it will only have 50% of its power.

His dangerous ability is his Drain Ability. With it he can absorb energon to replenish his own. Once Deathwave gets a hold of you, energon slowly begins to get drained. It is the reasons that make him dangerous for even Shockwave and caught the interest of Megatron. This goes for robot/Alt form.

Weaknesses:

Once the particle cannon is fired, Deathwave is mostly a close combat fighter until its recharged. Putting him at a disadvantage against long range fighters.

Sample Post:

Inside a decepticon research base, an alarm goes off alerting the decepticon guards that there is break through. As the guards go check out what is causing it, they see a bot scientist being thrown against the wall as a devilish looking bot comes through. It picks up the bot from the neck and stares at him with a glare. “You will provide me nourishment.” Says the bot as energon slowly began to leave the helpless bot body.

“Deathwave, don’t move!” The guards all point their weapons at the monstrous bot as they began to call for backup.

“Grrrrrrrrrrr...........RAWRRRR!!!!” The bot roared as its chest opened up and began charging at the guards. The guards opened fire, but the bot used the lifeless body as a shield as he threw the bot at the guards. Now that its fully charged, a huge energy blast is unleashed as it destroys the bots point blank and most of the base. The blast left a huge hole as most of the interior were now old scraps. The bot walks through the pile of destruction as he left the ruined lab behind. “So my name is Deathwave.........hehehe I like it.” Deathwave transformed into his monstrous T-rex form as he left the scene before the reinforcements can arrive.

The staff has taken a long look at your application, and it's been decided that a fanmade as your first character might not be the way to go at this time. We recommend that you try your hand at a canon character and if at some point we believe that you have been handling him to the best of your ability then, perhaps we can consider letting you apply for a fanmade.

Name: Banzai-tron
Allegiance: Decepticon
Sub-group: Decepticon Intelligence
Function: Martial Arts Warrior/Intelligence Operative
Alt. mode: Gunboat
Weapons: Quad Missile Launchers/Energy Blasters, Short-Range Rockets
Special Abilities: None
Height: 28 ft. / 8.5 m
Quote: “To the victor go the profits.”


Strength: 8
Intelligence: 7
Dexterity: 9
Speed: 8
Endurance: 8
Courage: 10
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 10
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 6
Rank: 6

Profile: A master hand-to-hand combatant, Banzai-tron sought to use his skills to better his financial situation by joining the Decepticons. After he turns his Autobot opponents to spare parts, he typically gathers up the pieces to sell for scrap. Banzai-tron is an avowed materialist who doesn’t believe in the spiritual aspects of practicing martial arts, unlike Bludgeon (whom Banzai-tron respects but secretly hopes to defeat someday). Banzai-tron is cocky and arrogant, but he can be—he is among the greatest fighters in the galaxy.

Abilities: Subject is the reigning master of Crystalocution, a Cybertronian fighting style that focuses upon exploiting the minute flaws in an opponent’s structure. In gunboat mode, Banzai-tron can travel at speeds up to 260 knotts. His primary weapons are four missile launchers; the two launchers in his bow can double as energy blasters. He also carries four short-range rockets with adjustable power outputs, which can be set from stun to disintegrate.

Weaknesses: Though lacking any known physical weaknesses, sometimes he becomes too focused on profit and fails to see the larger scope of events around him.

ChaosWave360 wrote:Name: Banzai-tron
Allegiance: Decepticon
Sub-group: Decepticon Intelligence
Function: Martial Arts Warrior/Intelligence Operative
Alt. mode: Gunboat
Weapons: Quad Missile Launchers/Energy Blasters, Short-Range Rockets
Special Abilities: None
Height: 28 ft. / 8.5 m
Quote: “To the victor go the profits.”


Strength: 8
Intelligence: 7
Dexterity: 9
Speed: 8
Endurance: 8
Courage: 10
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 6
Melee: 10
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 6
Rank: 6

Profile: A master hand-to-hand combatant, Banzai-tron sought to use his skills to better his financial situation by joining the Decepticons. After he turns his Autobot opponents to spare parts, he typically gathers up the pieces to sell for scrap. Banzai-tron is an avowed materialist who doesn’t believe in the spiritual aspects of practicing martial arts, unlike Bludgeon (whom Banzai-tron respects but secretly hopes to defeat someday). Banzai-tron is cocky and arrogant, but he can be—he is among the greatest fighters in the galaxy.

Abilities: Subject is the reigning master of Crystalocution, a Cybertronian fighting style that focuses upon exploiting the minute flaws in an opponent’s structure. In gunboat mode, Banzai-tron can travel at speeds up to 260 knotts. His primary weapons are four missile launchers; the two launchers in his bow can double as energy blasters. He also carries four short-range rockets with adjustable power outputs, which can be set from stun to disintegrate.

Weaknesses: Though lacking any known physical weaknesses, sometimes he becomes too focused on profit and fails to see the larger scope of events around him.

You don't have a sample post, which is required. I'd also recommend taking a more earth based character.

Name: Bomb-Burst
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Predator
Alt. mode: VTOL Hovercraft
Weapons: Dual Lasers, Energo-Battle Axe
Height: 28 ft / 8.53 m
Quote: “The greater the foe, the sweeter his fuel!”


Strength: 8
Intelligence: 8
Dexterity: 9
Speed: 7
Endurance: 4
Courage: 9
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 8
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 4
Rank: 7

Profile: Bomb-Burst is a loner who hunts from the shadows. Cybertronian myth suggests Bomb-Burst was designed to be the ultimate predator in darkness, and his horrific reputation lives up to this legend. Bomb-Burst enjoys silently stalking a group of Autobots, picking them off one by one by dragging his victims into the dark to suck them dry of energon. Sometimes he leaves his victim's grotesquely mangled husk for the others to find later, and other times he just lets the Autobots wonder what happened to their missing comrade. Both methods invariably unnerve his targets, which pleases Bomb-Burst greatly. He's excellent at his job, but unable to relate personally to most other Decepticons.

Abilities: Subject transforms into a nearly silent vehicle armed with dual lasers that he also uses in robot mode. He is extremely agile in both modes. Specially designed fangs allow Subject to pierce most metals, sucking any energy out. In robot mode, he has great strength. Subject also wields an energo-battle axe in combat.

Weaknesses: Subject's optics are sensitive to bright light; direct exposure to it can easily blind him. He must refuel or drain other Transformers' energy regularly or risk stasis lock.

Sample Post:

It is 6 pm at night as the autobots are doing recon around the area for any decepticon activity. The night is young and the sun just went down leaving it pitch black. A recon team of four autobots are looking around the forest area.

"No decepticon activity yet."

"This is boring when are we gonna get some action."

"Careful what you say, it might come and bite you in the butt."

"Ya ya, whatever you say ahahhhhhhhh"

They hear metal being crunched as the rest of the autobots turn around to see what was happening. They go over there to see that their fellow bot has been food as his energon is sucked away.

"What the hell?"

"Oh man, could it be........I'm getting the hell out of here!"

"No, wait!"

The bot transforms and leaves the area; however, the others hear metal grinding on one another. They check it out, but see the bot who tried to leave was also food.

"Autobots, we need reinforcements...we think we got con activity. Subject appears to be Bomb-Burst as the legends say."

"Oh man, we are so screwed. Screwed man......screwed!!!"

"Pull yourself together, we are gonna make it out alive. You hear me. Ahhhhhhh"
A cybertronian begins to drag the poor autobot as his comrade runs after him to try and save him. He pulls out his guns and begins to shoot as you heard a screech. The unknown bot drops the autobot before making a retreat.

"Are you alright?"

"Ya, barely. My energon levels are almost gone though....listen, you have to get out of here. I think I know whose attacking."
Suddenly the bot is struck with a battle-axe as he drops dead leaking energon.

"He talked to much....now your next my little prey."

The last autobot looks around and tries to find out where the voice is coming from. The bot hears nothing as he tries to shoot at anything he sees moving. Suddenly he gets tackled to the ground and gets bitten on his neck.
"Ahhhhhhh.....Optimus........save.....meee....."

As the bot slowly begins to deactivate, he sees a huge transformer over him.
"Optimus won't be saving you."
The last thing the bot sees is Bomb-Burst opening its mouth and begins to crunch over his remains.

ChaosWave360 wrote:Name: Bomb-Burst
Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Predator
Alt. mode: VTOL Hovercraft
Weapons: Dual Lasers, Energo-Battle Axe
Height: 28 ft / 8.53 m
Quote: “The greater the foe, the sweeter his fuel!”


Strength: 8
Intelligence: 8
Dexterity: 9
Speed: 7
Endurance: 4
Courage: 9
Firepower: 7
Accuracy: 8
Melee: 8
Tech Skill: 6
Charisma: 4
Rank: 7

Profile: Bomb-Burst is a loner who hunts from the shadows. Cybertronian myth suggests Bomb-Burst was designed to be the ultimate predator in darkness, and his horrific reputation lives up to this legend. Bomb-Burst enjoys silently stalking a group of Autobots, picking them off one by one by dragging his victims into the dark to suck them dry of energon. Sometimes he leaves his victim's grotesquely mangled husk for the others to find later, and other times he just lets the Autobots wonder what happened to their missing comrade. Both methods invariably unnerve his targets, which pleases Bomb-Burst greatly. He's excellent at his job, but unable to relate personally to most other Decepticons.

Abilities: Subject transforms into a nearly silent vehicle armed with dual lasers that he also uses in robot mode. He is extremely agile in both modes. Specially designed fangs allow Subject to pierce most metals, sucking any energy out. In robot mode, he has great strength. Subject also wields an energo-battle axe in combat.

Weaknesses: Subject's optics are sensitive to bright light; direct exposure to it can easily blind him. He must refuel or drain other Transformers' energy regularly or risk stasis lock.

Sample Post:

It is 6 pm at night as the autobots are doing recon around the area for any decepticon activity. The night is young and the sun just went down leaving it pitch black. A recon team of four autobots are looking around the forest area.

"No decepticon activity yet."

"This is boring when are we gonna get some action."

"Careful what you say, it might come and bite you in the butt."

"Ya ya, whatever you say ahahhhhhhhh"

They hear metal being crunched as the rest of the autobots turn around to see what was happening. They go over there to see that their fellow bot has been food as his energon is sucked away.

"What the hell?"

"Oh man, could it be........I'm getting the hell out of here!"

"No, wait!"

The bot transforms and leaves the area; however, the others hear metal grinding on one another. They check it out, but see the bot who tried to leave was also food.

"Autobots, we need reinforcements...we think we got con activity. Subject appears to be Bomb-Burst as the legends say."

"Oh man, we are so screwed. Screwed man......screwed!!!"

"Pull yourself together, we are gonna make it out alive. You hear me. Ahhhhhhh"
A cybertronian begins to drag the poor autobot as his comrade runs after him to try and save him. He pulls out his guns and begins to shoot as you heard a screech. The unknown bot drops the autobot before making a retreat.

"Are you alright?"

"Ya, barely. My energon levels are almost gone though....listen, you have to get out of here. I think I know whose attacking."
Suddenly the bot is struck with a battle-axe as he drops dead leaking energon.

"He talked to much....now your next my little prey."

The last autobot looks around and tries to find out where the voice is coming from. The bot hears nothing as he tries to shoot at anything he sees moving. Suddenly he gets tackled to the ground and gets bitten on his neck.
"Ahhhhhhh.....Optimus........save.....meee....."

As the bot slowly begins to deactivate, he sees a huge transformer over him.
"Optimus won't be saving you."
The last thing the bot sees is Bomb-Burst opening its mouth and begins to crunch over his remains.

*Edit* I didn't know that the application was a copy of one already accepted. My apologies. I've edited my comments accordingly.

This character also would be difficult to work on Earth and was originally introduced on Nebulos. We generally wouldn't allow a brand new player onto the Nebulos side of things. Perhaps you could take one of the available Autobot cars or minibots? Maybe one of the available Decepticon seekers? This would allow you to get into the game and then maybe and the feel of things.

I don't like to play as autobots

P.S in Tired mode right now

Thrust

Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: (Cybertron) Tetra jet / (Earth) F-35 Lightning II
Weapons: Compressed air rifles/laser cannons, Heat-seeking missiles
Special Abilities: Temporary speed increase above normal limits.
Height: 31 ft / 9,46 m
Quote: "My engines' roar is my enemies' song of doom!"


Strength: 08
Intelligence: 06
Dexterity: 08
Speed: 09
Endurance: 06
Courage: 04
Firepower: 08
Accuracy: 07
Melee: 07
Tech Skill: 05
Charisma: 05
Rank: 05

Profile: Thrust sees no point in trying to be subtle or sneaky to accomplish a military goal, and he often mocks those Decepticons who specialize in such work. Much like Dirge, he projects a carefully prepared image, although Thrust's is much less sophisticated. He brags about his toughness incessantly and makes every attempt to make his presence known both before and after he gets to the battlefield. He feels that trying to "psych out" his opponents with a dramatic arrival is half the battle. He delights in causing noticeable collateral damage on his way to battle just to let his foes know he's coming. Thrust never hesitates to announce his predestined victory before a fight has even begun.

Abilities: Subject possesses above-average strength and intelligence, and he is a highly skilled warrior. Like his follow Decepticon jet fighters, Thrust can attain speeds of up to 3000 mph and more. But he can accelerate to more than twice of his normal maximum speed in a few seconds and maintain that for .25 breems. The vibrations from his rapid acceleration can destroy nearby constructions. He carries a variety of missiles and two compressed air rifles; each one can punch a hole through steel at a distance of 1000 meters.

Weaknesses: A strong counterattack can break his nerve and cause him to retreat. He is unable to follow through on plans involving extreme subtlety.

Sample Post:

An unknown energon source is located in sector 8 near Los vegas, the decepticons have begun to the attack and are attacking the city. Thrust hovers above the battle with a laughter as he looks at the destruction he made to locating the energon.

"Hahahaha, lord Megatron will be pleased, maybe he will boost my rank. Hahahahahahahahaha."

One of the seekers transforms besides Thrust as he gives his battle report.

"Sir, the autobots are heading over at sector 7, they will be on their way. If they come, we might risk losing the energon to them."

"Listen, do you want to have Megatron's blessing?"

"Of course I do, but....."

"Then listen to me and he shall bless us all with good fortune."

"Of course what should we do?"

"Attack the place call Hollywood, with both attacks, they will be forced to split their forces. With that, you will cause a landslide to make casualties among the insects and pesky autobots. Tell the remaining forces to aim at the buildings, we're gonna cause a massive roadblock here."

"Done."
The seeker transforms and flies away to give out the order.

"Poor autobots, they should realize that they lost to me by coming..hahahahahahahaha."

Thrust plans worked as the autobots soon split their forces to combat the small decepticon forces that are attacking hollywood. Meanwhile the roadblock caused by other decepticons delayed the autobots long enough for the cons to find the energon and retreat. Before the autobots got through, Thrust fires his lasers at them to hold them off, but notices that he's outnumbered.

"Thrust, you ain't getting away!"

"Ohhhhhh, but I am...hehehehehe after all you got a building to stop."
Thrust aims his cannons at a building full with people as he fired upon it sending it down.
"Now will you choose me or them?"

"Ugh.....lets go autobots, we gotta save those people."

"Thats what I thought...hahaha."
With that, Thrust transforms into his F-35 lightning II and heads out.

ChaosWave360 wrote:I don't like to play as autobots

P.S in Tired mode right now

Thrust

Allegiance: Decepticon
Function: Warrior
Alt. mode: (Cybertron) Tetra jet / (Earth) F-35 Lightning II
Weapons: Compressed air rifles/laser cannons, Heat-seeking missiles
Special Abilities: Temporary speed increase above normal limits.
Height: 31 ft / 9,46 m
Quote: "My engines' roar is my enemies' song of doom!"


Strength: 08
Intelligence: 06
Dexterity: 08
Speed: 09
Endurance: 06
Courage: 04
Firepower: 08
Accuracy: 07
Melee: 07
Tech Skill: 05
Charisma: 05
Rank: 05

Profile: Thrust sees no point in trying to be subtle or sneaky to accomplish a military goal, and he often mocks those Decepticons who specialize in such work. Much like Dirge, he projects a carefully prepared image, although Thrust's is much less sophisticated. He brags about his toughness incessantly and makes every attempt to make his presence known both before and after he gets to the battlefield. He feels that trying to "psych out" his opponents with a dramatic arrival is half the battle. He delights in causing noticeable collateral damage on his way to battle just to let his foes know he's coming. Thrust never hesitates to announce his predestined victory before a fight has even begun.

Abilities: Subject possesses above-average strength and intelligence, and he is a highly skilled warrior. Like his follow Decepticon jet fighters, Thrust can attain speeds of up to 3000 mph and more. But he can accelerate to more than twice of his normal maximum speed in a few seconds and maintain that for .25 breems. The vibrations from his rapid acceleration can destroy nearby constructions. He carries a variety of missiles and two compressed air rifles; each one can punch a hole through steel at a distance of 1000 meters.

Weaknesses: A strong counterattack can break his nerve and cause him to retreat. He is unable to follow through on plans involving extreme subtlety.

Sample Post:

An unknown energon source is located in sector 8 near Los vegas, the decepticons have begun to the attack and are attacking the city. Thrust hovers above the battle with a laughter as he looks at the destruction he made to locating the energon.

"Hahahaha, lord Megatron will be pleased, maybe he will boost my rank. Hahahahahahahahaha."

One of the seekers transforms besides Thrust as he gives his battle report.

"Sir, the autobots are heading over at sector 7, they will be on their way. If they come, we might risk losing the energon to them."

"Listen, do you want to have Megatron's blessing?"

"Of course I do, but....."

"Then listen to me and he shall bless us all with good fortune."

"Of course what should we do?"

"Attack the place call Hollywood, with both attacks, they will be forced to split their forces. With that, you will cause a landslide to make casualties among the insects and pesky autobots. Tell the remaining forces to aim at the buildings, we're gonna cause a massive roadblock here."

"Done."
The seeker transforms and flies away to give out the order.

"Poor autobots, they should realize that they lost to me by coming..hahahahahahahaha."

Thrust plans worked as the autobots soon split their forces to combat the small decepticon forces that are attacking hollywood. Meanwhile the roadblock caused by other decepticons delayed the autobots long enough for the cons to find the energon and retreat. Before the autobots got through, Thrust fires his lasers at them to hold them off, but notices that he's outnumbered.

"Thrust, you ain't getting away!"

"Ohhhhhh, but I am...hehehehehe after all you got a building to stop."
Thrust aims his cannons at a building full with people as he fired upon it sending it down.
"Now will you choose me or them?"

"Ugh.....lets go autobots, we gotta save those people."

"Thats what I thought...hahaha."
With that, Thrust transforms into his F-35 lightning II and heads out.

Approved, assuming you still have the 'motivation' to play. Make sure to run your posts through spelling and grammar checkers though to clear up a few minor problems. Also skimming the latest threads to get an idea of the current situation would be a good idea too. Thrust should be on board the Ultrax which is now in the Kurile Trench in the Earth forum.

b]BLITZWING[/b]

Allegiance:Decepticon
Sub-group:TripleChangers
Function:Ground/Air Commando
Alternate Modes:Cybertronian Jet And Tank
Weapons:Electron-Scimitar,Gyro-Blaster Rifle,Heat Seeking Concussion Missles,Track-Mounted-Cannon That Fires Compressed Air Sheills At 3.5 miles.
Special Abilities:Triple Chager
Height: 31ft/ 9,45m
Quote: Destroy First, Think Later


Strength:6
Intelligence:4
Dexterity:3
Speed:7
Endurance:7
Courage:9
Firepower:4
Accuracy:3
Melee:6
Tech Skill:0
Charisma:8
Rank: 6

Profile:[/b]Battle loving Blitzwing has a cruel sense of humor, he is loud-mouthed, belligerent, and brash. a fierce warrior known more for his strength and abilities than his intelligence. He finds pleasure in confusing his enemies by transforming in mid-attack. With the lightning quickness in which he can change his foes are rarely ever prepared to engage him. His favorite attack is to use his jet mode to strafe land-bound Autobots and smash down after transforming in mid air to land as a Tank to finish them off with his powerful energy mortar. . In robot mode, he prefers to use his electron scimitar to fight foes one on one. Especially since this hardly ever fails to defeat a foe or bemuse Blitzwing. His twisted sense of humor lends him to find humor in things that harm others, laughing at fellow’s miseries.

Weaknesses:Blitzwing sometimes gets his circuits scrambled, which results in him getting stuck in mid-transformation between forms. Also his cruel sense of humor sometimes distracts him from what is going on.

Abilities: His ability as Triple Changer to rapidly transform makes him one of the most dangerous Decepticons, As a jet fighter, Blitzwing can fly at mach 2.7 with a range of 1500 miles. He carries heat-seeking concussion missiles. As a tank, he can traverse most terrain, however rugged, and can achieve a speed of 28 mph. His track-mounted cannon fires an explosive shell 3.5 miles that can level a 5-story brick building. In robot mode he uses an electron scimitar which can short-circuit any electrical device with a touch of its blade, and a gyro-blaster rifle, which disrupts the sense of balance of anyone it hits for 30 minutes.

Sample Post: Blitzwing was in the Decepticon medic room with Soundwave unsccrambiling his circuts as he looked like a cross between a jet and a tank. A tank with wings and a Cannon coming out the back. "How long is this going to take?" Blitzwing asked. Soundwave did not answer. "Just like all the Nutjobs here" he grumbled. It took nearly a Nanoday to get it fixed. "Well, I think ill just go then..." Blitzwing said. Soundwave again did not answer. Blitzwing Mumbling to himself left without so much as a backwards glance.

Turbine wrote:Kickback

Allegiance:Decepticon
Sub-group:Insecticons
Function:Espionage
Alternate Modes:Locust
Weapons:Sub Machine Gun
Special Abilities:None
Height: 21ft/ 6.4m
Quote: “Freind Is Just Another Word For Fool”


Strength:3
Intelligence:9
Dexterity:7
Speed:4
Endurance:4
Courage:6
Firepower:5
Accuracy:6
Melee:7
Tech Skill:8
Charisma:8
Rank:

Profile:Kickback Is As Charming A Mechinoid Youll Ever Meet-But It's A Charm Rooted In A Uncommonly Cruel Cleverness. The Singular Purpose Of Friends To Him Is Finding Embarrising Facts About Them So His "Friend" Can Do His Bidding. Organics Are Especially Suceptible To His Actions, And Even Autobots Have Been Known To Succumb. The Only Thing Kickback Loves More Than These "Double-Agents" Is Destroying Them After They Are No Use To Him.

Abilities:In His Insect Form, Kickback's Powerful Legs Can Propel Him Almost A Tenth Of A Mile. Although Small In This Form, A Single Kick Can Make A Hole In A Quarter-Inch Armor Plating. In Robot Form, His Wing Can Take Him Up To 30Miles Each Running. He Carries A Sub Machine Gun That Fires 300 Rounds Per Minute, Of Armor Peircing Titanium Coated Bullets. His Top Speed Is 500mph. The Effect That His Weapon Does Is peirce Armor Although, Itll Take A While To Peirce Armor Such As, Optimus's And Bigger Bots.

Weaknesses:In Locust Form, His Lack Of Weaponry Makes Him Extremly Vulnerable. In Robot Form, His Lack Of Jumping Power Reduces Power Greatly.

[b] Sample Post: Kickback Had Just Finished Off His Last Follower, A Bot With A Secret That He Was Organic Although He Seemed To Not Be. "What Worthless Trash." Kickback Muttered Under His Breath, He Was Looking Forward To Get Bumblebee To Do His Bidding. "Now, Lets See...Oooh! A Stofty To Humans, Perfect. Weaknesses,Nice Uh...Short Tempered And A Brat...Good. Now...Ill Tell Him About These, Threaten To Give Them To Megatron, And Unless He Does Whatever I Say, Megatron Will Have A Nice Time DESTROYING Him!" Kickback Laughed Out Loud. " With These, Ill Be Unstoppable! HaHaHaHaHaHaHa! Now Lets See If Megatron Has Anything Embarassing..."

Give me another sample post. He's currently on Nebulos, I want to see something that pertains to that. Get into his personality a bit. He's a charismatic mech. I wanna see that in your writing. And there's no need to capitalize every single word in every sentence you write.

Once I see an acceptable sample then I take another look at him.

Ember wrote:

Turbine wrote:Kickback

Allegiance:Decepticon
Sub-group:Insecticons
Function:Espionage
Alternate Modes:Locust
Weapons:Sub Machine Gun
Special Abilities:None
Height: 21ft/ 6.4m
Quote: “Freind Is Just Another Word For Fool”


Strength:3
Intelligence:9
Dexterity:7
Speed:4
Endurance:4
Courage:6
Firepower:5
Accuracy:6
Melee:7
Tech Skill:8
Charisma:8
Rank:

Profile:Kickback Is As Charming A Mechinoid Youll Ever Meet-But It's A Charm Rooted In A Uncommonly Cruel Cleverness. The Singular Purpose Of Friends To Him Is Finding Embarrising Facts About Them So His "Friend" Can Do His Bidding. Organics Are Especially Suceptible To His Actions, And Even Autobots Have Been Known To Succumb. The Only Thing Kickback Loves More Than These "Double-Agents" Is Destroying Them After They Are No Use To Him.

Abilities:In His Insect Form, Kickback's Powerful Legs Can Propel Him Almost A Tenth Of A Mile. Although Small In This Form, A Single Kick Can Make A Hole In A Quarter-Inch Armor Plating. In Robot Form, His Wing Can Take Him Up To 30Miles Each Running. He Carries A Sub Machine Gun That Fires 300 Rounds Per Minute, Of Armor Peircing Titanium Coated Bullets. His Top Speed Is 500mph. The Effect That His Weapon Does Is peirce Armor Although, Itll Take A While To Peirce Armor Such As, Optimus's And Bigger Bots.

Weaknesses:In Locust Form, His Lack Of Weaponry Makes Him Extremly Vulnerable. In Robot Form, His Lack Of Jumping Power Reduces Power Greatly.

[b] Sample Post: Kickback was already on Nebulous and he was already down with all of its inhabitants. "I dont get why Megatron sent ME to this...This...WORTHLESS PLANET!" He was mad now. REALLY mad."I SHOULD BE ON CYBERTRON CRUSHING THOSE WORTHLESS AUTOBOTS TO DUST! I SHOULD-" his voice stopped short. "What am I saying! I'm acting like,like...Starscream." Kickback dissmissed the though the moment it popped into his mind. "Well. I should at least tell Megatron that im one here..."

Give me another sample post. He's currently on Nebulos, I want to see something that pertains to that. Get into his personality a bit. He's a charismatic mech. I wanna see that in your writing. And there's no need to capitalize every single word in every sentence you write.

Once I see an acceptable sample then I take another look at him.

Turbine wrote:

Ember wrote:

Turbine wrote:Kickback

Allegiance:Decepticon
Sub-group:Insecticons
Function:Espionage
Alternate Modes:Locust
Weapons:Sub Machine Gun
Special Abilities:None
Height: 21ft/ 6.4m
Quote: “Freind Is Just Another Word For Fool”


Strength:3
Intelligence:9
Dexterity:7
Speed:4
Endurance:4
Courage:6
Firepower:5
Accuracy:6
Melee:7
Tech Skill:8
Charisma:8
Rank:

Profile:Kickback Is As Charming A Mechinoid Youll Ever Meet-But It's A Charm Rooted In A Uncommonly Cruel Cleverness. The Singular Purpose Of Friends To Him Is Finding Embarrising Facts About Them So His "Friend" Can Do His Bidding. Organics Are Especially Suceptible To His Actions, And Even Autobots Have Been Known To Succumb. The Only Thing Kickback Loves More Than These "Double-Agents" Is Destroying Them After They Are No Use To Him.

Abilities:In His Insect Form, Kickback's Powerful Legs Can Propel Him Almost A Tenth Of A Mile. Although Small In This Form, A Single Kick Can Make A Hole In A Quarter-Inch Armor Plating. In Robot Form, His Wing Can Take Him Up To 30Miles Each Running. He Carries A Sub Machine Gun That Fires 300 Rounds Per Minute, Of Armor Peircing Titanium Coated Bullets. His Top Speed Is 500mph. The Effect That His Weapon Does Is peirce Armor Although, Itll Take A While To Peirce Armor Such As, Optimus's And Bigger Bots.

Weaknesses:In Locust Form, His Lack Of Weaponry Makes Him Extremly Vulnerable. In Robot Form, His Lack Of Jumping Power Reduces Power Greatly.

[b] Sample Post: Kickback was already on Nebulous and he was already down with all of its inhabitants. "I dont get why Megatron sent ME to this...This...WORTHLESS PLANET!" He was mad now. REALLY mad."I SHOULD BE ON CYBERTRON CRUSHING THOSE WORTHLESS AUTOBOTS TO DUST! I SHOULD-" his voice stopped short. "What am I saying! I'm acting like,like...Starscream." Kickback dissmissed the though the moment it popped into his mind. "Well. I should at least tell Megatron that im one here..."

Give me another sample post. He's currently on Nebulos, I want to see something that pertains to that. Get into his personality a bit. He's a charismatic mech. I wanna see that in your writing. And there's no need to capitalize every single word in every sentence you write.

Once I see an acceptable sample then I take another look at him.

Try again. Triple the sample length, show us some insight to Kickback's personality and drop the excessive use of capital letters in the profile. Also, from what you have shown so far is not enough for us to consider letting you play character as powerful as Blitzwing at this point.