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PhotoComic - The Jackie Wheeler Show

Postby LaserbeaksPrime » Mon Aug 20, 2012 11:57 am

Motto: "Bumblebee, get the chips!!"
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Late Night Prime Time with Jackie Wheeler

Episode 1

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Thanks for viewing! Comments welcome :D
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Re: PhotoComic - The Jackie Wheeler Show

Postby Va'al » Mon Aug 20, 2012 12:42 pm

Motto: "Fnargh."
I love the Soundwave band!

What genre would they be playing? :D
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Re: PhotoComic - The Jackie Wheeler Show

Postby LaserbeaksPrime » Mon Aug 20, 2012 12:45 pm

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Va'al wrote:I love the Soundwave band!

What genre would they be playing? :D


I always imagined them playing something like the songs from the '86 Movie soundtrack ..with maybe a little techno added in :lol:
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Re: PhotoComic - The Jackie Wheeler Show

Postby Va'al » Mon Aug 20, 2012 12:56 pm

Motto: "Fnargh."
That does sound appropriate. :lol:

I like your work, very nice setting and clean photos.
There's something that doesn't convince about the dialogues, but I can't figure out whether it's the font or the amount of text per speech-bubble. :-?

But again, nice work!
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Re: PhotoComic - The Jackie Wheeler Show

Postby LaserbeaksPrime » Mon Aug 20, 2012 1:48 pm

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Va'al wrote:That does sound appropriate. :lol:

I like your work, very nice setting and clean photos.
There's something that doesn't convince about the dialogues, but I can't figure out whether it's the font or the amount of text per speech-bubble. :-?

But again, nice work!



Thanks! Glad you like it :D I think I scaled the text to the bubbles a lot better in the next epsiode, so hopefully that will help.
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Re: PhotoComic - The Jackie Wheeler Show

Postby Burn » Mon Aug 20, 2012 3:17 pm

Va'al wrote:That does sound appropriate. :lol:

I like your work, very nice setting and clean photos.
There's something that doesn't convince about the dialogues, but I can't figure out whether it's the font or the amount of text per speech-bubble. :-?

But again, nice work!


It's the amount of text.

Simple solution is to just have another panel or two to help fill the story out.

Great work!
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Re: PhotoComic - The Jackie Wheeler Show

Postby LaserbeaksPrime » Mon Aug 20, 2012 9:06 pm

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Episode 2

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[url="http://www.youtube.com/embed/T1N91LyATF0"]http://www.youtube.com/embed/T1N91LyATF0[/url]

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To Be Continued..
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Re: PhotoComic - The Jackie Wheeler Show

Postby Va'al » Tue Aug 21, 2012 7:05 am

Motto: "Fnargh."
I liked it again, but it's definitely text heavy.

(The Tracks panel especially. Try using different speechbubbles per line/sentence.)

Also, for YouTube embedding, simply copy the video number, in this case T1N91LyATF0, and post it in the YouTube tags ([youtube][/youtube]).
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Re: PhotoComic - The Jackie Wheeler Show

Postby LaserbeaksPrime » Tue Sep 04, 2012 6:44 pm

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Unfortunately, the pics get re-sized when I post them to the thread so please forgive the small txt on a couple of the pages in this episode. To view the full-sized images, plus more episodes of Jackie Wheeler, please check out Orbital Bacon: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Orbital-Bacon/285661064802194

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Re: PhotoComic - The Jackie Wheeler Show

Postby welcometothedarksyde » Sun Sep 16, 2012 2:45 pm

I find that these are progressively getting funnier. I loved Warpath as Michael Bay, maybe you could have some of those characters return later. I would recommend that you maybe have the toys be more animated with more poses, and different camera angles :lol:
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