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PRIVEIT EYE PRIME

Postby FIRENICE » Wed Mar 11, 2009 2:22 am

IVE BEEN WORKING ON A NEW FAN BOOK WERE THE TRANSFORMERS ARE IN THE 1920 TO 1930S ON CYBERTRON AND PRIME IS A PRIVIT EYE AND WERE MEGARON IS A CRIME LORD I CAN NOT DRAW OR ANIMATE WHAT IM WRIGHTING SO I LIKE SOME HELP ON THIS IF I CAN HEARS A TASTE OF WHAT I WROTE

PRIVEIT EYE PRIME

CYBERTRON : THE YEAR 3.5 MILLION

(EARTH YEAR 1920’S TO 19 30‘S )

OFFICE OF OPTUMUS PRIME 8 AM A DAMSILE WALKS IN

ELITA ONE : IS THIS THE P I OFFICE OF OPTUMES PRIME

PRIME : WHY YES IT IS HOW CAN I HELP YOU MISS

ELITA ONE : MISS ALETA ONE AND IM HEAR BECOUSE MY MATRIX WAS STOLEN AND I THINK IT WAS THE NORTORS MEGATRON WHO STOLE IT

PRIME : LETS NOT GO POINTING FINGERS AT THE MOST WANTED BOT ON CYBERTRON . SO WHAT DID THIS MATRIX LOOK LIKE

ELITA ONE : THIS IS A PICHIRE OF IT

PRIME : THAT’S A NICE GEM WERE DID YOU ACCRIRED IT AT ELITA ONE ?

ELITA ONE : IT WAS PASSED DOWN FROM GENRATION TO GENRATION DATTING BACK TO THE YEAR 500,000

PRIME : ITS OVER 3 MILLION YEARS OLD AND THAT’S PROBLY WHY THE THEFF STOLE IT

ELITA ONE : I DON’T KNOW BUT IT DOSE GLOW IN THE CINTER LIKE A BINKEN OF LIGHT

PRIME : THAT LIGHT YOU MENCHEND MIGHT BE A POWER SORCE

PHONE RINGS IN PRIMES ARM

PRIME : PRIME SPEAKING

WHEELJACK : HI PRIME ITS ME YOUR OLD FRIEND WHEELJACK HOW ARE YOU

PRIME : GRATE WHEELJACK ITS GOOD TO SEE YOU AND HOWS THE WIFE AND KIDS ?

WHEELJACK : PARAMEDIC AND THE KIDS ARE FINE PRIME BUT I WAS CALLING TO SEE IF YOU WANTED TO GET SOME LUCH OR A DRINK

PRIME : IDE LIKE THAT OLD FRIEND BUT I JUST GOT THIS CASE TO SOLVE OF THE STOLEN MATRIX

WHEELJACK : THE MATRIX WAS STOLEN

PRIME : YES WHEELJACK I GOT TO GO BUT LETS GO FOR A DINER TONIGHT AT ION DELI TONIGHT AT 10 PM

WHEELJACK : OK PRIME SEE THARE

PHONE HANGS UP

PRIME : SORRY THAT WAS AN OLD FRIEND IT WAS A CALL I HAD TO TAKE

ELITA ONE : I UNDERSTAND I TOO HAVE SOME OLD FRIEND I KEEP IN TOUCH WITH BUT ARE YOU GOING TO TAKE MY CASE ?

PRIME : YES ILL TAKE YOUR CASE NOW PAYMENT OF COURSE IS $100 ENERGON CUBES BUT NOT TILL AFTER THE END OF THE CASE

ELITA ONE : OH A $100 ENERGON CUBES PAYMENT ANT THAT STEEP?
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Re: PRIVEIT EYE PRIME

Postby FIRENICE » Thu Mar 19, 2009 7:58 pm

IS ANY ONE GOING TO GIVE ME THARE OPPION ON MY STORRY?????


FIRENICE wrote:IVE BEEN WORKING ON A NEW FAN BOOK WERE THE TRANSFORMERS ARE IN THE 1920 TO 1930S ON CYBERTRON AND PRIME IS A PRIVIT EYE AND WERE MEGARON IS A CRIME LORD I CAN NOT DRAW OR ANIMATE WHAT IM WRIGHTING SO I LIKE SOME HELP ON THIS IF I CAN HEARS A TASTE OF WHAT I WROTE

PRIVEIT EYE PRIME

CYBERTRON : THE YEAR 3.5 MILLION

(EARTH YEAR 1920’S TO 19 30‘S )

OFFICE OF OPTUMUS PRIME 8 AM A DAMSILE WALKS IN

ELITA ONE : IS THIS THE P I OFFICE OF OPTUMES PRIME

PRIME : WHY YES IT IS HOW CAN I HELP YOU MISS

ELITA ONE : MISS ALETA ONE AND IM HEAR BECOUSE MY MATRIX WAS STOLEN AND I THINK IT WAS THE NORTORS MEGATRON WHO STOLE IT

PRIME : LETS NOT GO POINTING FINGERS AT THE MOST WANTED BOT ON CYBERTRON . SO WHAT DID THIS MATRIX LOOK LIKE

ELITA ONE : THIS IS A PICHIRE OF IT

PRIME : THAT’S A NICE GEM WERE DID YOU ACCRIRED IT AT ELITA ONE ?

ELITA ONE : IT WAS PASSED DOWN FROM GENRATION TO GENRATION DATTING BACK TO THE YEAR 500,000

PRIME : ITS OVER 3 MILLION YEARS OLD AND THAT’S PROBLY WHY THE THEFF STOLE IT

ELITA ONE : I DON’T KNOW BUT IT DOSE GLOW IN THE CINTER LIKE A BINKEN OF LIGHT

PRIME : THAT LIGHT YOU MENCHEND MIGHT BE A POWER SORCE

PHONE RINGS IN PRIMES ARM

PRIME : PRIME SPEAKING

WHEELJACK : HI PRIME ITS ME YOUR OLD FRIEND WHEELJACK HOW ARE YOU

PRIME : GRATE WHEELJACK ITS GOOD TO SEE YOU AND HOWS THE WIFE AND KIDS ?

WHEELJACK : PARAMEDIC AND THE KIDS ARE FINE PRIME BUT I WAS CALLING TO SEE IF YOU WANTED TO GET SOME LUCH OR A DRINK

PRIME : IDE LIKE THAT OLD FRIEND BUT I JUST GOT THIS CASE TO SOLVE OF THE STOLEN MATRIX

WHEELJACK : THE MATRIX WAS STOLEN

PRIME : YES WHEELJACK I GOT TO GO BUT LETS GO FOR A DINER TONIGHT AT ION DELI TONIGHT AT 10 PM

WHEELJACK : OK PRIME SEE THARE

PHONE HANGS UP

PRIME : SORRY THAT WAS AN OLD FRIEND IT WAS A CALL I HAD TO TAKE

ELITA ONE : I UNDERSTAND I TOO HAVE SOME OLD FRIEND I KEEP IN TOUCH WITH BUT ARE YOU GOING TO TAKE MY CASE ?

PRIME : YES ILL TAKE YOUR CASE NOW PAYMENT OF COURSE IS $100 ENERGON CUBES BUT NOT TILL AFTER THE END OF THE CASE

ELITA ONE : OH A $100 ENERGON CUBES PAYMENT ANT THAT STEEP?
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Re: PRIVEIT EYE PRIME

Postby Dead Metal » Mon May 11, 2009 12:20 pm

Motto: "Don't do drugs, beer's cheaper anyway!"
Hi welcome to Transtopia.
I am sorry but I deleted your first thread as we don't like duplicates.
Please don't post in all CAPS as we take offence to this and won't read your posts as the allCAPS makes them a pain to read.
Please edit you story into non-allCAPS and I'm sure peple will read and comment on it. :)
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