I like the art, really cool and distinctive, but I can't say I really like the story itself, because it's pretty much a copy of what's been done before, which is Marvel U.S. #71. The characters have changed, and the inner thoughts from Dion are cool, but I just wish you had made up an original act of heroism for Prime.
Sorry if I'm being over-critical, but there is a lot of "retreading" that happens in Transformer-lore as is, and I like original stuff
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To end on a good note though, I do really like the last panel of Prime's face being imposed behind Orion Pax's charge, that is cool
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