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Issue One Excerpt wrote:Beast Era
Issue 1:
PAGE 1:
PANEL 1:
(CAMERA IS BEHIND RATTRAP, TAKING IN MOST OF THE SCENE. CHEETOR IS WITH RATTRAP, CHEETOR IS ON TOP OF A STAGE, IN FRONT OF HIM ARE BLUE CURTAINS, WITH A SYMBOL OF BOTH THE PREDACON AND MAXIMAL SYMBOLS, MIXED TOGETHER. CHEETOR’S BODY FACING THE FRONT AND HIS HEAD IS FACING RATTRAP, WHO IS BEHIND THE STAGE. RATTRAP IS LOOKING UP AT CHEETOR. BOTH OF THEM ARE IN ROBOT MODE. THEY ARE BOTH IN A GREYISH-BLUE BUILDING.)
TEXT BOX (BLACK): Cybertron. One year after the events of the Technorganic War
RATTRAP: Well Spots, you’ve come a long ways and now it’s almost time fer the grand finale of sorts.
CHEETOR: Yeah, almost.
PANEL 2:
(CAMERA IS IN THE SAME POSITION AS PANEL 1. RATTRAP HAS HIS LEFT HAND UP AGAINST THE LEFT SIDE OF HIS HEAD)
RATTRAP: Ok, I’ll draw the curtains back den. Just make sure dat nothing happens whilst Spots is making his speech, understand Ramulus?
PANEL 3:
(RATTRAP NO LONGER HAS HIS HAND AGAINST HIS HEAD. CHEETOR IS SMILING)
Rattrap: Oh and Spots, make sure yer convincing ok? Ya really don’t want em catching on to ya now.
CHEETOR: I’m always convincing Rattrap. They haven’t found out yet, have they?
PANEL 4:
(SAME CAMERA POSITION AS PANEL 1 AND 2. CHEETOR IS NOW COMPLETELY FACING THE FRONT, LOOKING DIGNIFIED, RATTRAP IS POINTING AT THE CURTAINS.)
RATTRAP: Right den Spots, here’s yer big opportunity. So don’t mess it up.
PANEL 5:
(CAMERA IS IN FRONT OF CHEETOR, HE IS LOOKING DOWN AT HIS BODY)
TEXT BOX (YELLOW): Hmm... You know, maybe I should take a page out of Rattrap’s book and settle down with someone. He seems to know what he’s doing, just for a change… I don't think he's cried out doom and gloom since he found Botanica, although he has gone back to calling me Spots a lot more regularly now... Still though, he’s a changed 'bot. Heh, then again, I’m not exactly who I used to be either, am I?
Tomasemily wrote:Nice concept. The character sheets look very good, but I have a question about the group shot. Who's between Blackarachnia & Cheetor, and on the right in the front row? I can identify the others all right, but I can't tell with those two.
Curse my lack of a scanner, cause I'd love to help otherwise.
Certus prime wrote:i'd love to help! here's a link to my thread!
http://www.seibertron.com/energonpub/viewtopic.php?f=145&t=55737&p=964614#p964614
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