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Postby Ramrider » Tue Mar 21, 2006 5:00 pm

Gorgeous work, JAF! I've got three main crits, although they're all pretty minor.

a) The smoke, I reckon, looks too smooth; you might do well to try and break it up by stippling a couple of different shades with a smaller 'brush'.
b) I think the buildings behind Hotspot and Blades could do with being a tad less defined; considering how far in the background they are they seem to stand out a little too much. Just a little diffusion should help.
c) Onslaught's purple looks a little too vivid; it ought to be darker and more toward the blue/grey side.

As to your comment about the definition on Bruticus, I have to disagree; I think he's plenty clear enough, and the detailing on him is fantastic.
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Postby Dark_Fool » Tue Mar 21, 2006 10:59 pm

I like this. i like it alot.
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Postby TwV » Wed Mar 22, 2006 11:32 am

Ramrider wrote:Gorgeous work, JAF! I've got three main crits, although they're all pretty minor.

a) The smoke, I reckon, looks too smooth; you might do well to try and break it up by stippling a couple of different shades with a smaller 'brush'.
b) I think the buildings behind Hotspot and Blades could do with being a tad less defined; considering how far in the background they are they seem to stand out a little too much. Just a little diffusion should help.
c) Onslaught's purple looks a little too vivid; it ought to be darker and more toward the blue/grey side.

As to your comment about the definition on Bruticus, I have to disagree; I think he's plenty clear enough, and the detailing on him is fantastic.
I have to agree.

Also the laser should hit Brute's forearm the way it's angled, and not pass over it.

Still, great job though. 8)
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Postby Pepie » Thu Mar 23, 2006 4:30 am

New background for my desktop!!
Awesome work Jaf :shock:
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Postby evilratbat » Thu Mar 23, 2006 5:43 am

yippee pepsi's back :)
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Postby TM JAF » Thu Mar 23, 2006 4:02 pm

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Thanks guys. Nice to see you're still checking in Pepie!

a) The smoke, I reckon, looks too smooth; you might do well to try and break it up by stippling a couple of different shades with a smaller 'brush'.
b) I think the buildings behind Hotspot and Blades could do with being a tad less defined; considering how far in the background they are they seem to stand out a little too much. Just a little diffusion should help.
c) Onslaught's purple looks a little too vivid; it ought to be darker and more toward the blue/grey side.


Great points Ramrider, I agree and did all three tweaks, so thanks!

And Billy, I messed around with some alternatives to inking. Cause it would have been a real PITA to do for this one. I scanned the original pencils in B&W then cleaned that up to use in as the alpha channel. Not perfect but it worked with the more painted style I used for coloring.

I'm looking forward to doing some crisp clean drawings that can be more stylized when colored.

Anyhow, thanks again to all.
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Postby Ramrider » Thu Mar 23, 2006 6:00 pm

Wow. Now that is quality work. Sweet job, JAF! :D
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Postby Blastoderm » Thu Mar 23, 2006 6:49 pm

Simply awesome, love the rich colors and the improvements you made to it!:)

And nice to see how well you rendered the smoke, I personally have some trouble painting that type of FX. Xp
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Postby TM Jetstreamx » Tue Apr 11, 2006 1:02 am

Other than your perspective, I would say that you've done a great job on this. I think you've improved a bit since November. ^_^ Great Work!
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Postby Hobbyist Prime » Tue Apr 11, 2006 6:48 pm

That is one incredible piece of work!!!! I think the only thing left is to slightly change first aid in the smoke. After the inking he got a little too distorted I think! I wouldn't change much because he is hidden in the smoke but he just needs a little definition because he hardly looks like a robot! I had almost mistaken him for more debris.

Aside from that though WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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