Motto:
"This post clearly was meant to offend, and if you are affected by it in any way please close your browser and discuss it with someone who knows not to take the internet seriously."
Weapon:
Black Magic
So far, I'd say I want whatever you just had for dinner...

Looks like you already have it pretty well planned out, not sure how the oil shedding would work, but it's a cool idea. The only things to remember here are the setting (loosely IDW universe based so involving earth may be a bit confusing) and for a history like that, and my namesake is remarkably similar, it's a good idea to find those who play the characters relevant to your story - in your case (Sid)Shockwave/(Dev)Thunderwing/whoever created the experiment part of you as they can help flesh out the details.
Naturally the staff here (I'm an alien here as I'm staff from a different game) will give you good suggestions but it looks like you have everything you need, now you just have to work it all up into a bio.
And I even remembered my sig this time Em! lol