The Energon Pub

Not to criticise but you really need to work on the caption layout. For example.



I read from the top down (as I tend to do with all my comics) so it was a little odd.

Or he could put little numbers on them. It gets a little confusing sometimes, but it doesnt take to long to understand it.

I don't think it really matters much, it doesn't detract from the overall comic IMO.

It's just like he's having a 'Yoda moment' and everything backwards gets does he.

Burn wrote:Not to criticise but you really need to work on the caption layout. For example.



I read from the top down (as I tend to do with all my comics) so it was a little odd.

Sorry it was a bit random, but I figured somebody would eventually ask "why hasn't Bay noticed two prisoners escaped?"

That's plot continuity. Bay's involved so bad plot continuity is to be expected.

I'm talking about reading structure. Don't take offense to what i've said, I just found that panel (and a couple of others) confusing to read as I read over 20 comics a week and that's generally how they're all structured.
(Hey someone's gotta be the arsehole if it helps you get better)

Burn wrote:That's plot continuity. Bay's involved so bad plot continuity is to be expected.

I'm talking about reading structure. Don't take offense to what i've said, I just found that panel (and a couple of others) confusing to read as I read over 20 comics a week and that's generally how they're all structured.
(Hey someone's gotta be the arsehole if it helps you get better)

Sorry, it was a mistake.

Now not to sound like Beachcomber....Lighten up man!

after this comic, lots of Ratchet, Soundwave, Steve, Optimus and Bumblebee

okay guys, probably not a comic today, as my camera isn't working....it's charged to full power but won't upload anything

So maybe today, tomarrow and the next day will be sadly comic free. I'm looking into perchasing another camera.

"To survive a war, you gotta become war"

Ratchet: First Blood Part 2

MightyMagnus78 wrote:"To survive a war, you gotta become war"

Ratchet: First Blood Part 2

Ten times better then Twilight: Breaking Dawn Part 2 any day


BTW My camera was just being a pain in the you-know-what, it's all good and I'll have a update by tonight

And I wanted to do these yesterday but I didn't get a chance



Yeah, I make it look good




Plus, a bonus for Va'al

Erm... thanks!

I don't actually know how to tell you this, but I don't really follow or know much about Dr Who. At all. (I think I mentioned earlier in the thread that I've seen two episodes in total, one of them was Blink.)

Godzillabot Primal wrote:

Oh Burn!? Where you at?

Va'al wrote:Erm... thanks!

I don't actually know how to tell you this, but I don't really follow or know much about Dr Who. At all. (I think I mentioned earlier in the thread that I've seen two episodes in total, one of them was Blink.)

I know, but since this is the David Tennant version I figured you'd get it

This one has some "guy humor". AKA, Bodily functions. AKA Fart and poop jokes

several pictures arent coming through.

BeastProwl wrote:several pictures arent coming through.

Godzillabot Primal wrote:
Strange

Now NONE of them are...

BeastProwl wrote:Now NONE of them are...

This is so weird. My computer is having them all show up

They're working for me too.

Just ignore BP.

More guy humor

Burn wrote:They're working for me too.

Just ignore BP.

All working here too..!

they started working (All of them) Over here too. I needed to restart the computer, something was wrong with it.

BeastProwl wrote:they started working (All of them) Over here too. I needed to restart the computer, something was wrong with it.

Ah, Who knows?

I have to say that last comic really stunk!

gross! okay, end of the poop/fart jokes








Yeah, for some reason Cliff' has a thing about traitors

http://tfwiki.net/wiki/Traitor

Surley you mean "Robot on Robot"
>nitpicking