The Energon Pub

by **Gojira Prime** » Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:19 pm

See if this dialouge exchange inspires you:

Optimus Prime: The GoBots have gone too far, trying to buy out Cybertron

Bumblebee: Prime, the GoBots have sent a messenger, he demands to speak with you

Prime walks to the entrance to Iacon and sees a white, blocky police car diving towards him. It comes about three feet away from him and transforms into Hans-Cuff

Hans-Cuff: Hello, Optimus Prime

Prime: What do you want?

Cuff: It's not what I want, it's what Leader-1 wants.

Prime: Which is?

Cuff: To make you part of his army

They begin to walk into Iacon's center, to the great pit that burns the city's Energon supply

Prime: Tell him to bugger off

Cuff: Are you sure, you can make all these lesser Autobots your servents, or disposable punching bags

They arrive at the edge of the pit

Prime: I don't think so.

Prime draws his Energon axe and points it at Hans-Cuff

Cuff: What are you doing, this is madness!

Prime: Madness,... THIS IS CYBERTRON!!!!!!!!!!

Prime kicks Hans-Cuff in the groin and sends him hurling into the great pit.

Prime: Prowl, I need you to make a special run to Gaurdian city on GoBotron, tell Leader-1 his message was recieved, and I said no.

Prowl: I'm right on it Prime.

Prowl drives off to the space bridge to GoBotron.

by **Gojira Prime** » Thu Nov 22, 2007 2:37 pm

Hello, anyone?

News Credits: 767 · by **Dead Metal** » Thu Nov 22, 2007 2:44 pm

Quite funny, but I think Prwol will die now, but next time just post it in the fanart, fanfiction and kitbash forum.

by **Gojira Prime** » Fri Nov 23, 2007 12:00 am

No, Prowl won't die, Hans-Cuff died b/c he wasn't bad@$$ enough. And this is just one scene that I fely could be part of a big "Transformers vs GoBots" webcomic.

by **Gojira Prime** » Fri Nov 23, 2007 5:39 pm

Still waiting for some more comments

by **Gojira Prime** » Sun Nov 25, 2007 6:56 pm

Ok, now I'm pissed, am I some sort of reply repellent? EVERY TIME I post a reply, that thread gets pushed back. WTF?

by **Gojira Prime** » Wed Nov 28, 2007 5:10 pm

Sorry if I'm posting too much but: *Bump*

by **Thanatos Prime** » Wed Nov 28, 2007 5:42 pm

This thread has been viewed 179 times, if people don't have anything to say, they won't say anything.

Also, it's generally considered rude to continually bump your thread.

News Credits: 1 · by **Saber Prime** » Wed Nov 28, 2007 7:29 pm

Gojira Prime wrote:See if this dialouge exchange inspires you:

Optimus Prime: The GoBots have gone too far, trying to buy out Cybertron

Bumblebee: Prime, the GoBots have sent a messenger, he demands to speak with you

Prime walks to the entrance to Iacon and sees a white, blocky police car diving towards him. It comes about three feet away from him and transforms into Hans-Cuff

Hans-Cuff: Hello, Optimus Prime

Prime: What do you want?

Cuff: It's not what I want, it's what Leader-1 wants.

Prime: Which is?

Cuff: To make you part of his army

They begin to walk into Iacon's center, to the great pit that burns the city's Energon supply

Prime: Tell him to bugger off

Cuff: Are you sure, you can make all these lesser Autobots your servents, or disposable punching bags

They arrive at the edge of the pit

Prime: I don't think so.

Prime draws his Energon axe and points it at Hans-Cuff

Cuff: What are you doing, this is madness!

Prime: Madness,... THIS IS CYBERTRON!!!!!!!!!!

Prime kicks Hans-Cuff in the groin and sends him hurling into the great pit.

Prime: Prowl, I need you to make a special run to Gaurdian city on GoBotia, tell Leader-1 his message was recieved, and I said no.

Prowl: I'm right on it Prime.

Prowl drives off to the space bridge to GoBotia.

What the heck is GoBotia? If you were meaning the GoBots home world, it's called GoBotron.

Allso I second the motion to not continuasly bump your thread. Maybe once a week is OK at the most but multiple times in the same day is definatly a big no no.

by **Gojira Prime** » Thu Nov 29, 2007 5:28 pm

Gojira Prime wrote:See if this dialouge exchange inspires you:

Optimus Prime: The GoBots have gone too far, trying to buy out Cybertron

Bumblebee: Prime, the GoBots have sent a messenger, he demands to speak with you

Prime walks to the entrance to Iacon and sees a white, blocky police car diving towards him. It comes about three feet away from him and transforms into Hans-Cuff

Hans-Cuff: Hello, Optimus Prime

Prime: What do you want?

Cuff: It's not what I want, it's what Leader-1 wants.

Prime: Which is?

Cuff: To make you part of his army

They begin to walk into Iacon's center, to the great pit that burns the city's Energon supply

Prime: Tell him to bugger off

Cuff: Are you sure, you can make all these lesser Autobots your servents, or disposable punching bags

They arrive at the edge of the pit

Prime: I don't think so.

Prime draws his Energon axe and points it at Hans-Cuff

Cuff: What are you doing, this is madness!

Prime: Madness,... THIS IS CYBERTRON!!!!!!!!!!

Prime kicks Hans-Cuff in the groin and sends him hurling into the great pit.

Prime: Prowl, I need you to make a special run to Gaurdian city on GoBotron, tell Leader-1 his message was recieved, and I said no.

Prowl: I'm right on it Prime.

Prowl drives off to the space bridge to GoBotron.

Ok, there's the correction, thank you for giving me the real planet name.

On the note of bumping, It's not just this thread, every thread I post on does this to me, so I was getting irritated.
Either way, I'm sorry if I came across as rude.

by **Gojira Prime** » Fri Dec 07, 2007 6:35 pm

Maybe if someone moved this to the Fan Fiction forum, please?

News Credits: 2 · by **Tekka** » Fri Dec 07, 2007 6:48 pm

So, what are you going for here? A fic about Transformers vs GoBots using a story ripped from 300?

If you want to write it go ahead, but I'm not sure what you're expecting from us readers. It's not going to get written for you.

by **Gojira Prime** » Sat Dec 08, 2007 11:57 am

Only that scene is ripped from 300, I just want to see what other people think of the idea

News Credits: 2 · by **Tekka** » Sat Dec 08, 2007 3:05 pm

Any idea can be good as long as it's developed the right way. The first thing you need to do is figure out why the Autobots and GoBots would be at odds, which is probably going to be the hardest thing to do. Personally I would get Megatron and Cykill in on this too.

I know very little about GoBots but I'm guessing they're all goody-goodies like the Autobots which means it's going to have to be a matter of their very survival.

Just a simple idea pulled from the well used trunk of Transformers plot devices would be an energy shortage that is threatening the extinction of both planets.

If I were to completely disregard your above script. The backdrop to your story could be that both planets initially agreed to work together to find an energy source to save themselves and they've found one... with just one snag, there's only enough to revitalize one planet.

The Decepticons would never agree to share this energy with anyone, not the Autobots and certainly not the GoBots, what I would envision happening is the Decepticons orchestrating some kind of event that would pit the two good sides against each other, and using that as a cover to get the energy for their own needs, but they'd still have Cykill and company to deal with.

Of course it would have to end with Prime and Leader-1 eventually reconciling their differences with scientists from both sides finding a way to satisfy the energy needs of both planets. With the standard event of Megatron and Cykill being sent on their way with their tails between their legs.

Anyhoo, that's how I'd do it.