Evil Eye wrote:Dr. Caelus wrote:Evil Eye wrote:So you admit you didn't read it, but also dismiss it as a "sob story".
I read the first paragraph, which was enough to get the gist. Unless there was a plot twist in there somewhere, in which case you're not following through with your thesis, which would be pretty crap writing for nonfiction.
I'll have to take this sage advice across the internet- if you make any effort at all to explain things in detail, you're writing a "sob story" and nobody's gonna read it.
And yet, you're still writing these loooong posts, that I'm still not reading past the first few lines.