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I'm taking a shot at a (slightly) more complicated fanfic. I am making up a fan character, Movie Mindwipe. He is a hypnotist, just like his G1 self. Here we go...let the hypnosis begin.

Chapter 1

After their defeats at Mission City, Shanghai, and Cairo, the Decepticons decided that they needed a new advantage that the Autobots couldn't counter. They brought in an expert.
He was only eight feet tall, because he transformed into a bat. However, he great red eyes would scare a lion into submission. His name was Mindwipe.
"I need you to give us an advantage," Megatron had said. "The minute you become a hindrance rather than a help, you will perish."
"I won't be a hindrance," Mindwipe had replied.
He then stalked off to his personal quarters in the Nemesis. He sat down and sent out a powerful signal to earth. Soon, he would be able to give Megatron the Autobots' battle plans.


Autobot Swerve walked down the corridors of NEST HQ. Ever since Ravage had invaded, they had moved their base to a remote part of Canada. He suddenly stopped walking.
Listen up, Autobot, hissed a strange voice, I am Mindwipe. You are now my slave, and will do everything that I say. You understand.
"I understand," Swerve repeated.
Good. You will take the Autobots' battle plans deep into the forest and wait there. A Decepticon named Sparkcrusher will meet you there, and you will give the plans to him. Do not tell anyone what you are doing. If they ask, tell them that Prime ordered you to do it. When you give the information to Sparkcrusher, you will return to your quarters and forget everything within the last three hours. You will do as commanded.
"I will do as commanded."
Swerve walked to the command center and entered the password. He entered, ejected the disc that held the information, transformed, and began to roll out.
"Where are you going?" asked Autobot Blowpipe.
"On an important errand for Prime," said Swerve.
Then, he roared ahead and entered the forest. He parked near the biggest tree and transformed. He pulled out the disc and handed it to the waiting Decepticon.
"Thanks," said Sparkcrusher sarcastically.
Swerve rolled back to base, entered his quarters, and sat down. He took a stasis nap and woke up hours later. What had happened? He must've been dreaming. Oh, well. Everything was okay.

To be continued...

What do you think? Need something? Tell me, please. I will continue when someone gives me input, so please reply soon.

I desperately need input here!

I liked it, can't wait for the next chapter!