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Mon Aug 20, 2012 11:57 am

Late Night Prime Time with Jackie Wheeler

Episode 1

Thanks for viewing! Comments welcome

News Credits: 6188 · Mon Aug 20, 2012 12:42 pm

I love the Soundwave band!

What genre would they be playing?

Mon Aug 20, 2012 12:45 pm

Va'al wrote:I love the Soundwave band!

What genre would they be playing?

I always imagined them playing something like the songs from the '86 Movie soundtrack ..with maybe a little techno added in :lol:

News Credits: 6188 · Mon Aug 20, 2012 12:56 pm

That does sound appropriate. :lol:

I like your work, very nice setting and clean photos.
There's something that doesn't convince about the dialogues, but I can't figure out whether it's the font or the amount of text per speech-bubble. :-?

But again, nice work!

Mon Aug 20, 2012 1:48 pm

Va'al wrote:That does sound appropriate.

I like your work, very nice setting and clean photos.
There's something that doesn't convince about the dialogues, but I can't figure out whether it's the font or the amount of text per speech-bubble.

But again, nice work!

Thanks! Glad you like it

I think I scaled the text to the bubbles a lot better in the next epsiode, so hopefully that will help.

News Credits: 226 · Mon Aug 20, 2012 3:17 pm

Va'al wrote:That does sound appropriate.

I like your work, very nice setting and clean photos.
There's something that doesn't convince about the dialogues, but I can't figure out whether it's the font or the amount of text per speech-bubble.

But again, nice work!

It's the amount of text.

Simple solution is to just have another panel or two to help fill the story out.

Great work!

Mon Aug 20, 2012 9:06 pm

Episode 2

[url="http://www.youtube.com/embed/T1N91LyATF0"]http://www.youtube.com/embed/T1N91LyATF0[/url]

To Be Continued..

News Credits: 6188 · Tue Aug 21, 2012 7:05 am

I liked it again, but it's definitely text heavy.

(The Tracks panel especially. Try using different speechbubbles per line/sentence.)

Also, for YouTube embedding, simply copy the video number, in this case T1N91LyATF0, and post it in the YouTube tags ([youtube][/youtube]).

Tue Sep 04, 2012 6:44 pm

Unfortunately, the pics get re-sized when I post them to the thread so please forgive the small txt on a couple of the pages in this episode. To view the full-sized images, plus more episodes of Jackie Wheeler, please check out Orbital Bacon: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Orbital-Bacon/285661064802194

Episode 3

News Credits: 5 · Sun Sep 16, 2012 2:45 pm

I find that these are progressively getting funnier. I loved Warpath as Michael Bay, maybe you could have some of those characters return later. I would recommend that you maybe have the toys be more animated with more poses, and different camera angles :lol: