The Energon Pub

[Elita One]

Lucky. I wish I could go to AA but the exchange rate means it's cheaper for me to go to Botcon instead *knock wood*.

[Pretender Skywarp]

Could I trouble people for some feedback on my review? I know there are a few typo's, but in terms of content, strcture etc...

It's the first time I attempted doing something like that (especially something I've put my face to!) and whilst I don't think I'll be giving up my day job any time soon, I did enjoy writing it and may consider doing more.

No need tpull your punches either, I'm a big brave boy...

awesome review, and i really enjoyed it, was alot more than i expected when i asked you to give you thorts and feelings on the event.

The contents great, informative, has a very personal conversation type tone to it making it easy to read and also a pleasure at the same time.

structure was gud as the use of images to break up text has been used well, and helps keep interest especially when large articles on the interwebz are very hard to focus on and read

like you sed a few typos, but i really liked it

hope this helps

hope to see you at next years AA if i can make it =D

Thanks for the kind words m8. The one thing I was srtuggling with was when to include the pics and to amke them "tally" with what I was writing. I'll have to look for some suitable subject matter and see what else I can churn out!