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Starscream Animated Version

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Starscream Animated Version

Postby Charger426 » Mon Aug 20, 2007 6:19 pm

This was an experiment really, to try drawing animated style. Different from my usual. Not perfect, but I like the proportions. Broad in the shoulders, narrow at the waist. Like a swimmer or lightweight fighter, Since Screamer here is a flier, he should not be weighted down with a lot of mass.
Just my thought on it.
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Postby Dispensor » Mon Aug 20, 2007 6:29 pm

Looks awesome, but the right arm could use some work. The elbow perspective is totally wrong, and the hand looks like the palm is facing the viewer and the fingers are just bent all the way back.

Also, the right thigh should be ad big as the other, and the knee should overlap it,
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Postby osiricon » Mon Aug 20, 2007 6:39 pm

Nice I see you trying more coloring. I like the face,looks like the cartoon version
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Postby Charger426 » Mon Aug 20, 2007 6:46 pm

Dispensor wrote:Looks awesome, but the right arm could use some work. The elbow perspective is totally wrong, and the hand looks like the palm is facing the viewer and the fingers are just bent all the way back.

Also, the right thigh should be ad big as the other, and the knee should overlap it,


Thanks for the tips. Very true, all of it. Its not perfect.

osiricon wrote:Nice I see you trying more coloring. I like the face,looks like the cartoon version


Yeah, trying is the key word :). good, I was trying to get that animated look. Also like Namor, the submariner. Both are arrogant.
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Postby Charger426 » Mon Aug 20, 2007 7:00 pm

Dispensor wrote:Looks awesome, but the right arm could use some work. The elbow perspective is totally wrong, and the hand looks like the palm is facing the viewer and the fingers are just bent all the way back.

Also, the right thigh should be ad big as the other, and the knee should overlap it,


I probably should get someone to "proof read" my pencils :oops:
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Postby osiricon » Mon Aug 20, 2007 7:39 pm

We learn from criticis,but I say this "those who can..do those who can't..criticize". I take the advice of those that can, and can do better than I.
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Postby i_amtrunks » Mon Aug 20, 2007 8:11 pm

Love the colouring, it reminds me of the old G1 Marvel comics covers, but with more variation in the colours used!

You've really captured Starscream in the face too, even if you had only shown the pencils, and not given a name, it would not have been hard to pick who it was.
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Postby Dispensor » Mon Aug 20, 2007 10:21 pm

Charger426 wrote:
Dispensor wrote:Looks awesome, but the right arm could use some work. The elbow perspective is totally wrong, and the hand looks like the palm is facing the viewer and the fingers are just bent all the way back.

Also, the right thigh should be ad big as the other, and the knee should overlap it,


Thanks for the tips. Very true, all of it. Its not perfect.


Yeah, but it's still damn good.
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Postby Burn » Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:22 am

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I want to say it's great, but I can't bring myself to like this animated style. :?

And that's not a insult to your work Charger, i've always liked your work, it's just this whole animated thing I just can't like.
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Postby SPC Airborne » Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:26 am

looks awesome!
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Postby babylon queen » Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:37 pm

This is so cool.
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Postby Sonray » Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:57 pm

good job. Looks better than the Jay-Lenoscream.
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