Only minor gripe was that it would make more sense for Thundercracker to say "The human is critically injured..." I don't think the Decepticons care enough to differentiate human genders. It could be that Thundercracker's compassion compells him to know the difference, but it would look odd to any of his comrades for him to be that involved.
Overall good story, though.
TRANSFORMERS MOSAIC: "Trapped"
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Posted by Blozor Sun Oct 28, 2007 7:46 am
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Posted by Liege Evilmus Sun Oct 28, 2007 9:23 am
That was a much better peak at ThunderCracker's "softer" side than the last attempt!
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Posted by demarcusgd Sun Oct 28, 2007 9:38 am
Wow. Now THIS is what Mosaic is all about. This is a very powerful piece.
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Posted by craggy Sun Oct 28, 2007 10:30 am
Sloptank wrote:Good one. 'Cracker's got an issue with willpower.
you mean he's vulnerable to yellow?
This was a very good piece. Well written and up there with the current professional TF art.
assembling a Neo-G1/TF:TM cast. Please PM if you have (or know of) the following at a reasonable price: Classics or Henkei Astrotrain, Sunstreaker, Sideswipe, or 3rd Party iGear Ratchet and Ironhide.
Also looking for Universe Repugnus and Overbite, Frostbite and Longhorn and any Webdiver toys.
Also looking for Universe Repugnus and Overbite, Frostbite and Longhorn and any Webdiver toys.
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Posted by Dozertron Sun Oct 28, 2007 11:53 am
This shows a goodness in these Decepticons. Autobots and Decepticons hate each other so much, they think they are ALL bad. I think that Dropkick would probably be the same.
p.s. That Autobot looks like a combination of Ratchet and Jazz...
p.s. That Autobot looks like a combination of Ratchet and Jazz...
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Posted by Blozor Sun Oct 28, 2007 5:56 pm
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Dozertron wrote:p.s. That Autobot looks like a combination of Ratchet and Jazz...
You pretty much just described Prowl, which is who it is supposed to be.
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Posted by Nightwarp Sun Oct 28, 2007 10:12 pm
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*sniff* its so moving
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